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In 1830s London, scandalized whispers surround the pub known as The Sleeping Dove. A hidden bordello, the rumors say, catering to straying nobles eager to shed the trappings of their stations. Josephine Grant knows the rumors are true--she plays piano at the Dove, known only as "The Bawdy Bluestocking" to the pub's faithful. Tales swirl as to her real origin: some patrons claim that she was an orphan prodigy, others go so far as to name her concubine to the King.

The society ladies call the reluctant Duke of Lennox "The Uncatchable," not that he cares for them or their nicknames. Elias Addison's estate was thrust upon him when his father died and it has been little else but a burden. He spends his days mired in responsibilities and his nights pursued at endless balls by fortune-hunting debutantes. He is morose, serious, and tense. When a friend brings him to the Sleeping Dove in an attempt to lighten his mood, the consequences of those good intentions are far greater.

When the Duke of Lennox finds himself at the Bawdy Bluestocking's piano, they begin to play a dangerous melody. Though Elias cannot resist courting Josie, she has a past to protect, a shaky future, and no time for frivolous nobility with soft hands. When the Duke uncovers the truth, will he wish he had never begun the tune?

226 pages, Paperback

First published March 12, 2013

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Evelyn Pryce

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Evelyn Pryce writes historical romance in a growing number of eras. Her first novel, A Man Above Reproach, won the 2013 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award in Romance. Her mind is often occupied with the 19th century, particulars of the American Revolution, magic, philosophy, and the evolution of human interaction.

Pryce lives in Pittsburgh with three gentlemen--her husband and two cats. She can be found blogging at her website, on Twitter and Facebook, behind a desk at a university and behind her computer working on her third novel.

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647 reviews1,092 followers
December 22, 2015
Originally reviewed here @ Angieville

Similar to when Elias sees Josie for the first time, I fell in love with this cover the moment I clapped eyes on it. And, like Elias, I was nervous, given that I knew next to nothing about it and the level of affection I was feeling extended way beyond our limited introduction. But something in its lines, in the lovely design had me thinking it just might be something I could love long term. I immediately ran down the usual sites, routine investigation, you understand. Happily, it wasn't long before a copy landed in my lap for review. I have to say, I'm kind of crushing on the elegance of this cover. As someone who doesn't gravitate toward super-romancey covers in general, I'll admit this one was something of a breath of fresh air. A MAN ABOVE REPROACH is Evelyn Pryce's debut novel. It recently won Amazon's Breakthrough Novel Award in the romance category and it is due out in paperback from Montlake Romance later this month. I don't think I've ever read any of Amazon's award-winners before (I'm not entirely sure I even knew they existed), so I figured it was high time I checked one out.

Elias Addison, newly minted Duke of Lennox, has no use for houses of ill repute. He had no use for anything that smacks of too little to do and not enough will power to follow through on one's responsibilities. Rather, he has spent the past year setting his estate to rights after the unexpected passing of his somewhat dissolute father. Which is to say he's been paying off the old man's debts, making sure his younger sister has a proper debut when the time is right, and ensuring his tenants are paid and looked after. So when his best friend and hopeless lothario drags him to the notorious Sleeping Dove one night, he is far less than pleased. But it is at this famed bordello that he makes the acquaintance of the woman known in certain circles as the Bawdy Bluestocking. Ensconced behind the piano, Blue performs in the background while the more vivacious ladies of the Dove ply their trade. Blue's standoffish nature and firm privacy barriers are legendary. And Elias has next to no interest in female companionship. Nevertheless, he finds himself drawn to the piano bench, to the invigorating conversation he finds with the mysterious woman in the blue stockings. And so begins a most problematic, mostly unwelcome friendship between the studious but socially inept duke and the independent woman who wears a thousand masks.

A MAN ABOVE REPROACH was precisely what I hoped it would be. The writing, the characters, the story all delivered on the promises of that lovely cover. I particularly enjoyed the prose itself, which felt structured without being fussy, thoughtful and humorous at just the right moments. For example:
So the Bawdy Bluestocking was the proprietress of her own shop, selling lurid novels to ladies in the front and more esoteric fare in the back, from the looks of the shelves around him. He spied Pope and Crabbe, Shakespeare, of course, and names he did not recognize at all. He wondered how she chose her stock and where it came from. She must spend her days in endless research. The thought was unaccountably lovely to him.

Far be it from me to be able to resist a bluestocking bookshop-owning, piano-playing woman who publishes her own books. Eli's fascination was a foregone conclusion. But it was the writing that allowed me to believe in Lennox and Josie and their gradual transformation. They were such an awkward, magnetic pair. I was sure they belonged together even as I was certain beyond a shadow of a doubt it could not work out in a way that would not cost one or the other of them their principles or place in society. Not that either of them seemed to care, but they cared about it for the other's sake. And it was that innate anxious concern that fed my fondness for them and their plight throughout the book. I believe I was happiest when they were sitting side by side on Josie's piano bench, arguing in hushed tones about the state of the instrument or the number of rules Elias was breaking every time he threw his lot in with hers.
He kept playing, wincing at the wrongness of the sound. Even warming up, she could tell he had true talent. She had never known a man of nobility who wished to put in the practice that playing well took, but this man was an oddity in so many ways. Every time he leaned for a farther key, he gained more ground, making sure that he had his share of the bench. Josephine moved another inch to her left so that they were not touching.

"Then you must understand that I cannot continue hosting you in this way." She lowered her voice. "And you may never come to my store again."

"They," he glanced up, looking around the room, causing dozens of eyes to skitter away. "They think me a lovesick fool, coming over here after you cut me, in full view of a quarter of the beau monde. Grant me an explanation, Miss Grant."

"Explanations are too expensive, Lennox. Even for a duke."

She is so straightforward and earnest for a girl with so much to hide. I loved how she always said and wrote exactly what she thought and pressed forward unashamed (and almost always alone) because of her beliefs and opinions. The first two-thirds of the book are perfectly delightful. I did, however, feel that the characterization faltered somewhat as time wore on. Eli started out an intellectual, somewhat haughty and awkward young man with too many burdens on his shoulders. But by the end he was coming off at times petulant, at times growly alpha male. The shift left me feeling a bit discombobulated, and I wasn't at all sure I liked it. The same goes for a few of the unnecessary antics in the final third of the book. They struck me as silly, and I missed the restrained gravity and building tension of the earlier portions. That said, I truly enjoyed my time with this book and will be keeping my eye out for Ms. Pryce's next projects. Recommended for fans of Rose Lerner and Julia Quinn.
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1,782 reviews12.9k followers
November 2, 2013
This would have easily garnered four stars from me had the heroine been a bit less... Oh, what's the word I'm looking for... Oh, right; intolerable. Shrewish. Infuriating. Stupid. Take your pick. I understand the necessity for hurdles, but when the only hurdle is the complete idiocy of one (or both) of the main characters, it just pisses me off. Not only does Josie (aka Bluestocking, aka Ana (wtf)), act like the Supreme being from the planet Dunce, she treats those around her with a haughty disdain that gives lie to her professed altruistic intentions. I'm not ashamed to say I wanted to hit her on more than one occasion.

And I'm sorry, I can't get over the picture accompanying the author's bio. I know it's not entirely fair to the book, but it's just so artificially pretentious and awkward, and it draws a sort of disturbing parallel between the author and her female lead.
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January 4, 2019
I loved it...as I knew I would, from reading an excerpt before buying the book.
I found the characters compelling - and funny at times.

I'm an avid reader of historical romance and light erotica that is not full of over-the-top descriptive sex and crude vocabulary. This literary gem was sensual and sexy...just the way I like it! It was my cup of tea - with lemon and sugar!

I look forward to Ms. Price's next romantic adventure!

1/3/2019 update:
Stayed up reading this last night, and for me, it's just as good the second time around! I love the H/h's motivations and their quirks (even with some not quite fitting in with the standards of the day, i.e. 'quirks'...lol). I would love to read spin-offs featuring Nic and Sally, and Elias' newly-arrive, sexy cousin, Sebastian. Still 5 stars for me!
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1,879 reviews307 followers
November 2, 2013
* I read this book while it was made available to me through Net Galley; it was given to me for an honest review.*

When Elias Addison, the Duke of Lennox, is approached by his friend Nicholas to attend a brothel with him, he reluctantly agrees. He has been under pressure lately with too many responsibilities. It is his intention to stay for a few drinks and then leave unnoticed by the way of the back door. Before the night is over he meets Josephine Grant, a mysterious woman who plays the piano in this establishment and someone he is attracted to.

Josephine was none of the things that the men at the Sleeping Dove thought she was. She acquired her father's bookstore when he passed away along with all his debts. She had one employee to assist her in running the shop. She provided music for the madam and her clients in order to help pay the bills. She also conversed with the men until they left her for other 'entertainment'.

The premise to the book was interesting at the beginning. This early Victorian romance was about Elias's response to Josephine's book that she self-published. 'A MAN ABOVE REPROACH' referred to her answer about his character. 'Josie' is upset with him because he "has money and doesn't play fair". At each of their earlier meetings she either rages, fumes or screams before it "develops into fury and lust".

The Duke of Lennox was made aware that Josephine was not who she claimed to be. They had some quirky moments regarding Elias's names for Miss Not-Grant. My main problem with this romance was Josephine's behavior. She cursed, smoked and didn't always tell the truth. I had problems liking her and, because of this, the story started to drag. There were too many conflicting feelings between the two.

Perhaps I expected too much based on other readers' high ratings. I kept hoping the characters would become more fully developed. My problem is I read a number of historical romances and it is important for me to have characters match the year of the setting. It affects the believability of the story. Unfortunately, I lost interest long before the end of the book.



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89 reviews
September 22, 2013
A Man Above Reproach
I received this book from goodreads.com, and have given it a well deserved five stars.
This is a regency romance, but far above the average of this genre.
The heroine is articulate, well educated, and runs a bookshop. Just my sort of girl! Oh yes, did I say, she also plays the piano in a brothel? Albeit a high class establishment. There, she is known as the Bawdy Bluestocking - "Blue" to her friends, though her real name is Josie. Or is it? You'll have to read this book to find out.
Anyway, the bored "Uncatchable" Duke of Lennox accompanies a friend to the bordello, and finds that paying to have conversation with Blue is far more entertaining than enjoying the charms of the girls on offer.
The story develops from there, with well drawn characters supporting the plot and subplots.
Obviously there are many ups and downs, because the course of true love never does run smooth.
This is a very satisfying read and I would highly recommend this book to all romance lovers.
784 reviews372 followers
March 22, 2018
(2.5 stars?) I mean really, if a novel wins the 2013 Amazon Breakthrough Novel award in the romance category, wouldn't you expect the novel to have something really special to offer the historical romance reader? Nope, instead it's pretty generic, albeit decently written.

So the writing is not bad, the characters are somewhat interesting but not especially original, and the language and behavior is not too annoying or anachronistic. I did find that usual problem American authors have with titles, in that the hero duke's sister, whose name is Alessandra Addison, was addressed as Lady Addison throughout the book. She'd be "Lady Alessandra" as the unmarried sister of a duke. Oh well, perhaps one shouldn't nitpick, but this is an award winner.

As for the story, I've read similar plots. Bluestocking crusader for exploited women meets reserved, reluctant duke. (He'd rather be a professor but, as his father's heir, there's no recourse in 1800s England.) He's trying to get the duchy in order so he can bring his sister out to London society, and, of course, there's that usual "mother insisting that the son marry someone of the peerage to produce the necessary heir" storyline.

Our hero duke is taken to a brothel by his best friend, who thinks he needs to spend some time relaxing. There he meets our heroine who is known at the brothel as the Baudy Bluestocking and who works as piano player there (no hooking on the side). The duke is attracted to her immediately but she has secrets, including her real name and background, and a huge bias against upper-class men, who she feels are exploiters of lower-class women.

So she's pretty antagonistic towards him, yet at the same time she feels an attraction. Well, we all know where this is heading and the characters' actions are fairly predictable, including that almost ubiquitous (in romance) addition of Misunderstandings and Failures to Communicate in their interactions. Another problem I had with the heroine was her rather poorly-planned, ineffectual way of rescuing fallen women.

Bottom line is that this is an okay historical romance. If it were your usual mass market paperback it might be a B-grade book. But that award set my expectations higher, so, of course, I was disappointed.
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874 reviews216 followers
October 28, 2013
My review contains spoilers and they're mostly my thoughts as I went with the book...

A Man Above Reproach was sexy, funny, dramatic... but above all, a heartwarming read. I enjoyed the book for the most part because I adored the H Elias/Eli, the prudish Duke gone maniac over our Bluestocking h, Josephine (Analise). It was just so much fun to watch him fall and then chasing her around. Ooh, I do loved it. LOVED.IT! Evelyn Pryce is a promising new author and I believe, was well-deserving of the ABNA or Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award (for Romance).

Elias, the Duke of Lennox, is young but, as I already mentioned, is known as a serious man on the verge of being prudish. His close friends can’t but wonder if there’s any entertainment in his strictly led life. Eli is tall, handsome (maybe not in the traditional way) but he has always been like that. Eli never enjoyed many of those things young bucks generally like doing; gambling or whoring. He even detests whorehouses. But this certainly doesn’t mean that he has no heart or can’t feel. Eli has also written some academic papers to pursue his scholarly interests. He had very much aspired to become an academic at the Oxford. But his fate has been tied to assume the Ducal responsibilities since his birth and Eli had to take over once his father passed on. Since then, he has been mired in the numerous paperwork regarding thousand things, so much so that he has no time for himself. Having ‘fun’ with his childhood friends no longer apply, his dreams of becoming an academician remaining long buried. Today though, Nicholas, his closest buddy has dragged him to this whorehouse called The Sleeping Dove in order to loosen up his tight schedule, among other things that is. :p

Though Eli was not very amused, as we see on the very first scene, I found it very much so; how he didn’t like the overall closed-up and dirty environment of this place. But apparently it is very popular with all sorts of folks, nobles and commoners alike. The girls are also popular and Nicholas can’t wait to show him the ‘fun’ of this place, also his new-found ‘love’ (or light o’love) Sally. Before that though, they have to wear masks. Eli finds it ridiculous because he knows he’d be able to recognize everyone who is accompanying them. But when they’re finally in the back area, wearing the masks and all, the only person Eli could focus on was the woman in a pair of bright blue stockings, playing the piano. Eli can’t take his eyes off of that girl, and Nicholas laughs, telling him that he had to zoom on the one that is off limits to all. The woman goes by the name ‘Bawdy Bluestocking’ or BB. No one knows her real identity it seems, so the gossips abound where she’s concerned. Some says she’s a prostitute, some says she comes from an impoverished but good family. But Eli doesn’t care. He has to talk to her, which he does and is pleasantly surprised to find that she’s not only pretty (whatever he could make out beneath the mask) but also smart. Then there were those shapely legs encased in those pair of stockings that have already taken a place inside his head, making him imagine things... *coughmrprudegettingthehardoncough* :D

Now to our BB, who is known to the Madam and the others of the brothel as ‘Josephine’. She’s originally the proprietress of a book shop called Paper Garden. But, the ‘Josephine’ underneath is more that what she lets on. She’s intelligent, has seen more of the ‘real’ world than many of those young ladies of her age. Josephine has been playing the piano at the brothel for couple of years now, so she’d seen misery and bad things happening to the unassuming, more often than not, orphaned girls who have no one to look after them. Josephine has even written and published a book detailing those, discussing her radical thoughts on this particular evil of the society; from prostitution and perversion that runs among the so-called nobles, to how the lazy nobles do nothing to make things better. Worse still, she knows, they take part in this! Apart from her radical ideas, Josephine harbors some secrets of her own. She was raised as a noblewoman herself, or at the least, to have a debut once upon a time. But sadly, things went wrong for her and her mother, so they had to escape her father and London society altogether. After her parents died, Josephine had to look after herself. Her lazy, selfish lecher of a father had left her with nothing but debts and this book shop. She had to scrimp to go by, which is where the piano playing comes in, bringing in some much needed extra coins because the book shop doesn’t give her enough. And she needs money to keep it loaded with books, and that means more customers.

So Josephine certainly doesn’t have the time or space for a Duke in her well-maintained life, even if it sometimes feels empty. Even if sometimes she craves for someone to take care of her burdens. Soon, it was more than apparent that Eli is interested in her. More so when he finally comes to her bookshop with him mother in toe and recognizes her (her eyes, those he remembered all too well). He lets her know calling her ‘Blue’, as he called her before, when they have some sort of privacy. Josephine vehemently tries to deny it but... well, she’s no good at lying and it was not at all convincing, seeing how she’s so attracted to the man that she sees nothing but him whenever he’s near. She also feels the Duke’s interest. Umm, that can’t be good news, certainly not for a poor bookseller like her! This will ruin her good name or whatever you call it. Josephine just can’t let the Duke seduce her, cause obviously that’s where his interest lies, right? To make her his mistress? For, what else could ever happen between them?

But Eli had other plans. Yes he wants her no doubt. He freakin’ wears a hard on whenever he sees her for crying loud, something that actually introduced him to her writing (I’ll leave you to imagine how that happened *snickers*)! Eli read her book too, which impressed him to no end. Being a once aspiring scholar, he could certainly appreciate her writing but it’s her logic and her ideas that make everything tick for him. Eli now knows his Blue is as intelligent as he always suspected her to be. He becomes more than determined to sway her iron-will, as she was showing each passing day by trying to show indifference towards him.

It’s not that Josephine wasn’t convinced. It’s not that she didn’t want Eli (damn but she got jealous, thinking Eli’s mother his wife, that made me laugh so hard), certainly so after their secretly shared frantic kisses and fondling. But Josephine can’t let him take it any further. And she has no intention of sharing her secrets with him. She was convinced that if those are revealed, Eli would lose interest in her. By now, they had made this pact to act as his mistress to stay on the safer side, for Josephine appreciated the fact that being known as a Duke’s mistress will give her some certain conveniences. Oh she was annoyed when he bought that new piano for the brothel (everyone knew where that came from and for who), or when he planned on taking care of her too but it all, IMO, stemmed from her indecision of how far this ‘plan’ should go.

Eli had no intention of making Josephine a fallen woman of any kind. He just wanted to make sure she’s safe and that her book gets the exposure it deserves. For that, he’d even write a forward and finance a republishing! It was so wonderful to see him falling so hard, like a piece of heavy log for Josephine and there was no moving him from that direction. He’d basically do anything that he thinks would win her over. But Josephine is as prickly as ever about… almost everything. She’s forever vexed at Eli’s high-handed interference of her life because she can’t really do a thing about it. Even when Sally, now living as Nicholas’s mistress, tells her that she should take it all in stride and enjoy Eli’s attentions, Josephine still can’t do it. After all, she was the one who warned Sally that maybe she’s feeling the ‘love’ right now, that thing with Nicholas would never end well. It just never does from what Josephine has seen. Nicholas, heir to a Marquisate, will never marry someone like Sally (as we learn from his own admission), no matter how many times they call it ‘love’. Can Josephine do it to herself, knowing the dangers?

I understood her, really, still at times I was frustrated that she’d not enjoy the simplicity of Eli’s devotion (for what can I call it?) for her. But when I think it through, I must admit that it looked more like a fantasy and our Josie girl is nothing if not practical. Even when her head wants to float towards the cloud, she’d think/do something to drag herself down from there; even if it meant by scribbling small notes that said ‘doesn’t matter’ or ‘changes nothing’, all over her bookshop. Ah, I did feel for her... it was just an all around crazy situation. I took Josephine’s prickliness as a means to self-preservation from throwing herself into Eli’s ever inviting arms.

In the meantime, we get to know how Josephine has secretly helped many of these girls who were destines for a vile fate. Some stayed and worked in her bookshop before moving away either by marriage or becoming mistresses to other men, just as Sally used to until she went away with Nicholas. Now another girl replaced her, helping out in the bookshop. What happens next is Josephine suspecting a threat on her life. She knew if the Madame finds out, she’ll have to face the music. This gives Josephine a pause. She knows Eli can keep her safe, but can she become his mistress? The threat does come one day and fortunately, Eli, being pocked and prodded by Nicholas and Sebastian, the cousin who recently returned from India (both good friends to him), comes to visit her at the brothel. He finds Josephine being attacked by the pet brute of the Madame and saves her in time. He was so angry he would’ve killed the man if she didn’t stop him in time. After that there was nothing to be said, really because Josephine was tired of fighting this anymore.

But when, after a night of love making, Eli assumes the lord of her life and tries to take things into his capable hands, Josephine is feeling the need to flee once more. She’s not sure this is going to do any good, more so when Eli announces that he means to marry her ASAP. But beforehand, he’ll break off his betrothal with Miss Francis, the daughter of an Earl. He sends his men to clean up Josephine’s bookshop, an accountant to take care of her finances and debts that he made his own. Gosh, it was just lovely, how Eli had no qualms about showing off his affection for her. But Josephine is scared to trust him that far and that deep. So she decides to go away, writing him only a letter. She even packs up. There’s an ever-present footman on the door of the bookshop+Josephine’s rooms; all she has to do is to find the right time to escape.

Poor Eli, on the other hand, had springs on his steps. He was happy beyond belief, thinking he had his Josephine at last! He broke off the betrothal quite easily, discovering that Miss Francis is not as much of a simpering debutante as he believed her to be in the first place. She understood, and it was clear that she too thought theirs wasn’t a good match by any means. I also felt that she had some kind of interest in Sebastian. When Eli returns, he has plans for Josephine; proposing to her seemed all too perfect. Eli goes to the bookshop as planned to have dinner with her and then spend the night making her his over and over again… which he does. At one point, he even confesses is love for her, something makes Josephine realize how close she was of making a stupendously huge mistake, because she had already given into the fact that she has fallen for him. There’s no happiness in her life without him. Josephine finally decides to come clean about her own past secrets, and her real name, Analise (well, that Eli may have made her say by... erm, other means :p).

But... but, at dawn, Eli finds that cursed letter Analise wrote (but never got the chance to dispose of) about leaving him, also her packed cases. It was a disaster in the making; I knew it when I read what she was doing. Eli is frustrated, mad but most of all, he’s so very hurt. Oh, what can I say? :( Even though I thought he was adorable when he stomped off full of indignation, I couldn’t really blame him. It was just.................... *sigh*

Ah well, the ending... that made me grin ear-to-ear. Like an idiot. Really. It was just good to see Eli and Analise finally resolving their differences. After weeks of foul mood, drinks and huffing and puffing, that didn’t take long (for which I was more than glad). All it took Eli to see Analise once more, thanks to Alessandra, his sister (tactical little thing she was!). Analise thought she’d never be happy ever again but once she had the chance to explain to him what really happened, he couldn’t keep his hands off of her. And so it was, The Uncatchable (as the Ton has termed Eli) was finally, happily caught in the holy matrimony.

For now, I want Sebastian’s book bad and to see if there’d be anything between him and Miss Francis. Nicholas? Don’t know really, because for some reasons I was not as interested in him as I was in Sebastian throughout. But whatever it is, I can’t wait to find out what Ms. Pryce has in store for us in future! 4 stars.


This ARC was provided to me by Montlake Romance via netgalley which didn’t influence my review and rating in any way. thankyou
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2,975 reviews1,112 followers
July 24, 2016
I've given this a C- for narration and a C for content at AAR.

I have very mixed feelings about this audiobook. I admit that I found the first hour or so to be rather hard going, but knowing I would be writing a review, I persevered which, had I been listening simply for my own enjoyment, I may not have done. In a way, I’m glad I did stick with it, because the story does have things to recommend it, but in retrospect, there were too many problems with both the story and the narration for me to be able to say that I wholly enjoyed the experience.

The storyline seemed promising. The rather tightly-wound Elias Addison, Duke of Lennox, is persuaded to take a night off from all the problems he has inherited along with his father’s title and estates, by paying a visit to The Sleeping Dove, a brothel which is somewhat out of the common way, catering as it does to titled young men who are eager to escape the trappings of their station.

Elias is known as “The Uncatchable” throughout fashionable society. Despite the best efforts of the matchmaking mamas and the constant eyelash-batting of the debutantes, he remains aloof and unattached, and seems quite happy to remain so. He has too many other pressing concerns to give much thought to matrimony, or to any forms of diversion. His father left many debts – most of them incurred in keeping his mistresses in trinkets and jewels – and he has a younger sister to bring out. He has become, quite simply, the epitome of the old adage. All work and no play has made Elias a very dull boy indeed.

Reluctantly, Elias allows his friend, Lord Nicholas Thackeray, to drag him to the Dove one evening. He’s immediately drawn to the young woman playing the piano. Known as the “Bawdy Bluestocking” or “BB”, she is not a prostitute, even though she charges Elias for the pleasure of her company and conversation.

We learn later that her name is Josephine Grant, that she owns a small book shop in Cheapside called The Paper Garden and that, in addition, she is the author of a feminist tome entitled On Society's Ills and the Real Price of Prostitution. She is also instrumental in thwarting the plans of a group of men that indulges in what we would today call sex-trafficking, by helping the girls at the Dove to make new lives before they can be sold off to the highest bidder.

Elias is smitten by this prickly and secretive young woman who, despite her humble surroundings, has clearly been brought up a lady, and returns repeatedly to the Dove. Josie is determined to keep her distance and does her best to discourage his attentions. He’s a Duke with an impeccable reputation and she’s a woman living on the edge of scandal – and not just because she plays the piano in a brothel.

But Elias is perceptive as well as persistent, and almost immediately works out that Miss Grant is not at all what she seems. As the story unfolds, a battle of wills develops between them as Elias tries to uncover her secrets while Josie is equally as determined to hang on to them.

Evelyn Price has tried to do something a little different in A Man Above Reproach with the incorporation of a sub-plot featuring Josie writing and publishing a feminist manifesto. A discussion, written by a woman, of the evils of society as related to men and their sexual appetites in the 1830s would certainly have caused a furore, and the fact that Elias is so supportive of her writing and her views speaks very much in his favour.

The characterisation of both principals was fairly strong, even if, at times, neither of them was particularly likeable. Elias frequently comes across as high-handed and Josie is often downright unpleasant to him. However, both begin to lose those rough edges once they begin to fall for each other. I particularly enjoyed listening to Elias unbending to reveal a dry sense of humour and a sexy flirtatiousness beneath his starchy exterior.

There is plenty of humour and some excellent dialogue between the protagonists. Once Josie and Elias have accepted that the attraction they feel for each other is not going to go away, they start to trust each other more, and Josie finds herself opening up to him a little.

On the negative side, I found the first part of the book to be a bit rushed and, towards the end, an unnecessary conflict was used to prolong the story in an utterly artificial way that made me roll my eyes and want to fast-forward to the epilogue.

There were also several things throughout which took me completely out of the story, such as the point at which the very haughty and correct dowager Duchess of Lennox (Elias’ mother) is chivvying her son along because she wants him to accompany her on a shopping trip to Cheapside. To buy flowers. I can’t see the high-status ladies of the ton shopping in the City and certainly not going to buy their own flowers from the market. And another – the idea that Josie could possibly mistake Elias’ mother for his wife, which was implausible at best – it felt very contrived.

I think it’s fair to say that even though I have several reservations, I did enjoy the story overall, especially in the second third or so of the book. As an audiobook, however, it’s more problematic.

I haven’t listened to James Clamp before, and quite honestly, am not sure if I will do so again. He has a pleasant voice, his enunciation is generally clear and precise, and I thought some of his characterisations worked very well. But there were too many times when I found myself gritting my teeth in an attempt to ignore some very annoying vocal ticks. Those parts of the book that contained more dialogue than narration were easier to listen to, as Mr. Clamp then seemed to lose or bury some of those vocal mannerisms that I disliked when he was simply reading the story.

He speaks quite quickly and tends towards a rather repetitive style of delivery in that he often employs the same (or similar) vocal inflections in almost every phrase. He also has a strange tendency to split sentences. Even though there is obviously a comma. Rather than a full stop written in the text. There were also several mispronunciations of words which feature quite heavily in historical romances set in this era, such as “phaeton”, which he pronounced “phyton” and “modiste<” which he pronounced “MOWdist”. Anyone who listens to European Historicals on a regular basis will probably wince, as I did.

In addition, I didn’t find Mr. Clamp’s characterisations of the hero or heroine particularly convincing. I liked the slightly higher pitch and softened tone he employed for Josie, but am not sure why, when it’s stated more than once that she grew up in Staffordshire, he chose to give her a Scottish accent. It’s true that the story has her spending over three years with her mother in Scotland, but she didn’t go there until she was seventeen, which makes the acquiring of a regional accent by a process of absorption rather unlikely. While the accent used was less than convincing to my ear, it was at least fairly consistent.

As for Elias, there were times I thought he sounded too nasal and whiny, and that Mr. Clamp had taken his cut-glass aristocratic accent so far over the top that it strayed into parody. But at other times (especially in the later part of the book), his portrayal was more successful and in some of the more romantic scenes, I thought it worked very well.

The narrator’s interpretations of the secondary characters were often more appropriate and distinct than those of the hero and heroine. The chirpy, cockney accent he used for Josephine’s friend, Sally, worked very well, as did the gruffer, darker, and more dangerous sounding version belonging to the bouncer, Mr. Digby.

I’ve tried to be fair with my grades, because I didn’t want it to sound as though the entire audiobook was a disaster when it wasn’t. But there really are too many problems with both the story and the performance which make it impossible for me to give A Man Above Reproach a recommendation.
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January 26, 2016
I had so much fun reading this book. I don’t know where to begin in telling you it’s worth your time and money.

This was literally like opening a gift that is carefully wrapped, so you know to take your time in unwrapping it slowly, prolonging that anticipation, because as much as you want to see what’s inside, you want to prolong that feeling of excitement and anticipation.

That is exactly how I felt reading this book.

Here is what worked: characterization of Elias and Josie was fantastic. The differences between the two were in your face, and I couldn’t wait to see how those two would reconcile those and develop a relationship; secondary characters: we were introduced to them slowly and reverently, so we could get the feel of them, and I admired that. I now am chomping at a bit waiting for Nicholas and Frost’s story; plot was intriguing and exciting; the setting and dialogue gave it a real feel of the times.

If you’re looking for a story that is filled with complex characters that are entertaining and fun then pick this smart and damn good historical romance.

NOTE: I loved it so much that I went out and got me an Audible copy…I didn’t like the guy that was reading it. Maybe you might…

Melanie for b2b

*Book provided by NetGalley.
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340 reviews108 followers
October 20, 2013
Disclosure: I received the ARC through Netgalley. (Thank you to Evelyn Pryce and to Montlake for accepting my request.) Yes, this is an honest review.

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Elias Addison is the new Duke of Lennox. His father died a year ago, leaving him to sort through the mess of bills the former duke has amassed on gifts for his mistress. It is a job that has taken its toll on Elias, making him even more taciturn, more serious and more wary of the kind of women who led to his father's debauchery (and his family's unhappiness).

He was content to sit behind his desk, in his office, poring over his estate books and ledgers but his friend, Nicholas Thackeray, thinks otherwise. One night, Elias allows himself to be dragged to the Sleeping Dove with the promise of the experience of a lifetime -- and Nicholas proves true to his word, for it is at the Sleeping Dove that Elias meets the Bawdy Bluestocking: a woman whom everyone can look at, but cannot touch.

The Bawdy Bluestocking is Josephine Grant, bookseller by day and piano player at the Sleeping Dove at night. She needs both jobs if she is to keep her late father's creditors at bay. She gets paid by the Mother Superior for her piano skills and by the gentlemen who visit The Sleeping Dove for her conversation. It is an acceptable arrangement for Josephine and one that has worked well for her for a while now. Until His Grace, the Duke of Lennox walks through the doors and announces he wants her. Because of his title and wealth, no one dares refuse Elias -- but Josephine is not impressed by either one.

He's a man above reproach and she's a woman who teeters on the edge of scandal -- in that we see the double standard that society holds for us, not just in terms of gender but also in terms of socio-economic status. And, unfortunately, Josephine is doubly marginalized -- but the marvel of Josephine is that she is a woman who is defying the standard, even daring to put a duke in his place.

There is a power struggle that ensues: Elias is determined to get to know Josephine better and Josephine is determined to keep her secrets. Throughout the novel, the author hints at Josephine's pedigree: who is this well-spoken, well-mannered lady, who plays the piano like she was born to it? Who is her family and why did she run away from them? Added to that, Josephine has an ulterior motive for working at The Sleeping Dove and it has to do with the girls who work for the Mother Superior. Clues are carefully placed and made for a very compelling read. (So compelling, I finished it in one sitting and ended up sleeping a lot later than my usual bedtime.)


"... It is said she's a courtesan, but I have not met the man that has kept her. Some say she's a society lady moonlighting here as a voyeur, to escape her loveless marriage, but I have looked her straight in the face and those eyes do not exist in our circles. Plays piano all night, and well. You can talk to her, but she charges for her time, and she does not do private audiences. ..."
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I wasn't certain of my opinion of Elias -- I kept seeing him from Josephine's point of view: a man so used to his own way and will get them with a snap of his fingers. I felt Josephine's frustration and helplessness as she got swept up in Elias's world. So I decided to take a step back and look at Elias from his sister's perspective and from Nicholas's perspective: Elias is clearly ... different from how they know him. In fact, they've never seen Elias so relentless, so dedicated, and so passionate about something/someone before. It is understandable, then, that this is the only way Elias knows how to express himself. It looks a bit bossy, and a bit overbearing -- but his intentions are good: he truly wants to see Josephine happy and cared for. I really enjoyed watching the romance blossom between the two of them: Elias bordered on mischievous as he tried to discover more about Josephine and it was gratifying to see someone so wound up become so undone by love.


"Blue."

She coughed, a rather harsh expelling of air.

"I'm afraid the books are not organized by color, but by author or series."

"No, Bluestocking. You. Blue. I did not expect to see you so soon. You are irresistible without your mask, even in that atrocious day gown."

"I do apologize -- I think you must have mistaken me for someone else. Being rather plain --"

"You are far from plain."
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A Man Above Reproach is the 2013 Amazon Breakthrough Novel award for Romance and it is well-deserved. It is not just a breakthrough story but also has breakthrough characters: Elias and Josephine are wonderfully-layered and wonderfully-engaging. My favorite part is that both have actually authored obscure books that no one else, except them, has read and appreciated. I thought it was an indication of how like-minded they were and, beyond the social disparity, they were very, very compatible.


"You cannot become friendly with me, or court me, which seems to be what you are doing ... though I wonder if you are consciously aware of it. We cannot have a romantic story." She wound the ribbon that tied her robe around her finger: once, twice, thrice. He fixated on the circular movement, every muscle in his body stretched tight. "You read too much fiction if you think we can come to a resolution in the real world. The scandal would be of Byronic proportions and you, sir, are noted for your adherence to rules. I have nothing to offer you but trouble with the society you must continue to navigate all your days You are the Uncatchable; I am unsuitable. That is all that is going on here."

"I hate that nickname."
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Finally, I appreciated the author's commentary on the status of prostitutes during the 19th century. Josephine's "book" gave a very clear insight into their lack of agency and lack of choices -- beyond the prostitutes, though, Josephine also takes aim at the patriarchy that existed in their society and was calling for such reforms. (I love how Evelyn Pryce resolves this. ^_^)


"... I am sure you see the danger in women like us thinking that a nobleman will rescue them from their nightmares. Impractical at best, heartbreaking at worst."
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A Man Above Reproach is the awesome debut novel by Evelyn Pryce. It will be released by Montlake on October 22, 2013. I am very, very excited about her next book. (I hope she features Nicholas or Elias's sister, Alessandra.)
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August 26, 2017
Interesting plot. Not sure that it was very believable, but still entertaining. I listened to the audio version and the narrator was very good. Happy reading 📖!
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809 reviews26 followers
October 14, 2013
ARC from Netgalley for an honest review
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A Man Above Reproach by Evelyn Pryce
I really liked this story because it was a great combination of regency romance, history, and women's movement all in one. This story was very original and the plot, although complicated at times, very creative!
The Duke of Lennox, Lord Elias Addison is known as “ the uncatchable” because he is seen in society as very standoffish. He happens to visit a brothel, “The Sleeping Dove” with his good friend Lord Nicholas Thackerey. Lord Nicholas is there to visit “his” girl Sally. Elias is instantly drawn to Josie who moonlights as a piano player at “The Dove”. We later learn that she also owns a bookstore and has written a manifesto on woman’s liberation- On Society's Ills and the Real Price of Prostitution.
Josie ( Josephine Grant, the Bawdy Bluestocking,BB) has many aliases we later find out the meaning behind all these names and eventually her true name. We learn about her past and the many reasons why she has written such a controversial manifesto and why she plays the piano at a brothel.
Josie and Elias are perfectly matched. They infuriate each other, challenge each other and ultimately can't help falling deeply in love with each other. Both are hesitant to get their hopes up about their relationship because Elias is a Duke and Josie well ( all of the above). I loved the heroine because she was tough, smart and definitely before her time. As all true-romance novels, Elias and Josie eventually overcome their obstacles, overcome their own self-imposed obstacles and find a way to be together. I loved how the author explained the title of the story and how it was symbolic throughout the book.
Mrs. Pryce provided a great cast of characters. Elias' mother proved to be a force to recon with ( her involvement at the end of unexpected and very gratifying to the many themes throughout the storyline). Sally (Josie's shop assistant, “girl of ill-repute, and Nicholas' sweetheart) provided a great contrast to all the possibilities that were available to women of no titles.
Pryce later includes Sebastian's cousin and Miss Francis, although characters that are developed much later in the storyline, leave readers wanting to know more about their story! Also, she leaves lingering questions about how or if Sally and Nicholas are able to carry on with their relationship.
My only gripe about the story was Elias. He was always waving his titled around and was a little ( maybe a lot) sulky.
Overall, great story, fun and interesting characters, very creative plot, twist and turns that were surprising, and a great read! I would recommend and would like to read more from this author.
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634 reviews16 followers
April 18, 2014
RHFL Classifications
Regency Romance
Historical Romance
Heat Level: 2
Rating: 5 Stars
Review by Lizzie English

This book was fantastic on all levels, it was something that I did not expect. It doesn’t take long for the action to start: The Duke of Lennox, Elias Addison, is dragged to The Sleeping Dove. A House of ill repute were money gets you any lady you want; except for the one that catches Lennox’s eye straight away and they only know her as her nickname. Intrigued he can do nothing more than pay for some time for her voice. All it takes is a few minutes before “the Uncatchable” Duke of Lennox is enamored with the lady that they call Bawdy Bluestocking. He pays for her talk time, much to the chagrin of Blue. She tells him, that that’s all he will get with his money.

Josephine Grant runs a bookstore by day and at night she’s the piano player in a Gentleman’s club. She took on the bookstore after her fathers death, and with it game debts. Because of this she takes the money she earns from the club to keep her father’s business afloat. Josephine isn’t who she says she is which draws in the Duke of Lennox. He’s intrigued by the “Not Ms. Grant” and will do anything to try to get her to reveal her true identity. Josephine will stop that from ever happening, with her name change comes a dark past that she doesn’t want anyone to know she went through.

The romance is lovely, Elias and Josephine have fantastic chemistry especially since Josephine tries to push him away so much. All she wants is to be able to run her bookshop and save some girls from the awful lives as prostitutes. Elias admires her tenacity and her want to be her own person. However, Elias does over step some bounds by assuming just because she is in love with him he will let her rule her life. Josephine pulls away from him at this point, and soon her life is thrown off kilter with her secrets coming to the light. Eli will do anything to be with his “Not Ms. Grant” and proves that through out the book. With his over stepping bounds Josephine does make some rash decisions when it comes to their love and has to realize that she shouldn’t have any doubts.

The characters of the novel are ones that will stay with you. It’s easy to remember the Uncatchable Elias Addison and the Josephine-Not-Grant. The plot while can be a bit predictable is still enjoyable. I found myself only really trying to figure out what was going on with Josephine’s past, that came as a bit of a surprise. But it was a good surprise that explained her character and her actions toward Elias all the more understandable.
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2,865 reviews90 followers
October 22, 2013
'This will end badly but I am certain it will be interesting,'

Oh my! The dance of two people attracted to each other in strange circumstances, that become even more curious, is quite fascinating and humorous. The sexual tension builds but is held lightly although there were a couple of 'Hmm! I didn't see that coming,' moments. Even a mental shake of the head occasionally!
Blue, BB or Bawdy Bluestocking, Josie (Josephine Grant) plays the piano at a bordello. Elias, the Duke of Lennox, is there with friends and is struck by the quality of the pianist's performance. Attraction flares between them. Elias wants to learn more about this masked damsel. Josephine wants the safety of anonymity, not involvement. She is a spirited woman of secrets, piling up on top of each other, more so once she meets Elias. Elias must marry (to secure the title of course). He is bored by the debutants flung in front of him, wants nothing more than to escape to his estates, and now he has met an intelligent woman, bookshop owner by day, whorehouse piano player by night.
Josephine occasionally show her exasperation with Elias in interesting ways.
Look for where you find the title as a line in the book. That was an amusing insertion.
And so the dance continues between our star crossed couple--somewhere between attack, coaxing and retreat.
Humour is maintained throughout. There is a lot of amusing muttering used by all, from Sebastian in this review's title quote, to Josephine under her breath to Elias, 'I think not, you rake, she muttered.'
The camaraderie and humour between the main men is pleasant. It is something that is rarely shown and I appreciated it.
The storyline approaches the regency romance genre from a slightly different tack.
An altogether enjoyable read.

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165 reviews10 followers
September 7, 2014
ROMANCE, I MEAN R - O - M - A - N - C - E

Elias Addison, had just come into the title, the Duke of Lennox, and the new responsibilities were weighing heavily on his shoulders. His friend, Nicholas, decided to take Elias to the Sleeping Dove, a brothel, for a pleasant distraction. Nicholas meant to humor his friend and make a quick getaway, but he was mesmerized by the lovely, captivating piano player known as the Bawdy Bluestocking.

This story is unique in that the writer makes her Duke into the most romantic, loving, honorable hero ever. His gestures, gifts and conversation let the readers know we are on the path of pure passion, breath-taking romance, and undying love and commitment. We do not have to wade through him treating the heroine with disdain and disrespect, until he "sees the light", as we often have to in the recent historical romances. The heroine has been forced by life to fend for herself, by a neglectful and rakehell father, so she is fearful of trusting the Duke and suspicious of his intentions. The author does an excellent job of making us understand the mindset of these two lovers.

The plot, involving a Duke of impeccable reputation finding true love in a brothel, was done in a very original way. The pacing was excellent. The dialogue was delightful. The romance and passion were sizzling hot. The courtship was perfect. We readers are also treated to mysteries, secrets, and are immersed in the early Victorian Era. What a fun read!
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472 reviews16 followers
November 12, 2013
# I received this book through NetGalley for an honest review #

When I asked the book I didn't know that it had won the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award of the present year. Above all, what captivated me was the title. It's a really good title for an historical romance.
Both Elias and "Bawdy Bluestocking" are interesting and captivating characters. They don't fall within the stereotype of the main characters that I regularly encounter in historical romances. Therefore, there were dialogs that I found truly refreshing .
I really enjoyed the whole thread of the novel and the writing of infatuation phase was brilliant. However, when "Bawdy Bluestocking" reveals her past and why she's hiding her name and refused Elias love, I was disappointed . After so many pages preparing for this revelation, I expected something more dramatic. All the arguments offered were, in 1800's, more than enough for being considered socially unacceptable, but I believe that just appeared short in literary terms .
Finally , I would have appreciated a greater description of the season and the environment in which the action took place .
Overall , I really enjoyed. I hope to read more books from this author. I was a good debut.
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89 reviews
February 16, 2014
The Duke of Lennox is too serious and distracted with the responsibilities of his inheritance. His mother, the Dutchess, is determined he find a wife to produce an heir. But society and its women are a bore, so he entertains his good friend Nicholas, the future heir to the Marques of Bristol, and tags along to a brothel called the Sleeping Dove. Keeping their identities concealed, masks being the order along with other men of rank, the Duke is not amused or impressed with the establishment. Not until he beholds a certain young lady at the pianoforte does the Duke become entranced.

Bawdy Bluestocking will not have her favors bought but her time may well be. Her misfortunes in life have left her to this place to help pay for the struggling bookstore her father left her. Being a woman who keeps her guard up, she seems to have met her match in the Duke. Their flirtations have opened new doors for one another and her attempts to keep her past hidden begins to unravel.

This was a lovely novel of determination in persuing love and independence.
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105 reviews2 followers
October 16, 2013
I was given the honor to read this wonderful book through the Goodreads First Read giveaway. I would like to start out by saying that I normally do not read romance novels, in a way I can truly relate the character in this book. I too have been quite skeptical of the fairy tale ending. With that being said, this book was absolutely delightful. I found myself laughing, crying and of course pondering on what my take on love and life was. I actually wanted to call off of work so I could finish the book, sadly though life must go on, so I had to put finishing the book until this evening. (It is 3:26 am and I absolutely had to find out if Ana and Elias had their fairy tale ending that most females dream about) Evelyn Pryce is very talented and does not disappoint, she has a way with words that makes you fall in love with her characters. If you have the chance to read this book, trust me do not turn it down. It will make you feel a whirlwind of emotions and of course it will be the only way to find out if the Duke of Lennox finds his Duchess.
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Author 4 books261 followers
November 6, 2013
A Man Above Reproach is a quick read. It is charming, but predictable. Everything is neatly set up and wrapped up. If you enjoy Lauren Willig historical romance books, you'll likely enjoy this one. In a nutshell, a duke falls in love with a woman outside of his society. However, she may not be...but she does come with scandal. Thankfully, his mother and sister are a bit modern for the era. The tension is mild and acceptance is rather convenient and comfortable. I'd prefer to have more of both in order to become emotionally invested. It is a cute love story with a happy ending. It's an easy 'pick up and put down' historical romance book that is not long in length.
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37 reviews
November 25, 2013
I am not a fanatic about my historical romances being historically accurate. But part of the point to a historical romance, is that norms and behaviors are different than today. This book takes complete liberty with that culture and just obliterates it for the sake of the story. I could even forgive that if the author, when faced with a lack of tension in the story, has the heroine faint. Lazy writing at best, lame at worst. I finished this but only because I began to count the historical fallacies and make fun of the writing.

The sad thing is that the author has some skill. I think a good editor could have dramatic impact on creating compelling writing in the future.
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2,169 reviews
October 30, 2014
A Man Above Reproach was a breath of fresh air for this fan of historical romance. Author Evelyn Pryce has given us an epic love story with rowdy characters who are just too much fun not to like.

This was a story that was simply a joy to read. I really connected with everyone involved and thought our hero, heroine, and secondary characters alike added their own unique little something special to the storyline. I’m not typically a stickler for historical accuracy in great detail, so I honestly wasn’t reading this with a critical eye on that point.

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1,350 reviews13 followers
November 4, 2016
This novel won the Amazon breakthrough novel award and it is well deserved. Great pacing, funny, interesting and at some points almost devistating. And what a great concept: A Duke falls in love with a Bluestocking piano player in a brothel, who by day runs a bookshop and takes in fallen women, but who actually comes from aristocracy!

Beautifully conveluted, but wonderfully simple. Prive has written a gem. I love how the Duke keeps hunting for her true identity and hangs on to every piece of info she gives him.
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1,291 reviews268 followers
September 9, 2014
Why must romance writers persist with the idea that shrewish, snobbish women are adequate heroines? Apparently women can only love a good man if they gripe and fret and scold first.

Did not enjoy the woman, did not enjoy the book.
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1 review
January 13, 2015
Wonderfully smart and fun read. Someone described it as the "thinking woman's romance novel" and I am inclined to agree and steal that review.
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February 4, 2015
I found this so poorly written, as to be hard to follow.
5 reviews
May 10, 2015
A good British, Victorian romp

This was a fun period romance. The story moved along at a good pace and held my interest. Good fun.
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February 13, 2018
Well…I liked the cover.

I want to preface this review with a disclaimer that I’m not trying to be mean. This is just my honest opinion and this is intended as a critique to help the author improve, because there were strong points to this book and I think she has real potential. I really liked the social justice angle. This was stuff that could SERIOUSLY get you into trouble back then. The Duke was right to fear for Josephine. She was writing herself a ticket right into the Tower.

This had so much potential in the beginning, but in the last ¾ it really fizzled out. I liked the heroine at first. She was strong and willful and willing to do what needed to be done. She was smart, an author, a self publisher willing to shake things up in Victorian England, where women were considered property and good breeders and little more. Unfortunately as she falls in love with The Duke all the fight gets sucked out of her…she lets him completely take over her life, and they live happily ever. It left a really rotten taste in my mouth.

One minute she’s strong and sticking to her guns and then suddenly she melts into a puddle in the middle of the conversation because Lennox is SO sexy or whatever, it was wearisome.

What happened to the plot? Josephine was working in this bordello playing the piano to keep an eye on things and save the girls that were going missing. The Duke steps in and solves everything by buying the bawdy house? He just lets the madame and her rotten son, who were SELLING orphaned girls to the gentry as play things never to be seen again, go? They didn’t make an effort to find out WHO the nobles were who were buying and supposedly hurting these girls? I was excited about where this plot seemed to go, but this thread just stopped at a dead end, with Josephine falling in love with The Duke. She gets her book tour [from the Duke’s mum, what?] and forgets all about it, apparently.

The mother’s reaction to Lennox and Josephine’s betrothal bothered me. She was set up in the beginning of the story as this big obstacle. She was painted as being traditional minded and wanting to see her son married off. She just shrugged it off when Josephine wakes up from a faint [it made me so mad that she fainted! Where did my strong heroine go?] and confesses she’s in love with her son. Mamma dearest would have been a bit more protective of her titled son, I hate to say.

Also, the little sister, who had not had her debut yet, would not have been out in society going to balls.

The author seems to be confused between the difference of raising an imperial eyebrow [something an emperor would do, I guess, but not a Duke] and an IMPERIOUS eyebrow.

The dialogue in the last half got awkward and was peppered with Americanisms.

Just some food for thought. Keep writing, but these are some things an author of historical fiction should pay attention to.
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