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The Ascendant Wars #1
Hellfire
When the rules of war keep changing, fight for each other...
Humanity has been banished to a distant star. Left to fight over resources rationed to them by mysterious machine-overlords known as Wardens.
Commander Rylan Holt labors against inter-colony arms trafficking when an informant gives him horrific news. The ruthless cartel boss, Lilith, has stockpiled outlawed weapons of mass destruction.
Worse, she claims to have permission from the Wardens to unleash them upon the system.
When the battleship Audacity speeds to investigate Rylan’s discovery, operations officer Scott Carrick finds himself in a trap more deadly than he could have ever imagined. His only hope of escape may lie with their most junior crewmember, a nurse named Aila Okuma, who's never seen battle.
As Rylan, Scott, and Aila struggle to survive a war where the rules keep changing, they must answer a terrible question: how do they win when it seems the Wardens intend for everyone to lose?
Don't miss the start of an explosive Military Sci-Fi series from USA Today Bestseller Rhett C. Bruno and M.B. Vance. It's perfect for fans of The Expanse , Battlestar Galactica , and authors such as Marko Kloos, Rick Partlow, and Joshua Dalzelle.
Humanity has been banished to a distant star. Left to fight over resources rationed to them by mysterious machine-overlords known as Wardens.
Commander Rylan Holt labors against inter-colony arms trafficking when an informant gives him horrific news. The ruthless cartel boss, Lilith, has stockpiled outlawed weapons of mass destruction.
Worse, she claims to have permission from the Wardens to unleash them upon the system.
When the battleship Audacity speeds to investigate Rylan’s discovery, operations officer Scott Carrick finds himself in a trap more deadly than he could have ever imagined. His only hope of escape may lie with their most junior crewmember, a nurse named Aila Okuma, who's never seen battle.
As Rylan, Scott, and Aila struggle to survive a war where the rules keep changing, they must answer a terrible question: how do they win when it seems the Wardens intend for everyone to lose?
Don't miss the start of an explosive Military Sci-Fi series from USA Today Bestseller Rhett C. Bruno and M.B. Vance. It's perfect for fans of The Expanse , Battlestar Galactica , and authors such as Marko Kloos, Rick Partlow, and Joshua Dalzelle.
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370 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 7, 2023
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Rhett Bruno grew up in Hauppauge, New York, and studied at the Syracuse University School of Architecture where he graduated cum laude.
He has been writing since he can remember, scribbling down what he thought were epic short stories when he was young to show to his parents. When he reached high school he decided to take that a step further and write the “Isinda Trilogy”. After the encouragement of his favorite English teacher he decided to self-publish the “Isinda Trilogy” so that the people closest to him could enjoy his early work.
While studying architecture Rhett continued to write as much as he could, but finding the time during the brutal curriculum proved difficult. It wasn’t until he was a senior that he decided to finally pursue his passion for Science Fiction. After rededicating himself to reading works of the Science Fiction author’s he always loved, (Frank Herbert, Timothy Zahn, Heinlein, etc.) he began writing “The Circuit: Executor Rising”, The first part of what he hopes will be a successful Adult Science Fiction Series.
Since then Rhett has been hired by an Architecture firm in Mount Kisco, NY. But that hasn’t stopped him from continuing to work on “The Circuit” and all of the other stories bouncing around in his head. He is also currently studying at the New School to earn a Certificate in Screenwriting in the hopes of one day writing for TV or Video Games.
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Rhett Bruno grew up in Hauppauge, New York, and studied at the Syracuse University School of Architecture where he graduated cum laude.
He has been writing since he can remember, scribbling down what he thought were epic short stories when he was young to show to his parents. When he reached high school he decided to take that a step further and write the “Isinda Trilogy”. After the encouragement of his favorite English teacher he decided to self-publish the “Isinda Trilogy” so that the people closest to him could enjoy his early work.
While studying architecture Rhett continued to write as much as he could, but finding the time during the brutal curriculum proved difficult. It wasn’t until he was a senior that he decided to finally pursue his passion for Science Fiction. After rededicating himself to reading works of the Science Fiction author’s he always loved, (Frank Herbert, Timothy Zahn, Heinlein, etc.) he began writing “The Circuit: Executor Rising”, The first part of what he hopes will be a successful Adult Science Fiction Series.
Since then Rhett has been hired by an Architecture firm in Mount Kisco, NY. But that hasn’t stopped him from continuing to work on “The Circuit” and all of the other stories bouncing around in his head. He is also currently studying at the New School to earn a Certificate in Screenwriting in the hopes of one day writing for TV or Video Games.
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April 4, 2023
This was pretty good!
Will gather my thoughts to write a review!
Will gather my thoughts to write a review!
April 29, 2023
Really enjoyed the majority of this novel. Loved the changing perspective of characters each chapter; helped give you a feeling for the epic scale, and various personalities at play. Found myself invested in the characters and their individual struggles, and the battle scenes were well written and exciting.
My only real struggle was the overarching plot of the ascended Wardens never really grabbed me. These other dimensional characters are manipulating the entire human race for their entertainment, but I never really connected with those scenes, or frankly cared. Maybe the second volume will make a reader care about the Warden plot, but this one didn’t.
My only real struggle was the overarching plot of the ascended Wardens never really grabbed me. These other dimensional characters are manipulating the entire human race for their entertainment, but I never really connected with those scenes, or frankly cared. Maybe the second volume will make a reader care about the Warden plot, but this one didn’t.
December 29, 2022
I really did enjoy reading this book - Rhett does do ‘proper sci-fi’ so well! I saw this book described as military sci-fi, but I’m not so sure about that - I’m not terribly keen on military sci-fi, yet I thought this book was great! I guess it is one of the rare few that appeal to me.
I liked the easy world building, no long passages of description, yet everything seemed to make sense. I thought the characters were believable, and really enjoyed their various quirks.
I’m looking forward to the continuation of this new series!
I liked the easy world building, no long passages of description, yet everything seemed to make sense. I thought the characters were believable, and really enjoyed their various quirks.
I’m looking forward to the continuation of this new series!
March 25, 2023
The Ascendant Wars is told from multiple different story arcs in this galaxy in which there are multiple different colonies of humans living on planets, star bases and small colonies. At some point, each of the colonies as fractured into different factions following different belief systems, and needing resources and as with all these things, it has turned to war. However, along the line, an omnipotent race, known as the Ascendant (or more commonly referred to by the people of these colonies as ‘The Wardens’), has stepped in, and established a set of governing rules by which warfare can be conducted.
Now, there is a complex set of rules that govern these systems, how many ships, types of weapons, research, and along with this the Wardens control all of the resources for the manufacture of food, distributing food supplies to the colonies so that each of the factions has the exact number of resources, as each of the other colonies. Whilst some factions have introduced controls on their populations so that they can manage resources, others haven’t, resulting in populations that are not sustainable, and again, this is another factor in war between the factions, as well piracy and black-market operations.
It is into this, we are introduced to one of our main characters, Rylan Holt, a spy for the Lucian colony, who is trying to infiltrate a criminal organisation, a Cartel run by a woman known as Lilith.
Lilith is another main character, and runs a syndicate that controls the Lakshmi colonies by brute force, and has named herself their Empress. She has somehow organised a deal with the Wardens for not just major weapons for her organisation, but weapons that are not available for anyone else, including those that are capable of destroying entire colonies, which have been banned by the Wardens since they took over.
Rylan was trying to gather evidence on Lilith, but has been captured, and through his eyes, we learn not only of her operation, but just how depraved she is, much to the horror of poor Rylan.
We are also introduced to two other Main Characters, Lt Scott Carrick, the Ops Officer aboard the Lucian Battleship the Audacity, and Lt Junio Grade Aila Okuma who is a Medic aboard the Audacity as well.
Carrick is a former Police Officer, who joined the fleet after his entire unit was decimated in an attack on his colony by Lilith’s rebels. He still suffers from PTSD incidents. He is a tough veteran though, dedicated, battle hardened, with walls up due to his past, until he meets the very pretty Lt Okuma with her startling blue eyes that melt those walls in an instant. For her part Lt Okuma is new to her role, but incredibly intelligent, competent and eager, until an away mission leaves her fighting for her life and desperately trying to save those around her.
Each of these characters brings a different piece of the puzzle to the overall story, allowing us to try and piece together this overall intriguing, fast-paced, action-packed thriller, about a galaxy that should, on paper be ok, as the Wardens provide everything they need. However, underlying all of this is over-population, criminal organisations, corruption, persecution, all leading to a galactic level conflict. But who is driving this?
The character writing is done exceptionally well, with very real and believable people. Carrick’s character really portrays the raw emotion that comes with PTSD, as well as that dedication to his roll. Okuma’s character is one that you immediately fall for as a reader, and it is a testament to the authors ability to create such a likeable character in just a few short paragraphs. The connection between these two is magical, but also so believable given the situation.
Rylan Holt’s character is remarkable, (I don’t want to give anything away), but what he endures is savage, and is just very well done from this characters POV. Lilith is brilliant, you both love and hate her at the same time.
There is also a slew of minor characters that are just outstanding. Amongst these are the Wardens themselves (Including the Ascendant beings), which are just masterful and really add this amazing element to the story, making it a real standout in this genre, something different, and really interesting and engaging.
The world building is astounding in this book, from the individual colonies, to the Wardens themselves. The combat descriptive work is stunning, including the ship-to-ship combat, and ground based military operations. There are some amazing tactical operations on the ground which are done with all the intricate detail of a Bourne Film operation, whilst the ship-to-ship combat reads like something out of a Star Wars movie with all the different capital ships, starfighters, and space stations firing on each other. Combat is brutally descriptive and detailed, with gritty (graphic) and realistic detail.
I will add a bit of a warning for anyone that has a trigger for torture or PTSD issues, as there are some pretty intense scenes in this book. Having suffered from PTSD for years, I have to admit I was at my limits a few times. It is very well done.
Overall, this is an exceptionally well written book, regardless of what genre you like, there is something for everyone, and it is absolutely worth the read. I have already pre-ordered book 2. One of the Must-Reads of the Year!!
Now, there is a complex set of rules that govern these systems, how many ships, types of weapons, research, and along with this the Wardens control all of the resources for the manufacture of food, distributing food supplies to the colonies so that each of the factions has the exact number of resources, as each of the other colonies. Whilst some factions have introduced controls on their populations so that they can manage resources, others haven’t, resulting in populations that are not sustainable, and again, this is another factor in war between the factions, as well piracy and black-market operations.
It is into this, we are introduced to one of our main characters, Rylan Holt, a spy for the Lucian colony, who is trying to infiltrate a criminal organisation, a Cartel run by a woman known as Lilith.
Lilith is another main character, and runs a syndicate that controls the Lakshmi colonies by brute force, and has named herself their Empress. She has somehow organised a deal with the Wardens for not just major weapons for her organisation, but weapons that are not available for anyone else, including those that are capable of destroying entire colonies, which have been banned by the Wardens since they took over.
Rylan was trying to gather evidence on Lilith, but has been captured, and through his eyes, we learn not only of her operation, but just how depraved she is, much to the horror of poor Rylan.
We are also introduced to two other Main Characters, Lt Scott Carrick, the Ops Officer aboard the Lucian Battleship the Audacity, and Lt Junio Grade Aila Okuma who is a Medic aboard the Audacity as well.
Carrick is a former Police Officer, who joined the fleet after his entire unit was decimated in an attack on his colony by Lilith’s rebels. He still suffers from PTSD incidents. He is a tough veteran though, dedicated, battle hardened, with walls up due to his past, until he meets the very pretty Lt Okuma with her startling blue eyes that melt those walls in an instant. For her part Lt Okuma is new to her role, but incredibly intelligent, competent and eager, until an away mission leaves her fighting for her life and desperately trying to save those around her.
Each of these characters brings a different piece of the puzzle to the overall story, allowing us to try and piece together this overall intriguing, fast-paced, action-packed thriller, about a galaxy that should, on paper be ok, as the Wardens provide everything they need. However, underlying all of this is over-population, criminal organisations, corruption, persecution, all leading to a galactic level conflict. But who is driving this?
The character writing is done exceptionally well, with very real and believable people. Carrick’s character really portrays the raw emotion that comes with PTSD, as well as that dedication to his roll. Okuma’s character is one that you immediately fall for as a reader, and it is a testament to the authors ability to create such a likeable character in just a few short paragraphs. The connection between these two is magical, but also so believable given the situation.
Rylan Holt’s character is remarkable, (I don’t want to give anything away), but what he endures is savage, and is just very well done from this characters POV. Lilith is brilliant, you both love and hate her at the same time.
There is also a slew of minor characters that are just outstanding. Amongst these are the Wardens themselves (Including the Ascendant beings), which are just masterful and really add this amazing element to the story, making it a real standout in this genre, something different, and really interesting and engaging.
The world building is astounding in this book, from the individual colonies, to the Wardens themselves. The combat descriptive work is stunning, including the ship-to-ship combat, and ground based military operations. There are some amazing tactical operations on the ground which are done with all the intricate detail of a Bourne Film operation, whilst the ship-to-ship combat reads like something out of a Star Wars movie with all the different capital ships, starfighters, and space stations firing on each other. Combat is brutally descriptive and detailed, with gritty (graphic) and realistic detail.
I will add a bit of a warning for anyone that has a trigger for torture or PTSD issues, as there are some pretty intense scenes in this book. Having suffered from PTSD for years, I have to admit I was at my limits a few times. It is very well done.
Overall, this is an exceptionally well written book, regardless of what genre you like, there is something for everyone, and it is absolutely worth the read. I have already pre-ordered book 2. One of the Must-Reads of the Year!!
February 25, 2023
It took me a little time to get into this book, and a bit longer to get a good grasp on what was really going on, but once I did, I enjoyed it tremendously.
The fragments of humanity squabble among each other in a star system, under the watchful eye of mysterious machines called Wardens. This story begins with the Wardens suddenly and unexpectedly seeming to pick a side.
The story here is compelling and the writing is crisp. The biggest frustration I had with this book is that even at the end, we only have a very rough sense of what's really been going on. Some series-beginning books can somewhat stand alone, but here, although the immediate conflict is brought to an end, the book ends very much unresolved -- think The Fellowship of the Ring as opposed to The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe.
With that said, I'll repeat that I enjoyed this book quite a bit, and although I started off slowly, by the time I got to the end, I was absolutely ready to keep reading into the next book -- which unfortunately is probably a while away still!
I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author in exchange for my honest review.
The fragments of humanity squabble among each other in a star system, under the watchful eye of mysterious machines called Wardens. This story begins with the Wardens suddenly and unexpectedly seeming to pick a side.
The story here is compelling and the writing is crisp. The biggest frustration I had with this book is that even at the end, we only have a very rough sense of what's really been going on. Some series-beginning books can somewhat stand alone, but here, although the immediate conflict is brought to an end, the book ends very much unresolved -- think The Fellowship of the Ring as opposed to The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe.
With that said, I'll repeat that I enjoyed this book quite a bit, and although I started off slowly, by the time I got to the end, I was absolutely ready to keep reading into the next book -- which unfortunately is probably a while away still!
I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author in exchange for my honest review.
May 11, 2023
The Ascendant Wars: Hellfire (book 1) by Rhett C. Bruno and M.B. Vance
Far in the future (4380 AD) humanity is living in space stations orbiting planets light years from Earth. You would think man would have learned from his mistakes by now, but no, greed and power still feed the hearts of evil men. Especially when some kind of supreme overlords rule over man, limiting their resources making survival the #1 priority. Fortunately, good men can still be found to battle the never-ending struggle. Herein tells the tale of a few of these men and women along with some high-tech and plenty of pew-pew’s to keep your adrenaline pumping. Evidently evil isn’t only a human trait. Put this series on your TBR list. I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Far in the future (4380 AD) humanity is living in space stations orbiting planets light years from Earth. You would think man would have learned from his mistakes by now, but no, greed and power still feed the hearts of evil men. Especially when some kind of supreme overlords rule over man, limiting their resources making survival the #1 priority. Fortunately, good men can still be found to battle the never-ending struggle. Herein tells the tale of a few of these men and women along with some high-tech and plenty of pew-pew’s to keep your adrenaline pumping. Evidently evil isn’t only a human trait. Put this series on your TBR list. I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
February 20, 2024
Recommended.
Much better than I thought it would be. The romance between two of the characters is sophomoric and heavy handed but the battle scenes are well written.
An unusual and intriguing premise. The evil antagonists are really evil, not in a comic book or exaggerated way but in a realistic, almost historical way.
I could easily read an analogy to a what could happen if Trump gets a second term.
Two complaints: the editing was at times sloppy. Two, whether by accident or design, understanding the world building was difficult and much was left unanswered.
If I have the time or get in the mood for a space/science fiction action adventure, I will read the remaining books in the trilogy.
Much better than I thought it would be. The romance between two of the characters is sophomoric and heavy handed but the battle scenes are well written.
An unusual and intriguing premise. The evil antagonists are really evil, not in a comic book or exaggerated way but in a realistic, almost historical way.
I could easily read an analogy to a what could happen if Trump gets a second term.
Two complaints: the editing was at times sloppy. Two, whether by accident or design, understanding the world building was difficult and much was left unanswered.
If I have the time or get in the mood for a space/science fiction action adventure, I will read the remaining books in the trilogy.
April 10, 2023
HELLFIRE by Rhett Bruno and MB Vance is a military space opera world that, oddly enough, reminds me of Clash of the Titans. Specifically, it's a space opera story but the entirety of the conflict is being fought around godlike aliens who are forcing the humans into conflicts among one another as part of a celestial game.
The villain, Lilith, is a particularly hate-able one as she goes completely insane for having the slightest bit of resistance then gets confused by torture not always getting her what she wants. She's defined by a single quote. "Those who say pain doesn't work aren't using enough of it." She's comically evil but that doesn't necessarily mean bad or unbelievable.
Enjoyable book and I'll read the sequel.
The villain, Lilith, is a particularly hate-able one as she goes completely insane for having the slightest bit of resistance then gets confused by torture not always getting her what she wants. She's defined by a single quote. "Those who say pain doesn't work aren't using enough of it." She's comically evil but that doesn't necessarily mean bad or unbelievable.
Enjoyable book and I'll read the sequel.
March 19, 2023
An exciting book but lacking
I do believe that more explanations as to what the game is intended for should be spent. Who are all these puzzle pieces? And who is above who in the pecking order would help allot. How did lillth come to power? This would make for a more enjoyable reading experience without figuring just who is who.
The action sequences are very good and make you feel like you are there. I am glad I read the story and will try to maker better sense of it than the first installment.
I do believe that more explanations as to what the game is intended for should be spent. Who are all these puzzle pieces? And who is above who in the pecking order would help allot. How did lillth come to power? This would make for a more enjoyable reading experience without figuring just who is who.
The action sequences are very good and make you feel like you are there. I am glad I read the story and will try to maker better sense of it than the first installment.
December 22, 2023
Really Enjoyed...But...
The story was fast paced and the world is fascinating, but what's up with all the Sci-fi stories including child abduction, abuse or torture? Granted, the occurrence here is brief, but that is just never something I am going to read for entertainment. It is like all the stops have been removed in order to up the shock value. Hey, authors, the other option is to spend more effort in developing a good story that doesn't rely on these shock devices. Anyway, clearly good writers here, just not sure I want to take a chance on more of this type of shock.
The story was fast paced and the world is fascinating, but what's up with all the Sci-fi stories including child abduction, abuse or torture? Granted, the occurrence here is brief, but that is just never something I am going to read for entertainment. It is like all the stops have been removed in order to up the shock value. Hey, authors, the other option is to spend more effort in developing a good story that doesn't rely on these shock devices. Anyway, clearly good writers here, just not sure I want to take a chance on more of this type of shock.
March 10, 2023
The interpersonal detail of this book was outstanding. The characters had all the flaws and warts of normal people. The interaction of the ascended was a bit different, but the characters were understandable in their flaws.
The depth of depravity was educational to compare the various cultures.
Space battles were well done.
Narration was exceptionally well done.
This book was provided free of charge with expectation of an honest review.
The depth of depravity was educational to compare the various cultures.
Space battles were well done.
Narration was exceptionally well done.
This book was provided free of charge with expectation of an honest review.
July 13, 2023
Rough way to play a game.
So I had started this series a couple of times but just had to much going. Glad I picked it back up. Great people in this series and if a book makes you scream, laugh and hate then it's worth reading. Going to see where this goes and hopefully I don't throw something during the second book, cheers.
So I had started this series a couple of times but just had to much going. Glad I picked it back up. Great people in this series and if a book makes you scream, laugh and hate then it's worth reading. Going to see where this goes and hopefully I don't throw something during the second book, cheers.
March 9, 2023
This is for the audio book. the Indian accents were ridiculous at the beginning and the story was just a rehash of something that's been 100 times before.
I normally love Rhett Bruno, but this collaboration and narrator for this story was a miss.
I normally love Rhett Bruno, but this collaboration and narrator for this story was a miss.
May 24, 2023
Computer fight
Two computers playing a game and the pawns are humans. The evil computer has a woman as his puppet but it was her choice as well. I did like several of the characters but truthfully I didn't like the senseless violence and torture.
Two computers playing a game and the pawns are humans. The evil computer has a woman as his puppet but it was her choice as well. I did like several of the characters but truthfully I didn't like the senseless violence and torture.
July 26, 2023
Great read! Could not put this book down ... lots and lots of action ... characters that seem real and relatable ... plenty of tension. Great new series!
I won a copy of this book in a Goodreads giveaway for this honest review.
I won a copy of this book in a Goodreads giveaway for this honest review.
July 29, 2023
Good Read
A good read with a new twist. Quite a ways into the future and mankind is on different colonies and being played against one another in brutal wars over and over by higher computer based beings. Good characters and storylines.
A good read with a new twist. Quite a ways into the future and mankind is on different colonies and being played against one another in brutal wars over and over by higher computer based beings. Good characters and storylines.
March 21, 2023
It took some time to really understand what was going on but once I did, it was a crazy ride. I am curious to find out what will happen next.
March 29, 2023
good read
A little slow to start as place, characters, and plot are developed and introduced to you. By then, the hook is set and the authors start reeling you in!
A little slow to start as place, characters, and plot are developed and introduced to you. By then, the hook is set and the authors start reeling you in!
May 23, 2023
Not cohesive
Quit reading around page 100. The battle scenes didn't make any sense and were confusing. Its all tell, no show and gets boring.
Quit reading around page 100. The battle scenes didn't make any sense and were confusing. Its all tell, no show and gets boring.
June 1, 2023
The story was just MEH!!
I finished but I can't say I was really into the story or had any kind of connection with the characters. I've enjoyed his other books a lot so this one was surprising.
I finished but I can't say I was really into the story or had any kind of connection with the characters. I've enjoyed his other books a lot so this one was surprising.
August 11, 2023
Fun, no mind bending concepts
I enjoyed this book during a 400 mile car ride. Pure escapist entertainment. If you’re looking for something with more depth, keep looking.
I enjoyed this book during a 400 mile car ride. Pure escapist entertainment. If you’re looking for something with more depth, keep looking.
October 5, 2023
Good Sci-fi
A very deep and interesting space opera tale, full of action and intrigue. The characters were believable. I like this book and recommend it.
A very deep and interesting space opera tale, full of action and intrigue. The characters were believable. I like this book and recommend it.
March 13, 2023
No one ever wanted to be under the Wardens’ scrutiny. After all, they’d exterminated most of mankind and exiled the survivors.
3 1/2 stars. "Hellfire (The Ascendant Wars #1)" by authors Rhett C. Bruno and, M.B. Vance offers an interesting premise with lots of potential just dying to be realized. The execution is not as even as many of at least Bruno's previous works - where I can't help but compare this one in many ways to his classic "Titanborn" masterpiece - but it does fit in well with his ability to always bring something new to the table. And "Hellfire" does have its moments. There are a ton of interesting aspects to enjoy and look forward to particularly as the story gets a bit more advanced in terms of coming instalments.
How do we break free of those monsters? They’ve created this misery and for what?
I do think this story suffered somewhat from uneven pacing and some hiccup-y flow over the course of its 76 chapters! I get that some space battles happen in a snap and that was ok. But balancing that with the beginning of the book - where it seemed we were going to get a REAL spy thriller - with other aspects made for a, not bad, no, but a more difficult than expected read. I come back to the fact that there were a lot of short choppy chapters, some of which barely kept things engaged for 3 or 4 pages.
The engagement lasted exactly eight seconds.
Most positively, this is an interesting Universe the authors have created. Although I'm not sure I followed all of the political divisions along the way, the fate of humankind in this reality was fascinating. And the Wardens as well as obviously the extremely unique Ascendants is something I look forward to learning more about as new releases are pending. In fact, the sequences were our "game players" Cef and Len appeared were by far the strongest parts of the book for me. What has potentially happened over the millenia to our species and their continuing (?) existence here is just amazing. And knowing that there are 'others' out there with an even stranger role to play is delicious to say the least!
I’m a pushy, insufferable, know-it-all and you’ll love every second you’re with me or else.
What worked less for me were the humans and their emotions that came into play. Rylan was indeed an interesting case study in what it means to be a spy complete with a full life and family. I could really envision a book focused on just his activities as the main story. However, many of the others that appeared either struck me as almost caricatures - particularly Lilith who I never really understood why she was like she was, even after all that was done to her - or to me were out of place in this scenario. For example, I didn't connect with the budding relationship between Aila and Scott even in the slightest, as I just couldn't figure out its 'value' to the story as a whole. That's just me though, noting I have to admit that I connected more with the V.A. units' personalities, which also I think could have easily been explored in more depth! Maybe that says more about my emotions than anything else?!?
You could have given these people a paradise. Instead, you are putting them through hell.
Needless to say, I think there's a lot left to learn and explore and quite frankly blow up in the coming chapters. And if I can leave this review with one simple conclusion, is that I'm definitely intrigued enough by this first in the series to pick up the coming books the minute they hit the shelves!
3 1/2 stars. "Hellfire (The Ascendant Wars #1)" by authors Rhett C. Bruno and, M.B. Vance offers an interesting premise with lots of potential just dying to be realized. The execution is not as even as many of at least Bruno's previous works - where I can't help but compare this one in many ways to his classic "Titanborn" masterpiece - but it does fit in well with his ability to always bring something new to the table. And "Hellfire" does have its moments. There are a ton of interesting aspects to enjoy and look forward to particularly as the story gets a bit more advanced in terms of coming instalments.
How do we break free of those monsters? They’ve created this misery and for what?
I do think this story suffered somewhat from uneven pacing and some hiccup-y flow over the course of its 76 chapters! I get that some space battles happen in a snap and that was ok. But balancing that with the beginning of the book - where it seemed we were going to get a REAL spy thriller - with other aspects made for a, not bad, no, but a more difficult than expected read. I come back to the fact that there were a lot of short choppy chapters, some of which barely kept things engaged for 3 or 4 pages.
The engagement lasted exactly eight seconds.
Most positively, this is an interesting Universe the authors have created. Although I'm not sure I followed all of the political divisions along the way, the fate of humankind in this reality was fascinating. And the Wardens as well as obviously the extremely unique Ascendants is something I look forward to learning more about as new releases are pending. In fact, the sequences were our "game players" Cef and Len appeared were by far the strongest parts of the book for me. What has potentially happened over the millenia to our species and their continuing (?) existence here is just amazing. And knowing that there are 'others' out there with an even stranger role to play is delicious to say the least!
I’m a pushy, insufferable, know-it-all and you’ll love every second you’re with me or else.
What worked less for me were the humans and their emotions that came into play. Rylan was indeed an interesting case study in what it means to be a spy complete with a full life and family. I could really envision a book focused on just his activities as the main story. However, many of the others that appeared either struck me as almost caricatures - particularly Lilith who I never really understood why she was like she was, even after all that was done to her - or to me were out of place in this scenario. For example, I didn't connect with the budding relationship between Aila and Scott even in the slightest, as I just couldn't figure out its 'value' to the story as a whole. That's just me though, noting I have to admit that I connected more with the V.A. units' personalities, which also I think could have easily been explored in more depth! Maybe that says more about my emotions than anything else?!?
You could have given these people a paradise. Instead, you are putting them through hell.
Needless to say, I think there's a lot left to learn and explore and quite frankly blow up in the coming chapters. And if I can leave this review with one simple conclusion, is that I'm definitely intrigued enough by this first in the series to pick up the coming books the minute they hit the shelves!
May 11, 2023
Excellent story
This wasn’t what I expected. I thought I’d get a space battle and some military jargon thrown around and instead I got a deeper story with a really cool twist.
Don’t worry there’s lots of fighting and ships and guns and stuff. But the reason why those things can or can’t be used is the cool part.
You’ll like this. I’m a fan of Rhett C Bruno and this lives up the the standard I’ve come to expect from him.
This wasn’t what I expected. I thought I’d get a space battle and some military jargon thrown around and instead I got a deeper story with a really cool twist.
Don’t worry there’s lots of fighting and ships and guns and stuff. But the reason why those things can or can’t be used is the cool part.
You’ll like this. I’m a fan of Rhett C Bruno and this lives up the the standard I’ve come to expect from him.
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