Bitterwood
By James Maxey
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Dragons rule the world, united under the powerful dragon king Albekizan. Humans exist as slaves, pets, and prey. Yet one man, the mysterious Bitterwood, resists from the shadows, fighting a long, lonely war. When Bitterwood is blamed for the death of Albekizan’s beloved son, the king launches a full scale campaign to rid the the world of the dragon slayer, even if he must kill all mankind.
Revised 2020 ebook edition now includes the bonus prequel story "Tornado of Sparks!"
James Maxey
James Maxey is author of several novels, the Bitterwood Trilogy of Bitterwood, Dragonforge, and Dragonseed, the Dragon Apocalypse series of Greatshadow, Hush, and Witchbreaker, and the superhero novels Nobody Gets the Girl and Burn Baby Burn.
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- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5For all my talk of being tired of dragons, I did pick up James Maxey's BITTERWOOD since he's an alum of the Odyssey Fantasy Writer's workshop. And I enjoyed this read. It's fun and fast, but demands, in some places, a wee bit too much suspension of disbelief, but I enjoyed the setting and the premise enough to keep reading.The premise: in Bitterwood, dragons are the ruling class on Earth, and humans are essentially, well, the oppressed. Better still, the main hero and the main villain both have the exact same motivation for wanting to wipe the other race out: Bitterwood killed King Albekizan's son, and King Albekizan's responsible for the death of Bitterwood's children. Those who are fans of dragons should definitely check this out. It's an odd, vague mix of Terry Brooks, Anne McCaffrey, Michael Crichton's Jurassic Park and, oddly enough, Robin Hood. The writing is strong through most of the book, which makes up for some of the rather more melodramatic moments in the battle scenes. Still, fun stuff.The full review, WITH SPOILERS, may be found in my LJ. As always, comments and discussion are most welcome. :)REVIEW: James Maxey's BITTERWOODHappy Reading! :)
- Rating: 1 out of 5 stars1/5I picked this up because it seemed like a good concept of dragons ruling the world and having a lone antagonist hunting them. And it could have been, if executed correctly. This one fails.I'm one who reads the prologue. It's still part of the story to me. So while reading it, I was trying to decide if this is an allegory for the bible or someone bible thumping in fantasy. (At least it interrupted the possible rape scene.) It was my first sign the book wouldn't work well for me.The writer had me semi confused, as the dragons are described like they are in a human form. Or perhaps they are anthropomorphic in set up. The dragons speak of the humans doing the work for them. None of it had made for a compelling set up. The best part was when they did the whole hunt the human set up. But that quickly devolved into uselessness.By page 66, I'd determined that the prologue has no bearing on the rest of the book. Other than to create a legend of a character, which lacks the details to truly make it a legend. Then I thought I'd try the audio to see if it improved any... Even the audio book reader shows little inflection to his voice and sounds bored as he reads.I pushed to page 81, got thoroughly done with the whole waste of text and gave up. No compelling characters, a very dry and boring text. Nope. Dud.
- Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2/5There's nothing wrong with this book. It just marks the moment when I stopped being able to care about new fantasy series.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5A fantastic melding of fantasy and science fiction.While the book begins leaving you with the impression of a realm so like the many others where dragons and humans mingle, as events proceed you will find that Maxey has really created something quite unique and enjoyable.In this first of the trilogy you will follow Bant Bitterwood in his mad, driven quest to destroy as many dragons as he can. You will also see the world from the point of view of an advanced dragon society as well as from the view of a human who came of age living in that society. And you will slowly learn how all of this came to pass. The pace at which the history of the world is revealed interspersed with some gripping action sequences makes the book fun and engaging.Maxey is a relative new comer and it is well worth giving his works a try.
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- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5If you are a fan of dragon novels and haven't read this yet then you should get hold of a copy and do so!As dragon novels go the story is pretty unique, not your usual human=good, dragon=bad scenario, and I very much enjoyed the change. There are a few twists and turns on the way and more than once I had trouble putting it down, I really wanted to know what was going to happen next.Not many books make me instantly order the sequel as soon as I reach the end, but this one has.
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- Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2/5I'm not sure why I'm not enthusiastic about this book. It's a nice story, with a few twists that are rather surprising. Well, until you've read the hints that is. The book tends to lift the veil a bit, and afterwards to explain the entire thing. Unfortunately, after the veil has been lifted, the idea is pretty much clear. Perhaps the problem is that the goal of the book is to assemble the puzzle, and that the characters feel as pieces of the puzzle because of that. As a result, I can't really care about them. At the end (the last quarter or so), I wanted to finish the book to see how the last loose ends would be tied together, not because I really cared. Still, the ideas in the book are a nice surprise, and not what you'd expect when you start reading. And it's really not that badly written, so I expect others will have a higher opinion of this book.
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5Scifi novels tend to run in series, so I like it when I find a good standalone story. This one has a great mythology reminiscent of Planet of the Apes. The world is ruled by dragons and humans are little more than slaves or pets. But is this an alternate universe, or a picture of what our own might become?
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Bitterwood - James Maxey
PART ONE
PYRE
Can a man take fire in his bosom,
and his clothes not be burned?
Proverbs 6:27
PROLOGUE PART ONE
SEED
1070 D.A. (Dragon Age), the 39th Year of the Reign of Albekizan
FRESHLY PLOWED EARTH and the perfume of women scented the night air. Naked, Bant scurried along the furrows, crouching low as he made his way toward the orchard. All around him women sang out and men grunted with pleasure. Bant strained his eyes in the darkness, fearing that any second some white arm might snake out of the moonless night and pull him close, demanding from him that which was Recanna’s.As he reached the far end of the field, the sounds of passion grew more distant. The black shadows of the peach orchard loomed before him. He paused at the edge of the trees, warmed by the rising heat of the earth, awash in the sweet scent of newly opened blossoms.
Recanna?
he whispered.
He leaned forward, listening for any faint sound. Behind him, he heard the distant laughter of a woman. He ducked his head and stepped into the orchard, inching forward, his arms held before him. Under the low, thick canopy of the boughs, even the dim starlight vanished. He saw no sign of his beloved. Had she decided not to come? Worse, had someone else caught her as she traveled through the fields? In theory, on the Night of the Sowing, women were free to choose any partner they wished. In practice, no woman could ever refuse any man of the village on this night; to do so would be an insult to the Goddess.
Bant was only fifteen, Recanna fourteen, and this was the first time each had participated in the sowing, the rite of spring practiced in honor of the Goddess Ashera. They had waited a lifetime for this night. If all their whispered plans and shared dreams were to come to nothing now . . . It was too terrible to contemplate.
Recanna?
he said again, louder, almost a shout. He held his breath to listen for her reply. His heart sounded like a drum in his ears.
At last, her faint voice answered, Here.
He crept toward the sound. Bant was all but blind beneath the branches. For a second he thought he saw her slender form in the darkness, a black shape against a gray background. When he drew nearer he saw it was only the trunk of a tree. Then her soft, cool hand closed around his and pulled him to her.
She was naked, of course. From sunset to sunrise on this night, it would be a sin to allow cloth to touch her body. Her soft skin pressed against his. He felt as if he’d slipped into dream. He wrapped her in his arms, holding her tightly, trembling with joy. He leaned and pressed his lips to her neck, nibbling her, breathing in the rich aroma of her hair. Then he moved his mouth to seek her lips. But she turned her face and his lips fell on her cheek, which was wet, and salty. She shuddered. He realized she was crying.
What’s wrong?
he whispered, rubbing her back.
This,
she said, sounding frightened. Us. Bant, I love you, but . . . but we shouldn’t be here. I’m afraid.
There’s nothing to be afraid of,
Bant said, stroking her hair. As you say, you love me. I love you. Nothing done in love should cause fear.
She swallowed hard. She was still crying.
Everything’s all right,
he said, wiping her tears.
No,
she said. I know I agreed to this. But, at the ritual, the women who prepared me for the sowing kept talking about the Goddess. They kept telling me of my duty.
Damn duty,
Bant said, grabbing her shoulders and looking her in the eyes. We’ve waited so long. I won’t share you with the others. I can’t.
But it’s the Night of the Sowing. The Goddess is good to us. She makes the orchards blossom and the crops sprout. All that she asks in return is this one night of—
Hush,
Bant said, placing his fingers on her lips. The old women have really scared you, haven’t they? Where’s the Recanna I knew just yesterday, the girl so intent on following her own heart?
But . . .
she said.
There will be other sowings,
he said. There will be time enough for duty.
But—
Bant pulled her to him, silencing her with his lips. Despite the warmth of the night, her naked body was cold and she shivered as he embraced her. He ran his hands along her skin, warming her. He continued kissing her until her lips grew softer, and she opened her mouth to his. She cautiously placed her gentle fingers against his hips. Her skin, chilled only moments before, flushed with heat. She moaned softly, and pulled him closer. They fell to the earth together, the soil warm and yielding beneath Bant’s back.
For the first time Bant understood the deeper meaning of the sowing, the powerful connection between the seasons of the world and the passions of the body. He felt as if he were a part of the earth, a thing of rich loam and hard rock. Recanna’s breath against his lips was as sweet and life-giving as the spring breeze. Their defiance of the traditions of the village no longer mattered. There was only lingering, sensual tension of the now.
Then, with a gasp, Recanna turned her head and pushed Bant away. She rose to her knees.
What?
Bant asked, sitting up and raising his hand toward her. What’s wrong?
Look,
she said, pushing his hand away. The road.
Far beyond the trees, a single lantern flickered on the distant road, breaking the sacred darkness of the sowing. Who would approach the town on this of all nights? A murmur rose from the nearby fields. They were not the only village folk to have spotted this sacrilege of light.
It’s an omen,
Recanna said, her voice once more fearful. We’ve angered the Goddess. What have we done?
W-we . . .
Bant’s argument trailed into silence. No one would dare light even a candle on the Night of the Sowing. The Goddess graced this night with a perfect blanket of darkness. Had he risked too much?
A snap of a twig nearby raised the hair on his neck. Someone else was in the orchard. By now, his eyes were better adjusted to the gloom. Recanna’s pale skin almost glowed. But looking around, all he could see were the silhouettes of the tree trunks. Anyone could be hiding. Then one of the dark shapes broke free from the others and moved closer. Bant jumped as a deep, beefy voice shouted, Runt!
Bant knew the voice well. Even in the gloom, the hulking shape of his older brother Jomath was unmistakable. Jomath was two years older than Bant, but a giant by comparison, a foot taller and with thick muscular arms. Bant had always been a target of his brother’s bullying. But, if the light on the road presaged something dangerous, it was good that he was here.
Jomath,
Bant said. I’m relieved it’s you. What do you think the light on the road is?
Who cares?
Jomath said, striding boldly forward and placing a callused hand around Recanna’s frail arm. Some lost fool, no doubt. Not my concern. What concerns me is to see you and this lovely morsel breaking the commandments. Do you think I’ve been blind to your plotting?
Ow,
said Recanna. You’re hurting me.
You deserve to be hurt. The commandment is that any woman shall lay with any man on the Night of Sowing. Defiance of this is a great sin. I’m here to save you from your folly.
Let her go,
Bant said, leaping to his feet. She’s in love with me, not you.
To speak of love is blasphemy,
Jomath said, pushing Bant back with one hand while continuing to hold onto Recanna’s arm. There’s no place for such refinement on the Night of Sowing. The Goddess commands all of nature, and tonight we are reminded that we are part of that nature. We leave behind our daily roles to become the animals we truly are. It’s a woman’s duty to submit to any man who wants her. I’ve waited a long time for Recanna to come of age. It’s time for me to teach her the sacred lesson of the Goddess.
Let her go,
Bant repeated, clenching his fists. You don’t care anything about the Goddess. You’re only doing this to spite me.
Please, Jomath,
said Recanna, twisting in his grasp. You don’t have to be so rough. You’re right. We’ve sinned. But at least allow Bant to be the first. We’ve waited so long.
Don’t speak to me of waiting,
Jomath said, his teeth flashing white. I’ve wasted far too much time searching these shadows for you. Resist if you like. I find it more pleasurable if you struggle.
No!
Bant shouted, rushing toward his brother. He punched Jomath in the back with all his strength. His older brother spun around, using his free hand to punch Bant on the jaw.
Bant hit the ground hard, his mouth full of blood. The teeth on the left side of his jaw wiggled with sickening ease as his tongue brushed against them. When he tried to rise, Jomath kicked him in the belly, forcing his breath out in a painful gush. Jomath kicked him in the guts again and this time Bant vomited, choking on the bile. Unable to breathe and with stars dancing before him, Bant clutched dirt in his fists. He struggled to make his legs obey him. His hate was like a thousand whips lashing him, driving him. Bant had been beaten by Jomath before, but this would be the last time. Bant had no doubt that if he could reach Jomath’s windpipe with his fingernails, he would gladly rip it out. Yet his body betrayed him. He remained glued to the ground.
Recanna screamed. Jomath silenced her with a punch then threw her down beside Bant.
I’ll kill you,
Bant whispered through bloody lips.
Empty threats.
Jomath lowered himself to his knees before Recanna. Recanna was groaning, barely moving, as Jomath parted her legs. He glanced over at Bant and said, Watch. You might learn something.
Bant spat at his brother, but the blood-darkened spittle landed on Recanna. Bant closed his eyes tightly until all he saw was a wall of red, a sea of blood. He imagined Jomath drowning in such a sea.
Then, far away, a man shouted and a woman screamed, not in pleasure but in panic. Quickly, the other villagers echoed the scream. Bant opened his eyes to find Jomath standing, ignoring Recanna, and staring off toward the village.
Across the fields, a bonfire rose from the heart of the village.
This will have to wait,
Jomath said, and raced away.
Bant crawled to Recanna’s side. Together, they helped each other sit up. Recanna was weeping, her body heaving with great sobs.
Oh, what have we done?
Recanna moaned. This has all gone so wrong. Oh, Goddess, I’m so sorry. I’m so sorry.
Bant looked her in the eyes, trying to show courage. This isn’t our fault,
Bant said. He prayed it was true. Come on. Let’s see what’s happening.
He helped her to her feet. Grabbing her by the wrist, he guided her from the orchard, picking up speed and breaking into a run as they cleared the low branches and reached the freshly plowed field. Alone, Bant could have outpaced Jomath, even with his head start. Jomath had gotten all the brute strength in the family, but Bant’s slight, wiry build made him the fastest runner in the village. He slowed his pace, not wanting to leave Recanna behind. In truth, he wasn’t eager to discover the source of the evil that gripped the village this night. Could Recanna be right? Was this their fault?
At the edge of the village square, Bant stopped, drawing back in fear. Harnessed to a nearby wagon stood a gigantic black dog, as big as an ox. It was the biggest beast Bant had ever seen, save for a brief glimpse of a sun-dragon that had once flown high over the village.
The dog regarded Bant with a casual eye. Its huge pink tongue hung from its mouth as it panted, giving it a friendly, bemused expression. The dog’s breath was foul, filling the air with a rotten meat stench. Bant kept his distance from the creature as he led Recanna around the edge of the square to join with the crowd of villagers.
The crowd consisted of the village men, all three score of them. All were still naked from the sowing. The women stood on the nearby hill, clutching their children to them. Everyone’s eyes were fixed on the temple of the Goddess. The structure sat in the heart of the village. Its wooden columns were the ivy-covered trunks of ancient trees, and its walls were dense hedges. It held the most sacred artifact of the village; a carving of the Goddess, taller than a man, resting on a pedestal that was once the stump of an enormous oak.
Flames engulfed the temple. The fire roared with a noise like heavy rain. The stone steps leading up to the temple interior were covered with offerings: baskets containing bundles of fresh spring ramps, loaves of brown bread, and a catfish as long as a man’s arm. The woven reed baskets curled and warped in the heat of the blaze.
Then, from the smoke and flame rolling from the temple’s entrance, a giant stranger emerged, rudely dragging behind him the voluptuously carved mahogany statue of the Goddess. If the smoke stung his eyes or irritated his lungs, the stranger gave no sign. Nor did he cringe from the terrible heat. He kicked away the offerings as he moved forward. He placed the Goddess below him on the stone steps of the temple, moving her heavy wooden body as if it were weightless.
Confused voices ran through the crowd. Had this stranger set fire to the temple? Or was he saving the Goddess from the blaze?
The crowd fell silent as the stranger straightened to his full height, easily ten feet tall, his shoulders broad, unbent by fear or labor. Despite the commandment that no cloth could touch flesh on this night, he wore a black wool coat that hung down to his heavy leather boots. His skin, stained by soot, was as dark as his clothes. The only bright things about him were his eyes, glistening beneath a broad-brimmed hat. His giant right hand held a thick, black book.
In the stunned silence, the stranger opened the book, and read, with a thunderous voice, THOU SHALT HAVE NO OTHER GODS BEFORE ME. THOU SHALT NOT MAKE UNTO THEE ANY GRAVEN IMAGE, OR ANY LIKENESS OF ANY THING THAT IS IN HEAVEN ABOVE, OR THAT IS IN THE EARTH BENEATH, OR THAT IS IN THE WATER UNDER THE EARTH.
With this proclamation, the stranger opened his long black coat to reveal a woodsman’s axe, nearly four feet in length, its finely honed edge catching the firelight. It hung from his belt without touching the ground.
It may be,
the stranger growled, that you dwell in ignorance, unaware of your sin.
He lifted the heavy tool with a single hand high over his head. I have been sent by the Lord to show you the way.
The axe flashed down like lightning, splitting the Goddess in twain. The two halves flew apart, clattering on the stone steps.
From the hillside the women began to wail. Even some of the men were weeping. Recanna clung tightly to Bant who felt numb. The Goddess was eternal; she had always dwelled at the center of the village. How could this be happening, unless they were in the presence of something—some god—more powerful than Ashera?
Now that this nonsense is behind us,
the stranger said, the truth shall set you free.
Truth?
one man cried, stepping forward. It was Jomath. You dare speak of truth in the face of such blasphemy?
I dare,
said the stranger. Have care. Do not act in anger or haste. I am a servant of the Lord. He will not allow a hair on my head to come to harm.
Jomath’s face twisted with rage. His hands were tight fists. But Bant knew his brother well, and could see something in his eyes that others might have missed. Fear. It was on the faces of all the men. Fear of the blasphemy they had witnessed, yes: fear of the coming wrath of the Goddess, no doubt; but more immediately, fear of this giant, this devil standing before the raging flames, his sharp axe gleaming.
Jomath looked back to the men. Who’s with me? Who will join me in avenging this villainy?
The men looked down in utter silence.
Cowards,
Jomath cursed. He turned to face the stranger. Let the Goddess give me the strength of the storms, the fury of lightning!
He bellowed with rage as he rushed the steps. He drove his shoulders into the stranger’s stomach with a force that made Bant flinch.
The stranger did not bend. Jomath recoiled from the impact of the blow, stumbling on the steps. The stranger raised his axe. Then, a shout flew from the crowd. A blacksmith’s iron hammer flashed through the air. The heavy tool struck the stranger squarely in the face, knocking him backward. Namon, the stout-armed blacksmith, had hurled the weapon and now charged up the steps. Before Namon reached the man, Faltan, the huntsman, rushed from the edge of the burning temple and threw himself against the back of the stranger’s knees. The stranger staggered forward, allowing Jomath to grab his belt and pull until all three men and the stranger tumbled. Bant had difficulty discerning whose limbs were whose in the cursing ball of flesh and black cloth that landed in the square.
As one, the men of the village gave a blood-curdling shout and rushed forward, drowning the stranger beneath a human wave.
Bant didn’t move to join them. He couldn’t, standing there, his arms around Recanna. His heart held an unspeakable desire. He wanted the stranger to live. He wanted the stranger to kill Jomath. Let the temple burn, let the Goddess send her wrath as storms, as floods, as plagues of locusts and flies: Bant feared none of these things. All he wanted was for Jomath to die, to satisfy the hate he’d felt only moments before.
The ox-dog at the edge of the square barked and charged forward, the wagon bouncing behind it like a toy. The beast’s teeth sank into the shoulder of one of the men on the ground who screamed as his bones snapped. His scream died as the ox-dog shook its enormous head, sending the man’s body hurtling through the air. It landed before Bant and Recanna, splashing them with blood. Bant recognized the man; it was Delan, his uncle, the man who’d been training Bant in the art of archery. Bant understood that it wouldn’t be only his brother who died tonight.
So be it, he thought.
Recanna screamed, tugging away from him, trying to run. Bant tightened his grip on her, deaf to her cries. He couldn’t bear to part with her, and he didn’t dare to turn away from the carnage before him.
The ox-dog tossed men into the sky like rag dolls as the bright-eyed stranger fought to his feet once more, his robes now wet with blood. His axe rose and fell, chopping and hacking. Limbs were severed, skulls split, men died with each blow. The dog tore and savaged the men. Quickly, the few men with limbs still intact slipped and skittered on the bloody cobblestones before fleeing into the night.
The stranger didn’t pursue them. He stood in the middle of a mound of bodies, straightening his coat. He pulled the brim of his hat back down over his eyes and wiped his cheek with a gore-encrusted palm. He wasn’t even winded.
He kicked the bodies at his feet—dozen men at least—a path for him to walk.
With a chill of satisfaction, Bant spotted Jomath, dead among the bloody mound. It was almost as if his hate had killed Jomath, as if it had been a palpable thing, a force, making his darkest desires real. He knew he should feel remorse or some sense of loss. Instead, he felt something that bordered on joy at seeing his brother’s torn and twisted corpse. It frightened him that he was capable of such hate. Nothing could ever wash the blood from him.
So be it.
The blood-soaked stranger walked toward Bant.
You,
the stranger said. Boy. What’s your name?
Bant looked up into the giant’s eyes. They were piercing, unflinching. Bant knew the stranger was studying his terrible soul.
B-Bant,
he said. Bant Bitterwood.
You did not fight me,
the man said.
No,
whispered Bant.
Do you fear me, Bant Bitterwood?
No,
Bant said. In his hatred for Jomath, all other emotion had been lost.
This marks you as a wise man in this village of fools.
Of all the words that could have left the stranger’s mouth, these were the last ones Bant had expected.
Tell me, Bant Bitterwood, is this woman you cling to your wife?
No,
said Bant.
What is your name, girl?
She turned her head away as she whispered, Recanna Halsfeth.
Are you any man’s wife?
No,
she answered.
Then the Lord’s work in this place shall begin with you. As you stand together tonight, so shall you stand for all eternity. Bant Bitterwood, look upon your wife. Recanna Bitterwood, look upon your husband.
But—
Recanna began.
The stranger raised his open palm, silencing her. Do not question the commandments of the Lord.
T-the Lord?
asked Bant.
Can you read, Bant Bitterwood?
No, sir.
Then you shall learn. It is important training for all servants of the Lord. One cannot know the Lord without knowing the Word.
The stranger held forth a black book. Bant took it, surprised by the weight as the stranger released it. He knew it weighed only a few pounds, but somehow, it felt like the heaviest burden he’d ever carried.
Bant asked, Are you . . . are you the Lord?
"No. I am his prophet. My name is Hezekiah. Now go, Bant Bitterwood. Find clothes to cover your nakedness. Your days of living as a pagan savage are no more. Recanna Bitterwood, find clothes of your own then prepare food for your husband. He will need his strength. There is much work for him in the coming days.
Bant looked to Recanna. She was afraid. She tried to pull away but he held tight.
I know you’re frightened,
Bant said. I don’t understand what has happened tonight, but I have a feeling. I think everything is going to be all right. Don’t be afraid.
What you feel, Bant Bitterwood,
said Hezekiah, is faith.
Recanna nodded. Something changed in her eyes. Bant realized that she also had faith, faith in him. He stood straighter, feeling somehow more powerful.
He pulled her closer then looked to Hezekiah, who nodded.
You may kiss your bride,
the prophet said.
Recanna surrendered as Bant placed his lips upon hers. The world spun beneath his feet. Gone the musty smell of the fields and the sweet scent of peach blossoms. Here, in this perfect kiss, in the first moment in his life where he felt no fear, no shame, all the world smelled of smoke, and sweat, and blood.
This is how Bant Bitterwood learned that hate could improve the world.
This is how Bant Bitterwood found God.
CHAPTER ONE
LIGHTNING
1099 D.A. The 68th Year of the Reign of Albekizan
THE SAD LITTLE FIRE gave out more smoke than warmth. The hunter crouched before it, turning a chunk of ash-flecked meat on the flat stone he’d placed amidst the coals. The movement of the stone stirred more smoke. The hunter coughed and wiped soot from his eyes. He stretched his bony, knotted fingers above the embers, fighting off the chill. He was a thin man, hair shoulder-length and gray, the deep lines of his leathery face forming a permanent frown. He pulled his heavy cloak more tightly around him.
In the tree above him hung the body of a dragon, blood dripping from its mouth.
The creature was a sky-dragon, the smallest of the winged dragon species. Strip away the ten-foot wings and the long tail and a sky-dragon was no bigger than a man and half his weight. They were known as sky-dragons both for their prowess in flight and their coloring, the pale, perfect blue of a cloudless day. The hunter had killed many sky-dragons over the years. They weren’t particularly dangerous. Despite talons ending in two-inch claws and crocodilian jaws full of saw-like teeth, sky-dragons prided themselves on being civilized. The beasts fancied themselves as artists, poets, and scholars; they considered it beneath their dignity to engage in such menial work as hunting.
The hunter had brought the sky-dragon down with a single arrow, expertly placed on the underside of the jaw, the iron tip coming to rest dead center in the dragon’s brain. The beast had fallen from the air like a suddenly dead thing, catching in the crook of a tree. The hunter had climbed the tree and retrieved the leather satchel the dragon had slung over its back. He’d tugged at the beast’s body but found the corpse jammed too tight to budge. Lowering himself even with the beast’s head, he’d stared into its glassy, catlike eyes. Sky-dragon heads always reminded him of goat heads, albeit goats covered in smooth, opalescent scales. With a grunt, he cut out the beast’s tongue.
Moments later, a fire had been built and now the tongue sizzled on the flat rock at the center, giving the smoke an oily, fishy tinge. To pass the time as the tongue cooked, the hunter searched the contents of the dragon’s satchel. Food, of course. A bottle of wine wrapped in burlap, a loaf of rock hard bread powdered with flour, two apples, some eel jerky. He also discovered a fist-sized crock capped with oily parchment bound with string. He punched through the parchment and recoiled at the stench. The crock was filled with strong-smelling horch; a paste that dragons loved that consisted of fish guts and chilies ground together then buried in a ceramic jar and fermented. The hunter tossed the jar as far into the woods as his arm could heave it.
Turning his attention once more to the satchel, the hunter found a map, a rolled-up blanket of padded green silk, and a small jar of ink. He sniffed the cap and judged the ink to be made from vinegar and walnut husks. Several quills crafted from the dragon’s own feather-scales were in the bag. No wonder the beasts fancied themselves scholars—were covered with the tools of writing.
The hunter paused to examine a leather-bound book, the linen paper a pristine white, the opening pages covered with sketches and notes about flowers. The drawings were meticulous. Rendered in dark walnut ink, the flowers had a life and beauty. The blossoms swelled on the page seductively enough to tempt bees.
The hunter ripped out the drawings and fed them to the crackling fire. The paper writhed as if alive, curling, crumbling into large black leaves that wafted upward with the smoke, the inky designs still faintly visible until they vanished in the dark sky.
The hunter used his knife to retrieve the roasted tongue and sat back against the tree, oblivious to the blood soaking the trunk. As he chewed his meal, he stared at the ink bottle. It stirred memories. Memories for the hunter were never a good thing.
After he finished the tongue, he wiped his fingers on his grungy cloak. He picked up the book, contemplating the remaining blank pages. Opening the bottle of ink, he dipped the quill and drew a jagged, uneven line upon the page. He tried again, drawing a circle, the line flowing more evenly this time. Across the top of the page he began to write A B C D E . . .
and it all came back to him.
Dipping the quill once more, he turned the page and wrote in cautious, even letters, In the beginning.
He stopped and drew a line through the words. He turned the page and stared at the fresh parchment, so white. White like an apple blossom. White like a young bride’s skin. He lowered the quill to the page.
Dear Recanna,
I have thought of you often. What I would say if I could see you again. What I should have said those many years ago.
Twenty years. Twenty years since last I heard your voice. Twenty years I’ve been at war, alone.
If only
Here the hunter stopped. If only. These were weak words, regretful. They had no room in his heart. This was not a night to lose himself in memory and melancholy. Tomorrow was an important day. The most honored ritual of the dragons was scheduled, and he had a special, unscripted role to play.
If only.
The hunter closed the cover on those cursed words and placed the book upon the coals.
Flames licked the edges, dancing before his eyes like ghosts.
THE DRUMMERS BEAT their rhythm as the choir of sky-dragons burst into song, filling the great hall with celestial music. Jandra shivered with excitement as the ceremony began. She was sixteen now, and this was the first time she’d persuaded Vendevorex to allow her to attend the contest. For centuries the sun-dragons had used this ritual as the first step toward the enthronement of a new ruler. She would be the first human to ever witness the ceremony.
More precisely, she reminded herself, she would be the first human to ever witness the ceremony and survive. She looked at the two human slaves in their cages across the room. She knew her sympathy should lie with them. Alas, it was difficult to feel any connection to the brutish, wild-eyed men in the cages. Wearing her blue satin gown with an elaborate peacock headdress, Jandra felt more kinship with the dragons that surrounded her.
She sat beside Vendevorex, her mentor. A sky-dragon and the king’s personal wizard, Vendevorex was widely hailed as the most clever dragon in the kingdom. As such, the exotic quirks of his personality were given broad tolerance. Jandra was one such quirk. She’d been raised since infancy by Vendevorex, and now trained as his apprentice.
Jandra looked around the great hall, at the eyes of the assembled dragons. They all had a look of disdain as they gazed toward her, from the brutish, thick-muscled earth-dragons, to the elite, scholarly sky-dragons who sat around the vast chamber on their elegant silk mats.
Only the immense sun-dragons didn’t look upon her with scorn, because they didn’t look upon her at all.
The sun-dragons were the nobility of the dragon clans. Twice the size of sky-dragons, they ruled the world with their heads held high in the regal air that came so naturally to them. The sun-dragons sported fiery red scales that faded to orange at the tips. Wispy white feathers lined their snouts, giving the illusion that they breathed smoke.
The drummers and the choir reached a crescendo as King Albekizan and his queen, Tanthia, appeared in the sky, their bright scales in dramatic contrast against the dark storm clouds behind them, tinted a rich red by the sunset. The ceremonial hall was a vast circle hundreds of yards in diameter, half covered with a dome and half open to the sky. Albekizan swooped into the hall, the wind from his wings causing the ceremonial torches that lined the perimeter to flicker. The air took on the scents of patchouli and lavender—queen’s favorite perfumes—she swooped to rest behind him. The king’s dagger-like claws clicked on the marble floor as he crossed the room in a stiff and formal march. Dragons were bipedal, and when no one was watching them, they walked in a fashion that reminded Jandra of birds, big, toothy, scaly chickens to be exact. But, in court, they held their backs and necks unnaturally straight and kept their heads high, emphasizing their great height. Though Vendevorex was seated directly next to the king, Albekizan didn’t bother to glance at them as he took his position on the huge mound of gold cushions that covered the raised dais of his throne. The queen took her place beside him atop a smaller mound of pillows. Two earth-dragons quickly rushed to either side of Tanthia, fanning her with wands of woven palm fronds. When the king and queen had settled into their seats, the drums and choir abruptly stopped.
At the rear of the chamber stood a set of enormous golden doors that led to the bowels of the earth. In the silence the doors slowly swung open, revealing a stooped sky-dragon, Metron, his once blue feathers turned silver by age. Green scarves hung around Metron’s neck, denoting his office: the High Biologian, keeper of the ancient secrets. He hobbled forward, supporting himself with a gnarled staff as his crooked body trembled with the effort of remaining upright. Despite his infirmity, Metron commanded respect. The assembled dragons lowered their eyes in reverence.
Metron swayed as he stood before Albekizan, and Jandra wondered for a moment if the old dragon was about to collapse. The strength in Metron’s eyes allayed her fears. The High Biologian turned his back to the king to gaze out upon the sunset. It seemed as if the entire room held its breath. All that could be heard was faint thunder and the torches fretting in the rising wind.
Then, above the wind came the flapping of gigantic wings. Long shadows raced across the hall as Albekizan’s sons spiraled from the sky, spreading their wings to descend with downy grace in the center of the hall. Bodiel, the younger of the two, was the first to land, his outstretched wings nearly blocking from sight his brother, Shandrazel, who touched down behind him.
Bodiel was radiant. The crimson of his open wings blended with the sunset behind him as if all the sky were part of his being. The wind ruffled his feathery scales, making the mane of his long, serpentine neck flicker like flame. Light played on the rings of gold that pierced his wings. He stretched and relaxed the long, powerful talons at the mid-joint of each wing, displaying sharp claws painted with powdered emerald. The crowd nodded with silent approval at the display. Jandra’s heart fluttered at Bodiel’s beauty.
Shandrazel made no such display, keeping his wings folded. His brooding eyes stayed fixed on the floor. The long, reptilian faces of dragons didn’t display the same range of emotions as humans, but Jandra recognized a scowl when she saw one.
The focus once more shifted to Metron as he began the ritual greeting.
Glorious salutations, oh mighty Albekizan!
Metron spread his wings as he spoke, and spoke with all the power his old lungs could muster. You who own the earth, and all who fly above it, and all who walk upon it. We live in the shadow of your magnificent incandescence! Great is your mercy.
Metron bowed deeply as the assembled dragons lowered their heads to touch the floor. Jandra bowed low, wishing she had a longer neck.
Greater still is your bounty,
Metron continued, spreading his wings once more. The seed you planted long ago has produced a bountiful crop. Your sons stand before you, mighty and tall. Their wings span the arcs of the heavens. The fire of their will cannot be quenched by rain, or river, or sea. Each is your pride, each is your promise, and one of them, we pray, will be your death!
The assembly erupted in cheering as Metron lowered his wings. Twice before during Albekizan’s reign the dragons of the kingdom had gathered to witness this ritual in which the king’s older sons competed