Lovely, Dark and Deep
By Amy McNamara
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Wren Wells is hiding out. Though she lived through the accident that killed her boyfriend Patrick, the girl she used to be didn’t survive. Instead of heading off to college as planned, Wren retreats to her father’s studio in the northern woods of Maine. All she wants is a little quiet, a place where she can be in control.
Then she meets Cal Owen. Dealing with his own troubles, Cal is hiding out too. When the chemistry between them threatens to pull Wren from her hard-won exile, Wren has to choose: risk opening her broken heart to the world again, or join the ghosts who haunt her.
Amy McNamara
Amy McNamara is a writer whose poems have appeared in numerous journals and have been nominated for a Pushcart Prize. Her first novel, Lovely, Dark and Deep, won an ILA Children’s and Young Adults’ Book Award, was an ABC New Voices Pick, and was nominated as an ALA Best Book for Young Adults. When she’s not reading stories, telling stories, or thinking about stories or poems, she can be spotted, camera in hand, documenting the incredible city she calls home. She lives in Brooklyn, New York. Visit her online at www.amymcnamara.com.
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- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5Amy McNamara's first novel Lovely, Dark and Deep is an emotional tale of a young girl's darkest hour following the tragic death of her high school boyfriend. Now a recluse in the northern reaches of Maine, McNamara's Wren Wells struggles to escape a vicious cycle of grief and despair that leaves her sanity hanging on by a thread. Desperately trying to remain buried deep within herself to avoid feeling anything at all, Wren is cut off from her family, friends and society and can't seem to find her way back. Quite unexpectedly, Wren is literally hit by the boy who will help her emerge from darkness.Cal Owens, who is not without his own pain and baggage due to a recent MS diagnosis, enters the story just when the flicker of hope in Wren is about to be stamped out. Cal and Wren have an instant connection and the chemistry is there right from the start. Together, they are able to stay afloat and buoy each other against the harshness each faces. Cal forces Wren to feel again for the first time since her world was turned upside down. Without giving too much away, there isn't a story book ending with everything tied up in a pretty bow but I was left with a feeling of satisfaction. I appreciated the author finishing the story the way it began; raw and emotional.The writing is beautiful and written in present tense which really helped me feel as if I was in the moment with Wren, Cal, and the other supporting characters. McNamara offers just the right amount of intensity and her character development and the pace of the novel is spot on. Lovely, Dark, and Deep is exactly that. Bravo on the cover art too!
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5More of my reviews can be found at my YA blog.FIRST IMPRESSION:The writing is worth reading. Not a whole lot happens at the start and you can tell that's going to be the atmosphere of the book -- Wren thinking about how depressed she is and possibly not doing anything about it. But the writing, the skill McNamara has, is worth reading regardless. THE PLOT:There's not one. Aside from Wren being wrecked and trying to unravel herself and get better. There's not a lot of forward motion. There's a lot of lamenting, of hitting a wall and not being able to get around it, and just ... depression. High moments. Low moments. The plot isn't why you'd read this book.It took about a 100 pages for me to really get into something aside from the writing. By around page 150, I thought the story could wrap up nicely. The book is around 350 pages, so it doesn't. It just keeps going. There a lulls were the writing is all that kept the book in my hands, then there's action that makes me actually interested in the outcome. The story dragged near the end. I thought there were parts that could have been cut altogether to make it tighter and more ... eventful. THE CHARACTERS:They make the book worth while. WREN is the main character, she's fragile, broken, and self-centered. She's not the most original character. I can think of a few other MCs just like her -- Claire from EMILY'S DRESS & OTHER MISSING THINGS or What's-her-name (I want to say ... Anne?) from REVOLUTION by Donnelly. They were both whirling from a lose, by mega-sad.CAL is probably my favorite character in the story. He's unique, special, and always interesting. I felt for him and respected his strength. MARY is my other favorite. She's such a unique, weird, artistic character that can drag even gloomy Wren out of herself. I was so sad when she left the story.WREN'S DAD was someone I had a like-loath relationship with. Sometimes he was awesome, other times he'd say things that weren't so awesome -- borderline sexist remarks. Over all, I liked him.WREN'S MOM was a bitch. I couldn't stand her. I was just hoping someone would punch her. MEREDITH was ... ughhhhh inducing. Even if I didn't like the characters, the fact that McNamara could make me feel so extreme about them was great. THE ROMANCE:This was another reason to read the story. Wren and Cal's weird little dance. I felt it more from Cal's side, and wanted it to work out for his sake. I knew that it was probably Wren's only chance of becoming someone again. Plus, it was a tragic romance and I love those. There's some hope that somehow everything will magically work out but ... with his sickness, you know it can't last forever. THE WRITINGCompletely and utterly the biggest reason I read this book. It was powerful and beautiful all at once. It made an otherwise already-been-there-done-that story different and lovely. Just like the title says, the writing is lovely, dark, and deep. McNamara has a talent for describing depression without being blatant about what it all means. How one moment Wren can have so much energy and the next she can't get herself out of bed. CONCLUSION: This book is going to stick with me.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5This is definitely an interesting read. At first I hated it. It took me over a month to read this book, which is super abnormal if the book isn't for school. I ended up putting it down for almost 3 weeks. Today I picked it up again, and let me tell you my opinion completely changed. It deals with grief and depression in the best way I have read yet. I now realize that the relationship does make a lot of sense, whereas at first I hated it. I thought it was unhealthy, but now I see it differently.I think this is a great book to read when you are in similar state to Wren. When you are putting yourself back together after being shattered. I think that it is raw and real.
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- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5Rating: 3 of 5Nothing original but certainly realistic in its portrayal of an 18-year-old dealing (or mostly not really dealing) with her grief and depression. Recommended for older young adults seeking an authentic story of loss and in its aftermath the struggle to reconnect with life. "It's too much to be trusted with someone else's heart. I don't think it ever ends well (p.198)."
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5Debut author, Amy McNamara’s, stunning portrait of a young woman’s grief in the most extreme stage shall touch the heart of every reader. Lovely, Dark, and Deep’s Wren Wells may be a pseudo-recluse living in a secluded area in Maine with her father, but she lays her pain on the table for any who bother to see. The death of Wren’s boyfriend, Patrick, and the many factors that surround his death, sends her life off-course. Living with her sculpting father, Wren hopes to get herself straightened out and back to pursuing her carefully laid out goals. Her time spent out of touch with society: friends, work, and passion, leave her parents worried and her mind close to shutting down. The aspect of living in the small town that Wren didn’t count on, was finding a reason to emerge from the darkness in which she’s shrouded herself.Wren is strong, even when she feels like hiding away from the world, but she knows that her misery is something that’s physically and mentally holding her back. Characters that are, at least, partially aware of themselves in such a manner are fascinating to read about. Wren walks herself towards moving on from a tragic accident, though not without help, but she pushes readers toward encouraging her, backtracks toward pitying her, then comes full circle to hopefulness that she’ll finally make real progress. Cal Owens flows into the novel like a knight in shining armor, almost. He has his own story that I wish McNamara could have explained in more detail, because I wasn’t too familiar with the source of his troubles, but overall he added to the path of hope Wren could choose to ignore or follow. Wren and Cal are drawn together by their similarities and differences when it comes to dealing with grief. Wren draws into herself, vowing to remain silent until she can sort through her issues, while Cal pretends his situation isn’t as grave as it really is. His quick temper contradicts the calm he radiates for Cal, molding him into one of the most realistic characterizations of a love interest I’ve seen in young adult fiction.McNamara’s style of writing is easygoing, yet packs a wallop of emotion. The writing excellently portrays Wren’s flow of consciousness through a variety of sentence length and structure. The dialogue is straightforward, even when a moment of profundity surrounds the speaking character. Knowing that the characters are saying more with fewer words lends the reader a sense of time. It never feels as though a scene is unnaturally long, or that a person in real life would never say so much at one time. Lovely, Dark, and Deep sends a riot of emotions through me when I just think about Wren’s story. Reading her story is a comfort and an experience, because it is such a possibility. This is truly a universal story that will not only entertain readers who love a sad story that pushes its protagonist toward happiness, but also speaks to the many people affected by grief and other strong emotions. *ARC provided by publisher in exchange for an honest review*
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- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5I’m sure other reviewers have said this, but I’ll say it again, just in case: Lovely, Dark and Deep is just that: lovely (the writing), dark (the turmoil within Wren) and deep (the level of my affection for this book). Lovely, Dark and Deep is a world apart from other stories about grief: McNamara’s prose raises the bar for YA literature (after reading, it comes as no surprise that she’s got a MFA in poetry). I could luxuriate in her words all day—and in fact, I did. Lovely, Dark and Deep is a book best read beneath the covers on a cold day. It’ll make you feel like winter.
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- Rating: 1 out of 5 stars1/5Unfortunately, there is nothing lovely, dark or deep about this book. I have to admit, I picked it up because I thought the cover was beautiful. I know, I know... but I was hoping the content would live up to the stunning design of the book. Nope. The main character, yeah, I cannot even remember her name, that's how fantastic the writing was, is involved in a tragic car accident her senior year of high school. (It was some type of bird...Robin? Wren? Wren! That's it.) Wren walks away from the wreck without a scratch, but her boyfriend is not so fortunate. This sends her into a semi catatonic state where she refuses to talk to anyone or participate in life at all. She moves in with her father in his rural North Eastern house on the coast where she lives in a seclusion for about a year. Then she meets a boy. Surprise! Boy drags her out of herself and she wonders how she would ever live with out him, blah, blah, blah. She is weak, dependent, and fragile and it takes a boy to save her. Like I haven't read that one a million times before.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5Amy McNamara's first novel Lovely, Dark and Deep is an emotional tale of a young girl's darkest hour following the tragic death of her high school boyfriend. Now a recluse in the northern reaches of Maine, McNamara's Wren Wells struggles to escape a vicious cycle of grief and despair that leaves her sanity hanging on by a thread. Desperately trying to remain buried deep within herself to avoid feeling anything at all, Wren is cut off from her family, friends and society and can't seem to find her way back. Quite unexpectedly, Wren is literally hit by the boy who will help her emerge from darkness.Cal Owens, who is not without his own pain and baggage due to a recent MS diagnosis, enters the story just when the flicker of hope in Wren is about to be stamped out. Cal and Wren have an instant connection and the chemistry is there right from the start. Together, they are able to stay afloat and buoy each other against the harshness each faces. Cal forces Wren to feel again for the first time since her world was turned upside down. Without giving too much away, there isn't a story book ending with everything tied up in a pretty bow but I was left with a feeling of satisfaction. I appreciated the author finishing the story the way it began; raw and emotional.The writing is beautiful and written in present tense which really helped me feel as if I was in the moment with Wren, Cal, and the other supporting characters. McNamara offers just the right amount of intensity and her character development and the pace of the novel is spot on. Lovely, Dark, and Deep is exactly that. Bravo on the cover art too!
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5Engaging story of 18 y/o girl recovering from catastrophic life event. Typical teenage struggles with parents compounded with struggle to deal with her role in the death of her newly ex-boyfriend. Goes on a little long, with the protagonist wallowing to a point that tries the reader's patience. Overall-good, believable story.
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Lovely, Dark and Deep - Amy McNamara
i won’t
start
now
I KNOW YOUR HOUSE,
he says. My father was the architect.
I keep my eyes on the trees whipping past my window. I can’t look at him. Not without my heart doing a little flutter. And I don’t want to feel anything for anyone, that’s the whole point of coming to this godforsaken place. But he has this sure, quiet air to him. Apparently I still react to things like that. I wonder for a second what he meant about being sick. Then I push it away. I don’t want to know.
We pull out of the woods and onto paved road. The pines are replaced by a sudden emptiness that feels like a deep breath. A crazy wide-open sky over the ocean. It’s a coast road, a stunning route, the kind you could accidentally drive off because you’re staring at the view.
When I was little I imagined I was an arrow above it, shot from the city, speeding and twirling up the coast, flying high and free. The few times I came up to visit my dad after he left, this part of the drive was the best. It meant I was close to running wild for a day or two. No rules.
It’s definitely the right place for my dad. Freedom-wise. No distractions. I guess we were a distraction. When he’s not traveling, showing his work, he’s in his studio all day, every day. At least that’s what I think he’s doing. I don’t know much about his life. I was little when he left, and I only really saw him when he was in the city for an opening or something. We would have awkward dinners. Mom, Dad, and me. Little fractured trinity.
My mom hates it up here. When I was ten, I wandered into the woods, away from one of his parties, and she stopped letting me come up after that. I’m kind of hazy on the details, but I guess another kid at the party and I sampled from a few forgotten wineglasses. Then we explored the cliffs and woods. After dark. An impromptu search party was involved, and that was the end of summers at my dad’s. Probably she was trying to punish him or something. At the time I thought she was punishing me. Dad didn’t push back too hard, so I stopped coming.
I think it kills her now that I want to be here. The cliffs scare her—she doesn’t like heights. My dad’s place sits on one. Overlooks the water. Behind the house the woods are thick to the road. It’s a great place, if a little man-cave-ish. Very quiet, private, which is ironic because anytime anyone interviews my dad, they send a photographer to get shots of it.
Our driveway winds off the highway through fifty-foot red spruce and white pines. The house is a wide V shape—arms flung open to the ocean. Tucked in the trees behind the house is the giant outbuilding my dad uses for his studio. More like a galvanized steel barn with concrete floors, skylights, and a roll-away wall that makes a space in front for showing work to visitors.
As soon as we pull up, I throw open my door. My knee’s stiff, and my palms sting.
Wait,
he says, touching my arm. Are you sure you’re all right? I don’t want to just drop you off if you need someone to look at you.
No. That’s okay.
I want to get away from him, out of the car. Don’t want to keep looking at his face.
I should talk to your father, tell him what happened.
My dad’s working today. He hates being interrupted. He’s got people from RISD up here.
If you’re sure . . .
he says.
I’m fine. Really. I’ll just go in and wash up. It’s no big deal.
I’m shivering, out of nowhere, like I’ve caught a sudden chill, like I’m excited or terrified or both. He hears it in my voice. Gives me this look like he can see into me or something. His hand is warm on my arm. To my horror I think I might cry. I haven’t cried since May, since the world flipped upside down. I’m not going to start now.
I pull my arm away. I have to get out of his car, into the house. The place on my arm where he touched me feels like it might keep its heat the rest of the day.
He’s unconvinced. Well, then here.
He opens the glove box and pulls out a pen and a scrap of paper. Writes on it. Take my number. Please. Call if you need anything.
I’m fine,
I say again, getting out of the car.
And when you’re ready, pick any bike in town, I’ll buy it, or anywhere, buy it online, any bike you want. And I’ll get your wrecked one . . . I should have today. I’m . . .
he glances at the crutches and looks pained.
Oh, it’s okay,
I say fast. Really. It’s fine. I’m not worried about the bike. Thanks for the ride.
I sound like such an idiot. I give the car door a little shove before he can say anything else.
I’m at my door and in the house in seconds. Lean against the entry wall a few minutes to try to control the shivering.
After I get the dirt out of my palms and knee, I look at the scrap of paper. No name. Just as well. I’m not going to think about him another second. That’s something Mamie would have done, wandered around the rest of the day imagining things about this guy. Not me. Not now. Not anymore. My heart’s shut tight, if I still have one. No complications. It’s how I keep it together. I toss his number in the recycling.
And my dad isn’t working in the studio. He’s not even in town. Flew out the day before to meet with a new gallery in Berlin. Like I said, I moved up here for quiet.
the
woods
MORNING, NIGHT, then morning, then night. Sunlight flashes its SOS on the water all afternoon, then slips down, lets dark roll in. It’s reliable. I move through time because I have to. Watch the light. Wake up. Breathe. Eat some things. Take a sleeping pill, sleep, and wake again. It’s all I can handle.
When Dad’s gone, other than endless calls from my mother, I have little contact with anyone. Mary, one of Dad’s grad students, pops in and out of the house during the day. I find her in the kitchen from time to time washing dishes, which is supposed to be my job, but Dad’s a charmer. People do anything for him. She’s started coming into the house before I wake up, and I find fresh coffee and usually fruit or some baked good waiting for me on the table. Dad probably asked her to keep an eye.
I’d skip Mom’s calls if I didn’t know that would make her jump right in her car and head up here. She wants me to get past what happened. Move on. Like we planned. Think of it as a clean slate.
Clean slate. Empty plate. Whatever. My mother’s a planner. She’s a hospital administrator. Solo unit since my dad left, not one to show a lot of feeling, but I’m pretty sure he broke her heart. When he left, she washed her hands of the art world and their friends in it. It was like watching workers collapse a circus tent, Mom went back to work, and our house got very quiet. So junior year, when I mentioned I might want to go to art school instead of one of the schools on our list, she told me if I was still interested, I could pursue art in grad school. End of discussion. Any conflict between what I wanted and what she thought was best, she won, hands down. But if I hit her marks, toed the line, she pretty much left me alone. It worked for both of us. According to Meredith, I should be glad I have a mother who actually cares what I do. Her parents pay no attention to her or her brother but act like they care when it makes them look good. I hated it when she said that, made me feel bad for complaining, but she’s right. I do have a mom who cares, a little controlling, but she cares. Even so, I was ready to get out of there. Move on to the next thing. It was a matter of weeks between me and freedom, starting fresh on my own. I didn’t even care too much about the art-school debate, just as long as come September I was waking up somewhere new.
Got that wish.
But I missed my graduation. Didn’t leave for Amherst. Meredith and I didn’t go shopping for matching duvets and mini-fridges. We didn’t map out the travel time between Vermont and Massachusetts. The plan changed.
I’m lying across my bed trying not to think about it when the phone rings. According to the clock, it’s nearly five. The day’s gone, and I haven’t showered. It rings again. My mother. She calls and calls. She’s the only one who still bothers. The phone’s ringing and vibrating a little now, like it’s learned the language of her constant need to check in, rattling noisily on the shelf where I dropped it the last time she called. Third time today. I never have anything new to say. She talks at me, saying this or that about one of my friends. People I no longer want to see. Mostly I listen to her voice, not the words, the music of it. Sometimes it’s soothing.
Any more buzzing, and the thing’s going to work its way right off the shelf.
I answer without looking at it.
Yes?
I don’t even try not to sound annoyed.
Mamie?
His voice.
My heart picks up a few beats. I switch the phone to my other ear.
Yes—well, no.
Oh, sorry . . .
He sounds surprised.
No, I mean, it is Mamie—was—I don’t go by that name anymore, well, here, my dad calls me Wren.
I talk too fast. Sound like a first grader. My dad calls me Wren. Who says that?
Wren?
Yeah, like the bird.
Deep breath.
Okay, Wren.
He laughs. A nice sound.
My body tenses and I sit up. To clear my head. I’m not going to get interested in this guy.
It’s Cal Owen.
Cal Owen.
With the car, the other day, in the woods?
He clears his throat. I’m calling because I hadn’t heard from you or your father, and when I try to reach him I don’t get voice mail.
Yeah,
I say. My voice cracks a bit, scratchy from disuse. He doesn’t do voice mail. You either get one of his assistants or no one. No distractions.
I felt like I should tell him what happened. Apologize—to you both.
Silence.
He pauses a second.
I just wanted to see if you were all right. I thought I might hear from Lenore down at the bike shop by now. Or from your dad’s lawyer, or something.
Another laugh.
I’m fine.
I emphasize the word a bit, try to sound busy, or distracted, like I need to hang up and get back to whatever fascinating thing I might have been doing. My bike took the hit worse than I did.
If he only knew. That little wreck in the woods was nothing, miniscule, a small stand-in for the kind of thing that can really happen. Does happen, all the time. The kind of thing I’m trying to forget. I look at my scabby palms.
I’m fine,
I say again in a clearer voice.
Long pause.
My heart’s pounding so hard I can hear it. Worry for a second that maybe he can too. I should say something else, I just can’t think of what. It occurs to me that I could just hang up.
I asked around,
he says finally, voice low, cautious. I heard your dad’s out of the country.
Aha.
Yeah, so?
So, I thought maybe . . .
I cut him off. I’m an adult.
Excellent. Heat creeps up my cheeks.
Of course,
he says. I don’t mean to bother you, I just wanted to be sure you were all right, alone over there—if you needed anything.
I don’t.
I try to sound crisp, my mother’s daughter. Regain control.
I couldn’t stop thinking, what if you’d hit your head when you fell or something, and you—I just wanted to hear your voice.
Hear my voice? Did he just say that? My heart picks up, even faster. Defies me.
It was just my hands, when I fell. And my knee. And they’re fine now. Everything’s all right.
My throat catches.
Nothing’s all right.
It’s a joke to say that, ever, to anyone. Tears rise up inside me like a rebel army. A flood after a drought. I am not going to cry.
He hears everything. You don’t sound fine. I don’t mean to pry, but you don’t sound fine. And I know most of your dad’s assistants left town when he did. This is a small place; people might leave you in peace, but they know everyone’s business.
I have to go,
I say.
I hang up and kick the pillow away from me. Now I wish I had that damn bike. I’m lost in the center of my bedroom for a second. Can’t figure out what I should do. One thing is clear, I can’t stay inside another minute. I grab my phone, earbuds, and pull on some running clothes. My hands shake so badly I can hardly tie my shoes. I don’t lock the door. I’m out of the house, across the main road and into the woods before I notice it’s nearly dark.
no-person
I RUN UNTIL I CAN’T.
No music. Just the sound of my breath and the few tall weeds and low branches whipping lightly at me as I pass through. My skinned knee is bleeding again, sticking to the inside of my sweats. The little light left from the dropping sun is mostly hidden by the boughs overhead. I am a no-person in the woods. The last person in the world. I try to let out a loud shout. A triumphant Ha!
But it comes out strangled and small. And suddenly it doesn’t matter that the woods are huge around me. I can’t get lost in them. Can’t lose myself. I won’t ever be free of what happened.
I sink inside. As low as ever. Lower. There is no escape. It’ll always be part of me. The car crunching and collapsing around us while we flipped and rolled. So loud, so fast, then so quiet, so long. The before and after. All of it. The stopped moments where time’s an airless, endless slide show.
My throat aches, it’s been so long since I’ve cried. I am not going to cry. Won’t. Can’t. I haven’t, not once, not since Patrick and I started that last fight. A sob chokes up. Another on top of it. I bend over, press my palms hard against my thighs, and pant. The way I’ve pieced myself together since then feels like it’s breaking apart, and I might not get it together again.
I turn around and run back toward the house. I feel like I might run off the edge of the world. Like I might need to. I trip a few times. Slip on the sweet-smelling wet leaf rot on the forest floor. Down on my torn knee, scraped hands. Snot runs down my face and tears streak hot against my temples. My eyes burn.
I run faster, harder. Like I can outpace the dark. When I fall, I get back up again almost between strides. The pain’s good. Feels like a solution to something.
The trees thin near the house, the shore. It’s working. I’ll outrun it. This time. Leave the black feeling in the woods. Box myself up again.
I’m nearly at the front door when I notice his car. If I’d been paying attention, looking, I could have hidden, waited him out. I stop short. But he sees me. He’s at the door, about to knock, leaning on crutches. I wipe my face, fast. The snot. Tears.
Hi, I . . .
He stops, taking in the full picture. A worried look comes over his face.
I was jogging.
I try to sound casual, which considering how I look probably just makes me seem demented.
I shrug like everything’s normal. He just looks at me.
Sorry I hung up like that. I needed to get out for a run.
I wave my hand vaguely toward the sky, like it explains everything. It was getting dark.
Try to breeze past him to my door.
He grabs me by the elbow. Firm.
Wait a second,
he says in a low, calm voice. You’re upset.
He’s so close I can smell him. He smells good. Soap, maybe. Laundry detergent. His eyes, dark with concern. My stupid heart climbs in my chest again.
I try to toss my hair, look casual, like he’s got it wrong.
No, I’m fine.
He doesn’t buy it. Shakes his head.
I don’t think you should be alone right now.
So, come in a minute, then.
I yank my arm free.
He follows me in.
I need to clean up,
I say, leaving him standing in the entry. I go back to my room. It’s a pit. My clothes are all on the floor. Haven’t kept up on laundry. I dig through a pile for a T-shirt, a hoodie, a pair of jeans. Give them a quick sniff. Nothing smells too bad. I go into the bathroom and face the mirror. Dirt streaks run down my cheeks from crying and my hair looks like I’ve been camping a few weeks.
Cold water on my face makes my eyes reappear, but my hair’s hopeless. Whatever. It’s not like I care. Maybe this will put him off. Make him leave me alone. I finger-comb it into a ponytail.
When I come back out, he’s still standing by the front door, leaning against it, looking polite but concerned. God, how many times have I seen that look on people’s faces in the last few months? I wonder if I scare him. The idea almost makes me laugh. Maybe he thinks I’m crazy. Maybe I am.
Oh, sorry, I didn’t mean to leave you standing there. Come in.
I motion to the living room. My dad has a lot of art, pieces he’s collected over the years, stuff from friends, but other than that, the place looks like a man lives in it. Alone. Battered couch and an old red velvet overstuffed armchair. Stacks of books like outcrops on the floor. At least a month’s worth of old newspapers. I step over a pile of them near the windows. Honestly, it’s a relief after the careful elegance of my mother’s town house. No cleaning crew here.
Cal crosses the living room on those crutches. Looks out the wall of windows to the Atlantic. Black night outside, but the house is dark and you can kind of see out onto the water, the waxing moon starting to mirror its slivered self on the sea.
I forgot how great this little place is,
he says. I was a kid the last time I was in here.
He walks back across the room, sits on the sagging couch, and lays the crutches near him on the floor.
I loved it as soon as I saw it,
I say. Look out the window, anywhere but at him. Pretend I wasn’t just staring. Wondering why he uses crutches when it looks like he walks just fine.
All the things the old me would have said drift and float around me, twinkly and insignificant as tinsel. She trails me, frivolous, unaware. She’s busy thinking about what she can tell him about herself to seem interesting. And what she should hold back.
I don’t remember you here when your dad moved in,
he says, probably hoping I’ll say something, at least try to have a conversation. He had a little party. Our family came. I remember running around the place with my brother.
They split up—I was little. My dad left her—us—to come up here and work.
I try to seem casual. Sound normal. So he’ll see I’m okay and leave. Forget what I looked like at the door. Not that I really even care what he thinks. I don’t. Won’t.
I click on a small lamp and our view of the water disappears into black. Now the window’s a picture of us. I turn away from it. Sit on the wide arm of the chair next to the couch.
Our house is basically an earlier design of this,
he says, playing along, like he didn’t just find me in the driveway looking crazy. My father’s work got simpler over the years. Every project a little better, a scaling back of the last.
Dead silence. That ghost girl’s gone. I can’t make small talk. I look around the room.
His eyes follow mine. Doesn’t seem uncomfortable with the quiet—unlike most people. He takes in the pitched ceiling and the dinged-up bleached wide plank floor.
And he let your dad have his say on a lot of the details in here, this has a wilder, more organic feel to it than most of his houses. They collaborated on this one, I think.
Wild and organic,
I say. That’s my dad. A force of nature.
But he doesn’t mess with how other people live, like my mother does. Never tries to make me do things or change who I am.
Cal keeps his eyes on me in this calm, still way that makes me shift on the chair, talk more than I mean to.
Do you live with him? Your father?
I ask. It’s a stupid question, he’s obviously older than I am. There’s no way he still lives with his parents.
One corner of his mouth lifts, makes me feel appraised and found to be young. No. My dad’s in Montreal. He’s semiretired. Still does an occasional house.
And your mom?
Dead.
I can’t win. I shouldn’t even try.
Oh. I’m sorry,
I say. About your mother.
The words are clunky in my mouth. Inadequate.
He shrugs. It was a long time ago.
I nod slowly. Try to seem less nervous and idiotic than I feel, like I’m not counting the seconds until I can go hide in my room.
My dad remarried. They moved to Montreal. Sent us to boarding school. My little brother and me. The place up here’s kind of a family house, for holidays and vacations.
We sit in silence. I’m getting good at that. His eyes are slate blue, the color of his shirt. He looks at me like he can see right into me. Like he might slip a hand in and unlock everything.
I have to look away.
My neck tightens, throat aches. Patrick looked at me like that when we first went out. I swallow, hard.
I-I’m fine.
I say for the thousandth time, even though he didn’t ask. It’s his eyes, searching my face. Makes me feel like I’m supposed to say something.
I was upset before. But I’m fine now. And I wasn’t upset because of your car or my bike or anything like that. I’m not hurt. You didn’t hurt me.
My words fly out in a rush. He listens like I’m saying something interesting, like he has all night.
How are you sick?
I ask.
Curveball. I’ll do anything to get the focus off me.
He’s surprised. His posture shifts. Hardens. He gives the crutches a dark glance.
I have MS.
A look of such pure anger flashes across his face it’s like lightning.
I blink. Silence. I don’t know what to say.
He looks at the ceiling, then back at me. Pushes his hair back with one hand, shrugs. I probably shouldn’t have been driving that day. I was going too fast. Blowing off steam.
Oh, it’s fine,
I say, embarrassed. Stupid,