55 Successful Harvard Law School Application Essays, 2nd Edition: With Analysis by the Staff of The Harvard Crimson
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Fifty-five all-new essays that got their authors into Harvard, showing what worked, what didn’t, and how you can do it, too.
Harvard Law School is one of the premier law schools in the world. It as well as other top schools draws thousands of applicants from the best colleges and companies. With only a limited number of slots for so many talented applicants, the admissions officers have become more and more selective every year, the competition has become fierce, and even the best and brightest could use an edge.
This completely new edition of 55 Successful Harvard Law School Application Essays is the best resource for anyone looking for that edge. Through the most up-to-date sample essays from the Harvard Law School students who made the cut and insightful analysis from the staff at The Harvard Crimson, it shows you how best to:
* Argue your case effectively
* Arrange your accomplishments for maximum impact
* Avoid common pitfalls
55 Successful Harvard Law School Application Essays guides you toward writing essays that do more than simply list your background and accomplishments. These are essays that reveal your passion for the law as well as the discipline you bring to this demanding profession and will help you impress any admissions department. The all-new essays and straightforward and time-saving advice will give you all the insider tips you'll need to write the essays that will get you into the best law schools in the world.
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INTRODUCTION
When the first edition of this book was released in 2007, a swelling applicant pool marked the primary pressure facing law school applicants. At the time the volume of applications was on its way toward record highs, and enrollment still remains above its 2007 levels, but the elevated competition doesn’t end with a letter of admission. The class of 2007 entered a job market to find a 92 percent employment rate for law school graduates. For the class of 2012, the most recent available data set when this book was written, that number dropped to 84 percent, tied for second lowest since 1985. Many students sought shelter in law schools during the recession, a factor that has only increased the employment bottleneck in the downturn’s wake. And the change hasn’t been restricted to quantity. The composition of those jobs has changed, too. In 2007, over three-quarters of graduates found jobs requiring bar passage, i.e., the sort of jobs students attend law school to pursue. For the class of 2012, under two-thirds met that standard. Still more grimly, a mere 56 percent—barely half—found full-time, long-term employment. As recently as the class of 2010 (as far back as the American Bar Association’s data extends), that number stood at 70 percent. In today’s environment, the premium has risen sharply for the law schools that are still adept at connecting students with future goals. And by extension, the competition for acceptance to those schools has risen, too. In that stark light, the value of an outstanding application to those schools is more vital than ever.
With an application deadline looming, those numbers and pressures might overwhelm you. But don’t throw your hands and the book that’s in them into the air just yet. Keep reading.
Yes, the application is vital, and no, it isn’t effortless, but it offers an excellent opportunity. The law school application brings together several revealing but imperfect glimpses at who you are. Your LSAT score, transcript, résumé, and recommendations all illuminate various aspects of the whole. Your LSAT score points to your reasoning ability and your law school geared skillset with a single, standardized number for helpful comparison across schools. Important as it is, it certainly doesn’t secure admission. At most of the top law schools, 25 percent or more of students have LSAT scores below 170. And many reject students with scores well above that. The transcript and résumé both indicate prior experience and success. But the meaning behind college GPA figures varies widely from school to school, and even more so across majors and classes. And a range of unseen circumstances, from personal life to extracurriculars, can affect it from semester to semester. Reliance on a single number risks myopia. The résumé touches on your more substantive experiences, but its succinctness saps them of context and meaning. Recommendations begin the vital task of connecting, of drawing together the far-flung strands of academics, motivation, and who you are. Yet they, too, offer only partial snapshots—of you in a single class or subject, and strictly through the lens of the writer.
None of these components amount to enough on their own. No one part is. But you do have a chance—one chance—to offer your own narrative, one way to tie together and relate those important but disparate measurements.
You have a personal statement.
At most upper-echelon law schools, the personal statement is a two-to-three page document with an open-ended prompt. Some schools provide detailed pointers on what they look for—worth scrutinizing on a school-by-school basis—while others opt for more laconic approaches. In either case, the choice core substance for your essay lies with you. As you begin to brainstorm, keep your audience in mind. It isn’t your roommate, it isn’t your English professor, and it isn’t you yourself. It’s a law school admissions officer, one who will read a large batch of similar statements quickly but discerningly. Think of how your essay can tell them something your isolated application parts can’t tell, and think of how you can accomplish that in a mere two pages. Think of how you’ll stand out—in a good way.
Crafting the statement is a challenge. You’ve lived a life over two decades in length, and you get only a few paragraphs to condense it all the way down to its essence. The temptation to list accomplishments or experiences is a strong one. Some essays try to pack too much and, as a result, reveal too little about the applicant as a person. Don’t struggle to compress a lifetime of experiences into one essay. Instead, think of ways to express who you are through your own voice and a focused selection of illuminating experiences. The specific content of those experiences vary widely from applicant to applicant. You might have a challenge you met and overcame, whether throughout your early life or during the past summer. You might have an encounter that helped you learn and grow. You might have a passion you’ve followed for years. Whatever you choose, it should speak to who you are—not who your impressive best friend is or what Teach For America does or how much your mother overcame as a child. Ask yourself the question: What does this say about me?
A good personal statement is just that, a profoundly personal look at the applicant behind the application.
Because the application essay presents such a personal exercise, no single set of steps can guide you through it. This book isn’t an instruction manual. It doesn’t lay out a precise formula or grand theory for you to follow. You’ll find other guides that profess to hand you a comprehensive set of rules and procedures. But if you’re pursuing acceptance to a law school, and if you’ve picked up this book, chances are you don’t need a rigid script aimed at the lowest common denominator. Chances are that a cookie-cutter approach will only relegate your essay to the ho-hum middle of a dense, competitive pack. But you can benefit by analyzing, understanding, and internalizing the past’s proven routes to success.
55 Successful Harvard Law School Application Essays is composed of a variety of successful essays for you to learn and draw from. On an individual basis, each essay provides just one perspective, but taken as a whole, this book will help you understand how to form an essay both personal and compelling. Every essay in this book secured an author admission to Harvard’s top-ranked Law School. While all authors naturally had strong application components beyond the personal statement, we’ve selected these essays because they represent the sort of superior writing and thinking that contributes to admissions success. The writers and their stories are sui generis—so don’t worry if you’ve never founded a tech start-up or battled tsunamis in Samoa—but many of their effective writing techniques and approaches are universal. Don’t focus on the particulars of a writer’s experiences or feelings and don’t measure yourself against them. Focus on how they expressed their experiences effectively and won over the admissions officers who read them.
Each of the fifty-five essays is accompanied by analysis from an editor at The Harvard Crimson, Harvard’s daily newspaper. The analyses identify strengths as well as weaknesses to help you sift the effective narrative techniques from the ineffective ones. For instance, as you’ll see, rote listing of accomplishments and overlong, didactic preaching do not contribute to a positive total effect. Instead, proven, smart strategies include engaging storytelling, concise prose, and thoughtful reflection. Effective essays present a dynamic, realistic image of an author—not as a flat, indefatigable hero, but as a unique individual open to learning and applying that learning to what they are most passionate about.
No essay is perfect, and your first draft especially won’t be. But the analyses here will help you apply a critical eye to your own essay that will help you craft a truly compelling and ultimately successful essay that connects with the admissions officers and leads to acceptance at the law school of your choice.
We have sorted the fifty-five personal statements into several broad categories on the basis of content and approach. The seven essay categories we’ve chosen provide general outlines for the primary types of essays that students write and that have been successful in the past. But the categories are not static. There are essays about world travels that explain personal evolution. There are essays about life’s challenges that touch on law school inspiration. There are essays about individual identity that are wound with critical thinking. Your essay may fit one of these categories neatly, or it may stand astride two, three, seven, or even none of them. Whatever the case, it should be an essay that says something important about you and says it clearly and engagingly.
Still, larger themes run throughout that you’ll notice as you read. For one, these essays are arguments. They are presentations. They may not resemble your persuasive essays from high school and college (at least, they probably shouldn’t), but the arguments, if implicit, remain. The unspoken, underlying thesis is, in its bluntest form, Accept me.
But in more nuanced terms, the essay aims to convey a sense of who you are. And more than that, it should present an argument for who you can and will become. Convey—through experience, thoughtfulness, and voice—that you will make the most of a law school education.
Of course, the precise goals for each essay depend on your personal situation. If your basic information and numbers raise more questions than they answer (such as why you’ve taken years off from school, or why you’re switching careers), the personal statement is the place answer them. If you have a specific vision or a destination motivating your law school application, the personal statement can express that. Above all, ask yourself: What should my reader know after reading this?
A strong essay will leave an admissions officer feeling that you’ll make the most of your potential and that you’re committed to growing through your years in law school and beyond. In a related sense, it will leave the reader understanding your mind-set—not every facet, but the ones that count, the ones that set you apart in a good way. On the writing side, a reader should see you clearly and logically articulate your thoughts. An admissions officer shouldn’t have to scratch his or her head trying to make sense of a sentence or a paragraph.
After all, the essay and its argument, one of many you’ll go on to make in your career, is an exercise in communication. The examples in this book make that clear. As a law school applicant, you undoubtedly have sufficient breadth of experience and ideas to fuel a standout essay, and so do your peers. But pay attention to how these essays articulate their arguments. Notice how they don’t merely spit out experiences and ideas but instead process and weave a deliberate mix of past experiences, current situations, and goals for the future. Make sure that the admissions officers get a good idea of who you are and where you intend to go.
But first, take a deep breath. You’ve already completed the hardest part of the personal statement writing process, and the law school application process as a whole. You’ve lived as you for years. You’ve put yourself in a position, after many semesters of study, to apply to a top law school. And you’ve garnered a wealth of experiences and thoughts. You’ve already done and thought and lived the topics you’ll explore in your personal statement. Wherever you stand in completing the formal application process, you’re inches from the finish line in the real one.
So finish strong. The personal statement isn’t an obstacle. It’s an opportunity. It’s a chance to impart a truth about you that your numbers can’t fully explain. It’s a chance to relate a narrative that integrates application components and your twenty-plus years of life. It’s a chance to present you—thinking, feeling, analyzing, experiencing, and living. Seize that chance. Start early. Set aside time to read through these sample essays, reflect on your own experiences, and take several more deep breaths. You’re almost there. And wherever there
is for you—a dream job, a career of service, a future with expanded opportunity—you’re about to be one step closer.
EVOLUTION
Chances are the you
of ten, five, or even one year ago looks very different from the person applying to law school today. A full statement about the person you are often requires a look at the changes you have undergone. Essays in this section explain how applicants’ mind-sets have been molded and remolded by experiences and by those around them.
As you trace your own personal evolution, be careful to proceed clearly and avoid covering too much ground. The reader should be able to easily follow your growth and development. Sometimes steps and sequences of events that feel obvious to you, the person who lived them, may seem opaque to an admissions officer.
For some applicants, the tale of evolution demonstrates the vital role of the personal statement in an application. For instance, one writer spent three years toiling in a pharmaceutical company’s lab. On its face, the sudden application to law school might seem odd or even suspicious. But his essay paints a broader context of evolution, honing in on the more logical leap from compound creation to chemical patent law. Another writer spent years as a bookstore manager before returning to school, an unconventional path to law school. With context though, his motivation becomes far from early-onset midlife crisis. Instead, his essay weaves a narrative of leadership, parenting, and search for knowledge.
Not everyone needs to explain a unique set of circumstances, but a story of change can take many forms and can highlight a variety of qualities, from openness to discernment to strength tested by adversity. Above all, the story of how you have changed should point to who you are, and to who you see yourself becoming. Every other application component offers a snapshot of who you were or who you are—only the personal statement lets you look to the future.
ANNE-VALERIE PROSPER
Hi I’m Joleen! I’m from Wisconsin! Where are you from?
trills the pretty brown-eyed girl in my dorm room. I sigh. I would love to have a simple answer to give her and, usually, when confronted with such a daunting question, I smile politely and answer some version of the truth. I try to read her. I wonder if it would be enough to give her the I’m originally from Haiti
retort. This immediately evokes images of me as a little girl sitting at the kitchen table as my mother cooks "Grio" and laughs along to her Maurice Sixto tapes, relishing the Haitian comedian’s depiction of Haitian politics. When coming from a country like ours, it’s nice to be able to laugh at the folly of it all. This would be an honest answer after all. Although we left Haiti when I was one, my parents enrolled us into a French school in Maryland. We spoke French and Creole at home, I spoke French at school, I ate Haitian food, I listened to Haitian music; we even went back to Haiti twice a year every year—until things got really bad that is. I could always go with a different approach and tell her that I went to high school in Kenya. She might think of me as a world traveler. She might see me as riding matatus and playing with orphans, or, she could look at me as some diplomat’s child with a driver and uncanny sense of entitlement; unfortunately, back then she would have been right on both accounts.
The thing is, the world attributes who we are with where we are from, and so, for a long time I didn’t know who I was. I didn’t know where I was from and so I couldn’t know where I was going. All of that changed when I got to NYU.
I moved to the big city alone while my parents remained halfway across the world in Nairobi, Kenya. I chose New York because in fourth grade, on a school excursion, I saw Les Misérables on Broadway and it changed my life. I moved to New York having lived a very contradictory life. On the one hand, I was quite privileged. The international community in Kenya lived in their own world with their own set of rules. On the other, I had always had a heart for children and had spent much of my time in a baby orphanage known as The Nest.
I looked at these two-week-old infants, children of victims of rape who had died from AIDS and I had a piercing sense that something was not right; we were living in a world of disequilibrium and something had to give. I was going to change the world and I knew that I needed to go to New York; the same place that so beautifully told the story of a French orphan girl.
I had moved around before. I had lived in four places by the time I was eighteen and so I hadn’t expected the culture shock to hit me; you always get hit harder when you don’t see it coming. The city’s stresses slowly but surely took their toll on me. I didn’t know what I was doing anymore. Among the actresses and models, away from the slums and the injustice, my big plans didn’t seem so feasible anymore. It wasn’t until the second semester of college, when I joined a Christian fellowship on campus that my vision came back to life. I came to Christ that year and, later, with tentative support from my parents I moved into a house in the Bronx and became one third of the nonprofit organization A House on Beekman. We felt the biblical call to serve the poor and for us New Yorkers, Beekman Avenue was where we could do that. It was a far cry from the Kibera slums but it was the land of single teenage mothers who were victims of domestic violence. It was the place where dozens of kids had absentee parents and appreciated a healthy snack and a good story. These people weren’t as poor as the people in Kenya, but they were marginalized. I started to see the other forms of oppression that existed. My roommates and I began to share all of our clothes and as we grew in community, God grew our ministry. More kids started showing up for family dinner on Monday night. More gang members
started calling us Ma’am
and pulling their pants up as they walked into our home. Living here has shown me what it is to serve in the United States. God continued to grow my intolerance for injustice when I received an internship at an immigration law firm. We mostly worked with asylum cases and as I walked into the conference room wearing a suit, and sat across a girl my age who was being forced to be the fourth wife of a seventy-five-year-old or who had to undergo female genital mutilation to be eligible for marriage, day after day after day, something in me snapped. I decided I was going to law school. I decided that I couldn’t live a life that glossed over the gravest injustices of the world. I realized that I could hold orphans for months or give our Bronx kids healthy snacks for weeks, but that one day, I was going to die. One day, my roommates will die as will the lawyers at the law firm that I work at. I need to be a part of systematic change. I need to be a part of something bigger than the one life I have been given. I knew I was graduating in December, and so I applied to the International Justice Mission. I will be working there as the Human Rights intern in D.C. from January through April. My projects will be in Haiti, Ecuador, and Peru. I finally get to partner with lawyers who are changing the system from the inside