This is the Water: A Novel
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From Yannick Murphy, award-winning author of The Call, comes a fast-paced story of murder, adultery, parenthood, and romance, involving a girls’ swim team, their morally flawed parents, and a killer who swims in their midst.
In a quiet New England community members of swim team and their dedicated parents are preparing for a home meet. The most that Annie, a swim-mom of two girls, has to worry about is whether or not she fed her daughters enough carbs the night before; why her husband, Thomas, hasn’t kissed her in ages; and why she can’t get over the loss of her brother who shot himself a few years ago.
But Annie’s world is about to change. From the bleachers, looking down at the swimmers, a dark haired man watches a girl. No one notices him. Annie is busy getting to know Paul, who flirts with Annie despite the fact that he’s married to her friend Chris, and despite Annie’s greying hair and crow’s feet. Chris is busy trying to discover whether or not Paul is really having an affair, and the swimmers are trying to shave milliseconds off their race times by squeezing themselves into skin-tight bathing suits and visualizing themselves winning their races.
When a girl on the team is murdered at a nearby highway rest stop—the same rest stop where Paul made a gruesome discovery years ago—the parents suddenly find themselves adrift. Paul turns to Annie for comfort. Annie finds herself falling in love. Chris becomes obsessed with unmasking the killer.
With a serial killer now too close for comfort, Annie and her fellow swim-parents must make choices about where their loyalties lie. As a series of startling events unfold, Annie discovers what it means to follow your intuition, even if love, as well as lives, could be lost.
Yannick Murphy
Yannick Murphy is the author of The Call; Signed, Mata Hari; Here They Come; and The Sea of Trees, as well as two story collections and several children's books. She is the recipient of a Whiting Writers' Award, a National Endowment for the Arts Award, a Chesterfield Screenwriting Award, a Pushcart Prize, and the Laurence L. & Thomas Winship/PEN New England Award. Her work has appeared in The Best American Nonrequired Reading and The O. Henry Prize Stories. She lives in Vermont with her husband and children.
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- Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2/5The first two words in the title of the book is the way Ms. Murphy began many sentences in THIS IS THE WATER, and it seems to be her writing style. To me, it was an odd, unique style and took a bit of getting used to.THIS IS THE WATER is about a swim team, the parents of the swimmers, and about a murder that affected the entire community.I was looking for a mystery, but found a book mostly about swimming and the personal lives of the team's parents.It was a bit difficult to get started because of how the book was written. The book did keep you guessing, though, about who the murderer was that was killing young girls at rest stops. When it was revealed, the scene was quite scary, and the murderer was someone you wouldn't expect.I continued to read the book because I wanted to find out how it would end, but I did skim quite a few pages. 2/5This book was given to me and my book club as a win in a contest on TLC. No compensation was given, and this review is my opinion.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Vermont is rarely a setting for novels, nor are girls swim teams usually the nucleus of the protagonists. Here are both and this is a domestic thriller and a mystery and a character study of a wife and mother living deeply inside her own head. The books opens with Annie heading into her fifties and wondering why she and her husband are becoming unfamiliar with each other's skin. Husband Thomas is actually the most amusing and well-drawn character, communicating with his wife only facts he gleams from science magazine articles.But there's trouble in Northern Kingdom paradise in the form of a serial killer who slices the throats of his victims. His preference is young girls because they fight the hardest and he tries to absorb their life forces as he looks into their dying eyes. The swim team becomes his target.There is a major plot hole which leads to resolution and a satisfactory ending, but the trip through a swimming season is very well worth every stroke. Beautifully written all the way.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5I’ve never read a book written in the second person before. In fact, I had to consult Google to make sure I was right about what I was experiencing! For those of you who don’t know, second person is like third person except the protagonist is referred to as “you” (or another second person pronoun, but in this book, it was “you”). I was amazed at how the author referring to one character as “you” made me empathize with them more. I still felt a disconnect I associate with third person narratives, but to a lesser degree. I loved what the author did with the second person perspective. It allowed her to give us a more complete picture of the story, occasionally zooming out from the main character to share other characters’ perspectives or far away events. She sometimes moved to unrelated events, animals in the main character’s yard for instance, in a way that made the story more poignant. Don’t ask me why! That’s one of those tricks that only the best authors know and if I knew, I’d be writing a book right now instead of writing a review.
One trick the author used which I do recognize is to choose metaphors and similes which are completely new but which resonated with me perfectly. I also enjoyed her use of repetition, with a repeated “This is…” sentence structure used throughout the book. Despite the second person perspective, parts of the book seemed very stream-of-consciousness. This isn’t a device which always works for me, but in this case, I felt the author shared the right mix of important and mundane details to express who each character was. The plot felt a bit contrived, relying on too many coincidences and tying up a little too neatly. It also raised some interesting ethical questions though and that, plus the beauty of the author’s writing, will keep me thinking about this delightful, unique story for days to come.
This is the review first published at Doing Dewey.
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This is the Water - Yannick Murphy
Part One
CHAPTER ONE
This is the water, lapping the edge of the pool, coming up in small waves as children race through it. This is the swim mom named Dinah wearing the team shirt with a whale logo on it, yelling at her daughter Jessie to swim faster. This is Jessie who cannot hear Dinah because Jessie is in the water. Jessie is singing a song to herself: She is singing, This old man, he played one. He played knick knack on his thumb.
Dinah is red in the face, standing in the stands. Dinah moves her hand in the air as if to help hurry her daughter along. Behind the starting blocks the water comes up over the edge of the pool and splashes the parents who are timing on deck.
This is the facility. The long shafts of sunlight that come in through the windows and hit the water on sunny days. The showers whose pressure is weak, whose tiles need brush-cleaning in the grout. This is Dinah after her daughter Jessie doesn’t win the race. Dinah is sitting back down on the bleachers in the stands. She is writing down Jessie’s time. She is comparing the time to the last time Jessie swam that event. She is telling herself at least her daughter beat her previous record. This is how much she beat it by: one one-hundredth of a second.
This is the racing suit some of the swimmers wear. It feels like the skin of a shark when rubbed the wrong way. Rubbed the right way it’s smooth and gives you the feeling that you can beat your old times, that you can beat anyone’s times. The suits are supposed to fit tight, as tight as a corset probably. The suits, the girls all say, are terribly uncomfortable. They ride up their crotches. They cut into their legs. They dig into their shoulders. They flatten their chests. They make it difficult to breathe. But they love their suits nonetheless and after a meet they rinse them and hang them up dutifully to dry, unlike their practice suits, which they sometimes let stay in their bags overnight in a wet ball, and the chlorine from the pool eats away at the fabric.
This is the bathroom in the locker room where a girl changes into her suit. In the bathroom grunting can be heard. Many hands are on the girl and the suit trying to help her get into it. If you look under the bathroom door, you can see so many legs. From the stall you can hear the pull of the swimsuit fabric, the sucking sound of skin being pushed and shoved.
This is the mom named Chris who is timing with another parent she doesn’t know from another team. Chris is not wearing the swim team tee shirt with the whale logo. She did not think to put it on when she left the house at five a.m. with her daughter in the car and her daughter’s swim bag stuffed with towels to last throughout the long day of racing, and when the moonlight was flowing over the field, lighting up a deer and a doe nibbling at the edge of the forest. Chris does not cheer for her daughter. She only realizes her daughter is swimming in the race when she looks out across the lanes of the pool and sees someone who looks like her daughter swimming. She still doesn’t cheer when she realizes it is her daughter because she knows her daughter would not hear her over all the other noise. Chris also thinks it’s silly how many parents are so involved in their child’s swimming and cheer so loudly, as if the cheering will make their child go faster, as if it were the Olympics or if winning or losing a swim down the length of the pool and back were a matter of life and death. Chris’s daughter, Cleo, is becoming more interested in swimming every season, even though Chris doesn’t ask her much about it. Cleo keeps a record in her journal of all of her past times and of the times she needs to qualify for certain meets. Cleo has begun sharing her times with her father, Paul, because he seems more interested than her mother in how she’s able to shave off time by tucking tighter in her turns, or keeping her hips up in the backstroke. This is Chris, being splashed by the water when a swimmer dives in and liking the way the water feels through the leg of her blue jeans, making her feel cool when it is so hot in the facility. These are the windows of the pool, covered over in mist so thick it looks purposely sprayed on, as if what were being done behind the glass were not to be seen by anyone on the outside.
This is the outside. A bright New England day that is almost spring, but not quite. Snow still in patches in places surrounded by the pale green grass of last summer—last summer wanting to still be seen, even if its grass looks frizzy at the tips and is mixed with what looks like bits of straw. These are the two highways behind the lawn of the facility, the cars going by quickly, most of the drivers wanting to leave the area whose exits are congested with shopping stores and food chains. They want to get back to the areas where people actually live instead of shop. They want to get back to their homes on rural roads where what wakes them up in the morning is the occasional lowing of the neighboring farm’s cows, or a woodpecker at work on the exterior siding of their cedar-framed house, and where the spring peepers peeping at night in the nearby ponds are the last sounds people hear before sleep. This is what’s in front of the facility: a view of a small mountain gently rounded, a skyline often interrupted by vee formations of high-flying geese, a dirt road that loops around the facility and also branches off and travels to the south for only so long before it peters out and you see a field of scrubby grass surrounded by scraggly pines, unhealthy at their tops, their upper boughs the color of rust.
This is Dinah at the home meet talking to Chris when Chris’s shift as a timer is over and she goes up into the stands. How did your daughter swim?
She looked like she was having fun,
Chris says. What Dinah hears is, Chris’s daughter did not swim well and she doesn’t want to talk about it.
This is Dinah telling Chris that her daughter, Jessie, lost one-hundredth of a second off her seedtime.
This is Chris needing the bathroom, thinking as she sits on the seat that she needed to sit down as much as she needed to pee. Chris has been feeling tired lately, she thinks, or maybe she’s just been feeling tired for years now. She’s not quite sure. Maybe she’s been tired ever since she was a girl living down south and had a babysitter, a young woman named Beatrice who would stay with Chris in the evenings and make sure she did her homework and tucked her into bed, who was raped. Chris thinks she loved Beatrice as much as she loved her parents, maybe even more. Her parents were too busy running the general store they owned to spend time with Chris in the evenings, but Beatrice would come over with her college texts, and Chris would have her math sheets and her ancient civilizations textbook out, and they’d sit at the kitchen table studying together, with music from the pop radio station playing. Beatrice would lean over Chris, helping with a fraction, smelling of fruity shampoo, and when Chris got the answer right, Beatrice would say, Atta girl, Chris.
After they studied for a while, Beatrice would announce it was break time, and she’d pull out her collection of nail polish and bend over Chris’s toes and paint them with colors Chris had never even imagined existed, or had imagined existed only as precious metals that one could find deep in the veins of the earth. Gleaming, creamy, flecked metallic bronzes and coppers and golds and silvers in small bottles with price stickers from the drugstore stuck on their plastic tops. After seeing those colors, the realization came to Chris that anything could be replicated, even the insides of the earth. She imagined how fun it would be to be a painter, and to have those colors to work with all of the time and be able to paint anything you see before your eyes. Those evenings with Beatrice were some of the reasons Chris became an artist. Afterward, Beatrice would do her own toes, and the two of them would dance on the sloping farm kitchen floor with wads of cotton stuffed between their toes so that the nail polish would dry evenly. Then, at night, Beatrice would climb into bed with Chris. They’d pull the blankets up above their ankles and lift their feet up into the air so they could admire their nail-polish artistry and how their toes flashed jittery specks of metallic light when they moved them side to side in the falling darkness. It wasn’t until later, when Chris’s parents would finally come home, having finished closing up the store and making all the egg and tuna salads for the next day, that Beatrice would slide out from under the covers and leave Chris’s side. One evening, though, Beatrice did not show up at Chris’s house. Some men in their early twenties had followed Beatrice in a van while she was jogging on a dirt road. They slowed down alongside her, matching her pace, and slid the van door open. They pulled her inside, where she thrashed and tried to escape, and where they kept her for three days with tape on her mouth and over her eyes. When they were done with her, they shoved her back outside the van’s sliding door and onto the same dirt road where they had first found her jogging. After that, Beatrice didn’t come over anymore. Even after the men were caught and convicted of her rape as well as others before hers, Beatrice still didn’t come over. The last Chris heard of Beatrice she had dropped out of school, and her family had moved, taking her with them, but no one knew where. Chris was alone then in the evenings. Her parents decided she was old enough to stay by herself and put herself to bed, but sleep never came easily. She would think about Beatrice and how much she missed her.
I have felt tired since then, Chris thinks. And my husband now too, makes me feel tired. Lately, Paul has being waking her up in the middle of the night because he’s been coming home late from work. Yes, ever since Beatrice and ever since Paul I’ve been tired, she thinks. But it’s not the kind of tired that sleep could cure, it’s the kind of tired that gets in your bones and becomes a part of you, a thing you carry around, Chris thinks while she’s on the seat in the bathroom, still not wanting to get up even though she’s finished.
This is you, Annie, mother of two swim-team girls, Sofia and Alex, wife of Thomas. This is you at the facility, walking in the crowded foyer because a meet is taking place and there are swimmers and families of swimmers from teams all over New England lined up to buy tee shirts with the name of the swim meet on them, and there is the hot machine that presses and glues the letters of the names of the swimmer onto a tee shirt and it stinks up the foyer so that it smells like rubber burning. This is you checking the time, knowing that in half an hour you will have to go on deck and help time the racers alongside Adam, the father of two boys on the team. This is you looking around the foyer, seeing other parents and other swimmers talking to each other, buying snacks, and using the restroom. This is you looking for a second at the newspaper lying on the cheery Moroccan-blue front desk of the facility. There is an article about a woman found dead out west in Denver. The police were triumphant, though. They caught the man and he confessed to strangling five women in the city over the past ten years. You are thankful you don’t live out west, with the smog, and the craggy dry mountains, and the stranglers. You are thankful your children are raised here, where they can walk down the backcountry roads any time of day without feeling scared. Where the air is crisp with cold in winter and smells of moist green grass in the summer, where the mountains are covered in maple and pine, and where there are almost no strangers. Here is a place where the UPS man knows you and gives your dog a biscuit and lets your chickens hop onto the steps of his truck, where they peck at the bumps in the corrugated metal. Here, if your car is parked at the market, the UPS man knows it’s okay to open up the back and put your package in there to save himself the trip on the dirt roads to your house. You are glad you live in a place where everyone leaves their cars and their houses unlocked, where the librarian calls you at home to let you know the book you have on hold is available, or if she doesn’t call, she might swing by your house and leave it on your porch, along with a book that is new to the library and that she also thought you might like.
You don’t read the entire article about the strangler in Denver. It’s too grisly, too far away, and too foreign. Not like the facility, where right now there are so many youths looking well fed and fit, so many boys with perfect complexions and girls dressed in brightly colored suits, standing and talking to parents who wear fashionably understated and relaxed looking clothes.
You look around the facility. There is Kim’s mother, who is nervous but tries not to show it, even though she is pacing in front of the glass window with a view onto the pool because she is scared that Kim won’t win her event in her fly. Kim has wanted to win an event in the fly because it has been so long since she has won and she used to win her fly so often. Oh, and look, there is Sofia, your eldest, your pretty thirteen-year-old, running up to you before her event and telling you she is starving and that you have to buy her something to eat or she’ll die. This is you telling Sofia that if she’s hungry then she should eat part of the peanut butter and jelly sandwich you packed for her, and this is Sofia scrunching up her face so that her thinly tapered perfect eyebrows, which look as if they’re painted on and which you wish you had yourself, form peaks so that now it looks as though two small mountains are perched on top of each one of her soft brown eyes. This is you looking into the pool through the glass windows and seeing the display board in the pool area that tells in bright lights which event the swimmers are on, and then this is you saying, Don’t you have the two-hundred IM soon?
even though you know her event isn’t for a while. This is Sofia also knowing she doesn’t have her event soon—but knowing your answer means she can’t buy something to eat—turning on her barefoot heel, going back inside the pool area with her head raised, and holding her towel on her shoulders as if it’s a stole and she’s striding off into the cold air of night instead of entering a hot, steamy, and very crowded pool deck.
This is you, Annie, in the foyer, the smell of the burning rubber from the hot tee-shirt machine making you feel sick, making you wish for a moment you were back home instead, almost an hour away, taking a walk through your fields, noticing how the moss was already coming up in soft mounds in the shade by the stream where a layer of thinning ice, thin as a sheet of plastic wrap, still covered the small trout below.
This is you in the foyer, thinking about how the burnt rubber smells almost like gunpowder after a shot has been fired, and this leads to you thinking about how your older brother, who was fifty-four, shot himself in the head two years ago because his wife had told him that week that she wanted to leave him. This is you wondering how he was able to do it, having teenage children he would leave behind, and how much blood there was, and how fucking stupid he was. His family never guessed he was capable of it, but maybe there were previous signs. Your brother could not stand it when your father left your mother for another woman. He could not stand it that your father never visited you or your brother. Your father never came by or called, and your brother, being the only son in the family, thought it was up to him to be the man now. But he could not be the man. He was still a boy. He played baseball on a team called the Cougars and collected buffalo nickels inside of binders filled with blue-colored cardboard pages, fitting the coins into rigid slots shaped like half moons. He played trumpet, his lips after practice puffy and red, and your ears ringing with the brassy notes of The Carnival of Venice
long after he stopped his practice session. He played monster in chase, you would scream when he ran after you, because he had that chipped tooth that looked like a fang, and he was so much bigger than you, you knew he could catch you. It was just a matter of time before he grabbed you and threw you down and tickled you until you cried. Now you are not so young, and being not so young, you think you shouldn’t be thinking about milk that can’t be unpoured, so you stop thinking about your brother, and think about the bathing suits for sale at the facility instead. There are suits so low in the back they look as if the dog from the Coppertone ad on the billboards were biting and pulling down on them.
This is you watching Kim, the girl who did not swim her hundred fly as fast as she thought she could. Her tears mixing with pool water dripping from her hair, which she just removed from her cap. Her shoulders heaving, the sobbing visible, even though the sound of it can’t be heard. The voices so loud in the stands because spectators are cheering on other swimmers in a race after hers. The swimmer who wins in the race after hers raises her fist in the air, smiling.
CHAPTER TWO
This is the killer. Our killer, not the killer from out west. He is in the stands watching Kim. He is a man with dark, wavy hair and a forehead with wrinkles so thick they look like steps. He has also read the article about the strangler out west. He thinks the killer was stupid to be caught, but he is also jealous of the strangler because it has been a long time since he himself has killed. He notices how even from far away he can see Kim’s heart beating through her swimsuit. He can see how her cheeks are flushed from breathing so hard. He looks to see if her neck flutters. Can her pulse be that strong beneath her ivory skin? He notices how bright her eyes are, how the tears welling up in them have made her look so alive. Is there a way to have this light for my own? he thinks. This is Kim not noticing the killer. Not many people do. He is quiet. He does not cheer. He just watches what’s down on the pool deck.
This is Kim thinking how much she wanted to win the race, how if she had won she could go home and place the blue ribbon on the string that she has strung from one wall to the other across her room. She could hang it beside all of the other ribbons strung up on that string from all of her six years as a swimmer. After only her first year she was able to cover the length of the string with ribbons, and now she has so many that she tapes them to the bottoms of the ribbons already hanging. Her mother refers to it as her wall of ribbons,
and thinks that if Kim cared less about the ribbons and more about improving her technique, then she’d actually win more ribbons. To Kim it’s not a wall of ribbons but more like a curtain of ribbons, because when the window is open, letting in a breeze carried across the tall grass and daisies that dot her side yard, the curtain of ribbons shudders and flaps. Kim likes the curtain, thinking how one day, when the ribbons reach down to her bedroom floor, then she might pull the curtain aside, step out from behind it, show the world who she is, but right now she likes hiding behind it because all that it says about her is that she’s a champion swimmer, and maybe that’s all she wants people to know about her because right now she’s not even sure herself about who she is, and she learned long ago that you don’t make the mistake of telling anyone how you feel. Once, when she was a girl of ten, she told an older girl she knew that she liked the girl’s brother. Kim and the brother were friends. They lived down the road from each other and played in the stream for hours at a time, creating dams and waterfalls with rocks that fed into crystal clear pools where she could see the reflection of the two of them working, their knobby, scuffed knees sometimes touching. When the older girl told her brother that Kim liked him, he stopped coming over. After a big rain, the rocks they had moved to create the waterfalls fell out of place, and white water whooshed by full force, without stopping, without creating calm pools of water Kim could see her face in. It was then she joined a swim team and swam as hard as she could to forget.
Do you know how the strokes are performed? There are officials who know if you don’t. They will tell you the rules. A child doing breaststroke has to double-hand touch at the wall. A child doing butterfly cannot kick like a frog. A glide to the wall in the backstroke can’t start before the flags. A wiggling foot on the blocks at the start is a false start and allowed only once. A fall where the swimmer enters the water is also a false start and allowed only once. One false start in a relay is a DQ for the entire team, a disqualification.
This is you, Annie, at the facility, looking in through the glass windows at the pool where a boys’ race is being swum. The swim team is coed, but there are not as many boys as girls, so the boys’ heats are fewer in number. It must be a first heat you are watching, because so many of the swimmers are inexperienced and swimming poorly, and you see at least three officials in their white polo shirts and their blue shorts raising a hand in the air, letting the judges know a swimmer performed a stroke incorrectly. This is you with your thoughts wandering while watching the boys. This is you remembering how hard your brother laughed days before he shot himself when you saw him on his birthday at his house. Your parents, both dead a few years now, of course weren’t there, but his children were, and you noticed how it was easy to see how your kids and his were related. They shared the same dark features and olive skin. Their laughter even sounded similar to you, their voices sounding in the same range. But whose laughter was like yours now? you thought. Your parents were gone and now your brother. You realized then you were the last one left in your family, and in that moment, where you were completely feeling sorry for yourself, you felt like an orphan.
This is you now bent over the water fountain at the facility. The hot air makes you so thirsty. You wish the water could enter your mouth more quickly. You wonder why water fountains have to move from the bottom up and why they can’t come from the ceiling down, straight into your mouth, where gravity would probably be on your side and help quench your thirst that much faster.
This is you minutes later up in the bleachers, the boys’ heats are over, and now you are watching your daughter Sofia swim a one-hundred free. You notice how she still isn’t using her walls and streamlines, and those turns that when you straighten out and push off the wall you are not breathing, and it isn’t until you are at the flags again that you come up for a breath. The turns are hard to do, but the coaches want the swimmers to use them because they save so much time. Even though Sofia isn’t using those turns, she still has a faster time. You write her time down on the heat sheet you bought that lists all the entries and heats of the swimmers. The heats are being run with the slowest girls first and the fastest girls last, so that for example if you have sixty girls in the race and a ten-lane pool, you’ll have six heats of ten girls each, the last heat being the fastest and the overall winner most likely coming out of that race. You like watching your daughters swim, but if they don’t swim well in a race, you don’t mention it. You are always proud of them, even when they don’t lose time, because they always work hard in practice and try to swim their fastest in a race. Thomas, your husband, thinks that you have the girls on the swim team as much for your benefit as for theirs. This is true. You like being able to swim when your girls swim and you like talking to the other parents on the team. It’s a social place for you. You also like seeing your girls progress and cheering them on at a meet and being involved in their lives and speaking their language about workouts and strokes and technique. You’re even in their social sphere a little more because you know the other girls on the swim team they come home and talk about. You know Hayley’s mother’s a rock singer in a band and that Hayley can sing pretty well herself and takes chorus and that her class was invited to D.C. to sing on the Capitol steps. You know that Kali’s mom gets migraines and that she’s allergic to gluten. You know that Chris, Cleo’s mother, is a professional artist, because your girls are friends with Cleo and you’ve been to Chris’s house to drop off the girls and she’s shown you her studio and her canvasses heavy with oil paints depicting dark assemblages of wildflowers sprawling on the surface without reference points, as if the flowers were stars almost, growing without being tied to the earth, and floating in space. When you want to talk about how you freelance as a wedding photographer in order to supplement the family income and be able to afford the family vacations, you can talk with Kali’s mom. You can talk to her about how it’s sometimes difficult to deal with soon-to-be brides and their families because Kali’s mom is the owner of a five-star inn that hosts weddings and serves organic fiddleheads. When you want to talk about how the skiing was great over the weekend after a huge snowfall of heavenly powder, you talk to Emma’s dad, who also skis. When you want to talk about the new curriculum the state is adopting for the school system, and the new assessment test they’ll use that has to be taken on a computer and how you’re nervous your girls don’t type well enough, you can talk to Nick’s mom, who’s a middle school teacher. And of course, if you want to talk about swimming and your own children, you can talk to anyone around you, even the mothers and fathers you don’t think you have anything in common with, because every parent there can talk swimming. They understand what a fast fly time might be. They can make a remark about how a certain stroke-and-turn official might be inattentive during a race and never catch a DQ. They can look at a set of twenty-one one-hundred frees on a 1:20 that the coach wrote on the board for her swimmers to swim and know that is a tough workout.
This is Dinah, seeing how your daughter Sofia out-touched her daughter Jessie in the one-hundred free, even though Jessie used her streamlines and turns. This is Dinah coming up to you while you’re about to go down the stairs to the foyer saying that she did not see your Sofia using her streamlines and turns, and that she thought all the girls were supposed to be using them now. This is you shrugging, saying, "I suppose she’ll start using them one day, but can you blame her? That’s a long time to hold your breath and swim hard