Black Iris
By Leah Raeder
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Love is not a thing that we create. It’s an undoing.
It only took one moment of weakness for Laney Keating’s world to fall apart. One stupid gesture for a hopeless crush. Then the rumors began. Slut, they called her. Queer. Psycho. Mentally ill, messed up, so messed up even her own mother decided she wasn’t worth sticking around for. If Laney could erase that whole year, she would. College is her chance to start with a clean slate.
She’s not looking for new friends, but they find her: charming, handsome Armin, the only guy patient enough to work through her thorny defenses—and fiery, filterless Blythe, the bad girl and partner in crime who has thorns of her own.
But Laney knows nothing good ever lasts. When a ghost from her past resurfaces—the bully who broke her down completely—she decides it’s time to live up to her own legend. And Armin and Blythe are going to help. Which was the plan all along. Because the rumors are true. Every single one. And Laney is going to show them just how true. She’s going to show them all.
Leah Raeder
Leah Raeder—known now as Elliot Wake—is the author of Unteachable, Black Iris, Bad Boy, and Cam Girl. Aside from reading his brains out, he enjoys graphic design, video games, fine whiskey, and the art of self-deprecation. Visit him at LeahRaeder.com.
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- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5For more reviews, gifs, Cover Snark and more, visit A Reader of Fictions.Some of you may know that I wasn’t a fan of Raeder’s debut novel Unteachable, unlike everyone else I know who read it. While I liked the writing, I couldn’t get past the teacher/student romance, which I probably should have seen coming, since they only very rarely work for me. Obviously, I was a bit nervous trying Black Iris, despite the great advance buzz, since those same people loved Unteachable too. The funny thing is that Unteachable didn’t work for me because of how fucked up the romance was, but Black Iris is a million times more fucked up, and I loved it. What can I say? I like what I like.On page one, I was hooked. As soon as I started Black Iris, I had absolutely zero interest in anything else I was reading. This is one of those books that starts out compelling and just gets more and more impossible to put down as you get further into it. The way things unravel is masterful. I’ve been taken for a fucked up ride, but I enjoyed every moment of it.The difference for me in the two books lies in intent. Unteachable was first and foremost a romance, which tied my enjoyment up in whether or not I shipped it. Black Iris has romance, but I’m not certain I’d call it a romance; that really could go either way. Plus, the book warns you what to expect right out the gate, and I do mean in chapter one: "I’m not the heroine of this story. And I’m not trying to be cute. It’s the truth. I’m diagnosed borderline and seriously fucked-up. I hold grudges. I bottle my hate until it ferments into poison, and then I get high off the fumes. I’m completely dysfunctional and that’s the way I like it, so don’t expect a character arc where I finally find Redemption, Growth, and Change, or learn How to Forgive Myself and Others. Fuck forgiveness."This quote is one hundred percent on the level. Don’t expect a surprise twist where Laney realizes that vengeance isn’t sweet; this isn’t that kind of story. Don’t expect good sex to cure her. Black Iris starts out fucked up, and it lives down there in the muck and the blood. It very much doesn’t sound like a Christina book, even though I’ve read and loved it. I’m ALL about character arcs, and I’m very much anti drugs. But in Black Iris all of that stuff works, because it’s all important and the book wouldn’t work otherwise. It doesn’t feel like it’s all in there just to add shock value; it’s intrinsic, and it IS the story.Raeder does a really good job in Black Iris of walking the line between condemnation of acts and endorsement of them. I think a lot of the fucked up stuff comes off as truly fucked up, and it’s not romanticized, but I think Raeder also makes you consider some of the actions from a different angle and see gray where you might once have seen just black and white.For me, the fact that the characters know they’re fucked up, and they own their decisions is what really makes dark books like Black Iris work for me. Laney’s not looking for forgiveness anymore than she’s going to give it. Black Iris is a very self-aware book. Ironically, I end this book shipping relationships more unhealthy than in the book where the romance infuriated me; I do see the irony, but the shippy feels cannot be contained. I shall remain on the sinking OT3 of Laney, Blythe, and Armin. I feel like they had better balance and more potential long term than Laney and Blythe alone. Plus, they are insanely hot and sexy in every iteration.Leah Raeder’s writing is poetry like a bat to the face. It’s gorgeous, lyrical, lilting, but it’s also sharp, metallic and bitter. Her prose is the taste of blood on your tongue. Raeder excels at writing feelings in this brutal way where they just punch the reader right in the brain. Everything’s immediate, raw, and harsh, yet oddly lovely in its broken honesty. This dichotomy in Raeder’s writing is what really makes her writing stand out to me from all the other books I read.Black Iris is told using confusing time jumps, which oddly enhanced the experience. I was constantly struggling to piece things together, but it felt right to have to do so. Laney and her story aren’t straight forward. She’s an unreliable narrator, and she doesn’t want you to be able to add things up until she’s ready for you to add them all up. She leaves things out, mixes them up, and makes the reader unsure.You know what writing technique I pretty much always hate? The one where the book you’re reading is supposedly by the main character of said book. However, I love the way Raeder uses this trope in Black Iris. For one thing, that’s not used for the final twist; it’s something you know pretty early on, and Raeder/Laney throw this postmodern hyper-awareness that it’s a book at you constantly. We’re told over and over that Laney’s an unreliable character, both directly and through reference. Knowing that this is the novel Laney wrote adds another layer to Black Iris which made me constantly question everything. Even so, I was not prepared and I didn’t see anything coming.Black Iris is a level of fucked up that the term “fucked up” doesn’t really prepare you for. I’m still not sure if I think of Black Iris as a romance or not. One thing I know for sure is that I will be thinking about Black Iris for a while. I also know that I’ll be ordering a finished copy for myself.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5This book was like a huge, decadent dessert of vengeance, sex and the complexities of teenage sexuality.
At times a little over-the-top, I still really enjoyed it. The out-of-order narrative can be a turn-off but I felt it was well utilized here, without feeling excessively messy. It was a fun, delicious read, despite the dark subject matter.
Rating: 8/10
Gay-o-meter: 10/10 - Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5Gripping story. Finished in a day. The MC was delightfully twisted. The mystery unfolding was just as exciting as the romance.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/54.0
The character in this book are vengeful, jaded, often self involved, fractured, and hold a very flexible morality. The story zig Zaha around in an often off putting semblance of a timeline. The writing is as lyrical. The discussion of sexuality raw, real and honest. The plot was dark in the best of ways. The plot twists at the end -some brilliant and one...reaching.
I loved to hate the characters, I enjoyed struggling through the disjointed time line, and the writing had me grabbing my highlighter. Also, I don't think I can forget this book. I'm glad I gave Elliot writing another chance after Cam Girl. - Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Deliciously dark and completely off-the-wall. A twisting tale of revenge that's absolutely worth reading.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5*NETGALLEY REVIEW WITH NO SPIOILERS*
Black Iris isn't a book that can be easily be summed up without giving away too much. The story was complex and unlike any other story I've ever read. It was risqué, emotional, intense, dangerous, romantic, and at times, a complete twisted up mystery. It switches back and forth from past to present to show you how everything came into play. Crucial details are revealed and important characters are introduced. The plot is one that will make your mind hurt in the best way possible. It will strip away at everything you believed and make you feel completely different. I was on the edge of my seat for most of the book... The pages couldn't turn fast enough. I wasn't sure how everything would come together, but I never expected the outcome we got. When I finally finished I felt a weight being lifted off my shoulders. I could finally breathe again. My tense body fell relaxed and mind felt sane again.
Honestly it was like a 1,000 piece puzzle. Each word came together to a form a slightly flawed, slightly messed up... absolutely captivating picture. My heart went out to these fictional characters. Yeah, they were emotionally unstable and yeah, at times I wanted to punch each one, but somehow, someway... They managed to capture my heart and fill my body with sympathy.
It was an intense subject and the Author's writing was flawless. It felt raw and vulnerable. While at times the story became jagged and sharp, it somehow remained smooth and flowing. I did question how Leah went from writing Unteachable to this dark, heavy story and after I read the acknowledgements I understood. My hat goes off to her and anyone else who lived similar scenarios. Sadly, this happens a lot more than we would like to think. It opened my eyes and made me feel things I didn't feel before reading. I am utterly head over heels for this book and quite frankly I now have a girl crush on Leah Raeder.
I definitely recommend this one to every reader out there. It is a MUST READ. - Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5This is Leah Raeder's second book... I read her first one, Unteachable, and liked it, but I didn't love it. I had some personal issues with it. So, going into this book, I wasn't sure what to expect. I already knew that Leah is a fantastic writer. Her first book was just not the type of plot I would normally go for. This one, though, I totally dug into!
This story is a unique and phenomenally written book. I will say, this somewhat dark read might not be for everyone. I have seen some that either had a hard time finishing it or just didn't finish it at all. Not every book is for everyone. I can understand where some had difficulty with this book. It is slower moving, for the most part. A lot of books that go slower tend to lose readers' interest. I almost stopped for this reason, but I am glad I didn't.
In this book, you will find some complete mind-fuckery going on! This is a triangle of sorts. You have one girl who is lost and broken and out for revenge, you think... Then you have another girl who is twisted and shows some serious signs of mental illness. Then you have a boy... a boy who likes girls he needs to fix. Throw these three together and you get one big cluster of head games, plot twists and heart breaks.
I don't want to be a spoiler. If I go into the plot too much, I will give too much away. Just know that not everyone is as they seem in this story. Things aren't anywhere near black and white. This book is about trust and manipulation of the worst kind. It isn't light and fluffy or unicorns and rainbows. In fact, I am pretty sure some of these characters would chop off the unicorns horn if given the chance. - Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Could have done without the cultural name drops but I'm all about a book that's essentially characters holding guns to each other's heads for 300 pages.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5‘Scars tell a story. My whole life was written on my body. How are you supposed to leave the past behind when you carry it with you in your skin?’Laney Keating is a troubled teen questioning her sexuality while battling bullies and a severe drug addition. She just wants to successfully make it to college so that she can start completely over with a fresh slate. That’s the bottom line, however, that doesn’t even begin to touch the contorted sort of life she leads. Still reeling from her mother’s suicide, Laney becomes intensely close with two individuals: Armin and Blythe. After finding out the details of her sordid story, the two agree to help her get back at those that hurt her so she can finally get the revenge she’s been dying for for so long.‘I am not the heroine of this story.And I’m not trying to be cute. It’s the truth. I’m diagnosed borderline and seriously fucked-up. I hold grudges. I bottle my hate until it ferments into poison, and then I get high off the fumes.’First and foremost, Black Iris is one seriously dark and twisted thrill-ride of a tale. With a sense of being on a rollercoaster whipping you to and fro, the story throws us back in the past and forward into the future with each alternating chapter, slowly uncovering the facts of what caused Laney to become the sort of person she is. It’s such a thoroughly absorbing and well-written tale that keeping your facts straight isn’t ever a chore. And speaking of well-written, this book is simply sublime. Leah Raeder sees this world from a different perspective than the rest of us mere mortals. She sees this world in vibrant colors and intense detail and has the poetic ability to bring it to life for the rest of us.‘I don’t categorize people by who I’m allowed to like and who I’m allowed to love. Love doesn’t fit into boxes like that. It’s blurry, slippery, quantum. It’s only limited by our perceptions and before we slap a label on it and cram it into some category, everything is possible.’This book touches on a lot of severely dark aspects of life such as excessive drug use, mental illnesses such as depression and mania and not only the personal effects but how it manages to effect everyone in your life. It also tackles bullying, self-denigration and learning to come to terms with your sexuality despite it not being ‘the norm’. Revenge is a central part of the story as well and I loved how unrepentant Laney is about taking it, regardless of any ramifications. Her actions might not have been the easiest to understand or even to stomach, but her raw brutality still managed to be profound.Black Iris may not be for everyone because its crudely savage and Laney remains remorseless to the very end without your quintessential self-realization over all the wrong that was done. But that crudeness is what completely ensnared me, shocked me and by the end left me completely stupefied (in the best way possible).
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5If I’m lucky; each year 2, maybe 3 books come along that totally & completely crush the world around me, and I mean this in the best possible way! These rare books leave you feeling like your guts have been torn out; ripped to shreds and cast into oblivion, never to be seen again. With no knowledge of how you got there you’ll find yourself sobbing on the floor because what you’ve just read was so beautiful - so devastating, like liquid poetry for your soul and now you have no idea how to continue on in your life cause it’s over. These kind of books make you want to change all your previous 5 star reviews to a 4 cause they’re just not worthy of being in the same category, how did you ever think they were?? Damn I love books like this! I crave them deep down in my core, forever searching for these elusive books that cause this kind of soul crushing reading experience. I can tell you the exact moment that I read my last one; it was October 20, 2014 and I still talk about that book & its characters weekly to random people. It has been 7 LONG months but finally, FINALLY it has happened once again!!
Two little words that brought me to my literary knees……….BLACK IRIS
“I am not the heroine of this story. It’s the truth. I’m diagnosed borderline and seriously fucked-up. I hold grudges. I bottle my hate until it ferments into poison, and then I get high off the fumes. I’m completely dysfunctional and that’s the way I like it, so don’t expect a character arc where I finally find Redemption, Growth, and Change, or learn How to Forgive Myself and Others…….Fuck Forgiveness.”
I’m not going to give any additional description about the plot, anything you need to know going in is already said in the synopsis and knowing any more would seriously ruin your experience. What I will say is that Leah Raeder is genius, pure and simple! Never has teen angst and intensely addictive female friendships been written so beautifully, raw and honest. Leah brought it all back for me; the pain and confusion, the insecurities of being young and sexual yet not fitting the “normal” mold. Both Laney and Black Iris are complex, gritty, dark and suspenseful, I dare you to read this and not to FEEL………
“….I fall in love with minds, not genders or body parts. People wouldn’t say I’m ‘just a slut’ or ‘faking it’ or ‘undecided’ or ‘confused.’ I’m not confused. I don’t categorize people by who I’m allowed to like and who I’m allowed to love. Love doesn’t fit into boxes like that. It’s blurry, slippery, quantum. It’s only limited by our perceptions and before we slap a label on it and cram it into some category, everything is possible.”
Prepare yourself for a majorly delicious mind-fuck! Twisting back and forth through the previous year of Laney’s life is like getting a glimpse into the darkest places of the human psyche. You’ll think you’ve got it figured out, placed all the pieces in their proper order. Read a few more pages and you’ll realize you’ve got no clue!! There’s no fast paced action here and there doesn’t need to be, this is just one long, delicious slow burn of story…….hate, revenge, desire, addiction, hopelessness as well as love, forgiveness, acceptance & hope
“Falling for someone is like pulling a loose thread. It happens stitch by stitch. You feel whole most of the time even while the seams pop, the knots loosen, everything that holds you together coming undone. It feels incredible, this opening of yourself to the world. Not like the unraveling it is. Only afterward do you glance down at the tangle of string around your feet that used to be a person who was whole and self-contained and realize that love is not a thing that we create. It’s an undoing.”
On a closing note, Black Iris is riddled with sexual tension throughout and has some of the HOTTEST F/M/F and F/F action I’ve ever read! I actually woke my hubby out of a deep sleep so I could read him one of the intensely charged F/F scenes! Needless to say…….. he started Black Iris two days ago ;) BUT if that’s not your thing, then you probably want to skip this one, although you’re seriously missing out!!! Highly, highly recommended this book to anyone and everyone! Thank you to Leah Raeder for writing what is currently my favorite read of 2015!!
“Girls love each other like animals. There is something ferocious and unself-conscious about it. We don’t guard ourselves like we do with boys. No one trains us to shield our hearts from each other. With girls, it’s total vulnerability from the beginning. Our skin is bare and soft. We love with claws and teeth and blood is just proof of how much. It’s feral.”1 person found this helpful
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Black Iris - Leah Raeder
APRIL, LAST YEAR
April is the cruelest month, T. S. Eliot said, and that’s because it kills. It’s the month with the highest suicide rate. You’d think December, or even January—the holidays and all that forced cheer and agonized smiling pushing fragile people to the edge—but actually it’s spring, when the world wakes from frost-bound sleep and something cruel and final stirs inside those of us who are broken. Like Eliot said: mixing memory and desire, stirring dull roots with spring rain. In the deepest throes of depression, when sunlight is anguish and the sky throbs like one big raw migraine and you just want to sleep until you or everything else dies, you’re less likely to commit suicide than someone coming out of a depressive episode. Drug companies know this. That’s why antidepressants have to be marked with the warning MAY CAUSE SUICIDAL THOUGHTS.
Because what brings you back to life also gives you the means to destroy yourself.
———
Flick, flick, flick. The lighter in my hand, the sound of my life grinding into sparks that would never catch, under a salmon-pink dawn in Nowhereville, Illinois. Gravel crunched beneath my shoes, polished like oyster shell from the rain. I stopped at the puddle outside our garage and peered into the oily mirrored water, watching the slow swirl of a gasoline rainbow, the tiny orange tongue of fire licking shadows from my face until they washed back over and over. An unlit cigarette hung from my lip and my mouth had a weird bleach taste I tried not to think about. I tried not to think about anything that had happened last night. I was eighteen and, according to Mom, completely out of control,
which to anyone else would have meant a normal teenager.
Mom’s favorite hobby: projecting her own psych issues onto me.
Very soon I’d be free of her.
From the alley I could see the backyard, the grass jeweled with dew. Mom’s garden lined the walk to the porch, hyacinths with their cones of curled blue stars, rosebuds crumpled like flakes of dried blood, everything glazed in clear lacquer and the air musky with the cologne of rain. At six fifteen she’d wake and find my bed empty. But that wasn’t the real problem. The real problem was that in about three minutes, something terrible was going to happen. The thing you’ll hate me for. The thing that will make me an Unsympathetic Protagonist.
Since the fourth wall is down, let’s get one thing straight:
I am not the heroine of this story.
And I’m not trying to be cute. It’s the truth. I’m diagnosed borderline and seriously fucked-up. I hold grudges. I bottle my hate until it ferments into poison, and then I get high off the fumes. I’m completely dysfunctional and that’s the way I like it, so don’t expect a character arc where I finally find Redemption, Growth, and Change, or learn How to Forgive Myself and Others.
Fuck forgiveness.
Oh, and I’m a writer. Which is worse than all the rest put together.
Open sesame, I texted my brother.
I don’t know how I didn’t hear it. It was quiet, the crickets creaking like a rusty seesaw, but that other sound must have been there, scratching softly at my brain. I crept into the backyard through the maze of Mom’s thorns.
The house was dark, Donnie’s curtains closed. Wake up fuckface, I texted, punctuating with a smiley. Six twelve a.m. Three minutes until Medusa’s alarm went off. Donnie always slept with his phone under his pillow, which was probably slowly giving him cancer. He should’ve been up by now. Mom’s gonna kill me, I wrote. Do you want to be an only child?
Six thirteen.
Dammit. I had to beat that alarm.
I bolted across the lawn, kicking pearls of dew loose from the grass. A thorn snagged my ankle but I wouldn’t notice the blood till much later, in the hospital. My socks instantly went damp. It wasn’t until I’d reached the porch that I saw the other tracks, paralleling mine.
A chill swept up my back. I touched the kitchen doorknob.
Unlocked.
I didn’t open it. That coldness wove around my spine, thickening, binding. Someone was awake. Someone had come downstairs, crossed the yard before me.
I turned.
She was in the garage, at the window. I knew my mother’s silhouette from long years of it slipping into doorways, catching us horsing around when we should’ve been asleep, catching me when I snuck in alone after midnight, my body weary and ancient with all that had been done to it. I knew the high set of those shoulders, that neck rigid with contempt. The closed mouth carved tight into her elegant Gorgon skull. She’d stand there without saying a word. Her silence was the kind that compelled you to fill it with all your wrongs. I could never see her eyes but I knew they burned ice-wraith blue, and now I felt them through the dusty window pane, felt the stare that could turn me to stone.
I removed the lighter slowly from my pocket. Flicked it once with exaggerated languor. Lit up. Took a long, luxuriously filthy drag, meeting her stare. The inside of my body felt carbon-coated, black and grimy. Not the soft pink vulnerable thing I really was.
Okay, bitch. Your move.
She just stood there.
Those moments counted. Those moments when I faced her, eating fire and breathing smoke, telling myself I was hard, that I could crush her and this whole world in my hands. Telling myself she couldn’t hurt me. No one could hurt me anymore.
Those moments could have saved us.
By the time I reached the end of the cigarette the sun had torn a red gash at the horizon, and I saw that Mom was unsteady on her feet, swaying. And finally I realized what that rhythmic sound was beneath the crickets. I knew it from climbing up into the garage rafters with my brother to smoke a J, the beams creaking with our weight. Wood, under strain.
I dropped my cigarette in the grass.
In some deep part of me, I already knew. I crossed the lawn, noticing the white square taped to the side door only when I touched the knob. A name scrawled across the paper in her bold, slashing handwriting.
Delaney.
How had she known it would be me?
I ignored the note. I was trying to turn the doorknob and failing. Locked.
Mom,
I said, and rattled the door, then again, louder, Mom.
She swayed dreamily.
A light flipped on inside the house, a yellow frame falling over me. I braced both hands on the knob and kicked. Everything stretched away like the reflection in a car mirror. My mind floated above my head, looking down at my body: Laney Keating, her hair matted, a black wash of mascara running down her cheeks, her mouth still bitter from the blowjob, throttling the garage door and screaming her mother’s name. I watched her from a faraway place. She gave up kicking and punched straight through the window in a brilliant starburst of glass. I felt the heat shoot up my arm like a drug, saw the redness streaking over my skin, but didn’t quite connect it to me, to the girl crawling in over those jagged glass teeth, tumbling to the floor, scrambling up and screaming as she grabbed her mother’s legs and uselessly lifted the limp, hanging body. My mind was still outside, staring at my name on the suicide note. All I could think was, How did she know I’d find her? How did she know it would be me?
———
I don’t remember much else because I blacked out thirty seconds later. Dad had seen me from the house and dragged me onto the lawn, then Mom, laying us side by side. I was unconscious but somehow I can picture it. Grass curling over bone-white skin, tracing horsetails of dew, tiny clear beads that reflect an entire world full of stars and flowers and our pale bodies, everything she’d left behind. My blood mixed with the dew and turned pink. The glass would leave scars on my right hand like the ghost of a cobweb, which is what scars are: a haunting of the skin.
At the funeral Dad said he thought she’d killed us both. He’d been a heartbeat from getting his semiautomatic and joining us when he realized I had a pulse.
This might sound fucked-up, but the part that really upset me wasn’t the suicide. That had been a long time coming. What disturbed me was that she knew I’d find her first.
I am my mother’s daughter.
I know what it feels like to plan something that will destroy you, to be so fucking sure you want it that you arrange everything perfectly, prune the roses while you debate the merits of hanging yourself with nylon rope versus an appliance cord, serve your children baked ziti while your suicide note lies in a desk drawer like a cruel bird of prey waiting to unfold its wings until, one morning when the world is diamond-strung with rain and your daughter is coming home from another night of ruining herself (because you were never there for her, you were never there), you get up before everyone else and calmly step into the garage, and that noose, and eternity.
She’d planned it for years. Knew it was coming and kept tending that garden. Those roses she would never see bloom, the irises and peonies, the daughter and son, all of us left behind to flower, somehow, without her.
Well, I did. I bloomed into the dark thing she made me.
I am a creature with a vast capacity for patience, and for violence. For watching. For waiting. For taking the moment only when it is perfect and sure. I’m a hunter like my mother, patient and watchful and still, my fangs full of black venom. There is a terrible thing tucked inside me raring to lunge forth into the light. And I’m just waiting for that perfect moment. Just waiting. Just waiting.
JULY, LAST YEAR
I went to parties that summer. Every party within twenty miles. I was supposed to be prepping for college, getting a head start on my reading. Instead I got a head start on getting wasted.
Donnie came with me sometimes, sitting in the car while I went into the bedrooms of boys I barely knew. I took my clothes off and let the low lamplight paint me honey gold, my slender dragonfly limbs and iridescent skin like the body of a stranger, impossibly light, and I let them touch me while I swallowed pills and snorted powders, clogged my veins with chemicals. I don’t know if I was trying to numb myself or to feel something through the numbness. Maybe both. Sometimes you feel things so much, so intensely, it becomes a new kind of numbness, the oblivion of overstimulation. I don’t remember their names. It was easier to remember which ones I hadn’t fucked. They were a blur of lean abs, sweat-rimed skin, the satin smoothness of hard dicks. My mouth was always slick with peppermint gloss. It made them tingle, they said. Funny that a girl like me would be so good at oral. But we are, you know. Good with our mouths. Janelle—my best and last friend senior year—stopped hanging out with me, claiming she wanted to spend time with her boyfriend before college. Really she just didn’t want to be branded a whore by proxy.
Nothing like being slut-shamed by your so-called best friend.
I developed other skills in addition to giving legendary head: shoplifting, arson, vandalism. I got arrested with $437 worth of makeup and perfume stuffed into my underwear and bra. I pushed an old washing machine off an overpass and couldn’t get the sound of that spectacular smash out of my head. My body felt like a heap of cheap plastic and glass, and I wanted to drop it off the highest point I could get to on oxy and X. Split every bad atom inside me. Get this wrongness out. One night I totaled Mom’s car on a median and woke up in the ER with a concussion and my very first DUI. My BAC was under 0.08 percent and my lawyer said the magic words mother’s death
so I got off easy. Before he took me home, Dad sat at the wheel of the truck, motionless. In the hazy white light he looked as used and spent as me, his skin draping over his bones like a worn-out suit of himself. I thought he was going to cry and my throat thickened, the hot stitch behind my eyes loosening, but then he said, You’re a walking time bomb.
He was right. Mom was wrong. I was a precision-engineered explosive, in perfect control of my own self-destruction.
Later that week Dad said he wanted me out when college started. I was a bad influence on Donnie.
Just like my dead bitch of a mother.
———
Donnie slumped on the futon in my room, watching me try on dresses and discard them. There’s nothing between my brother and me, no secrets, no suppressed incestuous subtext. He’s two years younger and we know everything about each other. I’ve seen his dick, and it was like looking at an anatomical drawing. No Lannister shit.
The black one,
he said.
I wore that at the funeral.
Donnie sighed. His eyes had that faraway fog that came with being really sad, or really high. I flopped onto the futon beside him. He’d been playing The Mother We Share
on repeat for an hour, so I knew he was obsessing again, about her, and about me leaving. Donovan Keating looks like me: rangy and raven-haired, his nose dusted with sandy freckles, his eyes a mercurial mix of aqua and teal like that sea shade that eats away at old pennies. We both have the same coolness, the same ocean calm, but he’s the sweet boy with a chick-magnet Tumblr and I’m the bad girl with a handgun for a heart. He smiles and panties melt. I don’t smile. When I show teeth, it’s to bite.
I wish we were somewhere else,
I said, laying my skull on his shoulder.
Where?
Somewhere happy.
His arm curled around me. I’m happy anywhere you are, Rainbow Brite.
Yes, I have an ironic eighties nickname. No, I was not even alive in the eighties.
It’ll be different when college starts,
I said. I’ll miss you. You’ll miss me. We’ll do drugs to compensate.
We already do.
I’ll miss you,
I said more seriously. So much. You’re all I have.
We were quiet awhile. We were both thinking about her.
I stood, dragging a dress with my toe.
I wish I was like you,
Donnie said.
Like what?
Free. You can just let it all go.
He may know me better than anyone, but he doesn’t know everything. I never let go.
Dad was asleep in front of the TV, so we took his truck. Out in the July night I threw my head back and drank a lungful of oxygen so rich with chlorophyll it was like wine. Every lawn was uniform green, layered with sod. This is the suburbs: they tear down nature, then you have to go to Home Depot to buy it back.
Interstate 88 ran through a prairie sea beneath an ocean of stars. The faint white shadow of the Milky Way lay like a ghostly finger across the night, holding in a secret. I leaned back while Donnie drove, my arm hooked out the window, the wind in my hair, my heart dilating as widely as the sky. Melancholy does that—opens you up to make space for more of itself.
City lights rose on the horizon, a twinkling zodiac, lifting higher and higher and sprawling to either side until we were in Chicago proper. We sat at red lights with no other cars in sight, just a homeless man curled up beside a shopping cart, two girls smoking below a bar sign that lit them like aquarium fish. They were ghosts, gone when you looked back. Then we were downtown, skyscrapers vaulting around us, and if I let my eyes unfocus it became a forest of chrome and glass, the trunks of massive trees quilted with fireflies. That big-city scent of gasoline and warm asphalt smelled like home.
The party was in Lincoln Park, on a leaf-canopied street lined with greystones and slick cars. It was one of our favorite haunts—Donnie, budding architect, would photograph houses while I made up stories about the people inside. I’m morbid, so they were bad people. Sex traffickers. Animal pornographers. MFA grads. Now I was going into one of those houses, alone. Donnie fidgeted as I unbuckled my seatbelt.
You don’t have to do this, Lane.
It’s my last chance before classes start.
He pushed a lock of hair across his forehead one way, then the other.
It’ll be fine,
I said. He’ll never see me.
I could go with—
You’re underage.
Then why don’t we go back home?
Because I can’t live like this.
The words shot out like shrapnel. I have to get back to normal. Okay?
You are. You’re the most normal person I know.
My heart swelled. Donnie doesn’t know everything, but he knows who I want to be. He believes I can still be that person. Even if I don’t.
We hugged. I slid out of the car.
Be careful,
he said.
Always.
I punched in the code at the gate.
The house was massive and bearded with ivy, squares of buttery light falling onto the garden below. Smoke rose in lazy spirals from silhouettes on balconies. I walked through the front door into a dull roar that washed over me without sinking in. I’d taken a couple oxycodone on the drive and my skin was pleasantly woolly, every sensation softened.
A girl wearing a tight smile and an even tighter Phi Upsilon Alpha tee waved me over. Welcome to the Summer Mixer. I don’t think we’ve met.
I’m rushing this year. Just wanted to check stuff out.
Invitation?
My mom’s an alumna. Caitlin Keating.
But now she’s dead.
Oh, so you’re family. Fabulous. Drop your keys in the bowl if you drove. It’s mostly sophs on the first floor, upperclassmen upstairs. I’m Mal.
Laney.
Great to meet you, Laney. Stay law-abiding, and have fun.
Those are mutually exclusive, I thought.
I began to move past her and she touched my elbow.
You here alone?
Yeah.
She scanned me again, sharper. I’m a whopping five-foot-one, ninety pounds soaking wet, wide-eyed as those dolls that blink creepily on their own. Classic Dickensian waif.
You look like the girl next door,
she said with a note of pity. Don’t go upstairs.
As soon as her attention shifted, I headed for the staircase.
The second floor was pure raunch: strip poker, Jell-O wrestling, two girls Frenching messily while the crowd (male) whooped. Flyers littered the halls, advertising a local club. 80S NIGHT WITH DJ APOLLO. I wandered around, listening, watching, absorbing, until a beefy guy cornered me and offered a red cup. I refused. Never take drinks from strangers.
I could sense him.
At every blond head my spine went straight and tight as a cracked whip. His presence was in the air, gamy, meaty, an electrochemical clue that made my skin prickle. I eavesdropped on conversations, hearing his name in slurred syllables. I felt the oily slide of his cologne over my skin. I felt his pheromones seeping into me, making every sensitive part of me harden and buzz.
I was hunting.
Gold flashed in the corner of my eye and flickered out of sight. I’d seen it before. I tracked it through sweaty skin and clouds of perfume to a closing bathroom door. There was an empty room opposite and I leaned in the dark doorway. My heart pumped liquid nitrogen, chilling me to the core.
I held my phone at eye level.
Breathe. Wait.
The bathroom door opened.
Now.
I tapped CAPTURE when a girl stepped out and her head snapped straight to me.
Our eyes locked. Blue, but not like mine. Bleached-out blue. Strapless black dress, bare skin and tattoos. Totally unlike the sorority sisters. She wore an oddly chagrined expression, as if I’d caught her doing something wrong. Neither of us moved. One beat, two, three.
She turned and left.
I sank to the floor, cradling my phone. My limbs were watery and weak. Not him. Not him.
You look lost.
It was the beefy guy who’d tried to give me beer. He stood a few feet away, sipping.
‘Not all those who wander are lost,’
I muttered.
Tolkien.
I’d already dismissed him, seeing only a fleshy traffic cone to veer around, but now I looked again. Husky guy in a polo. Light beard, bland bologna-pink face. Standard-issue bro.
Have you read the books?
he said.
No, I just memorize quotes to impress neckbeards.
He blinked.
Bye,
I said, standing.
Who’s your favorite author?
Nope.
I’m Josh.
Almost to the stairs.
Josh Winters. I’m a junior.
First step.
Comp sci major. I read epic fantasy and I play MMOs and I don’t know why I’m telling you this. But I’ve never met a girl who quotes Tolkien and I just want to know your name.
Laney,
I blurted in exasperation.
Can I get you a drink?
No.
I’m sorry if I offended you. You’re just—you’re beautiful,
he said, and it became excruciatingly obvious how desperate he was. I don’t have illusions about my looks. I’m only slightly pretty in a decaying, feral way, my hair a little ragged, my makeup a little sloppy, my gaze a little too piercing and direct. What guys are attracted to is the sluttiness—the give-no-fuck way I carry myself, the mouth that knows how to suck a dick.
Want to go outside?
he said. It’s quieter.
No.
Okay. We can talk here. Or wherever you want.
I stared at him silently.
What are you into?
he said.
Revenge.
Is that a TV show?
I said nothing.
How about books? Music? What do you do for fun?
I don’t have fun.
Then what do you do at parties?
Get high enough to fuck.
He started to smile, hesitantly. Is that a joke?
Back to the stairs.
You’re better than me,
he called, and dammit, I paused. You don’t care about climbing the social ladder. About playing the game. That takes guts. I wish I could be that way. I wish I didn’t care so much what people think of me.
Great. One of those guys who spill all their insecurities to any girl who doesn’t reject them firmly enough.
Sometimes I think I’m just not cut out for this,
he went on. I don’t memorize pickup lines. I don’t know how to talk about anything except books and games, and then I don’t know how to stop talking.
Maybe that’s your pickup line.
It’s a pretty bad one.
It got me to stop.
He smiled, a tremulous, sincere smile. He was really trying.
Look, you seem nice, Josh, but you don’t want to know me.
Give yourself some credit. You’re smart, and you read, and you don’t care what anyone thinks. I would love to know you.
It was his voice that did it, I think. Patient, kind. One of the good-natured sheep.
Okay,
I said. So, do you want to fuck?
His face was priceless.
Josh didn’t move until I went up and took his big sweaty hand. Then he looked at mine with incredulity and enfolded it gently, as if afraid he might crush me, or that I’d disappear.
Next floor up. His room. Bookshelves filled end-to-end, titles I’d have loved to browse. Rumpled bed. A kite of violet moonlight slanting across the floor. My heart skittered.
You’re in control, I told myself.
He led me in shyly, pawing at my dress and hair for a while until I took his face in my hands and kissed him. I willed myself to get aroused but couldn’t focus. My gaze drifted to the window, to the city lights scattered like stardust across the sky, and I imagined myself as a constellation of cells, each light-years apart. What happened to my flesh took eons to reach my brain. However solid I seemed, inside I was vast spaces of dark energy and vacuum. Josh pressed me to the wall and thrust his beery tongue into my mouth and I thought, Just get to the point. I guided him to the hem of my dress, feeling nothing. Raised my arms and let it fall like a chrysalis, and my arms kept wanting to rise, like wings.
You are so beautiful, Laney.
I kissed him to shut him up.
God, I was high. So close to that numb semiconsciousness I craved. The place I imagined Mom had been when she was tying the noose. If she hadn’t been such a prude, she could’ve dosed herself with little pieces of oblivion, like me.
If she’d been more like me, she’d still be alive.
Josh stripped down to his boxers, his erection poking out. I ran my fingertips lightly over the head and he shuddered.
Get a condom,
I said.
He lowered me to a bed that smelled of sun and grass and lost summers. My head was a million miles away from this. I was thinking about the old wood chipper rusting in our garage, wondering how it’d feel if I stuck an arm inside. If the bones would snap like dry wood, skin tearing, muscle fraying, a rag doll ripping apart. Mom chose the coward’s way out. I’d have done it as messily as I could, made myself really feel something, because why not? If you know you’re going to die, what’s left to fear?
That’s the thing. Maybe we’re not really afraid of pain. Maybe we’re afraid of how much we might like it.
Josh kissed the inside of my thigh and I stopped him. Put a condom on.
I want to make you come first.
I can’t even feel my legs.
His hand slid into my panties, his fingers doing something I couldn’t figure out. This doesn’t feel good?
It doesn’t feel like anything.
He sagged against me, cratering the bed.
You can fuck me,
I said matter-of-factly. It’s okay.
This feels wrong. You’re not into it.
Like it matters.
It does to me.
He took a deep breath. Can I just hold you for a while?
Wow.
His arms circled me and I pressed my palms to the moon-painted sheet. My chest moved with each breath but I had no sensation of actually breathing, as if it were someone else’s body. Half my life seems to have happened to someone else’s body. This phenomenon has a name. I told Mom about it once, and before I even finished describing it she said depersonalization.
Sometimes I feel like a deperson.
You seem so sad,
Josh said.
Funny, how they mistake emptiness for sadness.
I lay quietly. After a few minutes we sat up and he put the dress back on me. I let him do it, and when he was done I kissed his cheek, picked up my bag, and left.
———
My mother used to say there are two kinds of people in this world:
Those who want, and those who take.
Most of us are sheep who spend our lives in want. We follow the path worn smooth and velvety from the hooves before us. There’s no need for leashes or fences—we call those things law and morality. Man is the only animal that can reason and all he does with reason is shackle himself. We eat what we’re fed and we fuck what we can’t outrun and it’s never what we dream about but it dulls the screaming edge of desire just enough. Enough so we keep our heads down, our eyes on the ground. Our fetters are fashioned from conformity and fear.
But sometimes an animal can’t be contained. Sometimes a head lifts from the herd and a wolfish intelligence kindles, the nostrils flaring, the eyes catching sickles of moonlight and a hot, earthy breath clotting the cold air, and someone realizes there’s really nothing stopping us from taking whatever we want.
And everything is prey.
———
On the street I lit a cigarette and leaned against the iron fence, watching my smoke fly away. The wind shook the trees softly, the leaves shivering, a sound like dry rain. The heart of the city felt like the middle of a wilderness. No one but Donnie knew I was here. I could disappear into the night, dragging a carcass behind me.
I could disappear forever.
Something pale shifted in the shadows below a tree, and I tensed.
I’m not sure why I still go to these things,
a male voice said. He stepped into a ring of warm streetlight. The paleness was his shirt; his skin was dusky bronze. It’s a meat market in there.
Pretty sure meat has a higher IQ,
I said.
He propped himself against the fence a few feet away, smiling. I couldn’t make out much save a shock of white teeth, his face all hard planes of shadow fitting together in sharp chiaroscuro. Music swelled from