Witches Be Crazy
By Logan Hunder
2.5/5
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The beloved King Ik is dead, and there was barely time to check his pulse before the royal throne was supporting the suspiciously shapely backside of an impostor pretending to be Ik’s beautiful long-lost daughter. With the land’s heroic hunks busy drooling all over themselves, there’s only one man left who can save the kingdom of Jenair. His name is Dungar Loloth, a rural blacksmith turned innkeeper, a surly hermit and an all-around nobody oozing toward middle age, compensating for a lack of height, looks, charm, and tact with guts and an attitude.
Normally politics are the least of his concerns, but after everyone in the neighboring kingdom of Farrawee comes down with a severe case of being dead, Dungar learns that the masquerading princess not only is behind the carnage but also has similar plans for his own hometown. Together with the only person senseless enough to tag along, an eccentric and arguably insane hobo named Jimminy, he journeys out into the world he’s so pointedly tried to avoid as the only hope of defeating the most powerful person in it. That is, if he can survive the pirates, cultists, radical Amazonians, and assorted other dangers lying in wait along the way.
Logan J. Hunder’s hilarious debut blows up the fantasy genre with its wry juxtaposition of the fantastic and the mundane, proving that the best and brightest heroes aren’t always the best for the job.
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Reviews for Witches Be Crazy
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- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5After just finishing a very long epic fantasy, this was a nice way to lighten back up. A bartender with a penchant of throwing his patrons out of the second floor window, volunteers as the representative of his village to seek the hand of the princess. Thus begins a journey along which he picks up a loquacious bard with an ability to avoid death and a pair of sisters looking for adventure.Chuckles abound in this tale especially when nods to modern tropes are recognized.
- Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2/5[Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book from the publisher via Edelweiss in exchange for an honest review.]
This was...ridiculous. I suspect the author was going for humorous, so I expected it to be a bit on the lighter side. But I couldn't take the characters seriously at all, and the story just seemed a bit shallow and simplistic. The protagonist was not relatable in the slightest and all of the twists in the story seemed to be way too convenient to keep me engaged as a reader. - Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2/5Humor, as we all know, is subjective. Especially satire and parody. Case in point, the man I married can watch Monty Python and the Holy Grail for the nine hundredth time and still bust a gut laughing, while I’m sitting there beside him on the couch rolling my eyes because the movie stopped being funny after the first time (and I expect I will catch a lot of grief for that blasphemous confession). What I find funny/not funny might not be the same as others, which is why I feel it is necessary to preface this review with a big YOUR MILEAGE MAY VARY. There are many great things about this novel: it’s clever, it’s entertaining, and it has its uproariously funny moments. On the other hand, there are parts where the humor simply did not work for me. But that doesn’t mean that it wouldn’t work for you! Because it is so difficult to put a score on books like this, I’m actually going to leave my rating off for the blog.The hilariously titled Witches Be Crazy pokes fun at one of my favorite fantasy themes – the epic quest. The story begins “once upon a time in the middle of nowhere” – in this case a desert oasis village, home to an unassuming blacksmith-turned-innkeeper named Dungar Loloth who hears tell of strange happenings in Jenair, the kingdom’s capital. The ruler King Ik is dying, if not already dead, with only his long-lost-but-now-only-just-found daughter to succeed him.No, as a matter of fact, Dungar doesn’t think that sounds very legit either. Convinced of witchcraft, Dungar sets off on a journey to expose the princess for what she really is, and plans to kill her before she can set her evil plans in motion. Along for the ride is Jimminy, an insane hobo who loves to sing off-tune and drive Dungar (and me) crazy. Surviving each other is just the beginning, though. Together on their way to Jenair, the two companions get to come face-to-face with many more dangers, meet other questing adventurers, and run afoul of plenty more beloved genre tropes.If you’ve followed this blog for a while, you might have noticed we participate in a weekly meme called “Tough Traveling”, a feature inspired by The Tough Guide to Fantasyland by Diana Wynne Jones, a parody tourist guidebook that uses humor to examine the common themes in fantasy fiction. Tropes are popular for a reason – they’re tried and true and entertaining to boot, but it’s also very fun to recognize and affectionately make light of them, which is why I was drawn to the description of Witches be Crazy in the first place. Logan J. Hunder’s debut succeeds at lampooning many of the genre’s most established and cherished clichés, starting with character archetypes. I loved this book’s introduction, which featured many quotable gems such as this one about the ridiculously beautiful Princess Koey:“She was known to have left the castle and made a public appearance only once. It is said that during this appearance her skin, which was oddly tanned for someone who had apparently never been outside, emitted a light more radiant than that of the sun and her smile was so alluring that a flock of birds splattered themselves all over a tower because they were physically unable to watch where they were going.”The book is full of moments like this that will make you chuckle – because they reveal the illogical nature behind so many of our favorite tropes. The prologue made me optimistic for the rest of the book, though as I read on, I realized that I prefer a subtler kind of comedy. After the first handful of chapters, it’s clear that there was not going to be much variation to style of humor employed by the author, which consists of mostly punny wordplay and slapstick. If you enjoy that, then you are sure to be in for a real treat. For me, however, there was just not enough variation to the repertoire. While I had an excellent time with the beginning of this book, I have to admit the novelty gradually lost its appeal.The story read like a series of skits – Dungar and Jimminy are plunged into one situation after another, some of which will be immediately familiar to avid readers of fantasy. You have the gladiatorial arena. A stint on a ship with a fearsome band of pirates. A magical tree with malicious nymphs. This random assortment of events made for an outrageous yet amusing plotline, though ultimately they featured a similar routine played out over and over. By the time Dungar and Jimminy got to the village populated by bigoted Amazons, I was just worn down and ready for this story to end. It might have been oversaturation for me at that point, but to be honest, I really could have done without that entire section with the all-women village, which I did not enjoy or find funny at all. But like I said, to each their own.In the end, I think a novella of this type of story would have been perfect for me – but a full length novel was perhaps more than I could manage. It was a fun book, but simply featured too much of the same kind of humor and ran too long for my tastes. I have no doubt that Witches Be Crazy will garner a lot of fans though; to me this is the kind of book with “dedicated cult following” written all over it, much like other parodic classics like Monty Python and the Holy Grail or The Princess Bride. If the novel’s description sounds like something that would interest you, it might be worth giving it a shot.
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Witches Be Crazy - Logan Hunder
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Prologue
Dying flames chewed hungrily on the remaining morsels of a once mighty city. The final traces of the thick smoke had finally begun to dissipate, leaving a clear view to gauge the destruction. Not a structure still stood in the piles of ash and wreckage. That sort of thing tended to happen when every building was made out of wood. All that once was now was no longer, and all that would be was now a mystery. In order to solve that mystery, someone was going to need a really big broom.
Despite the heat of the razing, the empty streets were cold and lifeless. The only movement they saw now were the scorched embers that were blown away with each light breeze. So many had walked them just the day before, completely unaware that they would never walk them again. Not that they would want to anyway, as the only things they would find were remains of homes, livelihoods, and memories. Not to mention the truly awful smell.
There was but one man seen departing the devastation alive, the only one to escape the fatal fate of his former fellows. No one knew his name or face, nor did they know his relation to the city. He was simply a lone man stained with soot from head to foot that wore a tattered cloak which fluttered behind him as he hurried away. If there were anyone who could explain what happened, it would probably have been him. But the world was a big place, and a man with nothing had nowhere he couldn’t go. Except for country clubs, they tended to only allow access to people who possessed things. As for the mysterious man himself, he was last seen heading eastward into the lands of a kingdom called Jenair.
* * *
The pride of the kingdom of Jenair was its capital city, which was senselessly also named Jenair. Strategically placed on the center hill overlooking the lush yet manicured countryside, it marked the perfect focal point for the numerous winding crossroads and the nomadic souls that routinely traversed them.
Like any societal epicenter where travelers from faraway lands would congregate, the kingdom was always teeming with the usual products of these people: foreign goods, innovative inventions, venereal diseases, and the most common of all: stories, rumors, and information. Each new temporary resident to the city contributed to and perpetuated the influx of tales of every topic one could imagine. The cobblestone streets were reliably rife with stories of gallant warriors saving princesses, dragon caves that lay just over the next mountain, or this week’s underground group of revolutionaries that were totally gonna topple the fascist regime this time!
Normally in the wake of a disaster like the one that befell their neighbor, no one in the kingdom would find themselves discussing anything else. However, before any theories even had a chance to develop, the health of their beloved King Ik found itself taking a sharp turn for the worse. The illness’s rapid progression left the king with little time to set his affairs in order, particularly the most pressing matter of finding a suitable heir to marry his daughter and assume the throne.
The shocking and saddening news spread among the residents of the city and kingdom like a plague. Ik’s decaying health on its own may not have been enough to phase out the neighboring kingdom’s capital’s destruction, but the gossip was given an enhanced allure due to the fact that nobody was aware that the king even had a daughter.
Relatively little personal information was known about their beloved monarch. Formally known as King Ik Theik V, he assumed the throne at the young age of seventeen after the horrific affair many years ago when a pack of rabid redbears that just happened to be in the area stormed the royal luncheon that was foolishly being held outside the castle walls. King Ik IV was among the casualties as well as several of his advisors.
As a result, Ik V’s first official act as king was the instruction of the royal detective detachment to investigate the incident and produce a blameworthy individual. The investigation lasted well over a year and never produced such an individual, likely because it was pretty obvious they were mauled by wild animals.
When he received this news, Ik decided to have the atrocity blamed on the other neighboring kingdom of Nonamay. In the long run it proved to be a very smart decision because when the people were coaxed into hating something else they became less likely to aim their hate at their overlords.
During his tenure as king, Ik V only instigated one other official act. Today it is still known as Everyone Go Out Into the Forest and Kill Redbears Day,
and it takes place on the anniversary of Ik IV’s death every year. The holiday is named as such because it is an accurate description of the events that take place and because the king’s minister of propaganda, who was also in charge of naming things, was one of the advisors ground up by redbear jowls on that fateful day.
After the implementation of this classic holiday, King Ik retired into his castle and outsourced the vast majority of kingdom management to his remaining advisors. Little had been heard from King Ik in the years that followed and he had been largely forgotten. However now the word of his illness and daughter’s existence were the talk of the town and the news was being spread far and wide prompting men and even women to journey from all over the land to compete for the hand of the princess, or foot, if they were into that sort of thing.
As word spread, tales regarding the origins of the royal heir evolved at an equal pace. It was said her mother was an angel who descended from the skies many years ago during the celebration of what was thought at the time to be the official genocide of the redbears. The princess was then allegedly kept secret from the public for the purposes of receiving proper instruction on princess etiquette. This instruction supposedly included numerous lessons based around mastering skills such as diplomacy, proper manners, feigning convincing empathy, keeping one’s opinions to one’s self, and sandwich making.
There were also alternative theories surrounding the princess. One postulated she was not a descendent of the Theik lineage at all, but was instead an apocryphal daughter that Ik V had smuggled in for the purposes of concealing his impotence and thus preserving his status as a dominant male figure. This theory was fishy at best as it would be nonsensical to devote effort to faking an heir only for that heir to be a female bastard, but there were always some who would believe anything that would allow them to laugh at their leader.
Irrespective of her questionable origins, the one unmistakable quality of the princess was her undeniable beauty. She was known to have left the castle and made a public appearance only once. It is said that during this appearance her skin, which was oddly tanned for someone who had apparently never been outside, emitted a light more radiant than that of the sun and her smile was so alluring that a flock of birds splattered themselves all over a tower because they were physically unable to watch where they were going.
She had long blonde hair that cascaded downward, flowing over her shoulders and encompassing her in a sheen of gold down to her hips. Her eyes were a brilliant blue and conveyed a sense of magic and wonder as they gleamed in the daylight like sapphires. Her cheekbones were high and wide, etching a faithful lingering smile and air of friendliness into her visage. Her lips were an ideal color and proportion to adequately convey the notion that she was a healthy and viable individual with which to conduct reproduction activities. Her body also reflected a similar notion. It was insisted by all that no maiden embodied the concepts of beauty, grace, and refinement than the unfairly fair Princess Koey.
Needless to say, women wanted to be her and men wanted to own her. And so it was that nobles, knights, and generally important individuals began to make the trek from far and wide, across treacherous volcanic landscapes, dark forests, and giant chicken infested steppes to make her acquaintance and participate in the bidding war. As a result, the numerous small towns and tiny villages hidden along the main routes began to receive a massive influx of traffic consisting of royal hopefuls, tourists, traders, circus folk, and shady characters who would inform unlikely heroes that all was not as it seemed in the kingdom of Jenair.
ONE
Once Upon a Time in the Middle of Nowhere
Far to the south, across the Dagger Mountains in the lone oasis of the Snake Eye Desert, there lay a small village by the name of Woodwall. The town’s nonsensical positioning in the middle of a barren desert had left it largely isolated from the rest of the country. Traversing the arid landscape to reach the town was a perilous journey on its own. However the danger was worsened by local legends of a giant python that was said to lull travelers into complacency with its adorable big doughy eyes before head butting them into the distance with all its might for no other apparent reason than its own personal enjoyment.
As a result of its isolation the town had been forced to adapt itself into a relatively self-sustaining community, but was not completely devoid of a tourism market. Occasionally visitors would brave the barrens and visit the town with one specific delicacy in mind.
A unique quality of this oasis was that it possessed the only source in all the country of the coveted emdeema fungus; a rare mushroom that was only ever found growing on oasis trees. Upon ingestion, emdeema induced euphoria, vivid hallucinations, and an overwhelming feeling of joy in an individual. The effect was so intense that it made addicts willing to put themselves through the side effects of dysentery, itchy eyeballs, and left-side-only weight gain. However those with the tendency to partake in such narcotics and those who were willing to make long and treacherous journeys did not overlap much, so most of the emdeema users were permanent residents.
As a result of its isolation and drug-addled demographic, the town of Woodwall found itself in a stage of suspended growth. Fortunately, the members of the community who still considered themselves to be working class had been enough to keep the town afloat. From the butchers and bakers to the candlestick makers, they were content to live their lives of modest means and even took pride in their rural community. But with every community there will always be those who don’t quite fit in.
In the heart of the dilapidated building on the south side of the oasis, obscured by the broad palm fronds and his generally unkempt yard, there was a faint glow of the local blacksmith’s forge. Dungar Loloth and every Loloth before him had lived there producing all of the ironware in the town of Woodwall since its inception many generations ago.
Despite their legacy, the Loloths never quite properly meshed into the fabric of the tiny hamlet. Their inherently gruff nature combined with their unabashed contempt for junkies rendered them unable to properly connect with their neighbors. Luckily for them, all denizens of the desert had a need for iron tools whether or not they were fond of their supplier. Since no one else in town even knew a vise from a pair of tongs, they remained captive customers to the monopolized market.
After the death of his father, Gundar, a few years ago, Dungar became the only remaining member of the Loloth bloodline; thereupon at the ripe old age of thirty-four he also became the sole heir to the family business. Like his father, he had a mane of dull curly carmine hair and matching beard which he had to keep short due to it constantly catching fire from the forge.
What he lacked in height was compensated for by his broad shoulders and stocky build, but his most prominent feature was what were referred to as his crazy eyes.
They were a pale blue which seemed to capture the light in any room and vibrantly stand out against his weather-beaten skin. They always had a look that could strike a feeling of unease in whoever peered into them, which gave him the impression of someone who could snap at any moment. This notion was further supported by his resting facial expression being perceived as one of perpetual disdain.
He bore the other classic Loloth features as well, particularly the broad flattened nose and thin lips which were frequently curled upward to reveal teeth during his many moments of agitation. Whatever business the Loloths lost due to their intimidating visage, however, was regained by their quality iron products and lack of competitors.
Unfortunately, despite upholding his family’s reputation for superior craftsmanship business had been at an all-time low for the blacksmith in recent years. The steadily waning Woodwall ironware market then all but dissolved when that hippie wizard showed up in town flaunting his drug-addled discovery of how to transmute wood into diamond, leaving Dungar hopelessly unable to compete with the diamondware’s aesthetic appeal and ease of production.
Consequently, Dungar was forced to begin relying on the makeshift inn he converted his home into when business first began to decline. Originally meant to merely supplement his income, it became his fulltime profession while he looked forward to the day Rainchild Earthumper the Wise inevitably died from an overdose or ramifications of trying to connect with nature.
Or if he just simply left, but that’s not as gratifying.
The inn’s business, albeit not substantial, was still a definitive improvement on the small income of his remaining blacksmithing business. Dungar quickly came to find no customer was more loyal and reliable than an alcoholic once he had liquor on his menu. As long as he kept the booze flowing there would always be food on his table.
Despite it still not being his ideal trade, the blacksmith fit quite well into the role of an innkeeper. His years working the forge had tempered his body into a condition as hardy as the very iron he folded. And although he was not a particularly sociable fellow, his inherently honorable nature coupled with his sturdy physique allowed him to foster his inn’s reputation for fair prices, safety from theft, and swift defenestration of any who opted to not follow the rules or keep the peace.
With the recent business of a potential true love and/or meal ticket up for grabs, the many travelers making the journey to the kingdom created a marked increase in guests to his inn. As they came and went, he found himself actually beginning to mildly enjoy their company. The newfound public interest in politics and current events was a breath of fresh air compared to the usual sanctimonious ramblings of Rainchild that everyone would otherwise be eating up.
Since this marriage business began, many guests of all walks of life had shown up at his door. One was a man of wealthy means who clearly believed he was the best candidate for royal ascension. He traveled with a caravan of several vehicles holding many different exotic goods as well as his own personal detachment of archers. He also had a man covered in leaves whose only duty was apparently to stand very still and pretend to be a potted plant.
Another guest was a mild mannered little old man in shabby clothes who had been making his way up from the valley in the south. He presented himself as a chauffeur and was working his way towards the kingdom, stopping off at any little town he came across in search of someone who would commission a ride from him, a venture that was not going well since he didn’t seem to understand that chauffeurs were generally expected to provide the cart as well as drive it.
Dungar had virtually no regard for trivial traits like ambition and social status. All guests received an equal amount of apathy and disinterest from him. He would consent to idle chit chat with any who graced his tavern with their coin, but primarily felt compelled to keep to himself and pay no interest to whatever their intent and wherever they intended it. So long as tabs were paid and disturbances were not caused, he was willing to accommodate any and all. That being said, the odd forcible removal was something he discerned an occasional pleasure from providing.
However today would not be business as usual for the pub proprietor, for yet another soon-to-be guest lay on the horizon and friendliness was not in the aura he was projecting. Quite the opposite in fact; this man had clearly seen some shit.
TWO
Get Off My Porch
After opening the inn and administering a size thirteen boot suppository to the child drawing graffiti on his front door, Dungar began to carry out his daily ritual of setting up his practice. This practice of setting up practice consisted of little more than unlatching the saloon doors of his entrance and then setting out the stools in front of his bar.
The bar was the only area within the inn for which he had any pride or affection. The walls were kept completely free of any paintings, lamps, or windows. Instead, every square inch was covered in intricate designs he hand carved by himself. Often they took the form of patterns tracing the grains of the wood, but some portions of the wall almost appeared to be murals of sorts. With a trained eye one could spot pictures here and there such as dragons or knights. The royal crest of the Theik royal family was also very plain to see carved right above the liquor cabinet, particularly the firefin piranha on the shield. One could also not help but notice many carvings of what appeared to be wizards hanging from trees and being burned at stakes hidden within the patterns.
Shortly after he had set out all the barstools a tell-tale shrill squeak of the door alerted him to his first, and often only, customer of the day. Ever so slowly the wizened old man shambled his way into the bar, leaning heavily on a cane that looked even older than he was.
Mister Jitters, my friend. How are you this fine morning?
Dungar greeted enthusiastically.
Mister Jitters raised his non-cane hand and smiled a toothless grin before replying with an equally enthusiastic Mrgrrglrglrlllrblr!
For as long as Dungar had known Mister Jitters he had never heard the man make any noise that sounded like a coherent language. He had no idea what the man’s name was, or anything about him really. The name Jitters
was merely derived from the fact that every single limb on the man’s body shook with violent tremors on a relatively constant basis, provoking the assumption that he was likely very ill or incredibly cold. The former seemed to be the most likely explanation, as Mister Jitters appeared to be at a very advanced age to the point that it’s questionable how he was even still alive.
However, irrespective of his appearance or conditions, Jitters had been coming to the inn regularly since the day it opened and, after much trial and error trying to figure out what the man was ordering, he became a steady consumer of every drop of aquavit that the innkeeper could produce. After that, the innkeeper began to genuinely cherish the company of the curious old man.
Jitters would patiently listen to anything he had to say, occasionally even responding with one of his usual guttural croaks. Occasionally Dungar found himself questioning the man’s sanity or lucidity, wondering if the man even was aware of himself or understood anything said to him, but those thoughts were usually quickly dismissed once he remembered how much money Jitters has dropped in his bar. Of course then that thought would lead him to question where a seemingly senile centenarian is getting all this money from, but he doubted he would receive an intelligible answer if he asked.
Unfortunately, Dungar’s soft spot for Mister Jitters was not usually shared by other patrons. For starters, his shaking condition caused his tankard to clang loudly against the table and often spill its contents on nearby bar dwellers. Secondly, while personal hygiene was not very well maintained by most people in these times, Jitters’ sanitary shortfalls were second to none. The stench that emanated from his pores was foul to say the least and deadly to say the most. Usually he would take it upon himself to simply retire into a corner away from the vicinity of the other bar dwellers. However on this day he opted not to move a muscle when the latest traveler graced the inn with his presence.
Dungar just happened to be out behind the inn fetching a rum barrel when the saloon doors swung open revealing a disheveled looking man wrapped in a tattered and soot-stained green cloak with the hood up. A shady looking character if there ever was one. Under the hood you could see his pronounced chin adorned with a thick bushy soul patch jutting out. He had a severe underbite which caused his lower lip to protrude noticeably farther than the upper which did wonders to pronounce the sneer on his face. He surveyed the inside of the bar, tracing the wood carvings with his eyes until they fell on the shaky old grey-haired man sitting at the bar, his tankard jingling loudly against the table.
The stranger removed his hood to reveal the face of a middle aged man with narrow eyes and a receding hairline. He had a noticeable scar underneath his left eyebrow which followed along the outline of his eye socket. Slowly he made his way to the bar, calmly and deliberately putting a little extra effort into each step as if to enhance the sound of his heavy boots banging against the floor.
As he reached the bar he took the stool next to Jitters, taking a moment to size the man up before his eyes made their way back to the tankard which continued to clank against the counter in rhythm with Jitters’ tremors. After a brief twinge of disgust crossed his face he turned his attention to the other side of the counter, which was still empty.
Oi!
he bellowed at the empty space behind the bar, I’m thirsty!
His voice echoed in the silence of the empty tavern. It was hoarse with a faint rumble, he probably smoked a lot. The man scanned the bar once again but nothing had changed. He saw no shadows moving in the back nor did he hear anything except for the continued oscillating clashing of Jitters’ mug against the counter.
His patience finally worn, the man raised his hand and slammed Jitters’ clanging container against the table. Head still facing forward, Jitters’ quivering continued but the room was now completely silent.
The stranger’s eyes were now transfixed on the sheepish old man with a look of extreme antipathy. Narrowing his eyes he drew a breath to speak but stopped short when he felt a monstrous hand roughly clasp his shoulder. As he turned his head the stranger found himself face to face with the crazy eyes of the bearded brute looming over him. Seeing the man frozen in a wide-eyed expression before him, Dungar’s hostile gaze softened and he chuckled to himself as he walked around to the other side of the bar.
By the time Dungar had made his way back over to the liquor side, the stranger’s anxiety had decreased and he appeared comfortable again; which is why it came as a huge surprise to him when the innkeeper reached over the bar, grabbed a handful of his shirt, and jerked him out of his seat and halfway over the counter. Once again the stranger found himself staring into the pair of crazy eyes as they stared back at him. As their eyes locked and their noses touched a slight grin formed on Dungar’s face, and with audible amusement he growled at the man.
Listen to me very carefully there, stranger. If you touch Mister Jitters’s mug again then I will pin your head against the bar, patiently wait for Mister Jitters to finish his beverage, then I’m gonna take that tankard and I’m gonna drive it through your skull. Do I make myself clear?
Crystal.
The stranger sputtered, staring at the ceiling.
Casually, Dungar tossed him backwards onto his seat. Despite the brief ordeal that just ensued, the stranger’s resolve did not appear to have weakened. He continued to eye his bartender curiously with a look of slight disesteem.
You folks don’t have much law around here do you?
The stranger mused.
Within these walls I am the law.
Dungar decreed. Now I suggest you order a drink.
The stranger grumbled something incoherent under his breath. Fine then. I’ll take the strongest, most potent, and cheapest drink you’ve got.
Eyes gleaming, Dungar smirked at him. Unless you want a tall glass of my piss, I suggest you order something else.
At this, his guest sighed briefly before smirking up at the bartender. Nodding his head towards Jitters he then mumbled I’ll have what he’s having then, just give me a damned drink.
Tensions rapidly decreased within the inn as the alcohol began to flow. Soon the initial contention between Dungar and his guests had been all but forgotten.
Anyone ever tell you you’re a real shady lookin’ character?
Dungar asked, as he slid yet another freshly filled tankard towards the cloaked man.
More than you might think.
So do you have a name, stranger?
Seems you already know it.
He retorted, with an inebriated chortle.
Dungar paused cleaning a glass and gave him a puzzled look. Stranger?
Stranger chuckled again.
Your name is Stranger … ?
Dungar repeated with skepticism as he set the glass down.
Where I come from children are named based off of the impression their parents have of them.
Stranger explained nonchalantly. My father didn’t want any kids.
He added with a sigh, still not looking up from his mug.
After a silent and awkward pause, he looked up expectantly. Dungar pondered the information provided to him briefly before he shrugged and resumed cleaning his glass.
Ah I’ve heard worse.
He dismissed. So Daddy didn’t love ya, it’s not as if you … I dunno … Watched an evil wizard destroy your home and murder your family or something.
Stranger sat silently giving him a blank stare.
… Did you?
Dungar asked awkwardly, detecting the tension in the room.
No, no, certainly not.
Stranger admitted, eyes returning to his beverage. I didn’t sit around and watch as it happened.
Once again Dungar ceased polishing his glass and looked at Stranger, this time visibly agitated. Stranger met his look with his own defiant one.
Come again?
You heard me.
Dungar frowned at the offended man before him. His eyes then moved to the clasp on Stranger’s cloak. It was made of cheap iron, but bore the shape of a kingdom’s crest. Twin daggers crossed beneath a panther.
You’re from the city of Farrawee?
Maybe. Might be better to call it the remains of the city of Farrawee now.
Stranger grumbled mournfully.
Quit being such a pity whore and either tell me what happened or don’t!
I thought innkeepers were supposed to be wise and compassionate.
My job is simply to get you as drunk as your coin purse will allow.
Dungar informed him firmly. Sympathy is not a service I sell. Either drink until you forget your problems or maybe go send word to King Ik pleading for assistance against whatever your problem is.
HAH.
Stranger scoffed loudly into the inn. As if King Ik could possibly help my home.
At this, Dungar grabbed hold of his cloak again. I may not be the most patriotic guy around these parts, but if you come into my bar and start belittling my monarch then you’re gonna have a bad time.
Stranger stared back into Dungar’s crazy eyes, but they no longer had any effect on him.
Your king can’t even save his own kingdom!
he snapped.
Dungar’s pique briefly subsided in favor of amazement. Brazenness in the face of immediate physical danger was not something he witnessed in his clientele very often, so intimidation was a tactic that was usually effective. He glanced at Jitters but as usual the fidgety old man seemed completely oblivious to everything happening around him. Dungar turned his attention back towards the stranger.
Well then, it’s been a while since we had a customer choose to leave through the window.
With that, he wrapped a steely arm around Stranger’s neck and proceeded to drag him up the stairs to the second floor. Stranger kicked his feet against the floor and clawed at the arm but it was to no avail.
No you don’t understand!
He choked.
Perhaps you should help me understand then.
Dungar quipped, not slowing his pace.
Stranger continued to pull at his arm. Between wheezes and assorted choking sounds the only words caught were can’t breathe!
As they reached the landing at the top of the stairs, he kicked open the nearest door and hurled the now barely conscious man into it, causing him to land in a pile of dust. From floor to ceiling the room was filled with broken furniture and other assorted junk that Dungar had collected. Carved into the heap of debris there was a path leading across the room to a lone window frame on the far wall.
This was no ordinary window. This was his favorite window in all the land. It was from this window that he tossed cheats, troublemakers, and other various miscreants who evoked his instinct to impose his own brand of order. The glass was long missing and the frame had seen much abuse from previous incidents wherein the victim was too fat to fit or Dungar was too drunk to aim his tosses properly.
Looking out the window filled one’s eyes with a wonderful hilltop view of the edge