Under the Bodhi Tree: Buddha's Original Vision of Dependent Co-arising
By Buddhadasa
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Under the Bodhi Tree takes us back to the principles at the heart of Buddha’s teachings—conditionality and dependent co-arising. Ajahn Buddhadasa Bhikkhu makes the case for dependent co-arising as a natural law, and builds a compelling presentation from there of Buddhist philosophy, meditation, and practice. Basing himself squarely on the Buddha’s own words as preserved in the Pali Canon, he brings clarity and simplicity to what is typically a thorny philosophical knot. By returning dependent co-arising to its central place in Buddhist theory and practice, Ajahn Buddhadasa provides perspective on the Buddha’s own insights and awakening.
Under the Bodhi Tree is another excellent entry from one of the most renowned Buddhist thinkers of modern times.
For students who wish to study further, a companion guide is available from liberationpark.org.
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Under the Bodhi Tree - Buddhadasa
A RENOWNED BUDDHIST MASTER DIGS INTO THE IDEA OF INTERDEPENDENCE — THE VERY CORE OF THE BUDDHA’S TEACHINGS
Under the Bodhi Tree takes us back to the principles at the heart of Buddha’s teachings — conditionality and dependent co-arising. Ajahn Buddhadāsa Bhikkhu makes the case for dependent co-arising as a natural law, and builds a compelling presentation from there of Buddhist philosophy, meditation, and practice. Basing himself squarely on the Buddha’s own words as preserved in the Pāli Canon, he brings clarity and simplicity to what is typically a thorny philosophical knot. By returning dependent co-arising to its central place in Buddhist theory and practice, Ajahn Buddhadāsa provides perspective on the Buddha’s own insights and awakening.
Under the Bodhi Tree is another excellent entry from one of the most renowned Buddhist thinkers of modern times.
AJAHN BUDDHADĀSA BHIKKHU (1906–93) is perhaps the most influential Buddhist teacher in the history of Thailand. In 1932 he founded Suan Mokkhabalārāma, the first modern forest monastery in Thailand. Since the 1960s his work has helped inspire a new generation of socially concerned individuals throughout the world. He is the author of Mindfulness with Breathing and Heartwood of the Bodhi Tree.
The Buddha, recently awakened, remained seated at the base of the Bodhi tree, near the bank of the Nerañjarā River, in the vicinity of Uruvelā. The Splendid One occupied a single seat beneath the Bodhi tree for all of seven days savoring the joy of liberation.
At that time, the Splendid One reflected upon paṭiccasamuppāda forward and backward throughout the first . . . middle . . . and final watches of the night . . . and uttered this verse:
Whenever dhammas manifest clearly
to a supreme one ardent in focused contemplation,
this excellency incinerates Māra and his armies
just as the rising sun vanquishes darkness.
— Vin.i.1 (Mahāvagga) and Udāna 1:1–3
(Bodhi Suttas 1–3)
Contents
Translator’s Preface and Acknowledgments
1.Buddhism Is Natural Truth
2.Independently Investigating Causes and Conditions
3.Training in Direct Experience of Freedom
4.Beyond Positive and Negative
5.The Natural Law of Conditionality
6.Conquering Ignorance, Selfishness, and Superstition
7.Dependent Co-arising: Birth into Suffering
8.Dimensions and Streams of Dependent Co-arising
9.Dependent Co-arising for Children
10.Three Existences Are the Basis of Self
11.Heavens and Hells
12.Damming the Streams of Suffering
13.Dependent Quenching
14.Training Mindfulness through Mindfulness with Breathing
15.Dependent Co-arising Controversies
16.The Beginning and End of Spiritual Life
A Guide to Source Texts for Under the Bodhi Tree
Notes
Glossary
Bibliography
Further Reading
Index
About the Author
Translator’s Preface and Acknowledgments
Setting and Provenance
The morning bell sounds through the coconut palm grove containing Suan Mokkh’s International Dhamma Hermitage at 4 a.m. Just inland from the Gulf of Siam, the climate is warm and tropical, though relatively cool so early in the day. The monthly meditation course’s participants awake, dress, and assemble for a mile-long walk in the dark. As in many of the months between February 1986 and October 1991, Ajahn Buddhadāsa will be speaking during this retreat. Many of those filing down the laterite road between marshes and mangroves, know little if anything about the octogenarian monk they are about to meet, though he is the founder of the Garden of Liberation,
Suan Mokkh in Thai, where they’ve come to learn about Buddhism and meditation. Perhaps a third of them are brand new to Buddhism, having stumbled into this retreat from beaches in southern Thailand. Responding to the hospitality of their Thai hosts and the kindness of the retreat guides, mostly Westerners like themselves, they good humoredly follow the program.
The line of meditators enters under the large trees of Suan Mokkh proper. By 5 a.m. they are seated on concrete benches outside a simple two-story building. An elderly, rotund monk slowly walks to his own seat with the aid of a cane, followed by a dog who seems to own the place. As he arranges his robes and legs, a skinny American monk takes a seat beside him. After clearing his throat, Ajahn Buddhadāsa begins with a brief welcome and then launches into his topic. The American — myself — translates first sentence by sentence, then a few sentences at a time, and eventually minutes at a time. If the translator leaves anything out, Ajahn Buddhadāsa repeats it. Occasionally, he interrupts the translation with a cough and correction. As the American monk has been translating like this for over two years he is only slightly discomfited by the corrections, grateful for the warning coughs.
Ajahn Buddhadāsa is in no hurry, having over a week to work with. Assuming that his audience knows little about Buddhism and is therefore free of the preconceptions that many born-Buddhists carry, he lays a foundation of what Buddhism is and is not. Far more familiar with Western philosophy and literature than other Thai forest masters, he works around our assumptions about isms
(ideologies), philosophies, and religion. Understanding religion
in a way that fits with the Buddha’s teaching rather than cramming Buddhism into Western categories, he explains what sort of religion Buddhism is. He even broaches the topic of God,
although the American translator has informed him that few of this audience believe in the God Ajahn Buddhadāsa has read about in The Bible and known from Muslim friends in southern Thailand. His two introductory talks conclude with the coolness and freedom that is the purpose of Buddhism.
In the third talk, he takes up his primary theme, dependent co-arising (paṭiccasamuppāda). He explains how this unifying thread runs through all of the Buddha’s teaching and points to its deepest insights through the remainder of the seven talks. Each talk lasts two hours, including translation. A few dogs wander in and out. Dawn rises about halfway through with roosters serenading. In the background, monks leave on almsround. At 7 a.m. the retreatants return to the International Dhamma Hermitage for breakfast, followed by a full day of meditation practice along with instruction in mindfulness with breathing (ānāpānasati). Ajahn Buddhadāsa liked to send them on their morning walk
with advice such as Walk without a walker.
Dependent Co-arising in Buddhism
The Buddha’s vast corpus of teaching is anchored by a handful of core insights and principles. He stated that his teaching is only concerned with distress, dissatisfaction, or suffering (dukkha) and its quenching (nirodha).
Friends, there are groups of wanderers and priests that misrepresent me with deceitful, empty, baseless, insincere words: The wanderer Gotama, who leads people astray to their ruin, lays out a creed of the vacancy, destruction, and nonexistence of beings.
These wanderers and priests misrepresent me with deceitful, empty, baseless, insincere words because I have never said such things. You’ll never hear me saying such things.
In the past as well as now, friends, I teach only dukkha and the remainderless quenching of dukkha.¹
This core concern is investigated through the prism of a subtle understanding of conditionality (idappaccayatā) — that everything happens, changes, and ceases dependent on other things that share the same essenceless nature.
When this exists, this naturally exists;
due to the arising of this, this consequently arises.
When this does not exist, this naturally does not exist;
due to the quenching of this, this consequently is quenched.²
When we view ourselves and our world this way — more as processes than entities, as natural law — we see the Dhamma, we see the Buddha.
One who sees dependent co-arising sees the Dhamma.³
One who sees the Dhamma sees the Buddha.⁴
Citing these statements of the Buddha, Ajahn Buddhadāsa continually reminded and emphasized how dependent co-arising (paṭiccasamuppāda) is the very core of Buddha’s teaching. It provides the definitive perspective of the Buddha’s insights and awakening. Realize dependent co-arising and one realizes the natural truth that sets life free. Consequently, whether informing foreigner visitors new to Buddhism or reminding Thais born into Buddhism, Ajahn Buddhadāsa insisted that dependent co-arising is central to the Buddha’s experience and teaching, and therefore to our own study and practice. Having taken these words to heart, Ajahn Buddhadāsa endeavored to return dependent co-arising to a central place in Dhamma teaching and practice.
Having committed his life to service of the Buddha, he felt a responsibility to do everything in his power to proclaim the teaching of dependent co-arising, even when warned by elders in the monastic hierarchy that ordinary people will not be able to understand. Further, he thought getting to the core of the Buddha’s original awakened understanding of dependent co-arising was more important than adhering to later orthodoxies, let alone pieties and dogmas. Lastly, he believed in making a teaching as accessible as possible without watering it down. These are tasks Ajahn Buddhadāsa accepted as a Servant of the Buddha.
Thus it made perfect sense for Ajahn Buddhadāsa to introduce foreign meditators attending monthly retreats at Suan Mokkh, many of them brand new to Buddhism, to core Dhamma teachings that were more often than not centered on dependent co-arising. He felt that such newcomers, unencumbered by traditional Buddhist beliefs, yet familiar with scientific thought, should understand what is central and unique to Buddhism. He skipped the articles of faith that appeal to traditional Buddhists and went for the heart. This book captures that approach.
Among traditional assumptions about dependent co-arising is the belief that this teaching is too difficult for lay people, that they will get confused and be lead astray by it. After all, the Buddha told Ānanda, "Dependent co-arising both has the outward appearance of being profound and is truly profound. Through not understanding deeply and not penetratively realizing this Dhamma of dependent co-arising, minds of the many kinds of sentient beings are like a tangled skein of thread, are entangled like thread all tied up in knots, are like muñja grass and pabbaja grass all matted together."⁵ As beings, we remain trapped in suffering and distress because we do not understand dependent co-arising. Investigating dependent co-arising is crucial to liberation from dukkha, which is the sole purpose of Buddha’s teaching. This makes it incumbent upon teachers to make this vital teaching available to all sincere practitioners, including those without monastic status. Rather than taking its profundity as a reason to be silent about dependent co-arising, Ajahn Buddhadāsa took it as a challenge to do everything in his power to make it better known and understood.
Dependent co-arising is also about not-self or selflessness (anattā) and voidness or emptiness (suññatā). Ajahn Buddhadāsa’s Heartwood of the Bodhi Tree surveys the role of emptiness in the Pāli suttas of early Buddhism. Under the Bodhi Tree provides the complementary perspectives of conditionality (idappaccayatā) and dependent co-arising found in those suttas. All of these help us recognize that nothing can be found to be truly self (a substantial, independent lasting something that is me) and therefore nothing is worth clinging to as me
or mine.
This is what Buddha’s Dhamma is truly about, rather than religiosity, moralism, tradition, clericalism, philosophy, or belonging. For many decades Ajahn Buddhadāsa did what he could to cut through such secondary concerns and focus on the core meaning and purpose of dependent co-arising. The current work expands that effort for English readers.
Ajahn Buddhadāsa’s Dependent Co-arising
Ajahn Buddhadāsa’s work in Theravāda Buddhism has been to recover the core perspectives that have been ignored, lost, or obscured as Buddha-Dhamma was encumbered with the trappings of religious rituals, moralistic beliefs, afterlife speculations, donation-seeking rationalizations, and quick-fix meditation techniques. As a clerical caste emerged over the centuries following the Buddha’s passing, Dhamma was segregated into Dhamma for those identified as renunciate wanderers (bhikkhus and bhikkunīs) and Dhamma for householders (upāsakas and upāsikās). Further, a moralizing tone crept in and emphasis began to shift from liberation in this life to earning a better life after death. While such developments may have their place, something crucial was muddled in the process. Ajahn Buddhadāsa did not accept the segregation of practice and the bias underlying it, nor the superficial moralizing that overlooked the subtler perspectives found throughout the Pāli suttas.
After intentionally flunking out of the Thai monastic education system — he never wanted a position in a big Bangkok monastery anyway — Ajahn Buddhadāsa moved to an abandoned temple near his natal village, dug deep into the suttas, and refined his studies in the crucible of his own practice. Along the way, he discovered dependent co-arising as he thought the Buddha intended, rather than how traditional, pedantic orthodoxy has interpreted it. This required exploring dependent co-arising in light of other core teachings: "only suffering (dukkha) and the quenching of suffering,
nothing is worth clinging to (as me or mine),"⁶ voidness, thusness, and the middle way. Most of all, one’s understanding must be practical rather than metaphysical, ontological, or cosmological; a matter of experience rather than merely accepting the assertions of authorities; and must lead to liberation in this life.
To aid his investigation, he compiled over eight hundred pages of passages translated from the Pāli suttas that concern dependent co-arising in one way or another.⁷ These were published as Paṭiccasamuppāda from His Own Lips, a volume that allows one to read the wonderful variety of perspectives and details on dependent co-arising in its own terms, largely free of later interpretive assumptions and biases. In translating the Pāli into Thai, Ajahn Buddhadāsa left key terms in Pāli rather than rendering them with an interpretative twist. For example, consciousness (viññāṇa) remains just consciousness, and is not twisted into relinking consciousness,
a term the Buddha himself never used. Also, birth is just birth (jāti), and need not be assumed to mean rebirth
; after all, there is no re-
in jāti. If a sutta passage was somewhat ambiguous, he left it to the reader to explore the ambiguity. His own views were appended as comments. This book includes a number of such passages translated from his Thai translations.
Choosing to put the orthodox Theravāda commentaries back in their rightful place — secondary to the Pāli suttas, yet potentially helpful in understanding the originals — left him open to constant sniping from those who had been raised on and never questioned the commentarial system. The commentaries had come to be accepted as the Buddha’s word, rather than remembered as derived from the original teachings. In response to those who felt threatened by his approach, Ajahn Buddhadāsa insisted he was hewing to the Buddha’s intent — liberation from dukkha. His critique of the commentarial system does not take up much space in this book, as the original talks were given to a largely Western audience unfamiliar with the Pāli suttas and their commentaries. It was not as necessary to clear up traditional obfuscations for his Western audience, as was usually the case with Thai audiences. Nevertheless, he does refer to that system and readers will have some sense of the controversy that existed in relation to it.
Certain writers who adhere to the commentarial understanding of dependent co-arising, which spans at least three physical lives, often warn and scold those who do not follow their beliefs. While the better scholars among them have valid points that serious students of Buddhism should not ignore, there is a tendency among such scholars to over-simplify, if not flatly misunderstand, critiques of their beliefs. To imply, as has happened, that thoughtful teachers such as Ajahn Buddhadāsa are amoral, irresponsible, or heretical smacks of the authoritarianism that often goes with scholarly hubris and patriarchal positions. Rather than dogmas and defenses of the faith, Ajahn Buddhadāsa advocated reasoned debate and honest disagreement with a spirit that never forgets that we are aiming for the end of suffering as soon as possible. Perhaps none of us truly and fully understand dependent co-arising and can enjoy exploring it for the rest of our lives, as the Buddha appeared to have done. Careful, unbiased translations of the relevant suttas are crucial here.
Exponents of the the three lifetimes interpretation
assert that it is consistent with anattā or not-self. Ajahn Buddhadāsa found their explanations unconvincing, as they have not escaped the implications of something that remains the same as it carries over from one life to the next. This vehicle for karmic results smells rather like a self (attā) — that is, an individual, separate and lasting entity. Such presentations fail to explain, although they claim to, how karma works over lifetimes without implying such an entity. In Ajahn Buddhadāsa’s view, the karma and rebirth emphasizing approach sacrifices the liberating value of a not-self understanding of dependent co-arising for a moral version of dependent co-arising. It may conventionally be correct from an ethical perspective, and therefore may be of value, but it misses out from an ultimate perspective. Ajahn Buddhadāsa found this unfortunate.
There is no doubt that passages that describe rebirth
appear in the suttas.⁸ What are we to make of them? Do we take them to be literally, materially true? If so, how do we deal with the fact that they seem to contradict the notion of not-self? Do we fudge one to protect the other? Are the suttas any less contradictory when we read them less literally? Do suttas present ultimate truth or conventional truth? Might there be value in understanding dependent co-arising in a variety of ways, wherein no single way of understanding it, even Ajahn Buddhadāsa’s, is the sole and whole truth?
Ajahn Buddhadāsa is not the only intelligent, thoughtful student of Buddha-Dhamma to have questioned an apparent logical contradiction in the standard view, though he was the earliest and most prominent of Theravāda teachers to do so. He had discussed such contradictions privately with a personal confidant of his who enjoyed a very high rank in the monastic hierarchy, but his confidant would not discuss it publicly. In recent decades, a growing number of scholars and Dhamma students, lay and monastic, Asian and Western, have raised the same questions in various ways as well. Fortunately, when those who raise such questions have studied the matter at least as much as traditional apologists have, dismissing such questions on the grounds that the questioners simply do not understand the matter is no longer accepted as an honest response.
The Buddha was not one to fall back on mysticism. Ajahn Buddhadāsa recognized that religious teachings, including the Buddha’s teaching, use ordinary language in ways that express perspectives and realities less obvious than the perspectives and realities that ordinary language is typically used to express. Fundamentalist minds seem unable or unwilling to consider this natural fact of language and instead seek to interpret all teachings literally. Ajahn Buddhadāsa, being more creative and skillful, recognized two levels in the Buddha’s language: an ordinary level of language that speaks of people and beings, and a Dhamma level of language that expresses not-self and dependent co-arising. Sensitivity to language and the meanings of key terms, which have changed over time, is central to understanding the vital teaching on dependent co-arising, in particular.
In short, Ajahn Buddhadāsa consistently read the suttas from a not-self perspective and was consequently the first major figure in Thai Buddhism to publicly question the many lifetimes view of dependent co-arising that has long dominated Theravāda teaching. One need not agree with him in order to appreciate the serious reflection he has given the matter. If seeing dependent co-arising is to see the Dhamma, Ajahn Buddhadāsa’s perspectives challenge us to examine whether we actually see dependent co-arising or not. May this translation of his work serve the ending of egoism and suffering.
The Process of Creating the Text
As with Ajahn Buddhadāsa’s earlier book Mindfulness with Breathing, this book was edited from transcripts of live oral translations.⁹ The transcripts were compared with the audio recordings of Ajahn Buddhadāsa’s original Thai discourses to make sure that nothing significant was omitted and that elaborations introduced into the translation were not inappropriate. The book that you hold in your hands includes everything he said. The natural redundancies that come with extemporaneous, oral teaching have been somewhat consolidated, but some redundancy is retained as a natural reflection of Ajahn Buddhadāsa’s style.
As editor, I worked to shape these talks into a book with the help of friends acknowledged below. I have added chapter titles and section headings to make the book easier to navigate for readers. Endnotes have been added to the text to mark the terms and principles discussed within the chapters, and are, as much as possible, comprised of translations or paraphrases from other talks and writings of Ajahn Buddhadāsa. At times, I have relied on my own memory and understanding of his teaching, and to the best of my knowledge the explanations are in line with his understanding of Buddha-Dhamma and life.
I have resisted suggestions to soften occasional provocative language that might be jarring for some Western readers, for example, stupid
and foolish.
I would rather preserve his own words, as Ajahn Buddhadāsa is saying important things in his own way. Over polishing and prettying would result in someone else’s book, and a more common Dharma book at that.
The original talk and translation was a collaborative process. It usually began with Tan Ajahn, as we usually referred to him there, thinking about his theme for an upcoming retreat series and