Faulty Predictions: Stories
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In Karin Lin-Greenberg’s Faulty Predictions, young characters try to find their way in the world and older characters confront regrets. In “Editorial Decisions,” members of the editorial board of a high school literary magazine are witnesses to an unspeakable act of violence. Two grandmothers, both immigrants from China, argue over the value of their treasures at a filming of Antiques Roadshow in “Prized Possessions.” In “A Good Brother,” a sister forces her brother to accompany her to the Running of the Brides at Filene’s Basement. A city bus driver adopts a pig that has been brought onto the bus by rowdy college students in “Designated Driver.”
The stories in Faulty Predictions take place in locales as diverse as small-town Ohio, the mountains of western North Carolina, and the plains of Kansas. Lin-Greenberg provides insight into the human condition over a varied cross section of geography, age, and culture. Although the characters are often faced with obstacles and challenges, the stories also capture moments of optimism and hope.
Karin Lin-Greenberg
KARIN LIN-GREENBERG’s fiction has appeared in literary journals including the Antioch Review, Epoch, Kenyon Review Online, and North American Review. She lives and teaches creative writing in upstate New York.
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- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5This is a group of short stories set in the US, and the title of the book is also the title of one of the stories. And, to be fair to this review, it’s hard to win high points from me in a collection of short stories since in fiction I am first and foremost a novel reader. If I were to rate the stories individually, the stories themselves would get between 1 and 5 stars, but for the overall book 2 ½ stars. There were more 1 and 2 star stories than 4 and 5. On part of the jacket is written, “Lin-Greenberg provides insight into the human condition across a varied cross section of geography, age, and culture.” I’d say yes, but biased. At times the insights were quite excellent, particularly when dealing with things I suspect are closer to Lin-Greenberg’s own experiences, but one of the reasons I’ve given this two stars through all of it there is a clear bias toward liberals tending to be kinder and more giving and conservatives selfish and bigoted. Perhaps because I don’t ascribe to any set political group and therefore have a different bias, I’ve seen all four of those traits across the board, although not necessarily in all people. I suspect Lin-Greenberg has as well, but these are the characters she has chosen to write.If you are a fan of literary short fiction, you may well like this book more than I did. To be honest, I chose it for a reading challenge that included reading a book by an author who shares my first name. Since I am neither a fan of thrillers (Karin Slaughter, who may be an excellent writer, but that’s not my cup of tea) nor romance novels (I found more than one of those) and Lin-Greenberg is the first I found where I thought I might find a closer match.
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Faulty Predictions - Karin Lin-Greenberg
Editorial Decisions
We were fifteen, sixteen, seventeen. We met on Wednesday afternoons at 3 p.m. in the squishy orange chairs in the corner of the school library where the sun streamed in through large windows. We were an editorial board, and we liked this term very much—we thought of how good it would look on our college applications under the word Activities.
That year we named our literary magazine Semicolon; we found beauty in the semicolon, which we deemed underused and underappreciated, especially by our classmates, the ones who couldn’t tell the difference between a colon and a semicolon if their lives depended on it. Soon we would be off to Georgetown and Dartmouth and Wellesley and Stanford. We would become English majors. We gossiped about how our classmates, those who never properly grasped English grammar, would go to large, overcrowded state schools.
This is how our magazine worked: we accepted anonymous submissions from students in our school, we took turns reading the submissions aloud, then we discussed them and voted on what we would allow into our magazine. Somehow every issue contained mostly work by the editorial board. It’s completely fair,
we said. The submissions are read anonymously.
Yet we could always sense when a submission had been written by one of us—maybe because the author got suddenly quiet, stared at the rest of the editorial board with wide, expectant eyes, nervously rocked back and forth until a decision had been made. But we told ourselves the magazine consisted of mostly our own work because our writing was just better, more vivid, cut closer to the soul than everyone else’s.
There were words we liked, words we sought out in the submissions: malaise, chaos, ennui, angst, brokenhearted. Here is the first poem we accepted for the fall issue:
My brokenhearted heart
beats
onward
like a soldier
m-a-r-c-h-i-n-g
and I wonder
how many
more
years
of
this
chaos
my soul
can
endure.
We knew brilliance when we saw it. We gasped at the poignancy, the universality of the message. We especially liked the word choice.
Later, when we went to college, we learned to love other words: patriarchy, Foucault, hegemony, Derrida, pastiche, postmodern. We loved the word postmodern.
It was like a Swiss Army knife, good for helping us out of jams, multipurpose. Examples: (1) You don’t understand my student documentary film because it’s postmodern. It’s not meant to be understood.
(2) "Moby-Dick is a very postmodern novel employing the technique of pastiche. (3)
No, Mother, I did not learn to dress like a hobo at college. This mismatching is an intentional postmodern statement."
Each fall, we needed to replace the seniors on our staff whom we’d lost to college. This is how we chose: we asked all interested parties to write a three-page essay about a story or poem that was in the last issue of our magazine. We asked for a close critical analysis, but what we really wanted, what we were hungry for, was praise; we wanted to hear that we’d put together a magazine that rivaled the New Yorker. Unlike our submissions, these applications were not submitted anonymously. We wanted to make sure each person we chose was qualified in every way; we wanted to make sure our new members would truly fit in.
One afternoon in early September we met to choose two new members to join the editorial board. There were nineteen applications to go through. We felt powerful, easily dismissing essays we found too simplistic, too narrow-minded, too full of flowery prose. We were especially critical of spelling errors; we shook our heads and declared that spell-check can’t help you if you are, in general, an idiot. We spent an hour tossing applications into a growing pile in the center of our circle, and then we came across a stunningly good essay.
The essay was written by one of the two boys in the long black trench coats. They were boys who always looked sullen and miserable and had pale, acne-speckled skin. They dyed their hair the color of coal. The two boys in the trench coats were always together; we’d never seen one without the other. We could barely tell them apart.
The boys always came into the library when we had our editorial board meetings. They sat at a table in the far corner of the library, the darkest part, where no sun shone in. They read comic books that we thought were from Japan. We’d caught glimpses of the violent and bloody covers. What a cliché,
we said, staring at their trench coats. If they want to be so different, they shouldn’t dress like every other depressed kid in America.
Depression was OK, encouraged even, in poetry; in real life, people who were depressed bored us.
On the day the editorial board met to select our new members, half of the boys’ lacrosse team had detention in the library. They were in their uniforms, ready to run out to the field as soon as detention was over. They sat in a pack at one of the big oak tables, tilting back in their chairs, laughing. Every few minutes, they got too noisy and were shushed by a librarian. Soon after, they’d grow noisy again. They held their sticks over their shoulders, and when the detention monitor wasn’t looking, they leaned back and poked the boys in the trench coats with their lacrosse sticks. Hey, freakshows,
the lacrosse boys said, give us your comic books.
The boys in the trench coats ignored the lacrosse players.
One lacrosse player tried to poke a trench coat boy again; the other trench coat boy put his hand on his friend’s back, blocking the stick. We knew this was unacceptable: there was no touching between boys in high school unless it was absolutely necessary in an athletic event. We knew there would be consequences, and we saw anger flush the faces of the lacrosse players.
Fags,
the lacrosse players said. You two need some privacy over here so you can get it on?
Stop,
said one of the boys in the trench coats, and he pushed the lacrosse stick away roughly. Then both boys got up and walked away. They always walked away; they never fought.
We did not know if the boys in the trench coats were actually gay. We thought they were probably not—after all, their comic books featured towering, big-breasted women with eyes like Bambi’s. We wondered if we should have stepped in, intervened somehow. But we decided that we were readers, not fighters, and there was nothing we could have done. Although we felt powerful in our little circle of orange chairs, we knew our authority did not extend beyond our editorial decisions. We were not the type of people who were listened to in our school. We were farther up in the social hierarchy than the boys in the black trench coats, but we were no match for the lacrosse players.
So this essay, this stunningly good essay, had been written by one of the boys in the trench coats who had just left the library. You sure the other one didn’t write an essay too?
we said. We looked through the pile. Only one boy had written an essay. What will he do if his friend gets the position? They’ll have to be apart.
And then we decided that no, they couldn’t be apart; the other boy in the trench coat would sit across the room and stare at us throughout our meetings. We decided it would be creepy.
We could not deny that the trench coat boy’s essay was good. The story he had chosen to discuss was not written by a member of the editorial board. He skewered the story, pointed out that no conflict was ever established, the characterization was weak, and the constant alliteration was overwhelming. It was an essay that would have gotten an A from Mr. Morgan, the toughest English teacher in the school. It was really, really good, far better than the eighteen other applications. The essay made us realize our mistake in publishing the story. We were shocked; we had never heard this trench coat boy speak in any of our classes. We’d thought that maybe he was a little bit retarded because of his droopy, head-down walk and his love of comic books.
Our magazine would be ruined if we gave him a spot. Trench coat boy absolutely could not be on our staff. We’d lose our credibility. We could not be a part of a failing magazine; we had known only success in our lives. This is what we decided: he was a traitor. He did not have the right spirit for the magazine; he could not criticize what had already been published. We did not mention the fact that we asked for an in-depth analysis, and he did what was asked. We did not admit that he had written the best essay. We spent time rehashing things, making ourselves believe the other essays were better than they really were, convincing ourselves that we were making the right decision. We were glad the lacrosse players had driven the trench coat boys away; we could not look at the one who wrote the essay. We would feel too guilty if he pushed his hair out of his face and stared right at us with his tar-dark eyes.
And so we chose two new staff members, a boy and a girl, both safe, unobjectionable selections. We posted our choices in the English annex of the school. We didn’t bother sending rejection letters to the people who had not been chosen. They would figure it out.
Two weeks later, the boy in the trench coat, the one who wrote the essay for us, shot himself in the school cafeteria. His friend was not there; he was home sick for the day. We cobbled together the details of the shooting. No one was paying attention; the boy was not someone who was considered important enough to notice, so everyone had a different account of the events. We were not even sure what was true and what had been changed through repeated retellings, but these were the details we heard the most: The boy sat alone. He ate his lunch, a rectangle of dry, almost burnt pizza, a serving of peas, a cup of syrupy, oversweet peach slices. It was an awful last meal. He took a small black gun out of the pocket of his trench coat. He did not wave it around. He did not make threats. He simply placed the gun in his mouth and pulled the trigger. The only detail we were sure of, the only thing we saw with our own eyes, was that blood spattered the wall behind him. We remained in the cafeteria for only a few seconds before we were ushered outside and the cafeteria doors were shut and locked, the adults tending to matters they thought were too complicated for young people to understand. We were sent home for the rest of the day.
After the shooting, school was closed for a week. There was a memorial service for the boy, but we could not bear to go. We could only bear to do one thing: talk. We talked to our classmates, to our parents, to the reporters who lingered in the school’s parking lot and near the bleachers by the football field. We talked to each other at the orthodontist’s office and at the DMV, waiting in line to take our driver’s tests. We could not stop trying to explain what had happened. It was a political statement, a protest against the war,
we said. Or, There were signs of trouble. If only the guidance counselors had done their jobs right, this could have been avoided.
Or, Maybe it was the lacrosse boys who caused this with their constant taunting.
We talked and talked, but it didn’t make us feel any better.
The next week, school reopened. There was an assembly and counselors were brought in to give presentations about the grieving process. They tried to reassure us, but no one felt reassured. They told us they would be at the school all week and we could come talk to them whenever we wanted, even during classes. They said they would write notes to our teachers so we could be let out of class. They said it was OK to be sad.
This was what we wanted to know: What did the walls of the cafeteria look like? Would we see traces of blood spatter? At lunchtime we scanned the room carefully. There was no blood. We looked from floor to ceiling—it was clean; whoever had scrubbed and painted the cafeteria had done an excellent job.
No one could eat in the freshly painted cafeteria. We told each other it was the sour paint smell. Instead of eating, we talked. We talked about anything and everything, except about the boy in the trench coat. It seemed too strange to talk about him in the place where it happened, but we needed to fill the heavy air with something, so we found other things to chatter about. We talked about helping our fathers pick leaves out of the rain gutters, we talked about what we watched on TV the night before, we talked about how we’d plan much tastier lunches if we were in charge of the cafeteria. We talked until the bell rang and it was time for us to go to our next class; we dumped our uneaten lunches into gray trash cans and left the empty, spotless cafeteria.
On Wednesday the editorial board of Semicolon reconvened. We sat in our squishy orange chairs and looked at the dark corner of the library. It was empty, and a fluorescent light in that section of the room flickered. The library seemed extra quiet. We told ourselves it was because none of the lacrosse players had detention. Teachers were scared to give detention; they were afraid of hurting our fragile teenage souls.
And then we saw him—the other boy in the black trench coat. We could not believe he had come back. But of course he had; what else could he do?
We watched him pass our circle of chairs, and we heard the clacking of his unlaced shoelaces against his high black boots. He did not look at us, just stared ahead as if he had someplace very important to go. He was holding a well-worn graphic novel tight to his side, his fingers curling around its softened edges. We stared at him as he wove through the ficus trees that sat in large cinnamon-colored pots in a row in the middle of the library, and waited as he made his way to the back corner under the flickering light and sat down at his usual table. We stared as he thumbed through his book front to back then back to front. He did this again and again, not stopping on any page, not reading anything. His eyes looked raw.
We had work to do, stories and poems to read and judge, but no one picked up the poem on top of our pile of papers. No one moved at all. We snuck glances at the boy, trying to be surreptitious. But it didn’t matter; the boy didn’t notice us in our circle of orange chairs. He looked down at the book in his hands, stared at just one page for far too long under the buzz and flicker of the fluorescent light. This was the angst, chaos, and brokenheartedness of our favorite poems and stories coming alive right in front of us, and it made us uncomfortable and sad. And finally, for once, we were speechless.
Late Night with Brad Mack
From the front row of the studio audience, Spence watches the stage. His father, talk show host Brad Mack, springs up from behind his desk, flings his tie over his left shoulder, and says, Punch me!
He points to his stomach.
No way, man,
says Xander Marlow. He laughs, and the too-loud, too-confident laugh reminds Spence of the frat boys at his school who get drunk and break lightbulbs all over campus and guffaw as they run away from the shattered glass. Xander is the first guest on this evening’s show, and he lounges casually on a purple couch, as if he were relaxing at home. Xander Marlow is nineteen, one year older than Spence. He is richer and more famous than Spence will ever be. He is the type of boy Spence is sure his father wishes he had for a son. Each of Xander’s obscenely muscled biceps likely has a larger circumference than Spence’s head. It is obvious that Xander spends most of his time working out. One thing is certain: Xander isn’t spending his time taking acting classes. The paparazzi love taking photos of him coming out of gyms in LA in sweaty tank tops. Spence sees these photos on the celebrity gossip blogs he furtively reads on his laptop in his dorm room. He likes to leave the books from his English classes—this semester Native Son, The Canterbury Tales, Midnight’s Children—on prominent display on his desk so that people, girls mostly, who drift into his room will think he’s smart and studious, but he secretly likes scouring gossip blogs for information about his father. He has learned more about the women his father is dating and where he’s been dining from these blogs than from their infrequent, stilted phone conversations.
Xander stars as Bartholomieu Beauregard, a French half-zombie half-vampire in the Zombipire movie trilogy. He is on Late Night with Brad Mack to promote the third movie in the trilogy, Zombipire on Fire. Although Spence is aware that a zombie and a vampire could not—should not—breed, he thinks that if they somehow did, their off-spring would not be tanned and bulging with muscles. A zombipire—if the thing existed at all—would be skinny, pale, and scared of sunlight. There should be a sense of death and a whiff of rot associated with a zombipire.
I can take it!
Spence’s father yells. Look at these abs.
He un-tucks his dress shirt and lifts it to reveal his tanned, chiseled stomach. The tan is fake, orangish. Spence is mortified. His father is fifty-one years old, old enough to know that he should keep his clothes on during