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Kaaron Warren
Shirley Jackson Award winner Kaaron Warren has published five novels and seven short story collections. She’s sold two hundred short stories to publications big and small around the world and has appeared in Ellen Datlow’s Year’s Best anthologies. Her novel The Grief Hole won three major Australian genre awards. She has lived in Melbourne, Sydney, Fiji, and Canberra; her most recent works are “The Deathplace Set” in Vandal, and Bitters, a novella. Warren won the inaugural Mayday Hills Ghost Story Competition.
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- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Slights by Kaaron Warren is a disturbing book. This should not come as a surprise to people familiar with the author’s other work (or anyone who read the quote from Russell Kirkpatrick on the cover).Stevie (short for Stephanie because her parents were expecting a boy) is a psychopath in the literal sense of the word: she lacks empathy, consideration, is obsessive and fairly self-centred. She is not a sympathetic character, but she is fascinating.After a car accident which kills her mother and puts her in hospital, she has a near-death experience. Instead of seeing a white light or a tunnel or something like that, she finds herself in a room filled with all the people who she’s slighted at some point in the past. Hence the title and hence the cover. (Speaking of the cover, how creepy do the rightmost dude’s eyes look?) And her slighted people do unpleasant things do her.Beyond that, it’s a difficult book to explain. It doesn’t exactly have a plot, it’s more an examination of Steve’s life, told in first person, including her learning new things about her past as she gets older. Her life isn’t particularly pleasant. I found the first third or so of the book quite confronting and it squicked me out a bit. I had to take breaks from reading it, although that became less necessary as it progressed (or I became desensitised). I wouldn’t suggest this book to anyone with any sort of conventional triggers (particularly sexual ones). Fair warning.As the book progressed, I felt it became less about horrible things happening to people (sometimes Steve, sometimes others around her) and more about the things happening in Steve’s head. And towards the very end, aspects of her family history that she wasn’t necessarily aware of when they were happening in her youth. I knew why the people were in the room and who they were; each and every one had been slighted by me, and each slight, by me or anybody else, snapped up a bit of their soul and sent it to the dark room of some unknowing person. Or to my dark room.The progression of her understanding of the room she goes to when she has near-death experiences (yes, they’re plural, the story would have much less impact if they weren’t) is interesting. I felt it was the kind of book that might be studied in a high school English class, if it was a bit more age-appropriate. I certainly found it more meaningful than some of the novels by Tim Winton I was forced to read.In case you didn’t pick it up, Slights is definitely a horror novel. Don’t read it if you don’t like icky things or being inside the minds of disturbing people. On the other hand, if you like being disturbed and enjoy a dark psychological read, then this is a good book to pick up.4 / 5 stars
- Rating: 1 out of 5 stars1/5Very strange. Not sure why I chose this one in the book shop. Was quite dissapointed in general. Left feeling a bit puzzled as to what the point of the book was. Not sure either how this was classed as a horror. Had tiny elements that hinted at something sinister but not even frightening in the same league as other non-horror books I've read. Really wasn't compelled to finish it and not particuarly glad that I did either, other than relief that it's finally over. WIll not be looking at any more books by this author.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5Pros: creepy premise, strong writing, good pacing, interesting family mysteryCons: unlikable protagonist, didn't feel like a horror novelStevie is an unreliable narrator. She remembers her father, a cop, as a good, quiet man. Others remember him differently. He was the kind of cop who didn't like to see the guilty get away with their crimes, even when there wasn't enough evidence to convict them.Stevie was 18 when her mother died, passenger in the car Stevie was driving. The accident gave Stevie her third near death experience. Before, she'd been too young to understand what happened. This time she realized that when you die you enter a room. A dark room. A dark room where those you've slighter want to hurt you.The book is presented as a horror novel and the premise is quite terrifying. But in execution, it's less about horror than it is about the mystery of who Stevie's father was and what death actually holds for her. And while she runs from the first mystery, wanting to believe her father was a great man, she runs towards the second, trying to get back to her room to see if it changes.As a protagonist she's a thoroughly unlikable character. She's rude, disrespectful and goes out of her way to anger the people in her life. And yet, her story is fascinating and she somehow remains sympathetic.The writing is strong and the pacing good, doling out enough clues to keep you interested.One word of caution, try not to read the synopsis on the back of the book. It contains a spoiler that makes part of the mystery a lot easier to figure out. If you want to get a sense of the book, read the first few pages.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5This was not a bad book, but it was not great either. I think it all has to do with the main character Stevie, I just did not like her. I had to find out what happened to her at the end of the book, but overall I was not impressed with her. I do believe that this was the aim of the author, so I think I got it from that perspective. For me a decent read, just not something calling me back to read again. The cover and publisher is what attracted me to this book. I am glad I decided to read it and would like to see what else this author has to offer, so I am intrigued for sure.
- Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2/5um it was good towards the middle but i'm really confused about the plot. It was really quick at some parts than slow. I wasn't sure what was going on and random people just popped out of no where that i was apparently supposed to know.i won this book free and thought the idea was good but the plot was non exsistent.
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Slights - Kaaron Warren
Shirley Jackson award-winner Kaaron Warren published her first short story in 1993 and has had fiction in print every year since. She was recently given the Peter McNamara Lifetime Achievement Award and was Guest of Honour at World Fantasy 2018, Stokercon 2019 and Geysercon 2019. Kaaron was a Fellow at the Museum for Australian Democracy, where she researched prime ministers, artists and serial killers. She’s judged the World Fantasy Awards and the Shirley Jackson Awards.
She has published five multi-award winning novels (Slights, Walking the Tree, Mistification, The Grief Hole and Tide of Stone) and seven short story collections, including the multi-award winning Through Splintered Walls. She has won the ACT Writers and Publishers Award four times and twice been awarded the Canberra Critics Circle Award for Fiction. Her most recent novella, Into Bones Like Oil (Meerkat Press), was shortlisted for a Shirley Jackson Award and the Bram Stoker Award, winning the Aurealis Award.
Kaaron Warren Titles
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IFWG Publishing International
The Grief Hole
The Gate Theory (short fiction collection)
Slights
Mistification (released 2021)
Walking the Trees (released 2021)
Morace’s Story (released 2021)
Tool Tales (with Ellen Datlow) (released 2021)
Slights
by
Kaaron Warren
This is a work of fiction. The events and characters portrayed herein are imaginary and are not intended to refer to specific places, events or living persons. The opinions expressed in this manuscript are solely the opinions of the author and do not necessarily represent the opinions of the publisher.
Slights
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ISBN-13: 978-1-925956-76-4
Copyright ©2020 Kaaron Warren
First published 2009
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Still for Graham, because I said I would and you believed me.
I envy Stalin. I wish I had the power to rewrite history and my part in it. I would change so much.
I would die only once, and I would not kill my mother. And my father would leave me a message; he would speak a meaningful sentence before going to work to be shot.
That would be my story, if I could change history.
At Eighteen
What should have happened was this:
We got a taxi home.
This is what did happen:
We went out for lunch to spend Mum’s lottery win—she won just enough for a slap up meal. Food rich and creamy, chicken breast with camembert, salad with blue cheese dressing, a bottle of sweet wine, champagne, port.
We laughed and joked; talked loudly. Mum was in a good mood, not a nagging one. The waiter pretended we were sisters, and that made her giggle.
We just babbled on. We had no idea this was our last meal together.
What do you think of my haircut?
I asked her.
I wouldn’t go back to that hairdresser, if I were you, Stephanie,
Mum said. She had a fleck of parsley on her lip and when she talked it wobbled.
I know. Stupid bitch. I said I wanted a change and she does this to me.
I had splurged and asked the hairdresser to give me a new style. She wanted to cut inches off, saying, Once you pass eighteen, you have to be more careful.
I said, Fine.
How old did she think I was?
She snip snipped. Dark, wet entrails of my hair fell onto her thighs, criss-crossed the diamonds of her fishnet stockings. I couldn’t take my eyes off her. The hairdresser said, "You know, you’ve got the sort of face which would suit a good red colour.
You need a bit of a lift at the moment. Everything looks a bit flat. And maybe we should have a go at your eyebrows."
She was a very slim girl. Her hair was black, cut like a metal helmet. She wore a tight silver T-shirt, a thick corduroy skirt, the fishnet stockings. She sat in a rolling chair, travelling around my body like I was an island, snip snip. She spoke incessantly, complained of slight after slight.
She sighed. Anyway, I’m sure you’re not interested.
I looked up from her thigh and she wasn’t happy with me. She dried my hair without speaking, then held the mirror up for me to see.
I said nothing.
Are you happy with that?
she said.
You are kidding me,
I said.
It shocked her. I suppose you’re meant to lie. I paid her even though she made me look like a fucking bimbo. All this from a woman who told me, confidentially, that she thought reading novels wasn’t smart because it’s all just made up.
"What do you read?" I asked her.
Oh, I love my magazines,
she said. I can read them over and over, there’s always something different.
Mum laughed and called me a fibber.
Oh, Stephanie. You’re just trying to take attention away from your hair,
she said.
This is how the girl talks. I swear.
I took a sip of wine and grimaced. Mum always chose sweet stuff. We might as well drink lemonade,
I said.
Well, your hair is fine, really. You’re just not used to looking pretty.
Thanks a lot. I’ll book you in, if you like.
That’s what we talked about.
I joshed Mum about, paying her attention, making jokes about the waiter, who had terrible acne, and telling stories about other diners in the restaurant.
She said, You sound just like your Dad. He used to whisper into my ear, telling the most outrageous tales. Should have heard what he told me about my father.
What?
I didn’t like to talk about my maternal grandfather, Joshua. He died when I was five, and I have a feeling he used to touch me; sometimes I get a glimpse of his face in my memory. It’s shiny, a sucked lollipop, and very close to me. He was a grouch most of the time, generous and soft when you were alone with him.
Come on, Mum, what did Dad say?
I passed her the plate of chocolates the waiter had laid on our table. They were dark, rich, and we planned to eat every one.
He said that your granddad Joshua had affairs with everyone willing in town. Everyone.
She covered her mouth. We didn’t often talk about things like that.
What, the men too?
I said, and she coughed in horror.
You’re a storyteller, just like your Dad was,
she said. I knew that was true; Dad was a detective long before he joined the police force. I wondered if Dad’s stories were ridiculous, or if they were true.
I dropped the keys on the way to the car. I’ve never been good with alcohol; a couple of glasses, still under the limit, and I’m screaming. Mum was giggling and muttering away, feeling no pain.
Feeling no pain.
I suddenly grew tired of it; being with her, pretending to be friends, enjoying her company. I drove quickly, wanting to drop her at home and go somewhere alone, somewhere I didn’t feel like a fake. I should have called her a taxi and sent her home; that way, she would have been resentful, but alive.
The car smells nice,
she said.
New leather in a can,
I said. One of the best smells. I drove quickly. I thought I saw a child in the road and I swerved, my wheels spun and I lost it. I remember very clearly, though I said I didn’t. I said I had no recollection; my head ached trying to remember.
But I remember my mother’s arm coming across to protect me, hold me in my seat as if I were a child. My arms went over my face and head but I still cracked my skull.
I remember looking at her; she looked at me. She was terrified of death; more terrified of my death.
Careful,
she said, then we hit the wall.
This wall was only there to keep the sound of the highway from reaching the wealthy residents in the suburbs behind it. If the wall wasn’t there, my mother may not have died. The papers loved it.
Wall of Death—the quiet life versus the long life,
all that.
I told people, especially Peter, that she died straight away, without a word. I told no one about where I’d been, that I’d smashed my skull and found myself in a cold, dark room full of people, faces familiar but beyond my tongue; I couldn’t voice their names. The board I lay on was ridged with razors, sharp lines of pain down my back.
The faces came into focus. Some I knew; people I knew were there. Their eyes watered. They weren’t blinking; that was it. They stared like zombies. I could smell them. They were so close now I could see the blood bang bang in their veins.
I touched my wrist to feel my pulse. Bang bang.
Bang bang.
Peter?
I said.
He was there. He stepped forward when I saw him. His hands rested by his side; he carried a potato peeler. I laughed. They all shrunk back. These were weak creatures, scared of the light and the sound of my voice.
Where’s Mum?
I said, to keep them away.
They shuffled forward and I recognised some of them. The lady from the lolly shop at the end of the road, her fat arms spilling out of her tight, flowery sleeves.
I’ll have a red traffic light,
I said. She grabbed my tongue but I slipped it out. Her fingers tasted of piss and dirt.
A middle-aged man with spiky blond hair, his eyes bulging and red, began to pile books onto my chest. One, another, then another. A handsome boy with dark brown eyes and one tiny scar on his chin held me down by the shoulders. Another book and another, I couldn’t breathe, the weight crushed my chest.
A little girl with greasy hair breathed into my mouth.
You need to get off the anchovies,
I said. She bared her teeth at me.
And all these strangers surrounded me; people with car keys, shopping bags, bus tickets. All surrounding, leaning in to sniff me.
Kids I remembered from school clung to Peter like he was their father. I knew their names, could remember their weaknesses: Darren, Cry Bobby, Belinda Green, Neil. I tried to say milk fight but milk was in my mouth, sour milk, and I couldn’t turn to spit it out. I dribbled some out of the corner of my mouth but the rest sat there, waiting for my epiglottis to give in and allow the swallow to continue.
I felt a nibble at my ear; now I could turn my head. My neighbour, Gary, a gross sleazebag who thought he ran the street, thought he could manipulate me. I spat milk into his face; he grinned, let it drip to the floor.
I sat up, causing a ripple through the room. There was the waiter from the restaurant Mum and I had eaten in, his face full of acne. The food he had served me was still in my belly.
Acker Face,
I said. Miaow. He wrinkled his nose, lifted his arms, pushed the sharpened tines of a fork into the meat of my thigh. I could feel the idea of pain but not pain itself. A thin clear liquid ran from the holes, like the cooked blood of a well done chicken.
Behind him were more strangers; from the restaurant? Had they been there, seen my mother’s last meal?
I wanted to ask them about her face. Was she happy? Was this the best time of her life? Could things only get worse?
It was lucky then that she died.
Someone tied knots in my hair, tugged at it. The skinny hairdresser. I paid you,
I said. She pulled harder, ripping out clumps of my hair out by the roots and tossing them to the floor. She wasn’t listening.
None of them listened.
Another kid from school, a shitty little bore, Ian, Ian Pope, was there and some young kid in cricket whites, You’re out,
I said, and he swung his bat flat onto my nose.
I heard a crunch and felt blood cover my chin.
This was no sun-dappled heaven. These people did not love me. The driver of the other car—was he dead too? Did we all die? But there was no other car. A wall. A box which looked like a child. Another car. Opposite direction. Stopped to help.
Caught in the wrong place at the wrong time. I shouldn’t be here. I should be at home.
I shouldn’t be here. This is not where I belong, stinking weakness waiting for something, pain. I moved my limbs, opened my mouth to scream, leave me, leave me. They seemed to exist for me.
Somebody saved my life. Rescued me from the dark room.
I missed my mother’s funeral. Peter and I were now orphans. He took charge of everything, I made the arrangements,
he said. The image in my mind was of Mum’s body, people moving her rag-doll limbs until she sat as they wished her to sit.
In hospital, the smell of jasmine saved me. The nurses brought it in when they realised it made me smile. I lay with jasmine under my nose, I sucked it in, because my nostrils were full of shit and mothballs and the woman in the next bed began to choke and moan. I sat up to comfort her, but I could not sit up. I could not move. Then I felt myself lift, my body turned over, and I looked at the two of us. She was writhing, dying, and there was nothing I could do. I realised then that I had died too, and I closed my eyes and waited to be taken to the cold room. It’s time to go back, I thought.
They’re waiting.
This second death, so soon after the first, surprised the nurses, I think. They did not expect me to go into arrest once I was in the safety of the hospital. Once they had brought me back from the dead at the scene of the crime. Scene of the accident.
It surprised them in the dark room, too. But I was not there for long this time.
Someone came along and saved me.
Stephanie? Stephanie? Are you with us?
The stink of shit and mothballs was gone. It was the hospital, antiseptic, starch, medicine and blood. I returned from the room and there were people surrounding me, but they were medicos doing their job, watching tensely for me not to die so they wouldn’t be blamed.
Mum?
I said. I knew the answer. One of them sat by my bed and took my hand. There was kindness in the touch, and pity, but no respect.
Your mother died instantly. She didn’t suffer,
the nurse said. I knew that wasn’t true. I remembered her screaming. I didn’t want to say that. The scream was on me and I didn’t want anyone to know about it.
Peter said, God, you gave us a fright.
He’s been shuddering like the Nazis were goose-stepping on his grave,
my nurse said. I quite took to her. She could shock a room full of patients without blinking.
I’ve been somewhere terrible,
I whispered to Peter, but he didn’t want to hear it. To distract me, he told me about Mum’s funeral. His eyes were suitably red and swollen. He looked cold, almost blue.
I reckon all the would-be Dads were there,
Peter said, making me glad I’d missed it. Remember that one with the red hair we called Bozo? He got really fat. And there was that one we quite liked, who got pissed on Crème de Menthe so his breath was minty. And remember that total dickhead, the shoe-shop guy?
The one you really liked?
I didn’t like him. He was a dickhead.
Peter frowned.
You liked him.
"Well, anyway, he was there. They all asked about you. None of them knew what happened.
There were some cops there, writing notes, making everyone feel guilty, even if they hadn’t done anything."
That was supposed to make me feel guilty, I suppose. I said, So what did the shoe-guy have to say?
He asked me how my feet were. That’s the first thing he said, how are those feet of yours? Sounds like he went a bit downhill after Mum kicked him out. He got a job in the shoe department of some big shop, but he said they sold mainly vinyl shoes, and people tried them on without socks. He said it was disgusting.
He was pretty disgusting, don’t forget.
He’s married now, to a woman with tiny little angel’s feet. He said to me, ‘Not as lovely as your Mum’s.’
I shrugged. I’d received Dad’s big plates o’ meat.
He told you all this in how many minutes?
Oh, I gave him a lift home. He got there by public transport, can you believe it? A train, two buses and a long walk.
I’m sure he had the right shoes for it.
Oh, ha ha. He lives in a flat with his wife and kid. Ugly kid. The wife doesn’t speak English very well but he likes that. They don’t talk; everything’s non-verbal. He said it made him very happy.
Yeah, and makes it harder for her to get away. So the kid was ugly?
Yeah, bit of a slug. You know. Just sat around not talking. I smiled at it and it blinked like I was insane.
Poor old shoe man. Were there lots of shoes in his house? Did he have a shoe tree?
They take their shoes off at the front door and leave them there. I didn’t do it but they didn’t say anything.
Peter hated to take his shoes off. There is no deception to be had in socks or bare feet.
"He asked me to stay for tea and I said, ‘I’ve got family to get to.’ He said, ‘Oh, Little Stevie. Little Stevie.’ It was like his wife recognised your name.
She came over, rested her hands on his shoulders.
He started crying, Steve, I swear. Tears ran down his face and he’s going honk honk. I said, ‘Oh, well, must be off,’ like I was there on a social visit.
‘Thanks for coming,’ he says, snot running down his face. It was pretty disgusting."
Who else was at the funeral?
Peter looked away. I wasn’t going to tell you about her.
Who?
He coughed. The garden lady. Do you remember her? Eve?
It was astonishing he would imagine I could forget her, when he was the one who threw me to her in the first place. Peter never warned me about Eve. I’ll ask him why one day. I’ll ask him how he could have led me into that woman’s clutches. Was he so terrified he was happy for me to go in his place? That didn’t work well; she had us both, then.
I followed Peter home from school one day when I was ten, hoping to catch him at something disgusting. Doing detective work to find out why he was always so late.
He collected stones, ate some Twisties. I picked up the packet he discarded. When Mum was cooking the casserole, I asked her to put the Twistie packet on a tray and put it into the oven for a few minutes. It shrank beautifully. I told her I wanted to make a collection and the kids at school would give me their empty packets. That was okay, Mum said. So long as I wasn’t eating the rubbish myself.
Every time I followed Peter after that he had a packet of something. He’d stop when he rounded the corner from school, shuffle through his school bag and pull out his treasure. I collected and shrank them all, then presented them to him in a pile.
I know plenty,
I told him. I told Mum I was training to be in the softball team so had to practise after school. Ages later, Mum said, Whatever happened to the softball thing? You were so keen for a while there. Didn’t you get in the team?
Yeah, they picked me,
I said. This was a good answer.
I’ll come and watch you practise one time.
I knew where I was on those missing afternoons, and I didn’t want her finding out. Nah, don’t worry, Mum. It’s pretty boring if you’re not playing.
Peter went to the same house every afternoon, a neat one, not like ours. Nice flowers in lines and the lawn all green and even. As I got older, I heard gossip about the woman who lived there, though I never added our stories, Peter’s and mine.
In high school, the boys talked about mowing her lawn; she had a different boy every week, made them strip their shirts off and work in the garden till they glowed with sweat. Then she summoned them inside, where she gave them an envelope full of money and a glass of beer, regardless of their age. Before they were allowed to enter and drink their beer, they had to clean the tools; rake, spade, shovel, mower, and stack them in the garage. I heard of rebellion just once; a boy who said, That wasn’t part of the deal.
She said, And we must stick to deals,
paid him his money, sent him away, never hired him again. Peter and I put the things away and took a bubble bath afterwards.
Eve the garden lady was in control of her boys; had them terrified. Most were strangely coy about the activities which followed the beer drinking. I think perhaps nothing at all happened, that perhaps she talked to them, or asked them questions, perhaps embarrassed them with her interest. I think perhaps the more boys who visited her without saying what happened, the more boys were too frightened to admit nothing went on. I imagined whispered conversations between two boys, one sleeping over, restless on the floor, one comfortable in a known bed.
You know when you went to mow the lawn?
Yeah.
Did you ever tell anyone what happened?
Nah. Did you?
Nah. I didn’t know what to say.
Me neither.
Because I didn’t know what happened to the others.
"Me neither. So what did happen to you?"
I dunno. What happened to you?
Nothing, really.
Me neither.
That’s what should have happened. I don’t know what did happen to those boys. I know the woman’s garden was very neat for many years. She became a joke as we all got older, as she became elderly rather than middle-aged.
I think perhaps she mostly liked children.
I followed Peter to her house three times.
He was crying the third time he came out of her house. He managed to control himself before he got to our street. He stopped on the corner and seemed to be stroking out the wrinkles in his clothes.
I teased him at dinner. Teased and teased until he began to cry again. He wouldn’t look at us and he hardly ate a thing.
Ate too many Twisties,
I said. "Ate another mother’s tea. Don’t you like Mum’s tea any more?
Don’t you love Mum?" I swung my feet till my school shoes kicked the underside of the table.
Every second word I kicked and plates and glasses rattled.
Tell her to stop it,
said Peter.
Tell the lady? Tell the lady to stop what? Stop doing bad smells?
Mum giggled. She loved crude jokes; now she could laugh at them without Dad stopping her with a grown-up’s look.
Then I blew raspberries at Peter till he was so angry he stopped crying.
Mum had been laughing; she always thought I was funny. She said, Oh, Peter. Do you think your father would have cried at the table like that?
I never cry,
I said.
Yes, Stevie’s my little strong girl,
she said. She smiled fondly at me, her eyes crinkling in a way Peter never got to see. She had to work for my love; Peter’s she got just for being alive.
After dinner, I followed him to his room and jumped on his bed.
Peter’s got a girlfriend, Peter’s got a girlfriend.
Shut up.
Is she a nice lady?
None of your business.
Tell me or else I’ll tell Mum you go to a lady’s house.
Peter said, I’ll take you to meet her if you like. She’s very nice.
With those words, he offered me up for sacrifice.
One day I’ll ask him why he did that. He should have protected me no matter what.
On my first visit to Eve, she was very nice. Peter left me alone; snuck away. She stared into my eyes, looking for something.
She gave me lemonade to drink. We sat down on her pretty bed and she held my hands.
You’re much sweeter than your brother,
she said. She tore open a brown paper bag; lollies spilled out.
Your brother eats many of these. I’m surprised he can eat his dinner.
Sometimes he doesn’t. He eats too many Twisties.
She laughed. Too many Twisties. Peter’s a good boy, though. Very kind. He makes me very happy. Does he make you happy?
I shook my head.
He does lovely things to me. He rubs powder into my feet. My husband doesn’t like to do that. And he washes my hair in the bath. And I wash his hair, too. Sometimes he arrives here a little grubby from school. You look like you might be a bit dirty, too.
I couldn’t smile; I had a face full of lollies.
Peter and I never discussed the things which happened to us at Eve’s house.
We had to dance around in these special clothes and she took home movies of us. The clothes she dressed us in were too small. We looked like we had doll’s clothes on. Her children had died when they were younger than us.
She told us to wave at Daddy but our Daddy was dead.
Daddy’s coming in now. You children better go and play.
But all there was was Lisa Sargeant’s brother, who was much older and very handsome with that perfectly flawing scar on his chin, but still only a kid. As we left, he stared after us, and I think I’ve been on the inside of a look like that. I wanna go with you. Don’t leave me here alone. We left him there to be the Daddy.
I tried never to arrive dirty at Eve’s place, because I didn’t want a bath, but the time they drained the creek nearby was the chance of a lifetime.
Every kid who had any control over parents was there. Kids said there was gold at the bottom of the creek, bodies, dead kids, treasures for all.
There was a car, a push bike, three headless dolls and a bunch of wallets. We scrabbled on the creek bed, searching for clues, until the people chased us off. Then I went to Eve’s and had a bath, but it was worth it.
We always had to leave when Eve’s real husband Harry came home. We had to be out that damn door and gone before his car hit the driveway.
Once I pretended to leave but hid in the alcove near the front door, behind the plants. It was very, very dark there. When you first walked in from sunlight, you were blind. It was that dark. You had to stand a moment, only just inside, and wait for sight to return. She’d say to you, Come on, don’t dilly dally letting the flies fly in,
and made you feel like you were scared.
I hid there and didn’t move, wanting to know what happened to the house when I wasn’t there.
Was she a robot who stopped moving? I also wanted to see what the husband was like. I wanted to know whose brother he was. Bang bang front door, clunk of something.
Noises.
It was hard to identify what was going on.
I’m told my great-grandfather was wonderful at picking sounds. He had perfect hearing. It was his party trick; people would try stranger and stranger sounds and he always got them.
I’m good with faces. Not as good with sounds. So it took me a while, crouched there behind the shiny ferns, smelling dirt and old furniture polish, to realise the thumping and the shouting meant he was beating her up.
I wished Peter was there to hear it. I wished I could run upstairs and watch it. I crawled out to hear better.
You mad bitch. I told you to stop bringing kids here. I’ll have you locked up, you mad woman. You’ve gotta stop it.
Did he know about all those teenagers carefully mowing the front lawn?
I’ll call the kids’ parents if you do it again. I mean it. Leave the poor little mites alone.
She cried, but she liked to cry. She cried when she made me suckle at her breast.
After that, I wasn’t scared of Harry.
Eve never tired of my daily visits. She loved to listen to me natter, so I thought up stories on the walk to her place. If I couldn’t think of a good story, I told her about a TV show I’d watched, playing all the parts, being descriptive.
Who needs a TV with you around?
she said, but she must have been very bored.
Yes. I remember her,
I said. Peter nodded, as if it was a happy memory we shared. It’s hard to connect to that powerlessness. When you’re a child, you do as the adults say, unless you’re willing to be punished.
I didn’t talk to her,
Peter said. I knew that small rebellion won him a lot. You’re lucky you missed it,
he said.
Lucky I missed my mother’s funeral. If that’s my luck, I’m in trouble.
In hospital, the smell of jasmine cheered me. There were flowers from people I’d forgotten or hadn’t seen in years. My school teacher Alice Blackburn sent flowers to me in hospital, not to my Mum’s dead body. It was frangipani and jasmine from her own garden. The card said, To remind you of the wonders of life.
Somehow I knew her card meant the opposite of what it said. We once had a discussion in class, about what a dead body might smell like, because we were reading a series of hard-nosed detective novels, all full of bodies and gore, and wondering about the imagery. She thought dead bodies smelt of frangipani and jasmine.
The card said, Call me.
The police spoke to a lot of people after Mum died, and I had to prove a hundred times that it really was an accident, and one not caused by my imaginary deep-seated hatred of my mother.
I didn’t hate my mother, I loved my mother.
And you didn’t deliberately become intoxicated in order to lose your judgement, thus causing the accident?
I wasn’t intoxicated. I wasn’t even a bit pissy. I only had a couple of drinks.
The head waiter at the restaurant where you had your lunch claims you were loud and over-excited.
And you find that at odds with my natural character?
I said. Even sitting up in a hospital bed I wasn’t scared of them. The cop smiled. I thought he liked me and hoped he’d offer me a lift home when I was well. On the way I’d tell him about Dad and his career, remind him who I was.
Peter said I was lucky to be Dad’s daughter; I got off without a charge. He said if my father hadn’t been a cop who died on the job, it would have been manslaughter. He reckoned I was lucky just to lose my licence.
I think it was because the cop who interviewed me liked me.
And Mum was a cop’s wife, wasn’t she? Why didn’t they swear to avenge her, if that’s why I got off?
The cops felt sorry for me; they tracked down so many people who said they didn’t know me well enough to talk of my feelings for Mum. The cop running it, grey hair, wrinkles, held my hands and stroked me with his thumbs, said, Isn’t there someone who knows you?
Peter,
I said. My brother has to know.
We’ve asked him. He gave us pages about how he felt, nothing about you. What about someone who looks up to you, who might see you as a role model?
The only person who’d ever looked up to me was Tim, little Tim who was allowed to be bad when I babysat. And his brother Lee pretended not to care but he did. I’d say he worshipped the air I exhaled.
There’s a couple of kids I used to babysit. The Walshes.
Laurie, the young cop, gave me his card and said I should call him if anything came up. I tried to imagine he wanted to see me, that we could drive to a beach cabin which had been in his family for years and listen to the surf. I didn’t call him though.
Peter put me off, saying how all the cops would know what we did because cops told each other everything.
My nurse let me walk around looking at the sick people. She didn’t know what I was doing and didn’t much care. It was the dying I wanted to see.
Those in their rooms waiting for one more breath before the last.
It seemed astonishing that I had been so close to death. All I could see were the faces of the people in that cold