There Will Come a Darkness
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Leigh Bardugo's Six of Crows meets Kristin Cashore's Graceling, with a dash of Winter is Coming, in this showstopping debut YA fantasy--and recipient of FOUR starred reviews!
A Morris Award Finalist for best debut young adult novel!
A Kirkus Best Book of the Year!
A Tor.com Best YA SFF/Horror Book of the Year!
"One of the most stunning debuts of the year." —Seventeen
The Age of Darkness approaches.
Five lives stand in its way.
Who will stop it . . . or unleash it?
For generations, the Seven Prophets guided humanity. Using their visions of the future, they ended wars and united nations—until the day, one hundred years ago, when the Prophets disappeared.
All they left behind was one final, secret prophecy, foretelling an Age of Darkness and the birth of a new Prophet who could be the world’s salvation . . . or the cause of its destruction. With chaos on the horizon, five souls are set on a collision course:
A prince exiled from his kingdom.
A ruthless killer known as the Pale Hand.
A once-faithful leader torn between his duty and his heart.
A reckless gambler with the power to find anything or anyone.
And a dying girl on the verge of giving up.
One of them—or all of them—could break the world. Will they be savior or destroyer? Perfect for fans of Throne of Glass, Children of Blood and Bone, and An Ember in the Ashes.
Praise for There Will Come a Darkness
“A can’t miss debut from an exciting new talent.” –Kiersten White, New York Times bestselling author of Slayer
“Even in a world filled with graces and prophets, the real magic of There Will Come a Darkness is in how Pool has crafted her heroes—messy, flawed, and so beguilingly human. I dare you not to fall madly in love with all of them.” —Laura Sebastian, New York Times bestselling author of Ash Princess
* "A well-crafted, surprising, and gripping start to a new trilogy." —Kirkus Reviews, STARRED review
Katy Rose Pool
Katy Rose Pool, author of the Age of Darkness trilogy, was born and raised in Los Angeles, CA before graduating from the University of California, Berkeley with a degree in history. Currently, she resides in Oakland, CA, where she can be found dreaming up spells and prophecies, rooting for the Golden State Warriors, and reading books that set her on fire.
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- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5Until the EndKaty Rose Pool uses prophecy to explore the thin boundary between selfishness and loyalty in There Will Come a Darkness. The kingdom of Herat has fallen to the Witnesses, and the prince Hassan has fled with his people. The Witnesses are a cult determined to wipe out all who have a Grace, the mysterious power granted to a few to fight, heal, create artifacts, and scry. Charged to find the last prophet, and fulfill the last prophecy Captain Jude Weatherbourne finds his loyalty fractured by love and duty. The Pale Hand Ephyra only wants to save her sister Beru, but finding the scryer Anton will lead her on an unexpected journey. Together they are the only ones who can determine the fate of the Gifted.Katy Rose Pool does a great job of individualizing each character, including a few secondary characters. How these different characters meet and connect to the bigger story is interesting to read. They each have different solid goals that somehow lead them to each other. Beru wants to live, Ephyra needs a scryer, Anton needs to escape, Jude needs to find the prophet, and Hassan needs to save his kingdom. Though not all these characters are good, their stories are easy to sympathize with, and their struggles are understandable.The difficulty is that all these characters constantly think or talk about the prophets and their prophecies. Without going into detail about who they were, what their prophecies achieved, and why everyone venerates them in an extreme enough way to make them gods. The Gifted are also explained constantly, with a variety of the same disgust or veneration. The only change to the main story is that part two is about the current prophecy, whether it is a true prophecy or not.Each character seems very innocent about the conduct of people, despite each living in a horrible situation. Ephyra can’t believe a sibling could possibly be a tormenter, Jude can’t imagine a friend not being loyal, etc. While accepting murder, and the hunting of the Gifted without surprise. With a tendency to sympathize with terrible past behavior, while struggling with taking responsibility and changing that behavior. This leads them to failure before they even begin. Each person has their own loyalties, and they will all be tested or the darkness will consume them.
- Rating: 2 out of 5 stars2/5This starts of unexceptionally cycling among a group of rather young exceptional viewpoint characters and is somewhat interesting until the single note for each character begins to jar then jangle. Things happen, they do things, but there is little change to most of them and the last third dragged through all the action.
- Rating: 5 out of 5 stars5/5Too much plot and world-building for me to have the energy to sum up, but I will say that the world is a neat riff on an AU mix of ancient Greece with some Asian influences, and the story is just unique enough in its variation on traditional fantasy themes to be good and interesting. The characters and their relationships with one another are the real stars, though. My one quibble is that it seemed really slow to take off, but that could just be me; I tend to get impatient at the beginnings of fantasy stories while the world and plot are being established.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5This style reminds me of the Edgar Rice Burroughs books I read in my early teens where you leave one (or more) characters cliff-hanging before going to a new chapter where others are in a similar pickle. The cast here, however is larger and forced me to pay careful attention, even to the point of pausing for a bit to remember exactly who I was about to follow again. Even with that complexity, I read quickly and very much enjoyed the action. I'm already eager and imagining what comes next.
- Rating: 3 out of 5 stars3/5Series Info/Source: This is the first book in the Age of Darkness series, I borrowed this book from the library.Story (2/5): This was a DNF for me. The author was still introducing new POVs about 70 pages in. I ended up setting it aside because I just do not have the patience for a big and long epic fantasy right now. In general, I am not a huge fan of books where the whole first book is spent just setting everything up. The storyline involved a rebel known as the Hierophant taking over the old magic; it wasn’t something I was interested in and felt like the type of storyline that’s been done a million times before in epic fantasy.Characters (2/5): There are way too many characters introduced way too slowly here. I was having trouble remembering the first character by the time we finally got back to him. I also wasn’t really drawn to or engaged with any of the characters, they all seemed to be pretty typical fantasy-type characters to me.Setting (4/5): Again, I stopped this 70 pages in. However, this seems to be a Middle Eastern type of fantasy setting. The world was well filled out and very detailed; what I saw of the world-building was well done. Writing Style (3/5): The writing style flowed well and was easy to read. Each chapter is from a new POV for the first 50-60 pages, as numerous characters are introduced. We don’t get back to a character for a 2nd time until 60-70 pages in. I didn’t like this and thought the whole thing moved too slowly and was trying to be too complex.Summary (3/5): Overall I was not in the mindset to read this and may give it another chance at another time when I have more patience. Right now I just found it boring and irritating to read. If you like slow-moving epic fantasies with a multitude of characters you might really enjoy this.
- Rating: 4 out of 5 stars4/5For generations the Seven Prophets guided humanity with their visions, ending wars and uniting nations--until the day they vanished, leaving behind the promise of a looming Age of Darkness and the birth of a Prophet who could be the world's salvation . . . or the cause of its destruction.
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There Will Come a Darkness - Katy Rose Pool
I
HARBINGER
1
EPHYRA
In the moonlit room overlooking the City of Faith, a priest knelt before Ephyra and begged for his life.
Please,
he said. I don’t deserve to die. Please. I won’t touch them anymore, I swear. Have mercy.
Around him, the lavish private room at the Thalassa Gardens taverna lay in disarray. A sumptuous feast spilled from overturned platters and filigreed pitchers. The white marble floor was littered with ripe berries and the smashed remains of a dozen tiny jewel-like bottles. A pool of blood-dark wine slowly spread toward the kneeling priest.
Ephyra crouched down, placing her palm upon the papery skin of his cheek.
Oh, thank you!
the priest cried, tears springing into his eyes. Thank you, blessed—
I wonder,
Ephyra said. Did your victims ever beg you for mercy? When you were leaving your bruises on their bodies, did they ever cry out in Behezda’s name?
He choked on a breath.
They didn’t, did they? You plied them with your monstrous potion to make them docile so you could hurt them without ever having to see their pain,
she said. But I want you to know that every mark you left on them left a mark on you, too.
Please.
A breeze rustled in from the open balcony doors behind Ephyra as she tilted the priest’s chin toward her. You’ve been marked for death. And death has come to collect.
His terror-struck eyes gazed up at Ephyra as she slid her hand to his throat, where she could feel the rapid tap-tap-tap of his pulse. She focused on the rush of blood beneath his flesh and drew the esha from his body.
The light drained from the priest’s eyes as his lungs sputtered out their last breath. He collapsed to the floor. A handprint, as pale as the moon, glowed against the sallow skin of his throat. Dead, and only a single mark to show for it.
Drawing the dagger from her belt, Ephyra leaned over the corpse. The priest had not been alone when she’d found him. The two girls he’d had with him—hollow-eyed girls, their wrists mottled with green and purple bruises—had fled the moment Ephyra had told them to run, as if they couldn’t help but obey.
Ephyra slid the tip of her blade into the flesh of the priest’s throat, cutting a line of red through the pale handprint. As dark blood oozed out, she turned the dagger over and opened the compartment in its hilt to extract the vial within. She held it under the flow of his blood. The priest’s desperate words had been a lie—he did deserve death. But that wasn’t why she’d taken his life.
She had taken his life because she needed it.
The door burst open, startling Ephyra from her task. The vial slipped from her hand. She fumbled with it but caught it.
Don’t move!
Three men spilled into the suite, one holding a crossbow, and the other two with sabers. Sentry. Ephyra wasn’t surprised. Thalassa sat at the edge of Elea Square, just within the High City gates. She’d known from staking it out that the Sentry ran their foot patrols through the square every night. But they’d gotten here quicker than she’d expected.
The first Sentry through the door stopped short, staring at the priest’s body, stunned. He’s dead!
Ephyra sealed the vial of blood and hid it back within the dagger’s hilt. She drew herself up, touching the black silk that covered the bottom of her face to make sure it was still in place.
Come quietly,
the first Sentry said slowly, and you don’t have to get hurt.
Ephyra’s pulse hammered in her throat, but she made her voice calm. Fearless. Take another step and there will be more than one body in this room.
The Sentry hesitated. She’s bluffing.
No, she isn’t,
the one with the crossbow said nervously. He glanced down at the priest’s corpse. Look at the handprint. Just like the ones they found on the bodies in Tarsepolis.
The Pale Hand,
the third Sentry whispered, frozen as he stared at Ephyra.
That’s just street lore,
the first Sentry said, but his voice was trembling slightly. No one is so powerful that they can kill with only the Grace of Blood.
What are you doing in Pallas Athos?
the third Sentry asked her. He stood with his chest out and his feet apart, as if staring down a beast. Why have you come here?
You call this place the City of Faith,
Ephyra said. But corruption and evil fester behind these white walls. I will mark them the way I mark my victims, so the rest of the world can see that the City of Faith is the city of the fallen.
This was a lie. Ephyra had not come to the City of Faith to stain it with blood. But only two other people in the world knew the real reason, and one of them was waiting for her.
She moved toward the window. The Sentry tensed, but none tried to go after her.
You won’t get away with killing a priest so easily,
the first said. When we tell the Conclave what you’ve done—
Tell them.
She tugged her black hood over her head. Tell them the Pale Hand came for the priest of Pallas. And tell them to pray that I don’t come for them next.
She turned to the balcony, throwing open the satin drapes to the night and the moon that hung like a scythe in the sky.
The Sentry shouted after her, their blustering voices overlapping as Ephyra flew to the edge of the balcony and climbed over the marble balustrade. The world tipped—four stories below, the steps of Thalassa’s entrance gleamed like ivory teeth in the moonlight. She gripped the edge of the balustrade and turned. To her left, the roof of the public baths sloped toward her.
Ephyra leapt, launching herself toward it. Squeezing her eyes shut, she tucked her knees and braced for impact. She hit the roof at a roll and waited for her own momentum to slow before picking herself up and racing across it, the voices of the Sentry and the lights of Thalassa fading into the night.
Ephyra moved through the mausoleum like a shadow. The sanctum was still and silent in the predawn darkness as she picked her way through broken marble and other rubble around the tiled scrying pool in the center, the only part of the shrine left unscorched. Above, the caved-in roof gave way to the sky.
The ruins of the mausoleum sat just outside the High City gates, close enough that Ephyra could easily sneak back into the Low City without drawing notice. She didn’t know exactly when the mausoleum had been burned down, but it was all but abandoned now, making it the perfect hideout. She slipped through the scorched shrine into the crypt. The stairwell creaked and moaned as she climbed down and wrenched open the rotted wood door to the alcove that had served as her home for the past few weeks. Shedding her mask and hood, she crept inside.
The alcove used to be a storeroom for the acolyte caretakers who had tended to the shrine. Now it was abandoned, left for rats, rot, and for people like Ephyra who didn’t mind the other two.
You’re late.
Ephyra peered through the darkened room to the bed that lay in the corner, shadowed by the tattered sheets that hung over it. Her sister’s dark eyes peered back at her.
I know,
Ephyra said, folding the mask and hood over the back of the chair.
A book slid from Beru’s chest as she sat up, its pages fluttering as it bounced onto the sheets. Her short, curly hair was raked up on one side. Everything go all right?
Fine.
No point telling how close her escape had been. It was done now. She forced a smile on her face. Come on, Beru, you know my days of falling off slyhouse roofs are behind me. I’m better than that now.
When Ephyra had first assumed the mask of the Pale Hand, she hadn’t been quite as good at sneaking around and climbing as she was now. Having the Grace of Blood didn’t help her sneak into crime dens or scale rich merchants’ balconies. She’d had to gain such skills the traditional way, spending countless nights honing her balance, reaction time, and strength, as well as gathering information necessary for specific targets. Beru had joined her, when she was well enough, racing Ephyra to see who could climb a fence faster or leap between rooftops more quietly. They’d spent many nights stealing through the shadows, tailing behind a potential mark to learn vices and habits. After years of training and close calls, Ephyra knew how to get in and out of the dangerous situations she courted as the Pale Hand.
Beru returned her sister’s smile weakly.
Ephyra’s own smile faded, seeing the pain in Beru’s eyes. Come on,
she said softly.
Beru lifted the rough blanket away from her body. Beneath it, she was shivering, her brown skin ashen in the low light. Tired lines had etched themselves into the skin below her bloodshot eyes.
Ephyra frowned, turning to the crate beside Beru’s bed, where a shallow bowl rested. She opened the compartment in her dagger’s hilt and poured the contents of the vial into the bowl. We let this go for too long.
It’s fine,
Beru hissed through clenched teeth. I’m fine.
She unwrapped the cotton from her left wrist, revealing the black handprint that marred the skin beneath it.
Ephyra pressed her hand into the bowl, coating it with wet blood. Placing her bloody palm over the dark handprint on her sister’s skin, she closed her eyes and focused on the blood, guiding the esha she’d taken from the priest and directing it into her sister.
The blood Ephyra collected from her victims acted as a conduit to the esha she drained from them. If she were a properly trained healer, she would have known the correct patterns of binding that would tether her victims’ esha to Beru. She wouldn’t need to use the binding of blood.
Then again, if Ephyra were properly trained, she wouldn’t have been killing in the first place. Healers with the Grace of Blood took an oath that forbid drawing esha from another person.
But this was the only way to keep her sister alive.
There,
Ephyra said, pressing a finger into Beru’s skin, which was starting to lose that worrying grayish tinge. All better.
For now, Beru didn’t say, but Ephyra could see the words in her sister’s eyes. Beru reached over and opened the drawer of the table beside the bed, withdrawing a thin black stylus. With careful, practiced motions, she pressed the stylus against her wrist, drawing a small, straight line there. It joined the thirteen others, permanently etched in alchemical ink.
Fourteen people killed. Fourteen lives cut short so that Beru could live.
It wasn’t lost on Ephyra, the way Beru marked her skin each time Ephyra marked another victim. She could see the way the guilt ate at her sister after every death. The people Ephyra killed were far from innocent, but that didn’t seem to matter to Beru.
This could be the last time we have to do this,
Ephyra said quietly.
This was the real reason they’d come to Pallas Athos. Somewhere in this city of fallen faith and crumbling temples, there was a person who knew a way to heal Beru for good. It was the only thing Ephyra had hoped for in the last five years.
Beru looked away.
I brought you something else,
Ephyra said, making her voice light. She reached into the little bag that hung at her belt and held out a glass bottle stopper she’d picked off the ground in the priest’s room. I thought you could use it for the bracelet you’re making.
Beru took the bottle stopper, turning it over in her hand. It looked like a little jewel.
You know I’m not going to let anything happen to you,
Ephyra said, covering her sister’s hand with her own.
I know.
Beru swallowed. You’re always worrying about me. Sometimes I think that’s all you do. But, you know, I worry about you, too. Every time you’re out there.
Ephyra tapped her finger against Beru’s cheek in reproach. I won’t get hurt.
Beru brushed her thumb across the fourteen ink lines on her wrist. That’s not what I mean.
Ephyra drew her hand away. Go to sleep.
Beru rolled over, and Ephyra climbed into the bed beside her. She lay listening to her sister’s even breaths, thinking about the worry that Beru would not give name to. Ephyra worried, too, on nights like tonight, when she felt her victims’ pulse slow and then stop, when she pulled the last dregs of life from them. Their eyes went dark, and Ephyra felt a sweet, sated relief, and in equal measure, a deep, inescapable fear—that killing monsters was turning her into one.
2
HASSAN
Hassan tugged at his tunic as he made his way up the Sacred Road. The servant he’d borrowed it from was a tad taller than he was, and it hung awkwardly on Hassan’s frame. He wasn’t used to the clothing they wore in Pallas Athos. The way it draped and flowed made him long for the sturdiness of Herati brocade, for clothes that fastened shut and covered his chest and throat.
But he would have been too conspicuous in his own clothes, and all the effort he’d put into sneaking out of his aunt’s villa would have been for naught if he were recognized on the street. Not to mention the danger he might be in.
That had been Aunt Lethia’s reasoning, anyway, when Hassan had first asked to leave the confines of her cliffside home.
You came to this city to be safe,
she had insisted. The Witnesses don’t know for sure that the Prince of Herat escaped them in Nazirah, and I intend to keep it that way as long as we can. The Hierophant has influence even here, and I fear that if his followers knew you had escaped, they would make it their mission to deliver you to him.
After two weeks of this argument, Hassan had decided to take matters into his own hands. His aunt had gone into the city for the afternoon, and Hassan had taken his chance. He was going to find out what was happening in his kingdom since he’d left—all the things his aunt didn’t know, or wouldn’t tell him.
The afternoon was warm, and the Sacred Road bustled with activity. Olive trees, the emblem of Pallas Athos, lined the limestone street all the way from the marina to the agora, then on to the Temple of Pallas, at the highest point of the city. Colonnaded porticos opened to shops, tavernas, and public baths on either side of the road.
The cold marble and austere limestone of this city made Hassan miss the bursting colors of Herat’s capital, Nazirah—rich gold, warm ochre and carmine, verdant green, and vivid blue.
You there! Stop!
Hassan froze. He’d barely made it a mile from the villa, and already he’d been caught. Regret and embarrassment heated him.
But when he turned toward the voice, he realized they hadn’t been addressing him. A butcher stood beside his market stall, calling out to someone else in the street. Thief! Stop!
Several other people stopped, looking around. But one small boy kept running, and before Hassan could decide what to do, the boy crashed straight into him.
Hassan stumbled but managed to catch the boy so that they didn’t both tumble onto the paved street.
Thief! Thief!
the butcher cried. That’s the thief!
Hassan held the boy by the shoulders, taking in his tattered, knee-length pants and grimy face. He clutched a brown paper package to his chest. His dark features and bronze skin were unmistakably Herati—here was a child of Hassan’s homeland. Hassan glanced back at the butcher, who was huffing his way over to them, red-faced.
Thought you’d get away with it, did you?
the butcher said to the boy. You won’t like what they do to thieves in this city.
I’m not a thief!
the boy growled, stepping out of Hassan’s hold. I paid for this.
Hassan turned to the butcher. Is that true?
The boy gave me a meager few coins, not even half what that cut is worth!
the butcher said indignantly. Thought I wouldn’t notice and you could sneak off, did you?
The boy shook his head. I’m sorry! I thought it was enough. I counted, but all the money is different here, and I was confused.
This sounds like a simple misunderstanding,
Hassan said, putting on his most diplomatic smile. He reached into the coin purse that hung from his belt. I’ll make up what’s owed. How much was it?
The butcher eyed the boy. Three virtues.
Hassan counted out three silver coins stamped with the olive tree of Pallas Athos and held them out to the butcher.
The butcher sneered, closing his hand around the money. You refugees think you can get by on our charity forever.
Hassan seethed. A small part of him wished he could reveal who he was to this butcher, to publicly castigate him for saying such things to the Prince of Herat. Instead, with a smile fixed in place, he said, Your charity inspires us all.
The butcher’s jaw twitched, like he wasn’t sure if Hassan was mocking him or not. With a grunt and a nod, he returned to his stall.
As soon as the butcher’s back was turned, the boy spun away from Hassan.
Hassan caught him by the shoulder. Slow down. We’re not done here. You weren’t really confused by the coins, were you?
The boy looked up sharply.
It’s all right,
Hassan said gently. I’m sure you had a good reason.
I wanted to get it for my mom,
the boy said. Lamb stew is her favorite. But we haven’t had any since … since we left home. I thought if I could make it for her, it would make her feel like we were back there, and maybe she wouldn’t cry so much.
Hassan couldn’t help but think of his own mother, who was back home, though he would give anything to have her here with him. To comfort her, the way this boy, barely older than ten, wanted to comfort his own mother. To tell her everything would be all right. Or maybe to have her tell him that. If she was even still alive. She is, he thought. She has to be.
He swallowed, looking down at the boy. We’d better get this back to her, then. You’re in the camps, aren’t you?
The boy nodded. Together, they set off, Hassan’s anticipation growing as they trekked up the final stretch of the Sacred Road. The High City of Pallas Athos had been built into a mountainside, three tiers stacked on top of one another like a towering crown. The Sacred Gate welcomed them to the highest tier, upon which the agora spread out, overlooking the entire city.
Above, the marble edifice of the Temple of Pallas gleamed, grander than any of the temples in Nazirah. Broad white steps led up the hillside to the temple portico, bracketed by rows of columns. Light spilled from the massive doors like a beacon.
This was one of the six great monuments of the world, where the founder of this city, the Prophet Pallas, had once given guidance to the priests who ruled, and spread the word of his prophecies to the rest of the world. According to The History of the Six Prophetic Cities, people from all over the Pelagos continent used to come to the agora on pilgrimage to the City of Faith, to consecrate themselves with chrism oil and leave offerings of incense and olive branches on the steps of the temple.
But no pilgrims had set foot here in the hundred years since the Prophets had disappeared. The structures of the agora—the storerooms, public baths, arenas, and acolytes’ living quarters—had begun to crumble and grow over with weeds and tall grass.
Now, the agora was brimming with people and activity again. In the two weeks since the coup, Herati refugees had gathered here under the protection of the Archon Basileus and the Priests’ Conclave of Pallas Athos. This was the reason Hassan had left the villa—to finally see with his own eyes the others who, like him, had escaped Nazirah. People like this boy.
The earthy scent of woodsmoke filled Hassan’s nose as he and the boy passed through the Sacred Gate and into the makeshift village. Tents, lean-tos, and crudely built shelters crowded the spaces between the weathered structures. Scraps of cloth and debris littered the dirt-caked ground. The wails of crying children and the brusque tones of argument punctuated the air. Straight ahead, a long line of people spilled out from a colonnaded structure, carrying jugs and buckets full of water, moving carefully to ensure that not a single precious drop was wasted.
Hassan stopped, taking in the sight. He wasn’t sure what he’d expected to find in the agora, but it wasn’t this. He thought shamefully of the pristine gardens and palatial rooms in his aunt’s villa, while here, just over a mile away, his own people were crammed into crumbling, ramshackle ruins.
Yet even in the overcrowded disarray, Hassan felt a pang of familiarity. The crowds were made up of dark-skinned desert settlers, and sun-bronzed delta folk like himself. He was struck by the thought that he could never have walked so casually into a place like this back home. There were celebrations like the Festival of the Flame and the Festival of the Flood, of course, but even then Hassan and the royal court were removed from the chaos and crowds, looking out from the palace steps or the royal barge on the Herat River.
Exhilaration and a strange sense of trepidation washed over him. This wasn’t just the first time he was seeing his people since the coup—this was his first time seeing his people as one of them.
Azizi!
a frantic voice broke through the din of the crowd surrounding the fountainhouse. A woman with plaited dark hair came rushing toward them, trailed by a silver-haired woman holding a baby at her hip.
Azizi ran at a tripping pace toward the black-haired woman, who was clearly his mother. She wrapped him up in an unrestrained embrace. Then she pulled away and began yelling at him, tears in her eyes, before sweeping him up in another tremendous hug.
I’m sorry, Ma. I’m sorry,
Hassan heard as he approached. Azizi looked plaintive.
I told you not to leave the agora!
his mother scolded. Anything could have happened to you.
Azizi looked like he was struggling valiantly not to cry.
The older woman sidled over to stand at Hassan’s shoulder. Where did you find him?
In the market, just outside the gate,
Hassan replied. He was buying lamb.
The woman made a soft noise as the child in her arms tried to squirm away. He’s a good kid.
Then abruptly, she asked, Are you a refugee, too?
No,
Hassan lied quickly. Just in the right place at the right time.
But you are Herati.
Yes,
Hassan said, trying not to rouse her suspicion. I live in the city. I came here to find out if there’s been any more news out of Nazirah. I … I have family there. I need to know if they’re safe.
I’m so sorry,
the woman said gravely. There are too many of us who don’t know what’s happened to our loved ones back home. The Witnesses have stopped almost all the ships going in and out of the harbor. The only information we have is coming from whoever’s managed to escape east, to the desert and the South Sea.
Hassan knew exactly how that felt. In his bedchambers in the villa, he had a leather-bound notebook filled with every measly piece of information he’d gained about what had happened to his city. He still didn’t know what had happened to his parents. He wasn’t sure if this was because his aunt Lethia herself didn’t know, or because she was protecting him from the truth.
He didn’t want to be protected. He just wanted to know, one way or another. He steeled himself as he asked, What about the king and queen? Has there been any word about what happened to them?
The king and queen still live,
the woman said. The Hierophant has them captive somewhere, but they’ve been sighted in public at least twice since the coup.
Breath gusted out of Hassan’s chest. He felt faint. He had needed to hear those words so badly. His parents were alive. They were still in Herat, though at the mercy of the leader of the Witnesses.
There’s no word about the prince,
the woman continued. He hasn’t been seen in Nazirah since the coup. He’s completely vanished. But many of us think he survived. That he managed to escape.
It was only by chance that Hassan hadn’t been in his rooms when the Hierophant attacked the palace. He’d fallen asleep down in the library over a volume of The Fall of the Novogardian Empire, and he’d woken to the sounds of shouting voices and the smell of acrid smoke. One of his father’s guards had found him there and snuck him out over the garden walls and down to the harbor, telling him his mother and father were waiting for him on one of the ships. By the time Hassan realized the guard had been lying, he was already sailing away from his city and the lighthouse that stood like a sentinel at its harbor.
What is the Hierophant doing with the king and queen?
Hassan asked.
The woman shook her head. I don’t know. Some say he’s keeping them alive to placate the populace. Others say he’s using them to demonstrate his power—both to his followers and the Graced in Nazirah.
His power?
he echoed, sensing she meant something more than just the command the Hierophant seemed to have over his followers.
The Witnesses claim that the Hierophant can stop the Graced from using their abilities,
the woman said. That simply by being in his presence, the Graced are rendered powerless. His followers believe that if they prove themselves, the Hierophant will teach them to wield this power, too.
Hassan’s jaw clenched. The thought of his mother and father being subjected to such a demonstration made Hassan feel sick with anger. He couldn’t help but picture it—his mother, proud and tall, refusing to bend. His father, gentle and thoughtful, hiding his own fear for the sake of his people. The Hierophant, standing before them both, his face concealed by a gilded mask.
Hassan had never laid eyes on the man who had taken his country from him, but others told of the mask he wore—gold with a black sun carved into the center of its forehead, obscuring his face and identity.
Over the past five years, reports had built a picture of the masked man. A foreigner, preaching through the eastern regions of Herat. A skilled speaker, able to silence a room with a gesture or incite a riot with a word. It was said the Hierophant had once been an acolyte of the Temple of Pallas, but had turned his back on the Prophets and begun delivering his own message. He taught townsfolk that the powers of the Graced were unnatural and dangerous, his message gathering a following of others eager to blame the Graced for every ill suffered in their own lives.
Hassan could still remember how troubled his father had been as accounts of violence against the Graced poured in from every corner of the kingdom—and even from within Nazirah. In every attack, the perpetrators said the same thing. The Hierophant had told them to desecrate the village temple. The Hierophant had told them to burn down the healer’s home. The Hierophant had told them they were purifying the world of the Graced.
The Hierophant.
You should talk to the Herati acolytes,
the woman said, nodding toward the Temple of Pallas. They’ve been aiding the other refugees. If your family made it here, they’ll know.
Hassan opened his mouth to thank her, but a bone-shattering shriek cut through the air. The people around them froze. Without pausing to think, Hassan sprinted through the crowd toward the temple. Two boys clipped past him, running in the opposite direction.
Get the Sentry! Get the Sentry!
one of them yelled.
His alarm growing, Hassan pushed himself faster until he reached the steps of the Temple of Pallas. A crowd of people had formed there, as if waiting to ascend.
Step back, old man!
a voice barked from the steps above.
Hassan craned his neck to see who had spoken. About two dozen men stood along the temple steps, holding hammers, sticks, and cudgels. They wore robes patterned with black and gold around the sleeve cuffs and hem, their hoods pushed back to reveal close-cropped hair. The one who’d spoken had a short gray beard.
Witnesses—followers of the Hierophant. Just the sight of them made anger roil in Hassan’s stomach, and he found himself pushing through to the front of the crowd. At the top of the stairs, an old man, dressed in the light green and pale gold chiton of a Herati temple acolyte, stood facing the Witnesses.
This temple is a holy refuge for those in need,
the old man said, his voice quieter than that of the bearded Witness. I will not allow you to desecrate it in the name of your lies and hatred.
The only people seeking refuge here are the Graced,
the bearded Witness hissed. They taint the sacred energy of the world with their unnatural powers.
These last words seemed to be directed at two of the other Witnesses. They were younger. One, short and round-faced; the other, tall and gaunt. The short one clutched a pickax in his shaking hands. He almost looked frightened. But the tall one beside him looked eerily calm, except for his gray eyes, which gleamed with excitement. Instead of a black and gold robe, each wore a white cowl. Initiates, rather than full-fledged members.
The rest of the Witnesses seemed to be waiting for them to make their move.
The bearded Witness’s voice grew louder as he continued. This city is proof of the corruption of the Graced. The men who call themselves priests spend their time indulging their carnal vices and demanding tribute from the people of this city. A Graced killer is running rampant in the streets, taking lives. And now these cowardly Graced have come here, fleeing from the Immaculate One and his truth.
The Immaculate One. Hassan knew that phrase. It was what the Witnesses called the Hierophant.
The Reckoning is coming,
the bearded Witness said. Soon your corrupt kings and false priests will fall, just like the abomination who sat on the throne of Herat. And the Immaculate One will reward his followers, even his newest disciples. Those who prove their commitment to his message earn the honor of wearing his mark.
The Witness pushed his sleeve up. Burned into the back side of his varicose hand was the symbol of an eye with a black sun for its pupil. This is your chance to show him your devotion to our cause and earn your mark. Make these abominations fear his name. Show them the truth of their corruption. Show them all so they cannot look away!
The other Witnesses followed the man’s lead, pushing up their sleeves to reveal the same mark burned into their skin.
The old acolyte stepped up to the round-faced initiate. You don’t need to do this,
he said gently. The Hierophant has preached lies to you, but you don’t need to listen to them.
The round-faced initiate tightened his grip on the pickax, his eyes darting from the ringleader of the group to the crowd behind him.
Beside him, the tall, gaunt initiate sneered at the acolyte in disgust. "Your Prophets were the ones who preached lies. I will show the Immaculate One my devotion." Without another word, he stepped up to the acolyte and struck him across the face. The blow was hard enough to send the old man to his knees.
The crowd cried out. Hassan’s blood surged in his veins, spurring him up the steps toward the Witnesses. The gaunt initiate turned and spat on the acolyte. Fury overwhelmed thought as Hassan seized the initiate by the cowl and punched him squarely in the face.
He heard the crowd gasp as the initiate stumbled back.
The bearded Witness stepped in front of him, whirling on Hassan. Who in the Hierophant’s name are you?
Someone you shouldn’t anger,
Hassan replied. But it’s much too late for that.
He was aching for a fight, and the Witnesses seemed ready to give it to him. They were kin to the zealots who had taken his kingdom and imprisoned his parents. And they were as close as Hassan was going to get to the Hierophant right now.
The gaunt initiate stepped up to him, lip curled in a snarl. More Graced scum lording your ill-gotten power over the rest of us. Your Prophets cursed you when they gave you Grace.
Hassan flushed with rage—and shame. Because Hassan was not Graced. Though that fact did not lessen his rage at the Witnesses and their warped ideology. He wanted to correct the initiate—and, at the same time, he wanted to be feared by him, to be thought of as one of the chosen Graced.
In the Six Prophetic Cities and beyond, the Graced were revered for their abilities. The first of the Graced had been given their powers by the Prophets. Though there were only a few thousand Graced born every year, many of them occupied positions of power.
Every queen and king who had sat on the throne of Herat so far had possessed Grace. Hassan had spent much of his life wishing for one of the Four Bodily Graces to manifest in him. To be able to heal with the Grace of Blood, or scry with the Grace of Sight. To be like his father, with the Grace of Mind, able to create objects imbued with sacred esha, capable of wondrous things. Or like his mother, whose Grace of Heart made her as strong as an ox, as fast as a viper, able to see in the dark and hear a heartbeat from a thousand feet off.
As the years passed, Hassan’s longing had grown more and more desperate. While Grace was known to manifest in people as old as seventeen, his parents and grandparents had discovered theirs before they were twelve. Now at sixteen, Hassan had long since shut away any hope that he was Graced. The initiate’s words had brought all of that childhood shame bubbling back to the surface.
Hassan lunged at the gaunt initiate, his body acting out of pure fury. His arms reached out, hands flexed and ready to lock around the initiate’s throat. But something collided sideways with him, and when Hassan turned, he saw the short, round-faced initiate above him.
He swung at Hassan again. Hassan ducked, catching himself on one knee. When he looked up, he saw that the tall, gaunt initiate had seized the old acolyte’s robe.
The Immaculate One will know the strength of my devotion!
the gaunt initiate cried, reaching for his belt and pulling out a glinting knife. The Prophets are gone, and the Graced will follow!
"No!" Hassan cried, leaping toward them. He shoved the acolyte hard, out of the way, and dove to tackle the gaunt initiate. But the initiate sidestepped and turned toward Hassan, blade flashing in his hand.
Though Hassan lacked her Graced speed and strength, his mother had taught him how to defend himself. He pivoted on his heel and flung his arm out toward the knife. The blade caught him just below the elbow, slicing into the flesh of his bare arm. Pain seared into him, but he did not let it jar his focus. With his other hand, he reached for the knife and forced it away from his body.
The gaunt initiate and he were in a deadlock, their grips pushing against each other, forcing the knife high. Warm blood dripped down toward Hassan’s shoulder, his whole arm pulsing and hot with pain. He looked into the initiate’s wide eyes. The deep, burning rage that had been left to fester for the past two weeks coursed through Hassan as he tore the knife away.
He looked down at the blade in his hand, overcome by the urge to plunge it straight into the initiate’s heart. As if he could make him pay with blood for all the pain these people, and their leader, had caused his