The CONSTANT power play is shit. Like. Shit shit. She owes him. But not HIM. Her brother owes someone else. Who she killed. So i dont know who she thiThe CONSTANT power play is shit. Like. Shit shit. She owes him. But not HIM. Her brother owes someone else. Who she killed. So i dont know who she thinks she owes. The MMC is saying him. But i dont know how as HE didn’t pay the debt. And she killed the other dude. She has no money because she has to give all of it to the club. He fucks with her time and money. And she just lets it happen because why? He has a good dick !?? He’s obsessed with her but not to TAKE CARE of her just to fuck her. It’s so annoying. 52% in and it’s the EXACT SAME battles as page two. If it got better or the romance felt like it was changing. Then good. Great. Let’s go for it. But it’s not changing or growing. It’s just annoying. ...more
Ughhhh. This was some high school writing and drama
It read like a fanfiction that wanted to be this big world building standalone reverse harem
But thUghhhh. This was some high school writing and drama
It read like a fanfiction that wanted to be this big world building standalone reverse harem
But the world is never built and I absolutely cannot get into it with the writing style and how incredibly lame everybody is on top of that new Nebraska is never fun Why was this this way?
It’s a horrible name are you telling me this author didn’t have one single friend that was like hey pick a different state ...more
Everyone loved this. And I just couldn’t get into it. I liked the consept but EVERYONE. legit. EVERY SINGLE ONE OF THEM was lying to her and she was lEveryone loved this. And I just couldn’t get into it. I liked the consept but EVERYONE. legit. EVERY SINGLE ONE OF THEM was lying to her and she was lying ISH to them. But they know who she is and it’s this whole I’m more bad ass than you peeing contest for over half the book. I was just really over it. So frustrating. ...more
You know what. I’m just not a fan of her FMC’s. They have no backbone. They whine and let others walk all over them. Then let an apology be the endingYou know what. I’m just not a fan of her FMC’s. They have no backbone. They whine and let others walk all over them. Then let an apology be the ending- no grovel (in this case her dad) the mmc’s are like. Too perfect and no real angst or emotion. The stepmom gets NOTHING bad. It’s so unsatisfying. Just not that good and almost 600 pages of nothing but constantly being walked on. Just. Poor story telling. ...more
W. O. W. This was bad. Like. BAD BAD. Honestly. Maybe one of the worst novella’s I’ve EVER read. Like. No depth. No plot. No story line. No conflict. W. O. W. This was bad. Like. BAD BAD. Honestly. Maybe one of the worst novella’s I’ve EVER read. Like. No depth. No plot. No story line. No conflict. Or angst. Or love. Or communication. Just. A weird closed door type spice and mentions that they are shifters. Like. A lot — So bad. ...more
I don’t know I guess I wish that this was more of a spicy book or had more romance. It is extremely plot driven and honestly pretty long. I think that I don’t know I guess I wish that this was more of a spicy book or had more romance. It is extremely plot driven and honestly pretty long. I think that the paranormal aspect was nice and I did enjoy the world that she built and I wouldn’t mind her creating more paranormal books, but I wish that she would edit herself a little bit more in the sense of the constant talking. It is so much talking it is a lot of talking with side characters. It is just a lot there was so much talking in the performance—prohibidado- Anyways, I didn’t enjoy it. I would say it’s a solid three star. The spice is pretty low so don’t go into it thinking that you’re going to get a spicy book and also don’t go into it thinking you’re going to get this wild love swept romance because you’re not ....more
Horrid. Horrible. Shit. Bad. He is mean. Like. MEAN MEAN and she says nothing. Thinks nothing. Does nothing. Reacts nothing. It’s bad. Skip this and sHorrid. Horrible. Shit. Bad. He is mean. Like. MEAN MEAN and she says nothing. Thinks nothing. Does nothing. Reacts nothing. It’s bad. Skip this and save yourself. ...more
You have to go into this being ready for a character driven book with really no plot and 90% spice
Unfortunately, the spice ends up being pretty boringYou have to go into this being ready for a character driven book with really no plot and 90% spice
Unfortunately, the spice ends up being pretty boring towards the end because it feels like that’s all you’re getting and there’s not much of a plot or growth. It’s just kind of novella style, Insta lust and Insta love.
Also, check your triggers because it is definitely consensual nonconsent I don’t know it was OK this was OK. It definitely wasn’t a reread....more
OK a book that is the short should not take me two days to read it
It reads as if every page not only do you not know where it’s going to go, but the aOK a book that is the short should not take me two days to read it
It reads as if every page not only do you not know where it’s going to go, but the author also did not know where it was going to go
There’s no flow of conversation I’m genuinely confused as to what the main character job is and how he is financed at all. Is he a model? Is he a storm chaser? Does he sell the stuff or does he keep it genuinely confused?
And the whole romance/fall in love aspect is a hot mess express, and does not make sense at all
I’m normally OK with Novelas because I understand it’s going to be Insta and sometimes Insta love and that’s fine but this one just felt weird and disconnected the whole time I would just skip it...more
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