Student Shocker! King Vampire Drops Out of School! "Well, it was obvious wasn't it. Like any teenager I'd already learned everything I needed too. TheStudent Shocker! King Vampire Drops Out of School! "Well, it was obvious wasn't it. Like any teenager I'd already learned everything I needed too. There was nothing left to learn from some old asshat, so, 'to Hell with the Headmaster,' I said. Hey? Wait a sec! What's that rumbling sound?" - Prince Conrad Vulkan - The Vampire King Chronicles
An entertaining story which reminded me of the plethora of 1970's disaster movies where a host of characters are developed then pitted against a colossal titanic monumental disaster where only a few survive.
Why not 5 stars? I felt the author painted themselves into a corner with the ending, and had to turn to (1) sudden bad guy attack of the stupids, (2) a massive hubristic bad-guy gloat speech, and (3) the big daddy of a Deus Ex Machina to resolve the story...
It wasn't a good look and cost a star with this reader.
That said, it would make a good tele-series - too long to be condensed into a movie format, and with a little judicious and carefully applied foreshadowing - the ending could be a lot better.
Master Vampire Mayhem! Cooped Up Vamp Drains Mid-West Town! "Well, my brother walled me up deep in a cellar! After 75 years of captivity I'd developedMaster Vampire Mayhem! Cooped Up Vamp Drains Mid-West Town! "Well, my brother walled me up deep in a cellar! After 75 years of captivity I'd developed a raging thirst! What's a self-respecting Master Vampire gonna do?!" - Danner - The Fanged Gazette
Sometimes we have the great pleasure to find a book that hits the sweet spot of what we love to read. Nightblood's combination of action and horror was right on the money. Imagine Rambo vs Dracula set in a small town and you'll have the picture.
I was stunned by the sequence of escalations in the back half of the book. It was just one thing after another as running battles and last stands exploded onto the page like a home-made Molotov cocktail laced with silver cutlery.
Just as I thought, 'What else could possibly happen?' something would to dial the threat up to 11.
I also loved how the main protagonist had a host of helpers whose own heroism stood equal to the tasks before them. It wasn't a one man show, and a much stronger story for it.
Brilliant. Read it. Enjoy it.
Strongly Recommended, 5 'Heroes all round,' stars....more
Judicial Imbroglio! De Facto or De Jure! "Well, I'm sure the Master spotted what was going on right from the start before turning a 'blind eye,' to soJudicial Imbroglio! De Facto or De Jure! "Well, I'm sure the Master spotted what was going on right from the start before turning a 'blind eye,' to some very shadowy shenanigans. Of course, being a vampire, he doesn't really have a blind eye to turn, but you get my drift ... now, that pie does look delicious, so I'll duck out now while I've got the chance." - Jonathan - The Vampire's Valedictory
Charming, clever, short, and written with a clear sparse style - which I love.
Recommended 5 'All is not what it seems,' stars....more
Lost Skull Shocker! Billionaire Bites Own Throat With Fabled Cranium! "Well, we took him to the hospital because of all the bleeding... but that mightLost Skull Shocker! Billionaire Bites Own Throat With Fabled Cranium! "Well, we took him to the hospital because of all the bleeding... but that might've been a big mistake, especially once he started champing at the bit!" - The Captain Hindsight Heckler
Thoroughly entertaining right up until the last 2 pages where it suddenly ends with a huge dangling thread.
Is there a sequel?
This would make an excellent splatterfest (lots of gore) movie (except for the ending).
Recommended. 4 'dangling at the end,' stars....more
Scribe Shocker! Wannabee Author Banned From Series Gala Ball! “Well, I don’t know how it happened, but with the series a wrap, I couldn’t get a ticketScribe Shocker! Wannabee Author Banned From Series Gala Ball! “Well, I don’t know how it happened, but with the series a wrap, I couldn’t get a ticket to the gala ball. But dang it, I won’t be stopped. I know everyone is going to a nearby pub for the after party, and I’ve donned a clever disguise with a hidden camera and microphone. Come with me and we’ll see what everyone really thinks about The Metaframe War series.” - The Scribbling Investigator
I approached the pub doors.
The bouncer lifted his right hand, palm forward. “This is a private function. There’s no way your getting in dressed in that weird costume.”
I spread my hands wide, “I’m a mascot for the series.”
He consulted a list held with his left hand and shook his head. “Nup. No mascot on the list.”
“Hang on a sec,” I moved around and read the list over his bulging shoulders. I stabbed a name on the list with my forefinger. “There I am.”
He squinted at the name. “What? ... Olgoi? Olga? Olga Kharkhoi?”
“Your pronunciation is crap, but yeah … that’s me.”
“You don’t sound like an Olga to me?”
“You’d be surprised by how many people would agree with you, but ...” I spread my hands wide and shrugged.
He looked at me with hard eyes. “What’s the password?”
There’s a password? “Ahh … hypersonic?”
His eyes narrowed. “You’re guessing.”
“Of course not!” I lied indignantly.
He frowned, and the corners of his mouth turned down at the corners like he’d just bitten into a particularly sour lemon. He looked me up and down dismissively, and then reluctantly waved me through.
I was in. I flicked my gaze around the interior of the bar. Everyone except Chloe Armitage was there. The hubbub of voices slowed to a stop and everyone stared at me for a long moment. I was almost about to fidget nervously when they collectively shrugged or otherwise dismissed me. My clever disguise worked perfectly. Everyone saw me as belonging to the group. I had a free pass to mingle amongst them. So, mingle I did, by approaching the bar and ordering a beer.
I found myself standing next to Peter Lamb, James Haley and Tamsah al Ramil. Tamsah said, looking around the bar, “So, this is an Irish pub in Boston. I think I’ll get a pint of Guinness.”
James looked at him askance. “Kilkenny is better. Try that.”
Another big fellow edged into the conversation. “Kilkenny better than Guinness? Them’s fighting words.”
“Oh, hi Luke,” James said. “You still playing Boston Police detectives?”
“No. But I’ve signed up for a gig as an occult PI in an upcoming series.”
“Not with Rodaughan, I hope.”
“Yeah, the same guy.”
“You gotta be kidding me!”
Luke stepped back, grinned, and slotted a double gunshot finger expression at James. “Gotcha! Signature move. Chalk one up Team Walker.”
A posh English voice said from across the room, “Did someone say, ‘Team Walker.’”
James glanced dismissively at the Englishman sitting in a booth by himself, then looked back at Luke and said, “Aw! Damn it!”
“You owe me a drink!”
“Nah!” Peter said. “Don’t worry about that. I’m covering the bar.” He fished out a fat bill fold and slapped half-a-dozen hundred-dollar bills on the counter.
“Gee, you're flush,” Tamsah said.
“Well,” Peter said. “This has always only been a part-time gig for me. I’ve been working over in the Marvel Universe at Stark Industries as an engineer. They have an excellent bonus plan. However,” he leaned forward and said in a conspiratorial whisper, “There’s a rumour that DC are looking to pick me up to play the ‘Steam Crusader,’ a series about a super-strong engineer that builds a nuclear-powered steam-shooting giant mecha to fight crime with. Yeah … just waiting for the green light on that one.”
The others crowded around Peter, offering their hopes and congratulations. I edged aside, somewhat shocked. I always considered Peter a full-time character. Hadn’t I paid them all enough attention?
I shook my head and moved through the crowd. In front of me, Cornelius Crane sat at a table with Dalien Morte, Boris Hartmann, Ramin Kain and his offsider Samuel Luther. Cornelius was complaining about the dearth of good villain roles.
He pounded the table with a pale fist-
A siren wailed. Red-blue lights strobed against the windows. People looked up, their heads swivelling around. A loud voice called out in front of the pub, “Hey! This is a private-”
The front doors exploded inward. The bouncer flying backward through the air before landing and sliding along the floor. Everyone dodged out of the way as he slid to a crumpled heap against the back wall.
All eyes went to the entrance.
She strode into the bar room, dressed in an outfit equal parts glossy black leather, red chiffon, and raw sex appeal. She pulled to a stop, tossed her luxuriant head of raven-black hair and locked her vivid blue-eyed gaze upon me.
My mouth filled with dry cotton while ice curdled in the pit of my stomach. A whispered murmur chorused around the room, “Chloe!”
She cocked her head as if listening, lifted her right forefinger vertical and said, “Wait!”
Everyone waited.
A young girl, dressed in Gothic black, with long straight dark hair walked into the bar like she owned the place, a troop of tall cadaverous manlike creatures, dressed in heavy dark coats followed her in.
The party goers split apart, making way for these … vampires!
My heart sank. It was Ludmilla from the Guild of Vampire Characters with her enforcers.
Chloe strode over to me and tapped me in the chest with a stiff finger. “Dressing up as a purple worm will not save you.”
I frowned. “Et tu-"
“Geez,” Chloe remarked over her shoulder at the vampires. “The cliché is strong with this one.”
Ludmilla lifted a vellum scroll and read from it. “Graeme Rodaughan, you are hereby charged with underpayment of a vampire character.”
“What? I paid everyone the statutory amount!”
Ludmilla stared at me. “A vampire playing a vampire character attracts a 17% bonus per night.”
“What? But-” I looked at Chloe. She stared back at me ‘mesmerizingly.’ The penny dropped along with my jaw. I’d been under her spell from the beginning.
Ludmilla called out. “Pay up or else!”
The vampire enforcers leered at me while Chloe raised an expectant eyebrow.
“A 17% bonus? Over the last ten years? I’m bankrupt!”
“So be it!” Ludmilla declared.
Chloe stepped aside while the enforcers rushed me. Hands like iron took hold of me, lifted me from the floor and carted me from the bar room and into the street outside. An armored semitrailer waited in the street. Blue and red lights strobed from its roof. The enforcers bundled me into the back of the trailer and slammed the doors shut with a loud clang.
The interior of the trailer lay in a deep gloom broken by thin strips of wan street light cutting through high vents in the walls. Something stirred near the front of the chamber. I was not alone in here.
A more than human voice whispered in the dark, “Fresh meat hides, fancy suit no shield, tasty snack!”
Vampire Thespian Imbroglio! Players or just Played! "Well, I just don't understand what happened. Talk about an overzealous theatre critic. One minuteVampire Thespian Imbroglio! Players or just Played! "Well, I just don't understand what happened. Talk about an overzealous theatre critic. One minute we're giving the best show since Shakespeare was in business, and the next people are showing up with pitchforks and scythes. Talk about a tough crowd. It's hell out there. You think being a vampire king in the wild west is easy - you try it. I dare you!" - Adam Price, Vampire King, Western Districts, - The Supernatural Gazette.
A very entertaining read by Jonathan Janz, well-drawn heroes, vile villains, plenty of action, suspense and buckets of gore.
Plus some heart-rending scenes.
A wild-west vampire novel with heart - what a winner.
Recommended. 5 'Dust and Blood Lust,' stars....more
Puppet Master Shocker! Untermenschen Strike Back! "Well, I don't know what the hell happened. One minute I was master of the universe and the next I wPuppet Master Shocker! Untermenschen Strike Back! "Well, I don't know what the hell happened. One minute I was master of the universe and the next I was fish bait. It just goes to show that you can't take your position at the top of society for granted." - Mind Vampires Missive
Dan Simmons' novel addresses a key theme that is dear to my own heart. The processes of 'dominion.'
Dominion is the circumstance where one person wedges another between two choices - both bad. Like when someone puts a gun to your head and orders you to do something that is clearly bad for you, but not as bad as getting shot - so you obey.
The target of dominion must choose between the lesser of two evils. The least evil choice will serve the interests of the dominator... by these means those people who seek the obedience of others ensure compliance.
If you look closely, human society is shot through with this process.
In Simmons' novel he takes this a step further, positing a rare type of individual who can overwrite your personality with their own, and use you as a meat-puppet to exercise their will. (As a side effect, if this goes on - your personality vanishes forever).
The 'mind vampire,' villains are wonderfully well drawn. This is a huge plus for me as a poorly-drawn villain is real turn off.
That said ... there are a number of major flaws.
While conceptually brilliant, this novel fails in the execution. The author has made a choice to express this story from multiple points of view across the same time frames.
This means that a given set of events will be seen from multiple points of view, over and over again. When I first realised this was happening, I was confused by the jumping back and forth through time, then I realised it was a deliberate technique.
The key issue is that many of these scenes are without tension as we already know precisely what will happen...
Furthermore, there is a massive super-black-hole Deus Ex Machina at approx. 70% in that saves the 'good guys,' from an impossible situation... I'm not a fan of DEMs, and this has to the biggest stroke of good luck I've ever seen in my life of reading fiction. For those who have read the book, I refer to the wonderfully lucky finding of the 'Toyota Landcruiser,' in the woods.
Followed with a 'Gloat Speech,' by the major villain just before the long-awaited climatic battle...
Followed by a final battle where the most important secondary character (Natalie) is going up against horrendous odds, and suddenly does several things which are ridiculously stupid (and out of character for her), harming her cause... Talk about B-Grade movie crap... I was face palming as I was reading this and losing 'all care factor,' at 99% of the book.
For FS!
Hence 4 stars. Despite its several flaws, this story is a tour-de-force of imaginative power.
Regarding those who rule us...
Regular people attempting to understand the mind vampires...
Mouse One: "No mouse would eat another mouse! Cats must be insane." Mouse Two: "They're sick. It must be a horrible sickness that drives Cats to murder mice." Mouse One: "Perhaps there is a cure?" Mouse Two: "There must be a cure." Mouse One: "Wait ... Oh No! The cat is waiting outside our hole!" Mouse Two: "Horrors! It caught Freddie yesterday, and tortured him for minutes before -" Mouse One: "No! Don't say it! I can't stand to think about it." Mouse Two: " - well, you know..."
The Cat (Upon listening to this exchange): "You're attempting to define me in 'mouse,' terms. Ha! Of course, you misunderstand me. I don't murder you. I catch you and eat you to fill my belly. Catching and eating mice is simply an efficient way to survive. When I play with you, I am not torturing you, I am practicing my hunting skills which are essential to my survival. I would be a very poor cat indeed if I spent my days worrying about the suffering of mice. Ha! and you think I'm insane."
Dwell on that for a moment or two - will we ever understand evil in a way that allows us to throw off the yoke of servitude?
On a final note, the book contains two male on female rape scenes which don't add much to the narrative (apart from minor fleshing out of one of the secondary characters) and seemed gratuitous to me.
Henchman Scandal! Familiar Fakes Romance for Crusty Masters! "Well, I don't know what Todd was thinking! In the old days, we'd just snatch nubile younHenchman Scandal! Familiar Fakes Romance for Crusty Masters! "Well, I don't know what Todd was thinking! In the old days, we'd just snatch nubile young wenches from the streets to slake our master's thirst. Dragging the process out just made his masters vulnerable to discovery, and then look what happened - the Hexecutioner showed up..." - The Familiar's Factchecker
Another enjoyable romp with the Hexecutioner. I'm enjoying this easy to read series. Neat and deliciously nasty vampires in this one, and the familiar was a wonderfully drawn mirror of narcissism.
Recommended, 5 'I'll have the nubile wench for dinner, Todd,' stars....more
Sidekick Scandal! Little Guy Gets Huge Tongue From Hero! "Well, I'd just bravely (I can't swim a lick) saved both our lives by convincing the Big Guy Sidekick Scandal! Little Guy Gets Huge Tongue From Hero! "Well, I'd just bravely (I can't swim a lick) saved both our lives by convincing the Big Guy to jump into a raging waterfall. Next thing I know, I'm freezing wet and the Boss has his tongue down my throat slapping my tonsils with it. Who knew he'd never done resuscitation before. I suppose I shouldn't be surprised as he's a Vampire Hunter and not a life guard at a beach."
Another exuberant outing from Jay Raven as Vampire Slayer, Anton Yoska, seeks to discover the fate of his long lost daughter.
Ambitious Vampire Queens, mad scientists, determined master spies, traitorous cavalry officers, and a taunting vampire prisoner with a terrible secret circle about Anton's quest like a horde of slavering ghouls.
Will his loyal friends and a bear with a hunger for vampire flesh help or hinder his desperate quest?
Will Anton Yoska discover the fate of his daughter or finally discover his own true self reflected in the mirrors of her eyes?- You'll have to read this very entertaining book to find out.
Author Shocker! Early Draft Plan Found in Open Grave! "(Slaps document on table) Frack! Look at this rubbish!"
DRAFT PLAN
[1] Chiara and Anton discover Author Shocker! Early Draft Plan Found in Open Grave! "(Slaps document on table) Frack! Look at this rubbish!"
DRAFT PLAN
[1] Chiara and Anton discover to their horror they are half brother and sister. (Anton's mum had a secret one night stand with Chiara's dad.)
[2] In disgust, Chiara abandons the rest of the team. She reconciles with her father and accepts a job as the Red Ghost's right hand girl.
[3] Louise is discovered finagling the Shadowstone finances, but successfully pins it on James.
[4] James is indicted, tried and imprisoned for a crime he didn't commit.
[5] Li and Peter have a madly passionate love affair. Li also sleeps (once) with Anton while drunk. Li gets pregnant and does not know who the father is.
[6] Dalian Morte gets a fatal illness. Chiara nurses him until he dies. Then succeeds her father as the new Red Ghost.
[7] Akimitsu frees Mekra. She seeks out Chloe and declares "I am your great, great, .... grandmother, join with me to defeat Crane."
[8] Chloe accepts Mekra's offer and together they conduct a hostile corporate takeover of Crane's empire. They stab Crane to death in his boardroom. Seconds later, Chloe betrays and kills Mekra, and assumes full control of the Vampire Dominion.
[9] Tamsah declares his love for Li. She leaves Peter, and they open a dojo together in New York. Three years later, they have a successful multi-state franchise and are raising Li's son who is named Dalian...
[10] Scarred by their experiences with Li and Chiara, Anton and Peter discover a hidden passion for each other. Peter gives up on weapons and becomes a stand-up comedian and makes $millions in Vegas. Unable to find a role for himself and secretly jealous of Peter's fame and success, Anton becomes addicted to drugs and hires himself out as a gigolo to make money.
[11] James becomes a gang boss in prison, breaks out and exacts revenge upon Louise in an orgy of torture and violence.
[12] After a brief sexual encounter with an out-of-work circus clown, Anton remembers that his (nominal) father is still imprisoned in silver at Rikers. Riven with guilt he hitch hikes his way to New York. He frees William in a heart-felt scene.
[13] Newly freed from silver, a ravenous William Slayne bites Anton and nearly kills him. Shocked at what has happened, he converts Anton, "To save him from death."
[14] Anton, on discovering he is a vampire chooses to walk into the sunlight...
END
What Recommendation?: '? 'Still a Crazy Hot Mess,' stars!!!
P.s. Final manuscript completed on the 20th August 2021....more
Mind F*** Mayhem! Double, Triple, Quadruple Cross Outsmarts Everyone! "Well, it was all my own plan!" - Unnamed source declares! - Evil Genius GazetteMind F*** Mayhem! Double, Triple, Quadruple Cross Outsmarts Everyone! "Well, it was all my own plan!" - Unnamed source declares! - Evil Genius Gazette
I'm still smiling at the end of this wonderfully entertaining story. Yes, there was mystery, founded upon mystery, with double-crosses at warp speed and backed by more murder and mayhem than you could point a flintlock pistol at.
One quibble - there is an East European crime lord who uses words like 'git,' and 'chum,' and sounds like he might be from the south end of London - it's a little bit like seeing a Boeing 747 flying in the background of an 18th century costume drama - but what the hell, this story is so much exuberant fun that only a purist would make note of this...