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Darker with the Lights on by David Hayden
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Now on the outstanding shortlist for the 2017 Republic of Consciousness Prize for 'gorgeous prose and hardcore literary fiction' from small, independent presses.

Little Island Press is an independent publisher of fiction, poetry and essays. Founded in 2016, in its own words it "publishes innovative, intellectually ambitious writing in elegant, hardback editions."

Having started with poetry, it has this year moved into fiction, including David Hayden's Darker with The Lights On.

The connection with poetry is apposite for many of the stories in the collection are more prose poems than stories. Beautifully written at the sentence level, with stunning images (particularly the use of colour) and sublime prose, but rather surreal and at times one is left a little wondering how each paragraph, sometimes each clause, relates to the preceding one.

I look up through the glass and into the massing sky, bruised silver-grey and violet, and raise my arms, my hands, thinking through the sudden pain in my head, and see a frozen lark fall at great speed before exploding on the concrete path, scattering its music all around the garden in numberless, glittering fragments.

My appreciation of the collection was stronger in the pieces with a clearer story and sense of direction. To give a few highlights:

In Play, a professor delivers an over-complex lecture on the philosophy of play while the students listening bicker amongst themselves and comment on his discourse:

'Pichard argues in his 1955 book Play in Play that the objective of all play is the abolition of biological reality. I parse the words and gain their sense but don't really know what they mean.
...
Paradoxically Pichard stresses the essentially embodied nature of play. On investigation this turns out to mean nothing more than that one needs a body in order to be able to play. It is the kind of dressed-up statement of the obvious that is presented as an intellectual breakthrough but is, in fact, a banal utterance with no analytical power whatsoever.'

'Have you heard that he writes most of the papers that he cites?' Said Sameh.

'He pseudonymously dialogues with himself reserving his scything vituperation for authors who are in fact himself,'said Sameh.


Sameh concludes (a sentiment I remember from more obscure maths lectures at University):

'I will work on the assumption that he is giving us the questions, and the answers in outline, for the end of year exams and see where that takes me.'

In Auctioneer, the eponymous character explains why he believes in disposing of objects and gives the most eloquent rationale I have come across for my own habit of not keeping books:

Being intimately involved with things that are more permanent than one's self is a lowering experience in my opinion. The alternatives - flowers, food, some, music- we have them, we enjoy them and when they go we are still here, remembering. Few events give me greater pleasure than the demolition of a familiar building, fortunately a common event. Books may well be the worst of the household ephemera: dry husks that, slab by slab, rise in great, whispering walls, beginning their owners. The essence of a book is another thing entirely, not the words as such bit what lies beneath the words, that is what can set you free. That is why libraries are so important, as long as one does not linger too long in them. If to have to buy a book I give it away immediately after I've finished reading.

There is humour too. In How to Read a Picture Book, a cigar smoking talking squirrel (!) gives a group of children a very neat explanation of the different elements of a story for children, while in Last Call for the Hated a man experiences persistent, obvious but rather low-level hostility from the populace, such as smearing toothpaste on his door and ostentatiously serving the person behind him first in the chip-shop queue.

And in Reading, an older man apologetically approaches a younger as they wait on a train platform:

'I know something very few people know. There are small occasions of magic still lodged in the world. Books... Books are enchanted. Not in the way that people imagine. Not in the sense of wordy transits of delight wrought by restless writers, but something very specific and universal. When you die - when you die - you revive in the world of the last book you were reading before your ... demise. I can tell that you don't believe me and I don't expect you to but - because I like you - I wanted to warn you. What are you reading at the moment?'

'Management Accounting for Non-Financial Specialists'.

'That's bad'.


I must admit at times I found it more difficult to get a grasp on some of the other stories but as Hadyden himself explains in the Irish Times (https://www.irishtimes.com/culture/yo...) this is a deliberate technique:
“When I took that specificity away, I ended up with something that became much, much more interesting, more uncanny, and more generalisable to people’s experiences of different kinds of discomfort. Taking the specifics out, the recognisable accents and language, for me anyway it made it more interesting, it made it stronger, it made it possible to develop the theme of the story more strongly.
A striking debut and a unique piece of writing. At times I did feel a rather inadequate reader, like the professor in Play - I parse the words and gain their sense but don't really know what they mean. - but the writing was always beautiful at the word level and the stronger stories highly memorable.

Thanks to Little Island Press for the ARC.
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Reading Progress

June 1, 2017 – Shelved
June 1, 2017 – Shelved as: to-read
June 7, 2017 – Started Reading
June 8, 2017 – Shelved as: indy-presses-2018
June 9, 2017 – Shelved as: 2017
June 9, 2017 – Shelved as: to-read
June 9, 2017 – Finished Reading
December 10, 2017 – Shelved as: republic-of-consciousness-2018

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Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer I can see from your review that you really struggled with this.


Paul Fulcher I was feeling generous at the time in the first flush of ARC pressure and my new duties


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer Yes. I have just gone back and revised my rating of An Ounce of Practice.

And it was also before we (relative to your views) dissed Blue Self Portrait.


Paul Fulcher I do like this one but certainly one of the weaker books of those I have read among its peers.


message 5: by Neil (last edited Aug 27, 2017 04:08AM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Neil It's still 5 stars from me and one my favourite books of the year, even though it's short stories and I don't normally do short stories!

Looking forward to hearing him on 7 Sep.


Paul Fulcher Interesting twitter thread making a strong case for the book

https://twitter.com/byers90/status/90...

Although the crucial "he is trapped by neither language nor narrative" is the key issue I have


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer Fascinating. Thanks for giving the link.

I don't normally enjoy short story collections and particularly experimental ones but I loved this. I think the scattered stories which as you say had more of a clearer story and sense of direction gave me a sense of space to enjoy the more experimental parts.

I also liked the fact that books, reading and imagination were some of his key themes.


Paul Fulcher I have retweeted it as well - suggest you do to your hordes of followers


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer That would be you and Neil Griffiths.


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer One of the people I follow on Twitter has just described this as "shaping up to be one of the books of 2017".


message 11: by Paul (new) - rated it 4 stars

Paul Fulcher I feel the need to promote 'our' books.

And The Sellout was clearly "one of the books of 2016".


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer Great review of this book in this month's The Literary Review. It "impresses more with each re-reading"


message 13: by Neil (new) - rated it 4 stars

Neil I'm on my second time through and I think I'd agree with that.


message 14: by Paul (new) - rated it 4 stars

Paul Fulcher Had to downgrade this on a 2nd read.


message 15: by Lesley (new)

Lesley This looks worthy at first blush. But, - noting the very good critic Paul Fulcher’s demotion of the work upon rereading (after the first flush of enthusiasm in the promoting of ‘our’ books) - I wonder if it is worth my time?


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer I would try it Lesley. There are some great stories in the collection.


message 17: by Paul (new) - rated it 4 stars

Paul Fulcher It is actually very good in many respects - I am more judging this now by higher standards as my re-read was in the context of the RoC prize shortlist deliberations and there are some fantastic books on that list.


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