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Hamnet by Maggie O'Farrell
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it was ok
bookshelves: skim-read-to-end

I'm clearly in a minority here (again!) but I found this unengaging and flat. There's too much indirect speech and the whole story feels very distanced rather than immediate. O'Farrell talks in the foreword about how she's wanted to write this book for decades, and the result is that it feels laboured, weighted down with expectation that doesn't come to fruition for me.

I especially hated the portrayal of Agnes as one of those almost witchy 'wise women' who abound in historical fiction: fey, with preternatural senses, a herbalist as a code for 'female' power... it's very predictable, very common, very Philippa Gregory!

The vaunted connection to Shakespeare is tangential at best, and the idea that the death of Hamnet illuminates the writing of 'Hamlet' is sparse. The claim made in the novel that Shakespeare was so traumatised that he never wrote about plague is not quite true: 'Thou art a boil, a plague sore, an embossed carbuncle in my corrupted blood' (King Lear); 'A plague on both your houses' (Romeo & Juliet) are just a couple of examples. It is the case that censors at the time wouldn't let naturalistic representations of the plague pass (playhouses were one of the first public spaces to be closed when outbreaks occurred) but that applies to all Elizabethan/Jacobean dramatists and is a structural limitation rather than an indication of personal grief.

A book which is not for me, then, but clearly other reviewers have loved it.
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message 1: by CanadianReader (last edited Feb 08, 2020 03:53AM) (new) - rated it 1 star

CanadianReader I just don’t think the author has the literary chops to pull this off. Why am I not surprised she’d resort to the stock female-power character of the witchy wise woman? At least you report none of the overblown similes and metaphors that I saw in her most recent work. There’s something between the melodramatic and the twee in O’Farrell’s work that just drives me nuts.


Roman Clodia I'm not sure I've read O'Farrell before and won't be rushing to try another. Tbh, I disliked it pretty much from the start and the writing is bland and weak. That's what comes of falling into cover love!


CanadianReader Roman Clodia wrote: "I'm not sure I've read O'Farrell before and won't be rushing to try another. Tbh, I disliked it pretty much from the start and the writing is bland and weak. That's what comes of falling into cover..."
I believe you mentioned to me you’d read an early novel of hers, finding it pleasant but unspectacular. I’ve read three of her works, the last being her memoir, which had a few good pieces, but some unfortunate overwriting—which I believe she can’t quite help. I was inclined not to read this, but the link with Shakespeare was slightly enticing. I trust your assessment entirely, however. It confirmed my initial reservations.


Roman Clodia Yes, I think you're right about an early novel - clearly not memorable! It was the Shakespeare link that sold it to me but it's quite tenuous and really the story could be about any couple losing a child and the consequent grief. There's little historical consciousness.


message 5: by Steve (new)

Steve R Ouch - that hurts! Philippa Gregory is one of my favourites!


Roman Clodia Steve wrote: "Ouch - that hurts! Philippa Gregory is one of my favourites!"

I've noticed that you like Gregory! I enjoyed her The Other Boleyn Girl but couldn't get on *at all* with the others. The 'witchy' power-woman? - *yawn*... ;)


message 7: by Jo (new) - rated it 2 stars

Jo Swenson I’m glad I’m not alone! I’m halfway through and considering abandoning it. I completely agree about the witchy woman thing and having little meaningful connection to Shakespeare.


message 8: by Théo d'Or (new)

Théo d'Or That's reminds me of famous brands like " Adibas", or " Like "...)))


message 10: by Hugo (new) - rated it 3 stars

Hugo I completely agree with everything you said, especially about it feeling distanced and labored. I never cared deeply about these flat and archetypal characters.


BrokenTune Oh, I wish I had come across your review before I started the book. I'm struggling with the overly descriptive writing already.


Jonathan Pool Your point about O'Farrells declared wish to write this book for decades, and consequently its feeling rather laboured, rings true for me.
Your concluding line also sums up my response to the book.


Roman Clodia Yes, it was obviously a heartfelt topic for O'Farrell and a labour of love, but I just never connected with the writing.


Geraldine I am currently attempting to get through it as it is the next read in our bookclub but I am not liking it at all. Actually hate the contrived prose and feel no engagement at all. Couldon't care less about amy of the characters at this point or what their fate may be, I don't feel Maggie O'Farrell actually connected with her charcaters and they certainly haven't come to life yet.


nastya I guess I am in a minority with you. Because I just don't understand what people see in this book that I don't. I even read a few professional reviews to get it.


Roman Clodia I've seen reviews that love the prose style that you and I disliked. I've struggled with O'Farrell before so it's not a one-off with this book - too overwrought for me.


nastya It’s not only prose. it’s also as if she spent all these pages describing smell of honey, sound of bees, look of apples in their red coats like a soldier on the afternoon of parade or whatever that she forgot to write human characters. they are the vaguest archetypes possible as a result


Roman Clodia I know! I'm just amazed that other readers can buy into the stereotype of the witchy 'wise woman' (yawn)


nastya stepmother will be from cinderella, older brother will be protective and big and silent, mother in law.... she will be jealous of snow white’s beauty and her ability to have children. prince charming will be enchanted by otherworldliness of our girl. lunch!


Barbara G I agree completely...this book was torturous.


message 21: by Mary (new) - rated it 5 stars

Mary Stokes I’m so sad that none of you liked this book as I thought it was one of the best I had read in years. I’m generally a plot driven reader and this book does contain a LOT of descriptive language. There were several times I just wanted to say - get on with it so I can find out what happens next! But overall I thought the language was so beautiful I just enjoyed it. I did listen to this book and the reader was incredible so if you didn’t finish and want to give it another go, try listening.


message 22: by Laura (last edited Sep 11, 2020 03:54AM) (new) - added it

Laura Hi RC - I watched the online presentation of the Women's Prize for Fiction - and as you no doubt know Maggie O'Farrell won. I have to say though that I read a sample via kindle - sometime before this whole Prize process and I did not particularly like what I read. My intuition was - melodrama - from the very first pages I felt my responses being manipulated. The grandfather hitting the young boy Hamnet - the brutality of it and then the description of the girl - asleep and ill. To me - these are typical flags that warn me away from a book - and yet it has won.
Do you have a response to this? The judges repeated several times - that for all of them - 6 - this was clearly the winner.!!
I haven't read the whole book - so I don't really want to say anymore.


Roman Clodia Laura wrote: "... from the very first pages I felt my responses being manipulated"

As ever, all readers react subjectively - for me, the writing was over-wrought, the setting was thinly imagined, the characterisation was packed with cliched representations, and the link to Hamlet specious. The whole thing feels earnest and self-important - but that's just my opinion!

The Booker International winner, The Discomfort of Evening, also deals with grief at the death of a child but in a fresh, innovative, complex way - and was a 5 star book for me.


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Laura Hi Roman C - I would like to be supportive of the W's P for F but I don't like O'Farrell's style.
Thanks for the recommendation - The Discomfort of Evening - I will surely look into this one.
I would like to know more about the judges - I think they were selected more on their feminist/activist backgrounds than on their literary knowledge!


Roman Clodia I do wonder to what extent prize panels are constituted more for people who don't read much and so like to be 'told' what's 'good'? And to boost sales, of course.

I wouldn't characterise Hamnet as 'feminist' either, other than it gives centre place to a female character


message 26: by Lyn (new)

Lyn Elliott I tried to read this and gave up quite early in the piece, and I’m astounded it won the Booker.


message 27: by Laura (new) - added it

Laura Not the Booker - it won The Women's Prize for Fiction.


message 28: by Tom (new)

Tom Johnson a good book transports me to another time, another place. All this book did was to aggravate the hell out of me. Gave up reading very early - I could not turn another page.


Annette Excellent review Clodia. The distant narrative wasn't for me.


Angelique I totally agree - I like her writing, but this just fell flat and the fakey sort of 16th century speak was like nails on a chalkboard


message 31: by Kim (new) - rated it 2 stars

Kim Very glad to see that I am not alone in my complete underwhelmment! Do not understand all the praise heaped on this book. Seemed as if the plot was the result of a marketing survey--Shakespeare hook so it qualifies as "literary fiction," empowered female, don't forget the death of a child, etc. etc. Very emotionally manipulative and just not very interesting. Thanks for allowing me to rant!


Marianne | Petite.BumbleBeeBooks I am currently reading this o e for bookclub, and I am so bored... the characters are cliche (the witchy woman, the drunk grandfaither, the wistful tutor.. boring...) , the writing is so pompous, and the story is literally going nowhere at this point. So disapointed, because it was so highly praised.


Jennifer I’m ready to join the underwhelmed club. My biggest problem was with the shadowy figure of Shakespeare. I was annoyed that he was never given a name; he was always, coyly, “the father,” “the eldest son,” etc. He never showed any signs of the breadth of knowledge, the quick wit, the pure poetry that was Shakespeare. This Will was a very dull boy, indeed.


Denise Thanks. I agree! Comforting to know I’m not alone.


Seawitch Yeah I also don’t get the acclaim. I forced myself to finish. The last 20 pages were good. But a lot of work to get there.


Emily MacLean Had such high hopes for this book, but every page was a slog and I had to fight to finish. Weirdly happy to know that I’m not alone in this and your review touches on everything I disliked. I’d genuinely have preferred it if the book was bad, but even worse - it was so incredibly boring.


message 37: by Pogo (new)

Pogo Dragon I've just got to the end of the Kindle sample and found myself skimming the endless, overblown, descriptive passages looking for the tiny nuggets of plot or character. I think I'll pass on buying the book.


Ann J To each his own. Reading is a very personal thing. People raved over the truly silly Mexican Gothic, whose only saving grace was the title and catching cover. I thought it was awful. A waste of time really. When there are books like Hamnet out there. I thought Hamnet was beautifully written. It’s okay for those who didn’t care for it. Again, we are all entitled to our opinions. The Vanishing Half was another one that I was not as onboard with as many. It was okay, but made some year’s best lists. Not mine for sure.


Christy Cross Could not agree more. More pages describing the night and the forest than developing the story. I was disappointed.


message 40: by D (new) - rated it 2 stars

D Scott Thank you. Now I feel affirmed. This is the first book in a very long time that I did not finish. Sadly disappointing. So boring. There are way too many on my "Books I Can't Wait to Read" list.


message 41: by Di (new) - rated it 2 stars

Di Redman I agree. Parts were so heavily laboured they didn't flow. The characters seemed a tad 1 dimensional. Stereotyped.


message 42: by Gar (new) - rated it 1 star

Gar Wow, couldn’t agree more, and I’m only several pages into this yawn-fest. One thing that stands out is the repetition. Two paragraphs that basically say the same thing, and they don’t propel the story any further along, and in each paragraph she restates two words twice! Why the emphasis? Page 16 “casting and casting “, “carefully, carefully”


Mrs Ruth Wiseman I agree entirely , this book was recommended to me but I found it slow with the promise of a grand finale which never came! Not for me I'm afraid.


message 44: by Jacky (new) - rated it 1 star

Jacky Completely agree. The Hamlet/Shakespeare connection felt like a tool to draw in readers, and nothing more.


Marian Kendricks Hamlet was written in (1600) after Romeo&Juliet (1594) you


message 46: by Amy (new) - rated it 3 stars

Amy I found the story interesting, but it completely failed on its selling point of how his son’s death influenced one of his most famous plays. Shakespeare is barely home, his son dies, he’s gone again, and then the last ten pages are about the play.


message 47: by Mark (new) - rated it 4 stars

Mark Porton Nice review, for me this started really slowly but it grabbed me halfway and I was hooked!


Margie Wilson I agreed with you and felt badly about it.


Jackie Bojczuk I agree! Thank you for making me feel better. I was so excited for this book and sadly couldn’t wait to finish.


Vdianne Reading this was a chore. Trite.


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