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Rent: Paid in Full (Bad Decisions, #1)
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This book was fine. Some parts were actually good, I liked the chemistry between the characters a lot.
However! Some of the writing choices were so weird and off-putting. And one of the MCs kept talking to the reader? It was weird.
This line, in particular, haunted me:
"His hole is perfection. Tiny and tight. A pinched, hairy little knothole clenching strongly to keep me out."
This is not omegaverse, it's not (lol) those kinds of knots. We're talking... Knotted ass hair? A later quote:
“I liked your hole hairy. I liked that dark swirl. Liked having to work my way through it to find what I wanted.”
... Why??? It might be a kink? But it sure ain't mine. And while I have no problem with hairy asses, this distracted me to the point where I kept finding myself thinking about whether the next scene would have one mc brushing out the other mc's ass hair. So. Yeah.
However! Some of the writing choices were so weird and off-putting. And one of the MCs kept talking to the reader? It was weird.
This line, in particular, haunted me:
"His hole is perfection. Tiny and tight. A pinched, hairy little knothole clenching strongly to keep me out."
This is not omegaverse, it's not (lol) those kinds of knots. We're talking... Knotted ass hair? A later quote:
“I liked your hole hairy. I liked that dark swirl. Liked having to work my way through it to find what I wanted.”
... Why??? It might be a kink? But it sure ain't mine. And while I have no problem with hairy asses, this distracted me to the point where I kept finding myself thinking about whether the next scene would have one mc brushing out the other mc's ass hair. So. Yeah.
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Feb 03, 2024 07:18AM
I really struggled with Ryan talking to the reader. I was like do not acknowledge me, I am not here 😂😂 and yes the ‘knothole’ was a wtf moment for sure
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