Sarah's Reviews > Rent: Paid in Full

My second read by this author, I didn’t enjoy it as much as Unbreak Me. I didn’t find the relationship between the characters as appealing, there was endless pages of sex scenes that were all overly poetic and the ending was quite sudden with a long time jump to the epilogue.

The ratio of erotica to romance didn’t work for me. I didn’t really feel them falling in love until the very end, and that’s when it stopped. There is also humiliation kink, it did get better as they went on but in the beginning I wasn’t feeling it in a sexy way. I did like seeing their feelings change for each other when outwardly they didn’t show it. However for me, I wanted to see more of that happening on page, with more romance and less sex.