♡• Midnight •Passion•♡'s Reviews > Highlander's Fated Bride

** spoiler alert ** Hmm, not sure what happened between the first book I read by this author (Taken by the Cruel Highlander) and this one, but what a massive difference in quality.

I'm sure I'm not the first to point it out, but it must be said, the amount of typos, inconsistencies, and plain old grammatical errors was pretty tough to swallow.

Ie. At first, Dakota is blonde haired, blue eyed. The next time we hear a description, she has dark brown eyes. Further on, she's apparently got green eyes now too. Then later on, when she's riding, she's said to have dark brown curls... These are rather large oversights that scream this was either written by a ghost-writer, or Maddie forgot what the hell she was writing about.

There was no revelation, no epiphany moment, no sudden realization that he was being an ass - one minute Williams' completely devoid of any emotion whatsoever, the next, he has no problem at all saying I love you. The pacing was all over the place.

There are so many things I could nitpick about this book, but I would be typing my own novel at that point so I'll leave it there.