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LinkedIn has changed how I write. Here’s the #1 way to improve and the best tools: 👉 Say more with less. It’s tempting to use extra words for emphasis. We want to drive the point home. But less is more. The more time I put in here, the more efficient my writing gets. Here's this is in action: 🔴 This is truly, without exaggeration, the single best thing you can do to improve your writing. 🟡 This is the single best way to improve your writing. 🟢 This is the #1 way to improve. Shorter is better. Shorter is stronger. But it takes practice. A few tools to aid in your learning: The tools don’t do it for you. They help you do it better. 1️⃣ Hemmingway Editor - an online editor that highlights extra words. I sharpen every post I share here using Hemmingway Editor. 2️⃣ Grammarly & ProWritingAid - both help you reduce clutter, avoid the passive voice, make better word choices, etc. (I use PWA) 3️⃣ Smart Brevity - This little book offers a great framework for short and dense communication. It gives many helpful examples.  Required reading for email heavy organizations. 4️⃣ Claude or ChatGPT - I run substantive emails through a chat to make them more precise. Clients love this. It saves us all time. (If you want the prompt, let me know below!) 5️⃣ Axios HQ - An enterprise tool by the Smart Brevity team.  I’m not a user, but hope for a personal plan in the future.  I know their CTO and he's a legend. What are you learning here? And what tools help? — ♻️ Repost if this helped or inspired. 🔔 Follow me, Dan Cumberland 🚀 for more. Build a business you love & a career that inspires you.

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Tanya Alvarez

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3mo

I love AuthoredUP

Melvin Varghese PhD

💪 Girl dad 🛋️ Psychologist 🌄 Optimized career for family and health ✍️ founder dad, podcaster (1.81M+ downloads), course creator (242+ students, $317K+ sales)

3mo

These are amazing tips. I gotta check out Smart Brevity.

Coming up on ten years of writing- I don't cringe at 2014 articles. My overuse of "But" had to be corrected. Start a new sentence. Articles are evergreen and writing is temporal. I captured a moment and it is nice to revisit occasionally.

Meg Clarke

500+ clients getting found on Google | Founder of Clapping Dog Media → The Transparent SEO Agency

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I haven’t heard or used most of these tools— thanks for sharing

Stephen Moegling

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Grammarly Pro has made my content and email more succinct and streamlined. I grew up as an ad copywriter. It was beaten into my skull: fewer words, better impact. Thanks for sharing your hacks. You're a master of brevity.

Mando Sallavanti III, CFP®, CEPA

Build passive income, retire early, and travel | Financial Planning for Sales Executives with an Entrepreneurial Mindset | Trusted by 87 Families | DM me PLAN and let’s chat

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Short and simple has the biggest impact!

Ren Saguil

LinkedIn Top Sales Coaching Voice | I help B2B sales teams WIN high-value enterprise deals | MBA, Sales Strategy, Revenue Growth |

3mo

Smart Brevity looks interesting! will check thanks for sharing. I write really long...hahhahah 😂

These are great tips... especially the idea to run writing through a GPT. Saying more with fewer words is a consistent struggle for me... but hopefully I'm getting better!

Kris Ward

Business Coach 🚀Productivity Coach Specializing in Helping Coaches, Consultants, Entrepreneurs Get Out Of Their Own Way.⭐Avoid Burnout, Be Super Productive ⭐ Find, Hire Train VA's | Author | Speaker | Podcast Host

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Great advice, Dan Cumberland 🚀! Shorter definitely equals stronger. It's all about getting to the point and making every word count. Keep it up!

Liz Wheeler

Founder - Life Force Wellness Ltd. | Private coach to busy executives. Take charge of your health destiny, up your confidence and live really well; with incredible energy, strength and vitality, for a lifetime.

3mo

Thank you for the recommendations. I don’t use anything! I shall investigate 🙂

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