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Analytical Writing Rubric
AP Score 9-8 Grade=A,
5 pts.
7-6 Grade=B,
4 pts.
5 Grade=C, 3
pts.
4-3 Grade=D, 2
pts.
2-1 Grade=F, 1
pts.
Thesis Thesis indicates
a clear sense of
purpose and
insightful or
original
perspective.
Focuses
entirely on the
prompt.
Includes a
clear and
effective
thesis.
Focuses mainly
on the prompt.
May be broad,
general or
simplistic but
focuses mostly
on prompt.
Weak and/or
underdeveloped
thesis. May not
adequately
address prompt.
Thesis is
undeveloped,
factual or
ignores the
prompt.
Reasons/
Evidence
Contains
specific
evidence that is
carefully
chosen and
effectively
supports the
thesis.
Contains
evidence that
effectively
supports the
thesis. Quotes
are integrated
but may not be
as fluent or
cohesive.
Contains
evidence that
generally
supports thesis
and uses some
direct
quotations.
Evidence may
not relate
directly to the
thesis or prompt.
Lacks
evidence.
Analysis Analysis is
deep, complex
and
demonstrates
insightful,
thorough
understanding.
Fully Explains
and analyses
evidence.
Analysis
demonstrates
thoughtful
understanding
that explains
and analyzes
the evidence.
No summary.
Analysis
demonstrates
some
understanding
but may be
inconsistent or
limited.
Analysis is
oversimplified
and may be
mostly
summary.
Lacks analysis.
Organization Is clear, logical
and purposeful
in its
organization.
Is clear and
logical in its
organization.
Is basic and
predictable in
its organization
but includes all
parts of an
essay.
Essay lacks one
or more
elements of
basic
organization.
Lacks
organization
and/or a
conclusion.
Voice and
Style
Uses
vocabulary,
word choice
and language
that are precise,
powerful,
mature,
academic and
not repetitive.
Sentence
variety.
Uses
vocabulary,
word choice
and language is
formal, precise
and effective.
Shows some
sentence
variety.
Word choice is
simple and
predictable in
some places
and may be
imprecise.
Needs more
creative and or
original
thinking-clich.
Word choice is
simple and
predictable in
most places and
may be
imprecise.
Overly clichd.
Language is
confusing and
inaccurate. No
understanding
of audience.
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Conventions No significant
errors.
Follows MLA
format and
citation rules.
Minor errors in
MLA
formatting and
proofreading.
Some errors in
conventions
interfere with
understanding.
Many errors in
conventions
interfere with
understanding.
Numerous
errors in most
sentences
which distract
from meaning.
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Examples of Transitions:
Illustration Thus, for example, for instance, namely, to illustrate, in other words, in particular,
specifically, such as
Contrast On the contrary, contrarily, notwithstanding, but, however, nevertheless, in spite of, in
contrast, yet, on one hand, on the other hand, rather, or, nor, conversely, at the same time,
while this may be true.
Addition And, in addition to, furthermore, moreover, besides, than, too, also, both-and, another,
equally important, first, second, etc., again, further, last, finally, not only-but also, as well as,
in the second place, next, likewise, similarly, in fact, as a result, consequently, in the same
way, for example, for instance, however, thus, therefore, otherwise.
Time After, afterward, before, then, once, next, last, at last, at length, first, second, etc., at first,
formerly, rarely, usually, another, finally, soon, meanwhile, at the same time, for a minute,
hour, day, etc., during the morning, day, week, etc., most important, later, ordinarily, to begin
with, afterwards, generally, in order to, subsequently, previously, in the meantime,
immediately, eventually, concurrently, simultaneously
Space At the left, at the right, in the center, on the side, along the edge, on top, below, beneath,
under, around, above, over, straight ahead, at the top, at the bottom, surrounding, opposite, at
the rear, at the front, in front of, beside, behind, next to, nearby, in the distance, beyond, in
the forefront, in the foreground, within sight, out of sight, across, under, nearer, adjacent, in
the background.
Concession Although, at any rate, at least, still, thought, even though, granted that, while it may be true,
in spite of, of course.
Similarity Of
Comparison
Similarly, likewise, in like fashion, in like manner, analogous to.
Emphasis Above all, indeed, truly, of course, certainly, surely, in fact, really, in truth, again, besides,
also, furthermore, in addition.
Details Specifically, especially, in particular, to explain, to list, to enumerate, in detail, namely,
including.
Examples For example, for instance, to illustrate, thus, in other words, as an illustration, in particular.
Consequence Or Result So that, with the result that, thus, consequently, hence, accordingly, for this reason, therefore,
so, because, since, due to, as a result, in other words, then.
Summary Therefore, finally, consequently, thus, in short, in conclusion, in brief, as a result,
accordingly.
Suggestion For this purpose, to this end, with this in mind, with this purpose in mind, therefore.
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A VOCABULARY FOR DESCRIBING LANGUAGE 2014-2015
TONE
TONE (POSITIVE)
Happiness
amiable cheery contented ecstatic elevated
elevated enthusiastic exuberant joyful jubilant
sprightly
Pleasure
cheerful enraptured peaceful playful pleasant
satisfied amused appreciative whimsical
Friendliness, Courtesy
accommodating approving caressing comforting compassionate
confiding cordial courteous forgiving gracious
helpful indulgent kindly obliging pitying
polite sociable solicitous soothing sympathetic
tender tolerant trusting
Animation
ardent breathless brisk crisp eager
excited earnest ecstatic energetic exalted
feverish hasty hearty hopeful inspired
lively passionate rapturous vigorous impassioned
Romance
affectionate amorous erotic fanciful ideal
lustful sensual tender
Tranquility
calm hopeful meditative optimistic serene
relaxed soothing spiritual dreamy
TONE (NEUTRAL)
General
authoritative baffled ceremonial clinical detached
disbelieving factual formal informative learned
matter-of-fact nostalgic objective questioning reminiscent
restrained sentimental shocked urgent
Rational/Logical
admonitory argumentative candid coaxing critical
curious deliberate didactic doubting explanatory
frank incredulous indignant innocent insinuating
instructive oracular pensive persuasive pleading
preoccupied puzzled sincere studied thoughtful
uncertain unequivocal probing
Self-Control
solemn serious serene simple mild
gentle temperate imperturbable nonchalant cool
wary cautious prudent
Apathy
blas bored colorless defeated dispassionate
dry dull feeble helpless hopeless
indifferent inert languid monotonous resigned
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sluggish stoical sophisticated vacant
TONE (HUMOR/IRONY/SARCASM)
amused bantering bitter caustic comical
condescending contemptuous cynical disdainful droll
facetious flippant giddy humorous insolent
ironic irreverent joking malicious mock-heroic
mocking mock-serious patronizing pompous quizzical
ribald ridiculing sarcastic sardonic satiric
scornful sharp silly taunting teasing
whimsical wry belittling haughty insulting
playful hilarious uproarious
TONE(NEGATIVE)
General
accusing aggravated agitated angry arrogant
artificial audacious belligerent bitter brash
childish choleric coarse cold condemnatory
condescending contradictory critical desperate disappointed
disgruntled disgusted disinterested passive furious
harsh hateful hurtful indignant inflammatory
insulting irritated manipulative obnoxious quarrelsome
shameful superficial surly testy
threatening uninterested
Sadness
despairing despondent foreboding gloomy bleak
melancholy maudlin regretful tragic
Pain
annoyed biter bored crushed disappointed
disgusted dismal fretful irritable miserable
mournful pathetic plaintive querulous sore
sorrowful sour sulky sullen troubled
uneasy vexed worried
Unfriendliness
accusing belittling boorish cutting derisive
disparaging impudent pitiless reproving scolding
severe spiteful suspicious unsociable reproachful
Anger
belligerent furious livid wrathful savage
indignant enraged
Passion
fierce frantic greedy voracious hysterical
insane impetuous impulsive jealous nervous
reckless wild
Arrogance/Self-Importance
boastful bold condescending contemptuous pretentious
pompous supercilious pedantic didactic bombastic
self-righteous assured confident defiant dignified
domineering egotistical imperious impressive smug
knowing lofty peremptory profound proud
resolute sententious stiff saucy
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Sorrow/Fear/Worry
aggravated anxious apologetic apprehensive concerned
confused depressed disturbed embarrassing fearful
grave hollow morose nervous numb
ominous paranoid pessimistic poignant remorseful
serious staid enigmatic
Submission/Timidity
aghast alarmed ashamed astonished astounded
awed contrite self-deprecatory docile fawning
groveling ingratiating meek modest obedient]
obsequious resigned respectful reverent servile
shy submissive surprised sycophantic terrified
timid tremulous unpretentious willing
VERBS
These verbs will be especially effective when the subject is the author or a character. They are excellent replacements for
be verbs and instrumental in the formulation of thesis and theme statements. Careful use of these verbs can result in precise
identification of an authors purpose. Follow your teachers directions to categorize the verbs as transitive, intransitive,
positive, negative, or neutral.
VERBS FOR LITERARY ANALYSIS
accentuates accepts achieves adopts advocates
affects alleviates allows alludes alters
analyzes approaches argues ascertains assesses
assumes attacks attempts attributes avoids
bases believes challenges changes characterizes
chooses chronicles claims comments compares
compels completes concerns concludes condescends
conducts conforms confronts considers contends
contests contrasts contributes conveys convinces
defines defies demonstrates depicts describes
delineates despises details determines develops
deviates differentiates differs directs disappoints
discovers discusses displays disputes disrupts
distinguishes distorts downplays dramatizes elevates
elicits emphasizes encounters enhances enriches
enumerates envisions evokes excludes expands
experiences explains expresses extends extrapolates
fantasizes focuses forces foreshadows functions
generalizes guides heightens highlights hints
holds honors identifies illustrates illuminates
imagines impels implies includes indicates
infers inspires intends interprets interrupts
inundates justifies juxtaposes lambasts laments
lampoons lists maintains makes manages
manipulates minimizes moralizes muses notes
observes opposes organizes overstates outlines
patronizes performs permits personifies persuades
ponders portrays postulates prepares presents
presumes produces projects promotes proposes
provides qualifies questions rationalizes reasons
recalls recites recollects records recounts
reflects refers regards regrets rejects
represents results reveals ridicules satirizes
seems sees selects specifies speculates
states strives suggests summarizes supplies
supports suppresses symbolizes sympathizes traces
understands vacillates values verifies
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VERBS TO USE INSTEAD OF EXEMPLIFIES
appears asserts attests to certifies confirms
connotes corroborates defines demonstrates denotes
depicts discloses elucidates endorses establishes
evinces exhibits expounds exposes intimates
manifests points to proves ratifies relates
shows substantiates suggests typifies upholds
validates
ADJECTIVES FOR USE IN LITERARY/RHETORICAL DISCUSSION
DESCRIBING THE AUTHOR
cultured intellectual erudite well-read sagacious
sensible rational philosophic analytical imaginative
perceptive visionary prophetic optimistic broad-minded
idealistic spiritual orthodox unorthodox sympathetic
sophisticated original whimsical humorous conservative
liberal progressive radical reactionary unprejudiced
realistic romantic shallow superficial bigoted
opinionated intolerant hypocritical fanatical provincial
narrow-minded sentimental skeptical cynical
DESCRIBING STYLE/CONTENT
lucid graphic intelligible explicit precise
exact concise succinct condensed pithy
piquant aphoristic syllogistic allusive metaphorical
poetic prosaic plain simple homespun
pure vigorous forceful eloquent sonorous
fluent glib natural restrained smooth
polished classical artistic bombastic extravagant
rhetorical turgid pompous grandiose obscure
vague diffuse verbose pedantic ponderous
ungraceful harsh abrupt labored awkward
unpolished crude vulgar formal artificial
utilitarian humanistic pragmatic naturalistic impressionistic
subjective melodramatic fanciful authentic plausible
credible recondite controversial mystical improbable
absurd trivial commonplace heretical
DESCRIBING DICTION
high or formal low or informal neutral precise exact
concrete abstract plain simple homespun
esoteric learned cultured literal figurative
connotative symbolic picturesque sensuous literary
provincial colloquial slang idiomatic neologistic
inexact euphemistic trite obscure pedantic
bombastic grotesque vulgar jargon emotional
obtuse moralistic ordinary scholarly insipid
proper pretentious old-fashioned
DESCRIBING SYNTAX
loose sentence periodic balanced interrupted simple
compound complex compound-complex declarative interrogative
imperative exclamatory telegraphic antithetic inverted
euphonic rhythmical epigrammatic emphatic incoherent
rambling tortuous jerky cacophonic monotonous
spare austere unadorned jumbled chaotic
obfuscating journalistic terse laconic mellifluous
musical lilting lyrical elegant solid
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DESCRIBING ORGANIZATION/STRUCTURE/POINT OF VIEW
spatial chronological flashback flash forward in media res
step-by-step objective subjective nostalgic reminiscent
contemplative reflective clinical impersonal dramatic
omniscient limited
DESCRIBING IMAGERY (Substitute these precise adjectives for less precise ones such as vivid, colorful, and powerful.)
bucolic pastoral gustatory olfactory tactile
kinetic kinesthetic sensual sacred sexual
auditory religious animal war/military chaotic
DESCRIBING CHARACTERS (Great substitutions for pretty and ugly!)
Physical Qualities
manly virile robust hardy sturdy
strapping stalwart muscular brawny lovely
fair comely handsome dainty delicate
graceful elegant shapely attractive winsome
ravishing dapper immaculate adroit dexterous
adept skillful agile nimble active
lively spirited vivacious weak feeble
sickly frail decrepit emaciated cadaverous
effeminate unwomanly hideous homely course
unkempt slovenly awkward clumsy ungainly
graceless bizarre grotesque incongruous ghastly
repellent repugnant repulsive odious invidious
loathsome
Mental Qualities (Great substitutions for smart and stupid! Which comments would you like to see on your papers?)
educated erudite scholarly wise astute
intellectual precocious capable competent gifted
apt rational reasonable sensible shrewd
prudent observant clever ingenious inventive
subtle cunning crafty wily unintelligent
unschooled unlettered ignorant illiterate inane
irrational puerile foolish fatuous vacuous
simple thick-skulled idiotic imbecilic witless
deranged demented articulate eloquent
Moral Qualities (Great substitutions for good and bad!)
idealistic innocent virtuous faultless righteous
guileless upright exemplary chaste pure
undefiled temperate abstentious austere ascetic
puritanical truthful honorable trustworthy straightforward
decent respectable wicked corrupt degenerate
notorious vicious incorrigible dissembling infamous
immoral unprincipled reprobate depraved indecent
ribald vulgar intemperate sensual dissolute
deceitful dishonest unscrupulous dishonorable base
vile foul recalcitrant philandering opportunistic
Spiritual Qualities (More great substitutions for good and bad!)
religious reverent pious devout faithful
regenerate holy saintly angelic skeptical
agnostic atheistic irreligious impious irreverent
profane sacrilegious materialistic carnal godless
diabolic fiendlike blasphemous unregenerate altruistic
charitable
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Social Qualities (Terrific substitutions for nice and mean!)
civil amicable contentious unpolished sullen
tactful courteous cooperative genial affable
hospitable gracious amiable cordial congenial
convivial jovial jolly urbane suave
anti-social acrimonious quarrelsome antagonistic misanthropic
discourteous impudent impolite insolent ill-bred
ill-mannered unrefined rustic provincial boorish
brusque churlish fawning obsequious sniveling
grumpy fractious crusty peevish petulant
waspish taciturn reticent gregarious garrulous
NOUNS FOR USE IN LITERARY/RHETORICAL DISCUSSION
ANALYZING CHARACTERS
foil nemesis adversary protagonist antagonist
confidante doppelganger narrator (unknown, reliable, nave)
ANALYZING STRUCTURE/ORGANIZATION/POINT OF VIEW
foreshadowing epiphany analogy extended metaphor shifts
parallel structure comparison/contrast transition sequence definition
juxtaposition anecdote frame story arrangement classification
categorization placement person (first, second, third)
perspective (chronological, geographic, emotional, political)
ANALYZING SYNTAX
repetition parallelism anaphora asyndeton subject
predicate object direct object indirect object
phrase clause infinitive participle gerund
modifier dependent clause independent clause subordinate clause preposition
conjunction interjection deliberate fragment appositive emphatic
appositive semicolon colon rhetorical question noun
comma pronoun proper noun common noun collective noun
abstract noun concrete noun dialogue apostrophe chiasmus
parenthetical expression footnote capitalization for effect inversion antecedent
hyphen dash active voice passive voice tense
catalogue compound nouns/adjectives
IDENTIFYING GENRE/PURPOSE
novel novella autobiography memoir biography
letter sermon speech treatise abstract
prcis synopsis critique personal narrative journey
travelogue essay diatribe polemic commentary
farce conceit editorial tirade review
assessment eulogy elegy parody allegory
apology soliloquy monologue portrayal archetype
fable argument verse
IDENTIFYING SOUND DEVICES
alliteration assonance consonance repetition rhyme
end rhyme feminine rhyme masculine rhyme meter slant rhyme incremental
rhyme
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THEME VOCABULARY
Brendan Kennys List of Abstract Ideas for Forming Theme Statements:
alienation
ambition
appearance v. reality
betrayal
bureaucracy
chance/fate/luck
children
courage/cowardice
cruelty/violence
custom/tradition
defeat/failure
despair/discontent/disillusionment
domination/suppression
dreams/fantasies
duty
education
escape
exile
faith/loss of faith
falsity/pretence
family/parenthood
free will/willpower
game/contests/sports
greed
guilt
heart v. reason
heaven/paradise/Utopia
home
identity
illusion/innocence
initiation
instinct
journey (literal or
psychological)
law/justice
loneliness/solitude
loyalty/disloyalty
materialism
memory/the past
mob psychology
music/dance
patriotism
persistence/perseverance
poverty
prejudice
prophecy
repentance
revenge/retribution
ritual/ceremony
scapegoat/victim
social status (class)
the supernatural
time/eternity
war
women/feminism
IDENTIFYING THEME
Method A (sample from Writing Essays about Literature by Kelley Griffith):
Subject
1. What is the work about? Provide a one to three word answer. See Theme Vocabulary above.
Theme
2. What is the authors message with regard to #1 as it pertains to the human condition? In other words, what
comment does the work make on human nature, the human condition, human motivation, or human ambition?
3. In identifying and stating theme, be sure that the observation
(a) is not too terse to express the complexity of the human experience
(b) avoids moralizing words such as should and ought
(c) avoids specific reference to plot and characters
(d) avoids absolute words such as anyone, all, none, everything, and everyone
4. Using both dependent and independent clauses, write a complex sentence which fulfills the requirements above
and which explains one of the major themes of the work.
Sample for Anna Karenina:
Subject: sacred versus profane love
Theme: Although people can, through no fault of their own, become entrapped in long-lasting and destructive
relationships, sacred commitments, like marriage and parenthood, take precedence over extramarital loves, no matter
how passionate and deeply felt they may be.
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IDENTIFYING THEME
Method B (adapted from material by Brendan Kenny):
1. Theme is an abstract idea (See Theme Vocabulary above.) coupled with a universal comment or observation
which addresses one of the following: (a) human motivation (b) the human condition (c) human ambition.
2. A strategy for discovering a works theme is to apply questions about these areas to the work.
What image of humankind emerges from the work? If people are good, what good things do they do? If people
are no damned good (Mark Twain), how and to what extent are they flawed?
What moral issues are raised in the work? Who serves as the moral center of the work? Who is the one person
with whom the author vests right action and right thought? What values does the moral center embody?
Is the society or social scheme portrayed by the author life-enhancing or life-destroying? What causes and
perpetuates this society?
What control over their lives do the characters have? Are there forces beyond their control?
How do the title, subtitle, epigraph, and names of the characters relate to the theme?
3. In identifying and stating theme, be sure that the observation
(a) is not too terse to express the complexity of the human experience
(b) avoids moralizing words such as should and ought
(c) avoids specific reference to plot and characters
(d) avoids absolute words such as anyone, all, none, everything, and everyone
4. Sample for The Most Dangerous Game:
Men, when they are courageous and lucky, even in a hostile environment, can overcome the odds against their
survival.
Sample for The Catcher in the Rye:
In the presence of corruption, escape may provide some hope of preserving our innocence but denies our
responsibility to alter, rebel against or sometimes grow to accept what we see as threatening.
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Developing an Analytical Voice
Level One: Identify how the situation is created; observe what you see
(collecting evidence)
Diction: what types of words are used or repeated?
Imagery: How is the image created? What are its parts? What senses are provoked?
Detail: Whats the setting? Who are the characters? What are the facts of the text
that dont require quoting its language?
Level Two: What abstract
associations
emerge from the language of the text?
Fear?
Excitement?
Violence?
Chaos?
Order?
Arrogance?
Submission?
Confidence?
Confinement?
Freedom?
Benevolence?
Level Three: Identify the
relationships
to the rest of the text:
repetition [similarity, analogy, recurrence, echo, parallelism]
contrast [incongruity, antithesis, opposition, tension]
shift [turn, transformation, alteration]
juxtaposition [contiguity, adjacency]
2008 Michael Degen, Ph.D. (adapted by Jennifer Cullen, Westwood High School)
The association
may be part of a larger
Interpretive
Perspective /
CLAIM about:
Tone
Attitude
Voice
Atmosphere
Character
Thematic idea
Ethical appeal
Logical appeal
Emotional appeal
Aristotles Topics:
definition, comparison,
consequence
This list of Level
Two words is only
a sample list. Any
abstract noun that
names what the
evidence (Level
One) conveys may
be appropriate. See
(theme vocabulary)
for additional ideas
or generate your
own.
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How to Connect Rhetorical Choices to Meaning
NOTE: In general, a connection of device to meaning should be 3-5 sentences long. The templates below are
a starting place; you will eventually learn to vary them to suit your purposes. A connection must
articulate the meaning a device suggests and HOW this suggestion is achieved.
Diction
Identify the grammatical unit (phrase, noun, verb, adjective, adverb, etc.) and provide the context
in which it appears in the text. Consider connotation as well as denotation. Do NOT write: The
writer uses diction. Thats like saying: The writer uses words.
Connect the diction to the meaning of this text. Avoid generic commentary. Provide an original
insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.
Model:
The phrase ____________________________ used to describe/identify__________________________________
conveys _______________________ since / because / in that ___________________________________________
______________. This is significant because _______________________________________________________.
or the noun, verb, adjective, adverb
Example:
The phrase, a thin beard of ivy, used to describe Jay Gatsbys mansion conveys both intrigue and inexperience.
Since the ivy is thin, Fitzgerald suggests a wealth without lineage, newly formed and barely veiled; yet, the ivy as
a beard suggests a worldly desire to conceal. This is significant because through the description of his mansion,
Gatsby is portrayed as both ingnue and chameleon, alerting the reader to the protagonists dual and perhaps
contradictory nature.
Syntax
Identify the syntactical choice the author has made and provide the context in which it appears in
the text. Do NOT write: The writer uses syntax. Since syntax refers to the order and structure of
words, phrases, etc, it always exists even if you do not find it noteworthy.
Connect the syntax to the meaning of this text. Avoid generic commentary. Provide an original
insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.
Model:
The ________________________________ function(s) to ____________________________________
____________________________________________________________________. This structure
supports the authors purpose to _________________________________________________________.
Example:
Gatsbys interrupted sentences dramatize his nervousness and hesitation as he discusses his upcoming
meeting with Daisy at Nicks bungalow. Stuttering, Why, I thought why, look here, old sport, you
dont make very much money, do you, Gatsby reveals his true vulnerability and weakness showing a
stark contrast to the greatness that has been established in the early chapters of the novel. Fitzgerald
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continues to reveal chinks in Gatsbys armor as the novel progresses preparing the reader for protagonists
ultimate fall.
Helpful hint:
Some other examples of purposeful syntactical choices an author might make: parallelism, anaphora,
rhetorical question, appositives, polysyndeton, asyndeton, prepositional phrases, etc. According to
Jeff Sommers and Max Morenberg, authors of The Writers Options, appositives define, summarize, and
clarify. Prepositional phrases may elaborate and clarify by indicating how, where, when, why.
Imagery
(word pictures appealing to one of the 6 senses (visual, auditory, gustatory, olfactory, tactile, kinesthetic)
if you cant identify which one, it isnt a valid example of imagery)
Identify the image and provide the context in which it appears in the text.
Connect the image to the meaning of this text. Avoid generic commentary. Provide an original
insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.
Model:
The image of ______________________________ depicts a (picture, sense, state, etc.) of __________
_____________________________ because the reader (sees, envisions, realizes) that ______________
___________________________________________________________________________________.
This is significant because ______________________________________________________________.
Example:
The image of an argument . . . pull[ing] Nick back to the party as if with ropes conveys his helpless
struggle to get away from the gathering in Tom and Myrtles apartment at the same time that it dramatizes
his fascination with the inebriated and adulterous events that are occurring. The reader can see that much
as ropes confine, restrain, and render one helpless, Nick, due perhaps to a lack of experience or a flawed
moral code, remains discomfited yet seems unable to confront or reject the lies and pretenses of the party
guests. This is significant because the reader must question Nicks declaration that he is tolerant and
honest.
Figurative Language: Metaphor or Simile
Identify the metaphor or simile and provide the context in which it appears in the text.
Connect the metaphor or simile to the meaning of this text. Avoid generic commentary. Provide
an original insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.
Model:
The subject of (x) _____________________ is compared to (y) ____________________. This is fitting
because (x) _______________________ and (y) ______________________ share these characteristics:
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(a) ____________________________________ and (b) ______________________________________.
This is significant because ______________________________________________________________._
Example:
In his I Have a Dream speech, Martin Luther King, Jr. compares the condition of poverty to a lonely
island. This is a fitting comparison because poverty and a lonely island share these characteristics: (a)
isolation and alienation from the vast ocean of material prosperity which surrounds them and (b) both
are small, singled out, vulnerable, and surrounded by something they dont possess. This comparison
causes the audience to consider the tangible social barriers created by an invisible financial limitation to
feel sympathy for the isolated poor.
Figurative Language: Personification
(a figure of speech in which animals, abstract ideas, or inanimate things are referred to as if they were human)
Identify the animal, abstract idea, or inanimate thing and provide the context in which it appears in
the text. Identify the human characteristic that is ascribed to it.
Connect the effect of the personification to the meaning of this text. Avoid generic commentary.
Provide an original insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.
Model:
In _______________________________, ___________________is personified as possessing the human
characteristic(s) of ___________________________________________ . The author employs
personification in order to___________________________________________________________.
Example:
"Today, we begin a new chapter in the history of Louisiana. I've said throughout the campaign that there are two
entities that have the most to fear from us winning this election. One is corruption and the other is incompetence.
If you happen to see either of them, let them know the party is over."
-- Bobby Jindal, Louisiana Governor-Elect victory Speech (as posted on americanrhetoric.com)
In Bobby Jindals victory speech, the abstract ideas of corruption and incompetence are personified as
possessing human form and consciousness. The governor-elect suggests that members of his audience
might encounter or see them and should inform them that their party is over. Through this
characterization, Jindal simultaneously emphasizes his strength as a leader and sends a strong message,
without naming specific perpetrators, that those who may possess those qualities will be driven out of the
states government.
Figurative Language: Hyperbole
(deliberate exaggeration used to heighten effect or create humor remember that this is a figure of speech not
meant to be interpreted literally e.g., Im so hungry I could eat a horse.)
Identify what is being exaggerated and provide the context in which it appears in the text.
Connect the effect of the hyperbole to the meaning of this text. Avoid generic commentary.
Provide an original insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.
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Model:
The deliberate exaggeration of _________________________________ serves to express ____________
________________________. Through this heightened image, the reader_________________________.
Example:
From Robert Frosts poem, After Apple-Picking
For I have had too much
Of apple-picking: I am overtired
Of the great harvest I myself desired.
There were ten thousand fruit to touch,
Cherish in hand, lift sown, and not let fall.
In Frosts poem, After Apple-Picking, the speaker deliberately exaggerates the number of apples in
order to emphasize his shift from excitement and desire to his extreme weariness during the harvest. The
speaker has had too much as a result of the ten thousand fruit to touch. Through this image, the
reader comes to understand that the speaker is not only weary of body, but is also overtired in spirit as
well.
[Example taken from A Contemporary Guide to Literary Terms by Edwin J. Barton and Glenda A. Hudson (Houghton Mifflin, 2004)]
Symbol
Identify both the concrete and abstract meanings of the symbol and provide the context in which it
appears in the text.
Connect the symbol to specific characters in this text. Avoid generic commentary. Provide an
original insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.
Model:
The ________________________________ symbolizes ________________________________
concrete abstract
for _______________________________ because it represents __________________________
_________________________Through this symbol, the author ____________________________.
Example:
The pearls Daisy Buchanan rescues from the trash and subsequently wears around her neck symbolize
her ultimate choice of money over love because they represent Toms vast wealth (they were valued at
three hundred and fifty thousand dollars) in contrast to Gatsbys avowal of love, symbolized by the letter
she wouldnt let go of. By highlighting Daisys donning of the pearls, Fitzgerald comments on the
shallow and misguided values of the 20
th
Century American, one who pursues the elusive dream instead
of concrete relationships.
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Detail
Identify the detail and provide the context in which it appears in the text.
Describe the function of the inclusion of that detail in this text. Avoid generic commentary.
Provide an original insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.
Model:
The detail of _____________________________________________ conveys _____________________
___________________ since/because/in that ______________________________________________.
The author wants the reader to see ______________________________ because/so that ____________
Example:
The detail of the string of polo ponies Tom Buchanan brought east with him from Chicago conveys his
vast wealth and hedonism. Moving the ponies is expensive and unnecessary, suggesting that Tom does
not need to concern himself with cost but does concern himself with appearing more powerful than his
peers. Fitzgerald wants the reader to see Tom as spoiled and self-indulgent so that Tom will appear
distasteful even before the reader learns of his current affair.
Allusion
Identify the allusion (indirect reference by an author to another text, historical occurrence, or to
myths and legends) and provide the context in which it appears in the text.
Describe the function of the allusion in this text. Avoid generic commentary. Provide an original
insight. Pay attention to your own diction. It enhances your analysis.
Model:
The author or speaker alludes to ________________________________________ in order to
______________________________________________. Through this reference, the reader connects
___________________________ to _________________ and can more fully understands the authors
purpose to _________________________________________.
Example:
For us, they fought and died, in places like Concord and Gettysburg; Normandy and Khe Sahn.
Barack Obama
Obamas allusions to Concord, Gettysburg, Normandy, and Khe Sahn offer examples of struggles that
Americans have faced in the past which parallel the unique struggles Americans believe they are currently
facing with our economy, environment, and world conflict. Even though the references are meant to
show these struggles, the presidents desired effect is to provide hope and resolve to the listener since
these battles resulted in victories for America. Citizens are reminded that they can be victorious in our
modern struggles.
Examples of generic commentary: gets the readers attention, draws the reader in, etc.
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Writing Errors to Avoid
#1: Incorrect Punctuation of Two Independent Clauses
(An independent clause has a subject and a verb and can stand alone as a sentence.)
Good writers know that correct punctuation is important to writing clear sentences. If you misuse a mark of
punctuation, you risk confusing your reader and appearing careless. Notice how the placement of commas
significantly affects the meaning of these sentences:
Mr. Jones, says Ms. Moore, is a boring old fool.
Mr. Jones says Ms. Moore is a boring old fool.
Writers often combine independent clauses in a single compound sentence to emphasize the relationship between
ideas. The punctuation of compound sentences varies depending upon how you connect the clauses.
The rules are:
(a) Separate independent clauses with a comma when using a coordinating conjunction (and, but, or, for, nor, so,
yet).
(b) Separate independent clauses with a semi-colon when no coordinating conjunction is used.
(c) Separate independent clauses with a semi-colon when using a conjunctive adverb (e.g., however, therefore,
thus, consequently, finally, nevertheless).
Examples of Correct Punctuation, Rule a:
1. We all looked worse than usual, for we had stayed up studying for the exam.
2. This room is unbelievably hot, and I think that I am going to pass out.
Examples of Correct Punctuation, Rule b:
1. We all looked worse than usual; we had stayed up all night studying for the exam.
2. This room is unbelievably hot; I think I am going to pass out.
Examples of Correct Punctuation, Rule c:
1. We all looked worse than usual; however, we were relieved we had studied.
2. The discussion is really interesting; nevertheless, I think I am going to pass out.
#2: Misuse of the Apostrophe
Use the apostrophe to indicate possession and to mark omitted letters in contractions. Writers often misuse apostrophes when
forming plurals and possessives. The basic rule is quite simple: use the apostrophe to indicate
possession, not a plural. Yes, the exceptions to the rule may seem confusing: hers has no apostrophe, and it's is not
possessive. Nevertheless, with a small amount of attention, you can learn the rules and the exceptions of apostrophe use.
Possessives
Form the possessive case of a singular noun by adding 's (even if the word ends in s).
Hammurabi's code, Dickens's last novel, James's cello
Form the possessive case of a plural noun by adding an apostrophe after the final letter if it is an s or by adding 's if
the final letter is not an s.
the students' desks, the children's toys
Remember: the apostrophe never designates the plural form of a noun. A common error is the use of the apostrophe
to form a non-possessive plural. Compare the following correct sentences:
The student's disk was missing.
Several students' disks were missing.
The students searched for their missing disks.
Possessive pronouns, such as yours, hers, its, and ours, take no apostrophe.
The decision is yours.
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Indefinite pronouns, such as anyone, everybody, no one, somebody, use the singular possessive form.
Somebody's dog stayed in our suite last night.
Contractions
The apostrophe is used to mark omitted letters in contractions.
(Note: contractions are often considered too informal for academic writing.)
Avoid the dreadful it's/its confusion.
It's is a contraction for it is. It's is never a possessive.
Its is the possessive for it.
As Professors Strunk and White remind us in Elements of Style,
It's a wise dog that scratches its own fleas (1).
#3: Pronoun Problems
Pronouns are useful as substitutes for nouns, but a poorly chosen pronoun can obscure the meaning of a sentence.
Common pronoun errors include:
Unclear Pronoun Reference
A pronoun must refer to a specific noun (the antecedent). Ambiguous pronoun reference creates confusing sentences.
Poor Example: Writers should spend time thinking about their arguments to make sure they are not superficial.
(Unclear antecedent: who or what are superficial?)
If a whiff of ambiguity exists, use a noun:
A key difference between banking crises of today and yesterday is that todays crises have greater global impact.
Vague Subject Pronoun
Pronouns such as it, there, and this often make weak subjects.
Poor Example: Pope Gregory VII forced Emperor Henry IV to wait three days in the snow at Canossa before granting him an
audience. It was a symbolic act. (To what does it refer? Forcing the Emperor to wait? The waiting? The
granting of the audience? The audience? The entire sentence?)
Use a pronoun as subject only when its antecedent is crystal clear.
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Avoiding Plagarism: MLA Style: Step-By-Step Instructions
Resources for formatting:
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! Cieate a Woiks Citeu page: http:www.easybib.comcitefoim
Setting up the MLA Document
An MLA style paper should fit certain standard layout guidelines. This section describes how to meet
those guidelines.
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The key to avoiding plagarism is citing each source you use in your paper as well as keeping an accurate
list in the form of a Works Cited page.
Works Cited
"Business Coalition foi Climate Action Boubles." Enviionmental Befense. 8 Nay 2uu7. Enviionmental Befense
0iganization. 24 Nay 2uu7 <http:www.enviionmentaluefense.oigaiticle.cfm.ContentIB=S828>.
Clinton, Bill. Inteiview. New Yoik Times on the Web. Nay 2uu7. 2S Nay 2uu7 <http:viueo.on.nytimes.com>.
Keywoiu: Climate.
Bean, Coinelia. "Executive on a Nission: Saving the Planet." New Yoik Times on the Web 22 Nay 2uu7. 2S Nay
2uu7 <http:www.nytimes.com2uu7uS22scienceeaith22anuei.html>.
ulobal Waiming. 2uu7. Coolei Beaus Coalition. 24 Nay 2uu7 <http:www.globalwaiming.oig>.
uowuy, }ohn. "Avoiuing Self-oiganizeu Extinction: Towaiu a Co-evolutionaiy Economics of Sustainability."
Inteinational }ouinal of Sustainable Bevelopment anu Woilu Ecology 14.1 (2uu7): 27-S6.
Shulte, Biet. "Putting a Piice on Pollution; Climate change laws seem inevitable, but theii economic impact is
unknown." 0S News & Woilu Repoit 14 Nay 2uu7. 24 Nay 2uu7.
0zawa, Biiofumi. Economic Theoiy anu ulobal Waiming. Cambiiuge: Cambiiuge 0P, 2uuS.
Three Basic In Text Citation Examples:
! Woiuswoith stateu that Romantic poetiy was maikeu by a "spontaneous oveiflow of poweiful
feelings" (26S).
! Romantic poetiy is chaiacteiizeu by the "spontaneous oveiflow of poweiful feelings" (Woiuswoith
26S).
! Woiuswoith extensively exploieu the iole of emotion in the cieative piocess (26S).