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Ch.11 Definition
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Definition
Imagine that you are a writer for Beat magazine and have been asked to
write a feature article titled "American Music of the New Millennium." Referring to the following Web sites, use a classification-and-division structure to
discuss the types of music you think represent the future of the music industry. Be sure to give each type of music a name and describe its characteristics so
as to give your audience a sense of the differences between the categories.
Spin Magazine
<spin. com>
Along with articles on bands and "pop life," this site contains audio and
video clips of new music.
New Music Box
<newmusicbox.ofg>
This magazine from the American Music Center includes articles, interviews, a calendar, news sections, and sound and audio files.
NewMusicNow.org
<newmusicnow.org>
This site features contemporary works for orchestra by American composers. Visitors can listen to pieces of music, explore their background,
and learn about composers.
Rolling Stone Magazine
<rollingstone.com>
This site offers up-to-date music news, reviews, and interviews with various popular music groups and artists of various genres.
WHAT IS DEFINITION?
A definition tells what a term means and how it is different from other
terms in its class. In the following paragraph from "Altruistic Behavior,"
anthropologist Desmond Morris defines altruism, the key term of his essay:
Topic sentence
Extended definition defines term
by enume~ation
and negatton
Look at any dictionary, and you will notice that all definitions have a
standard three-part structure. First, they present the term to be defined,
then the general class it is a part of, and finally the qualities that differentiate it
from the other terms in the same class.
Term
behaviorism
Class
cell
a unit
of protoplasm
a theory
Differentiation
that regards the objective facts of a
subject's actions as the only valid
basis for psychological study
with a nucleus, cytoplasm, and an
enclosing membrane
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FINITION
naturalism
a literary
movement
mitosis
a process
authority
a power
USING DEFINITION
Supplying a formal definition of each term you use is seldom necessary or desirable. Readers will either know what a word means or be able
to look it up. Sometimes, however, defining your terms is essential- for
example, when a word has several meanings, each of which might fit your
context, or whefr you want to use a word in a special way.
When taking an exam, of course, you are likely to encounter questions
that require extended definitions. You might, for example, be asked to
define behaviorism; tell what a cell is; explain the meaning of the literary
term naturalism; include a comprehensive definition of mitosis in your
answer; or define authority. Such exam questions cannot always be answered
in one or two sentences. In fact, the definitions they call for often require
several paragraphs.
Extended definitions are useful in many academic assignments besides
exams. For example, definitions can explain abstractions like freedom, controversial terms like right to life, or slang terms (informal expressions whose
meanings may vary from locale to locale or change as time passes). In a particular writing situation, a definition may be essential because a term has
more than one meaning, because you are using it in an unusual way, or because you are fairly certain that the term will be unfamiliar to your readers.
Many extended-definition essays include short formal definitions like
those in dictionaries. In such an essay, a brief formal definition can introduce readers to the extended definition, or it can help to support the
essay's thesis. In addition, essays in which other patterns of development
are dominant often incorporate brief definitions to clarifY points or
explain basic information for the reader.
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imagine it by saying it tastes something like cole slaw. You can also define a
thing by contrasting it with something unlike it, especially if the two have
some qualities in common. One way to explain the British sport of rugby is
by contrasting it with American football, which is not as violent.
Process Because mitosis is a process, an extended definition of mitosis should be organized as a process explanation. By tracing the process
from stage to stage, you would be able to clearly define this type of cell division for your readers. Process is also a suitable pattern for objects that
must be defined in terms of what they do. For example, because a computer carries out certain processes, an extended definition of a computer
would probably include a process explanation.
Classification and division You could define authority by using classification and division. Basing your extended definition on the model developed by the German sociologist Max Weber, you could divide the class
authority into the subclasses traditional authority, charismatic authority, and
legal-bureaucratic authority. By explaining each type of authority, you could
clarify this very broad term for your readers. ln both extended and formal
definitions, classification and division can be very useful. By identifying
the class that something belongs to, you are explaining what kind of thing
it is. For instance, monetarism is an economic theory; The Adventures ofHuckleberry Finn is a novel; emphysema is a disease. Likewise, by dividing a class
into subclasses, you are defining something more specifically. Emphysema,
for instance, is a disease of the lungs and can therefore be classified with
tuberculosis but not with appendicitis.
Using Other Strategies
Whatever form your definitions take, make certain that they are clear
and that they actually define your terms. Be sure to provide a true definition, not just a descriptive statement such as "Happiness is a four-day weekend." Also, remember that repetition is not definition, so don't include the
term you are defining in your definition. For instance, the statement
"abstract art is a school of artists whose works are abstract" clarifies nothing for your readers. Finally, define as precisely as possible. Name the class
of the term you are defining- "mitosis is a process in which a cell divides"and define this class as narrowly and as accurately as you can. Be specific
when you differentiate your term from other members of its class. Careful
attention to the language and structure of your definition will help readers
understand your meaning.
Background>
First example:
Second <xamp]o,
Third example:
The use of behaviorism to treat normal but antisocial or undesirable behavior, such as heavy
smoking or overeating
Conclusion:
Notice how the three examples in this paper define behaviorism with the
complexity, detail, and bteadth that a focmaj definition could not duplicate. This definition is more like a textbook explanation, and, in fact, textbook explanations are often written as extended definitions.
NG A DEFINITION ESSAY
When you edit your definition essay, follow the guidelines on the
Checklist on page 66. In addition, focus on the grammar, mechanand punctuation issues that are most relevant to definition essays.
of these issues- avoiding the phrases is when and is where in formal
l.,.finitions- is discussed below.
For more practice in avoiding faulty constructions, visit Exercise Cenat <bedfordstmartins.comfpatterns/ faultyconstructions>.
GRAMMAR IN CONTEXT : Avoiding is when and is where
~aennitions. As you have learned, each of these definitions must include the
term you are defining, the class to which the term belongs, and the characteristics that distinguish the term from other terms in the same class.
Sometimes, however, when you are defining a term or concept, you
may find yourself using the phrase is when or is where. If this is the case, your
definition is not complete because it omits the class to which the term
belongs. In fact, the use of is when or is where indicates that you are actually
presenting an example of the term and not a definition. You can avoid this
error by making certain that the form of the verb be in your definition is
always followed by a noun.*
As described in the essay "The Untouchable," prejudice is when
someone forms an irrational bias or negative opinion of a person or group
(Mahtab 498).
Correct: As described in the essay "The Untouchable," prejudice is an irrational bias or negative opinion of a person or group (Mahtab 498).
Incorrect:
When you revise a definition essay, consider the items on the Revision
Checklist on page 54. In addition, pay special attention to the items on the
checklist below, which apply specifically to revising definition essays.
Incorrect:
Correct:
*The examples below refer to essays that appear later in this chapter.
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Historical background
The Untouchable
Introduction:
background
community.
Present situation
Formal definition
Example
DEFINITION
Thesis statement
501
Conclusion begins
often used in
Conclusion continues
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between the unfamiliar term untouchable and a more familiar conceptappealed to Ajoy as he planned his revision. Another student suggested
that Ajoy could compare untouchables to other groups who are shunnedfor example, people with AIDS. Although Ajoy states in his conclusion that
no parallel exists, an attempt to find common ground between untouchables and other groups could make his essay more meaningful to his readers- and bring home to them an idea that is distinctly foreign. Such a
connection could also make his conclusion especially powerful. (A sample
peer editing worksheet for definition can be found on the Patterns for College Writing Web site at <bedfordstmartins.comjpatterns> .)
READING IMAGES
1. In a single complete sentence, define yourself in terms of your race, religion, or ethnicity (whatever is most important to you).
2. Look at the U.S. Census questions above. Which boxes would you mark?
Do you see this choice as an accurate expression of what you consider
yourself to be? Explain.
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mark "one or more races" to indicate their ethnic identity. Do you think
this option is a good idea? Why or why not?
JUDY BRADY
I Want a Wife
JOURNAL ENTRY
Why do you think the government needs to know "what [a] person considers
himself/herself to be"? Do you think it is important for the government to
know how people define themselves, or do you consider this information to be
an unwarranted violation of a person's privacy? Explain.
THEMATIC CONNECTIONS
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Judy Brady was born in San Francisco in 1937 and earned a B.F.A. in painting from the University of Iowa in 1962. She has raised two daughters,
worked as a secretary, and published articles on many social issues. Diagnosed with breast cancer in 1980, she became active in the politics of cancer and has edited Women and Cancer (1990) and One in Three: Women with
Cancer Confront an Epidemic (1991). She also helped found the Toxic Links
Coalition, an organization devoted to lobbying for cancer and environmental issues.
Background: Brady has been active in the women's movement since
1969, and "I Want a Wife" first appeared in the premiere issue of the feminist Ms. magazine in 1972. That year represented perhaps the height of
the feminist movement in the United States. The National Organization
for Women, established in 1966, had hundreds of chapters around the
country. The Equal Rights Amendment, barring discrimination against
women, passed in Congress (although it has been ratified by only thirtyfive of the necessary thirty-eight states), and Congress also passed Title IX
of the Education Amendments Act, which required equal opportunity (in
sports as well as academics) for all students in any school that receives
federal funding. At that time, women accounted for just under 40 percent
of the labor force (up from 23 percent in 1950), a number that has grown
to almost SO percent today. Of mothers with children under the age of
eighteen, fewer than 40 percent were employed in 1970; today, threequarters work, 38 percent of them full-time and year-round. As for stay-athome fathers, their numbers have increased from virtually zero to close to
three million.
BRADY
children, who arranges for their schooling, makes sure that they have an
adequate social life with their peers, takes them to the park, the zoo, etc.
I want a wife who takes care of the children when they are sick, a wife
who arranges to be around when the children need special care, because,
of course, I cannot miss classes at school. My wife must arrange to lose
time at work and not lose the job. It may mean a small cut in my wife's
income from time to time, but I guess I can tolerate that. Needless to say,
my
wife will arrange and pay for the care of the children while my wife is
working.
I want a wife who will take care of my physical needs. I want a wife who
will keep my house clean. A wife who will pick up after my children, a wife
who will pick up after me. I want a wife who will keep my clothes clean,
ironed, mended, replaced when need be, and who will see to it that my personal things are kept in their proper place so that I can find what I need the
minute I need it. I want a wife who cooks the meals, a wife who is a good
cook. I want a wife who will plan the menus, do the necessary grocery
shopping, prepare the meals, serve them pleasantly, and then do the cleaning up while I do my studying. I want a wife who will care for me when I
am sick and sympathize with my pain and loss of time from school. I want
a wife to go along when our family takes a vacation so that someone can
continue
of scene. to care for me and my children when I need a rest and change
I want a wife who will not bother me with rambling complaints about
a wife's duties. But I want a wife who will listen to me when I feel the
need to explain a rather difficult point I have come across in my course of
studies.
And I want a wife who will type my papers for me when I have written them.
I want a wife who will take care of the details of my social life. When
my wife and I are invited out by my friends, I want a wife who will take care
of the babysitting arrangements. When I meet people at school that I like
and want to entertain, I want a wife who will have the house clean, will prepare a special meal, serve it to me and my friends, and not interrupt when I
talk about things that interest me and my friends. I want a wife who will
have arranged that the children are fed and ready for bed before my guests
arrive so that the children do not bother us. I want a wife who takes care of
the needs of my guests so that they feel comfortable, who makes sure that
they have an ashtray, that they are passed the hors d'oeuvres, that they are
offered a second helping of the food, that their wine glasses are replenished
when necessary, that their coffee is served to them as they like it. And I
want a wife who knows that sometimes I need a night out by myself
I want a wife who is sensitive to my sexual needs, a wife who makes love
passionately and eagerly when I feel like it, a wife who makes sure that I am
satisfied. And, of course, I want a wife who will not demand sexual attention when I am not in the mood for it. I want a wife who assumes the complete responsibility for birth control, because I do not want more children.
I want a wife who will remain sexually faithful to me so that I do not have
to clutter up my intellectual life with jealousies. And I want a wife who
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and remain at home so that my wife can more fully and completely take care of a wife's duties.
My God, who wouldn't want a wife?
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COMPREHENSION
1. In one sentence, define what Brady means by wife. Does this ideal wife
1. This essay was first published in Ms. magazine. In what sense is it appro-
priate for the audience of this feminist publication? Where else can you
imagine it appearing?
2. Does this essay have an explicitly stated thesis? If so, where is it? If the thesis is implied, paraphrase it.
3. Do you think Brady really wants the kind of wife she describes? Explain.
STYLE AND STRUCTURE
1. Throughout the essay, Brady repeats the words "I want a wife." What is the
effect of this repetition?
2. The first and last paragraphs of this essay are quite brief. Does this weaken
the essay? Why or why not?
3. In enumerating a wife's duties, Brady frequently uses the verb arrange.
What other verbs does she use repeatedly? How do these verbs help her
make her point?
4. Brady never uses the personal pronouns he or she to refer to the wife she
defines. Why not?
5. Comment on Brady's use of phrases like of course (2, 3, and 7), needless to
say (3), after all (7), by chance (8), and naturally (8). What do these expressions
contribute to the sentences in which they appear? To the essay as a whole?
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VOCABULARY PROJECTS
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2. Going beyond the dictionary definitions, decide what Brady means to suggest by the following words. Is she using any of these words sarcastically?
Explain.
proper (4)
pleasantly (4)
bother (6)
necessary (6)
demand (7)
clutter up (7)
suitable (8)
free (8)
JOURNAL ENTRY
1.
2.
3. Read "The Company Man" (page 517). Using ideas gleaned from that essay
and "I Want a Wife," as well as your own ideas, write a definition essay
called "The Ideal Couple." Your essay can be serious or humorous.
Develop your definition with examples.
COMBINING THE PATTERNS
Like most definition essays, "I Want a Wife" uses several patterns of development. Which ones does it use? Which of these do you consider most important
for supporting Brady's thesis? Why?
THEMATIC CONNECTIONS
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Burdens
One of the twentieth century's most influential economists, John Kenneth
Galbraith was born in 1908 in Ontario, Canada, the son of a farmer. He
studied agriculture at the University of Toronto and received advanced
degrees in economics at the University of California at Berkeley. He became a U.S. citizen in 1937. Galbraith has taught economics at Harvard
and Princeton and has held a number of important government positions,
most notably as economic advisor to Democratic presidents John F. Kennedy and Lyndon B. Johnson in the 1960s. He is the author of more than
thirty books for general readers, including The Affluent Society (1958), The
Age ofUncertainty (1977), and The Good Society (1996).
Background: The following essay first appeared on the op-ed page of
the New York Times in 1995, at the peak of the debate in Congress over
reducing welfare and other benefits to the poor and the unemployed. The
taxpayer-supported antipoverty programs that were passed by Congress in
the 1960s have long been controversial. On the one side are those (such as
Galbraith) who advocate a more equal distribution of wealth in the
United States. These people maintain that wealthy citizens and large corporations should be taxed at high rates so that the government can provide housing, food subsidies, and educational opportunities for those
who are less well off On the other side are those who advocate essentially
equal tax rates for all, tax reductions for corporations that create jobs, and
fewer government regulations and services. For these critics, aid to the economically disadvantaged has become a "burden" to taxpayers; Galbraith
here finds it ironic that other types of government expenditures are not so
defined. (Note that much of this "burden" was eliminated by the Welfare
Reform Act of 1998.)
In these last years, and notably in these past months, we have heard
of the burden imposed by government on the citizen. Nothing has
more emphasized in speech and possibly also in thought. This comis not meant to regret this concern, as some might suppose: rather, it
to clarify the way the word burden is now employed. It has a very special
~nnotation, of which all who cherish good or anyhow accepted English
should be aware.
As now used, burden applies only to a very specific range of government
Many are not a burden and are not to be so described. Defense
is definitely not a burden; indeed, increases therein are now
proposed. That there is now no wholly plausible enemy does not
the situation. Similarly, in recent years large sums, in a range upward
_$50 billion, have been appropriated to bail out failed financial inspecifically the savings and loan associations. This was not a
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