The Structure of An Essay1
The Structure of An Essay1
LEAD
A lead, the first part of the introduction, may consist of 2 or 3 general statements related to
your topic. These sentences should not mention the title of the novel, play or poem being discussed,
nor should they name the author, or any of the characters in the work. The purpose of these sentences
is to capture the readers interest and gently lead him into your opinion statement.
How does one create a lead?
1. Write out your thesis statement.
2. Underline all of the nouns in your thesis statement.
3. Compose general statements about one or more of those nouns.
PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT
A plan of development consists of 1 or 2 sentences which briefly mention the proofs you will
elaborate in your essay. If you are using terms that you think may be unfamiliar to your reader, you
should define them.
How does one create a plan of development?
1. Decide on and list the proofs that you will be using to support your thesis.
2. Condense these proofs into short phrases which give concise information.
3. Write out a parallel sentence which includes these phrases.
EXAMPLES:
The antagonist lacks courage, honesty and imagination. (all nouns)
OR
Do not explain too much. (This is the purpose of the body paragraphs; if you give too much
information about your proofs in the introduction, you will run out of things to say in the body and will
ultimately become repetitious)
THESIS:
A thesis, the most important part of the introduction, is your opinion reduced into one arguable
statement. A thesis is that which you are going to prove in the body of your essay.
How does one develop a thesis? Suggestion.
1. Read the essay question carefully and clarify what it is you are being asked to prove.
2. Usually the thesis is inherent in the question.
THE BODY:
The body of an essay consists of separate paragraphs, each one using proofs from the literature
to support the argument/thesis. Each body paragraph can be divided into 3 sections: topic sentence,
explanation and proof, and summary statement(s).
TOPIC SENTENCE
A topic sentence, usually the first sentence in each body paragraph, introduces what you will be
discussing in that paragraph. It should not be too broad or too specific.
EXPLANATION AND PROOF
The sentence and/or quotations which follow the topic sentence are called the explanation proofs. They
prove that your thesis is true and correct. Direct and indirect quotations may be used. A sentence or
two must lead into or introduce your quotation. You must also draw conclusions related to your thesis
from the quotation which must be properly footnoted.
SUMMARY STATEMENT
A sentence or two which concludes the point you are making in the paragraph is the final part of each
body paragraph.
USEFUL INFORMATION FOR BODY PARAGRAPHS:
Transitional Phrases:
Use a transitional device in your topic sentence to smoothly move from one sentence/body paragraph
to the next.
EXAMPLE: In addition to courage, Romeo clearly demonstrates his honesty.
a)
b)
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CONCLUSION:
The conclusion of an essay also consists of 3 distinct parts: the thesis creatively restated, the proofs
summarized, and a general closing statement.
THESIS RESTATED
One sentence, the first in the conclusion, imaginatively restates your thesis.
PROOFS SUMMARIZED
Provide one or two brief sentences restating the proofs used in the body of the essay.
GENERAL STATEMENT
The last part of the conclusion, made up of one or more statements related to the topic, is called the
general statement.
Do nots in creating a conclusion? Suggestions:
a) Do not use any quotation from the literary work in a conclusion.
b) Do not repeat the explanation of your proofs merely mention them.
c) Do not introduce new information or give your personal opinion of the book in general closing
statements.
d) Do not use phrases such as , This essay provesor in the preceding paragraphs, it was shownor
In conclusion.
General Information:
a) Never use first or second person in a formal essay: I, me ,us, we, you, yours, yourself, my,
our(s), mine yourselves, myself, ourselves, etc.
b) Do use third person: he, she, it, one, they, them, their, themselves, etc.
c) Maintain verb tense. Simple present is usually used. Avoid tense-shifts within in the same
sentence.
d) Do not use abbreviations. Etc. = et cetera; i.e. = that is
e) Do not use symbols: =+ and
f) Do not use numerals unless in an address, or a date.
g) Do not use only the first name of the author. Use first and last name. William Shakespeare or
just Shakespeare.