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OET Writing Criteria 2019 PDF
OET Writing Criteria 2019 PDF
Writing Criteria
2019
(Medicine)
with examples of good practice
A PUBLICATION OF
Banfield’s Professional Medical English
CONTENTS
1 Purpose (3 points) 5
2 Content (7 points) 6
6 Language (7 points) 11
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1. Purpose (3 points)
Give purpose quickly and precisely early in the letter
Health professionals want to quickly understand the reason for a letter and how their
specific services are needed for the patient.
•Identify patient and give concise purpose of the letter very early.
•This information should be easy to find and understand.
•Elaborate on what you would like the reader to do later down in the letter, usually
closer to the end.
✗ Bad practice
Dear Dr. Smith,
I saw this lady a week ago when she complained of abdominal pain, vomiting, poor
appetite, weight loss and gastroesophageal reflux. On examination, she had … but no
….. Blood results showed… After abdominal X-ray and ultrasound, we diagnosed gall
stones and so I am now referring her to you for further management.
✓GOOD PRACTICE
Dear Dr. Smith,
Thank you for seeing this 46 year-old who is being referred for further assessment of
possible gall stones and gastroesophageal reflux.
From the case notes, identify all the information the reader will need to continue
care
•Relevant medical AND background information
•Is this a new patient for the reader, or an existing patient being sent back to them?
•Ensure the information you give the reader is accurate.
SCENARIO: Mary Brown, 46 years old, referred back to her regular GP after
removal of gall stones
✗ Bad practice
Dear Dr. Brady,
(Paragraph 2) This 46 year old lady was referred to us by you a week ago with
abdominal pain, vomiting, anorexia and weight loss and a provisional diagnosis of gall
stones. …
(Paragraph 3) She lives alone except for her house pets, and will likely need sick leave
from her job...
✓GOOD PRACTICE
Dear Dr. Brady,
I am returning this patient to your care after a successful removal of her gall bladder.
Her condition before surgery was stable with laboratory results showing …, and
abdominal imaging confirmed ……….. Surgery involved ……….. and after surgery she
recovered with no fever…
Health professionals do NOT want irrelevant information that wastes their time or
distracts from what is essential.
•Is each bit of information you have identified relevant for your reader to continue
care?
•Did you leave out things that would distract from your main points?
•Summarise the information you include in concise and clear language.
SCENARIO: Agatha Peters, 73 years old, referred the orthopedic surgeon for a
fractured femur.
✗ Bad practice
This 73 year old lady has the following problems: moderate hearing loss, mild
psoriasis, and a fracture of her right head of femur. She fell this morning while in the
garden and afterward complained of pain in the hip and she walked with a limp. She
wears a hearing aid and gets light therapy and moisturizers for her psoriasis.
✓GOOD PRACTICE
This 73 year old lady tripped and fell while in the garden today. She required
assistance to stand and immediately complained of pain in her right hip. She reported no
dizziness before of after her fall, and also no head injury or loss of consciousness.
On initial examination, she was alert, oriented , with Glasgow coma scale 15. In her
musculoskeletal system………., and X-ray revealed……..
•Your letter should not contain your personal judgements or feelings; only facts
•Use only internationally recognized abbreviations which your reader would be
reasonably expected to know
•Adjust technical jargon and level of medical detail according to your reader
SCENARIO: Ben Cho, 68 years old, discharged after treatment for allergic
pneumonitis (farmer’s lung). Summary letter for his wife.
✗ Bad practice
Your husband presented with severe cough and dyspnoea, not resolving with his usual
Salbutamol inhaler. His spirometry results suggest that he has COPD, and his lung X-ray
showed pneumonitis .
✓GOOD PRACTICE
Your husband ‘s symptoms and X-ray findings suggests he is suffering from an allergic
reaction in his lungs, likely associated with his profession as a farmer. This is causing his
cough, shortness of breath and other breathing problems.
Thank you urgently seeing this patient with signs and symptoms of type 2 diabetes
following pregnancy, and who has today been started on insulin.
Ms. Alton has a BMI of 30.1. Her pregnancy was normal until 30 weeks gestation
when she started experiencing urinary frequency, thirst and fatigue. Urinalysis showed
traces of protein, glucose and ketones. Fasting blood glucose was 5.8 mmol/L. Fetal
development was normal. She was managed by dietary control, and daily exercise was
recommended. No insulin was started at that time.
Ms. Alton had an uncomplicated vaginal delivery at 38 weeks, but today at her 6-week
postpartum visit, she reports a return of her urine symptoms, with two fainting spells in
the last week. Her urine shows glucose, protein and ketones, and her fasting blood
sugar is 10.1 and 2-hour 13.2, confirming diabetes mellitus.
She has been started on low dose subcutaneous insulin twice daily, has been referred to
a dietitian, and I ask that you assess her diabetes and further manage as appropriate.
Thank you urgently seen this patient with sings of type 2 diabetes after pregnancy,
and who has today bin started on insulin.
Ms. Alton has a BMI of 30.1. Her pregnancy is normal until 30 weeks when she
starting experienced urine frequency, thirds and fatige. Urine test showed protine,
glucose and ketons. Fasting blood glucose was 5.8 mmol/L. Fetus was normal. She was
put on diet and daily exercise. No insulin was started.
She had an uncomplicated vaginal delivery at 38 weeks. Today is her 6-week check up.
She has urine symptoms again, and clapsed twice las weak. Her urine has glucose,
protine and ketones. Her fasting blood sugar are 10.1 and 2-hour 13.2, so she have
diabetes mellitus.
She is start on low dose insulin twice dairy, referred to a dietitian, and I ask that you
assess her diabetes and further manage.
Thank you for urgently seeing this patient with signs and symptoms of type 2 diabetes
following pregnancy, and who has today been started on insulin.
Ms. Alton has a BMI of 30.1. Her pregnancy was normal until 30 weeks gestation
when she started experiencing urinary frequency, thirst and fatigue. Urinalysis showed
traces of protein, glucose and ketones, and fasting blood glucose at that time was 5.8
mmol/L. Fetal development was normal and she was managed by dietary control and
daily exercise recommended. No insulin was started at that time.
Ms. Alton had an uncomplicated vaginal delivery at 38 weeks, but today at her 6-week
postpartum visit, she reports a return of her urinary symptoms, with two fainting spells in
the last week. Her urine shows glucose, protein and ketones, and her fasting blood
sugar is 10.1 and 2-hour 13.2, confirming diabetes mellitus.
She has been started on low dose subcutaneous insulin twice daily, referred to a dietitian,
and I ask that you assess her diabetes and further manage as appropriate.
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