Last Minute GMAT Grammar - Your GMAT Coach - Rowan Hand
Last Minute GMAT Grammar - Your GMAT Coach - Rowan Hand
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First, let’s look at some (anecdotal) facts. In my The GMAT does a remarkable job of writing
nearly ten years of teaching and consulting for answers that don’t sound particularly good,
GMAT students, I have noted that the Sentence or don’t seem quite right to the ear. They are
Correction section is the section where perhaps a little bit awkward, but not too much.
students improve the most over the shortest Sometimes there is an answer choice that
period of time. Nevertheless, I also find to be sounds better, or more like speech. For most of
the section where students never quite get it us, that is how we choose what is “correct.”
right. Arguably, even people who score 780-
790 often miss most of their questions in the However, GMAT Grammar is decided upon rules
Sentence Correction section. called “Standard Written American English.”
This would better be called “GMAT English”
Put simply, it is easy to gain competence at because it differs in minor ways from most
Sentence Correction, but extremely difficult other schools of proper United States English.
to gain total mastery. This separates it from When usage deviates from United States
the other sections, where enough training will English (specifically, the Chicago Manual of
allow this type of mastery. This book will allow Style), I will note this.
you to determine the boundaries of what is and
is not on the GMAT. A large part of successfully Therefore, as usual with the GMAT, we must
eliminating incorrect answers is understanding learn quick ways to eliminate as many
what “incorrectnesses” actually exist on the answer choices as possible. How? Follow the
exam. Theoretically, I assume this is because it Standard Sentence Choice Procedure
is the section where the test-taker is forced to (SCP):
hold the most information in his or her head for
the longest period of time.
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Sentence Choice Procedure (SCP)
1. Listen
2. Question Structure
3. Check Grammar
4. Make an Educated Guess
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Sentence Choice Procedure (SCP)
1. Listen
Imagine reading the sentences aloud. Listen to them.
Anyone whose level of English is sufficient to be taking the
GMAT has enough experience with English to understand
what “sounds like a good sentence” and what doesn’t sound
like a good sentence.
2. Question Structure
Many questions will have two answer choices with the same
basic grammatical structure and three answer choices with a
different basic grammatical structure.
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Sentence Choice Procedure (SCP)
3. Check Grammar
This is the point at which we sink our teeth into this program.
This is the boring stuff that perhaps you should have spent
more time with at school or learned from the textbook when
you were learning English for the first time.
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Sentence Choice Procedure (SCP)
Rowan Hand
Head Coach, Your GMAT Coach
November 2014
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Sentence Correction Guide
Obviously, the first sentence is not actually a sentence as it has no verb. The correction would read:
Words like “because,” “while,” “as,” “although,” “if,” etc. are subordinating conjunctions because
they imply something else occurring at the same time. This can be an explanation of a state of
affairs or an opposing viewpoint.
“The deadline was postponed” functions as a complete sentence unto itself. You could put a period
there and it would make sense. But “because the editor became ill” does not function alone. Thus
it is the subordinate clause.
That is, a subordinating conjunction creates simultaneous action or provides an explanation for a
state of affairs discussed in the other clause. Sentences can begin with subordinating conjunctions,
but the second clause in the sentence must be independent.
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Any clause beginning with “which” or “who” is subordinate and must be attached to an independent
(complete) clause.
✓ Accidents happen even to the best racers, who are miles ahead of the laggards.
✓ He chose Harvard, which lies the farthest north of all his favorite schools.
In each case, the first part of the sentence is completely independent. The subordinate clause adds
information, but it is not necessary to make the sentence a complete sentence.
Note that sentences using “who” and “which” to begin a subordinate clause cannot begin with the
subordinate clause. That is, “who” and “which” cannot begin a sentence, except as response to a
question. Again, you will not find the interrogative circumstance on the GMAT.
This punctuation can be either a semicolon or a period (full stop), depending on the force you wish
to use. A period is, of course, stronger than a semicolon.
Both are sufficient to separate independent clauses. The semicolon is often used stylistically to link
two ideas that the writer explicitly intends to connect.
It is the writer’s decision whether to use a period or a semicolon. On the GMAT, you will not be forced
to decide whether a semicolon or a period is more appropriate, as there is no “better” answer. It is
purely the writer’s discretion.
However, you must be aware of when semicolons or periods are preferable to commas, and vice-
versa. If you’re still feeling uncomfortable about semicolons, the rule of thumb is this: many use a
single dash to tack something on to the end of a sentence in e-mails.
Technically speaking, dashes are only used in pairs, as a stronger form of parentheses. A single dash
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could often be replaced by a semicolon, because the phrase added on is an independent yet
connected idea.
Still, consider how you react when I use a word such as “however,” “nevertheless,” “thus,” “therefore,”
or “instead.” Each has its own meaning in your mind. It is guiding your thinking, just as road signs
guide your travel, even when you don’t realize it.
“THUS” and “THEREFORE” literally point forward: they put the point of the argument “to the fore,”
or right in front of your face.
Often, these are called “adverbs.” I don’t know about you, but where I come from, adverbs only
modify verbs. Unfortunately, lazy grammarians like to categorize things into seven parts of speech
and they’ll toss anything they don’t fully understand (logical operators, modifications of amounts,
modifications of times or dates) into the “adverb” category.
This is just lazy thinking, so I’ve taken the French term “logical operators.” Logical operators are
strong. Very strong. They create independent clauses, and are not to be used as conjunctions. That
is, they are only used at the beginning of a sentence or after a semicolon.
✓ Michael was going to buy a monkey; however, he found the cost prohibitive.
✓ Guillaume shot the apple from his son’s head. Nevertheless, it was reckless to do so.
You might be tempted to use a comma in the above circumstance, but it would be incorrect. There
will be a corresponding subordinating conjunction if circumstances dictate that the sentence not
be split in two. For example:
✓ Michael was going to buy a monkey, but he found the cost prohibitive.
✓ Guillaume shot the apple from his son’s head, yet it was reckless to do so.
Beware logical operators. Make sure you provide them with the space they need to function: an
independent clause.
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Subjects and verbs may seem too obvious to discuss. Nevertheless, an overwhelming number of
errors on the GMAT Sentence Correction section are due to incorrect subject-verb correspondence.
The simple rule is that the subject and the verb must correspond to each other, no matter what
comes between them.
Three main things may come between the subject and verb. First are adjectival (modifying) phrases.
x Tools found in the northern regions of Mesopotamia indicates that there were people there
some 5000 years ago.
Do you see the error? The clever test writer has created the modifying phrase “found in the northern
regions of Mesopotamia” to split the subject, “tools,” from the verb that corresponds to it, “indicates.”
To further confuse, they have put a singular noun immediately before the singular conjugation of
the verb, so to the untrained eye the verb and (non-subject) noun will match. A correct version of
the sentence reads:
✓ Tools found in the northern regions of Mesopotamia indicate that there were people there
some 5000 years ago.
You can simply leave out “found in the northern regions of Mesopotamia” and your life will be easier.
Learn to eliminate modifying phrases, as they don’t tell you anything about the deeper structure of
the sentence.
Second are possessives. English borrows its possessive forms from French, as in “the book of
Daniel,” and from German, as in “Daniel’s book.”
The two forms are interchangeable. The choice is purely stylistic, to make the rhythm of a sentence
as smooth as possible. Remember that the GMAT doesn’t give a toss about poetry, so make sure the
logic is correct and damn the rhythm.
In the following sentence, the test writers have used the French possessive to confuse the test taker:
Do you see the error? What is the subject? It is actually “the convenience and availability,” a pluralized
subject referring to abstract qualities of the physical object “phone.”
It is important to draw the distinction here that the thing doing the possessing may be the physical
object. Not to get into the nebulous world of linguistics, but grammatically the possessor doesn’t
really have “part of speech.” Thus it has no grammatical function and you can simply scratch it out:
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✓ “The convenience and availability of the cellular phone are why it is popular.“
The simpler way to check the sentence, though, is to switch to the German possessive:
Here, the error is clear: you can easily see that “convenience and availability are why it is popular”
would be the correct choice. When in doubt, switch to the German possessive to check.
Third are parentheticals. When I say “parenthetical,“ I do not mean only something within
parentheses, which you are unlikely to see in the Sentence Correction section, but something that
lies between two commas or two dashes.
A parenthetical is an aside; it is related to the original sentence but not important enough to require
its own sentence. Grammatically, it has no weight. The GMAT test writers love the parenthetical
phrase and use it all the time, to our great benefit.
Why? Because we can always test a sentence by simply scratching out a parenthetical phrase.
x The major predators, the largest of which is the lion, flourishes throughout the savanna.
Note that the error is the same as the last example, where the singular noun is put before the verb.
However, that singular noun is not the subject. Here, it’s a bit simpler to see because there is a
comma separating noun and verb.
Note that the sentence reads much more clearly if you simply remove the parenthetical.
This is clearly incorrect, and we see that our answer must read, “The major predators flourish
throughout the savanna.”
Therefore, when you notice two commas or two dashes, the first thing to do is remove them and
note the structure of the sentence without them.
Note that the verb is conjugated to “members,” the possessors, not the possessed. The one-half
is a single unit, but in English speech quantity words such as “one-third” or “75 percent” or “the
majority” might be singular, but the verb is conjugated to the thing possessing this singular item.
Thus, the verb agrees with “members,” which is plural.
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The GMAT will try to trick you into thinking all manner of phrases, such as “as well as” or my particular
favorite, “combined with,” are acceptable to use with a plural verb.
Notice that, in the previous example, the verb "damage" corresponds to the singular noun “sleet,”
simply avoiding reference to “combined with hail.”
Both of these sentences are correct. It’s simply which comes closest to the verb. If they’re both
singular or both plural, good. Easy choice. Otherwise, look to the closer one.
These aren’t incredibly well written sentences, but they serve their purpose, and technically
they aren’t grammatically incorrect. The GMAT loves things that aren’t technically grammatically
incorrect, so you need to keep an eye out for them.
Sure, it doesn’t sound very good, but it’s correct. The only thing of note here is that the verb and
subject are reversed in order. To check correctness, all you have to do is invert the sentence:
If you invert the sentence and it works properly, then your sentence is OK as it stands.
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The negative limiter is something such as, “rarely,” ‘never,” “only since,” “only recently,” and anything
else that puts a restriction on the amount of time something has been happening.
When these words are used at the beginning of a sentence, the verb and subject are inverted, or a
“do” is inserted between subject and verb:
✓ “Only since she released her album does she consider herself a musician.”
Arguably, a statement such as “Always have I loved you” is also appropriate, so we could note this
for any adverb that provides a distinct time frame. However, as this type of construction is seen only
in poetry and wouldn’t be useful for the purposes of the GMAT, we can forget about it.
However, there are more exceptions. For example, although you are unlikely to see this on the
GMAT, the names of many animals have irregular plurals, such as “one fish” vs. “many fish,” or “one
buffalo” vs. “many buffalo.”
More commonly, words taken directly from Greek and Latin tend to keep their Greek or Latin
pluralizations when used in English.
For example, the plural of a single “phenomenon” is “many phenomena,” “one stimulus” becomes
“many stimuli,” and “one matrix” becomes “many matrices.”
There are a number of these. Unfortunately, they must be memorized as there is no absolute pattern
to them. That said, as long as you are aware of the condition, you can basically guess that a Latin or
Greek word ending with a vowel is plural, and one ending in a consonant is singular.
✓ “One alumnus donated a park bench to the university, but it took many alumni to fund the
new Arts Center.”
The only exceptions to this rule are two words in common parlance: “data,” which is technically the
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plural of the singular “datum,” and “media,” technically the plural of the singular “medium.”
The use of each depends on context: for purposes of the GMAT, “data” can be singular or plural,
although you will not be required to choose a correct answer based on this criterion. Normally
"data" is colloquial use while "datum" is scientific use.
In its scientific usage, as a substance through which information travels, “medium” can be either
singular or plural.
✓ Air and water are both media for the transmission of sound, but a vacuum is not a medium
through which sound can travel.
However, the plural form “media” is treated as singular when referring to the entity of “the media.”
In general, uncountable nouns are things you’re likely to find in your cupboard, such as flour, salt,
tea, coffee, etc.
Basically, these are words that are used almost exclusively in singular form, because it wouldn’t
make sense to count the number of “salts” you have in the salt shaker.
If you’re a scientist and counting different types of salt, “salts” would be an appropriate word, but if
you want to know the number of grains of salt in the shaker, you use just that word: “grains of salt.”
It would be pointless and futile to count the number of individual pieces of sand on a beach, so we
talk of “grains of sand.” Anything that requires a “piece of,” “grain of,” “bit of,” etc. before it in order
to count individual units would be an uncountable noun.
Some important ones are “piece of furniture,” “piece of software,” or the perennial favorite, which is
uncountable in English yet countable in many other languages: “piece of information.”
✓ There is much salt in the shaker; there are many pieces of salt in the shaker.
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In these cases, the distinction between countable and uncountable nouns is totally dependent on
context. Make sure you can tell the difference.
✓ The pond has only one species of frog but the swamp has many species of frogs.
There are still others that are Latin names for diseases, such as “diabetes” or “measles.”
Another word that ends with “s” yet is not plural is the common word “news,” as there is no such
thing as “one new.”
Certain words can have both a singular and a plural meaning. For example, “statistics” is singular
when referring to the academic subject but plural when referring to multiple pieces of data, or
“statistics.”
✓ Of the thousands of statistics she collected for the study, only one statistic seemed not to
fit the norm.
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Furthermore, collectives, even those with technically plural names, are conjugated as singular.
The singular form emphasizes the group; the plural form emphasizes the individuals.
✓ The team are ready for the game. Every player is ready to go.
✓ The team is ready for the game. As a group, they have just completed weeks of intense
practice.
Likewise, when referring to amounts of money, the type of currency is the referent rather than the
number of dollars or pounds, and the verb is therefore singular.
NOTE: This is something like saying “two-hundred dollars is on the table," which could refer to the
amount “two-hundred dollars" as two one-hundred dollar bills, poker chips, or a check for two-
hundred dollars.
In the case that one says “two-hundred dollars are on the table," it indicates that two- hundred
single one-dollar bills are laid out on the table. This can be correct if the amount indicated is quite
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small, and the separation of the numbers is intended. An example might be “For every pledge
donated to the program, eight dollars are given to homeless children."
In this case, the separation is intentional because “eight dollars is" doesn’t seem like a lot of money,
whereas “eight dollars" emphasizes the individual dollars, which makes it seem like a larger amount.
Notably, plays and songs will be marked with quotation marks, while books, films, and television
series will be italicized or underlined. If the names are not italicized or in quotes, you may consider
them to be the individual characters.
These include words such as “each,” “either,” “everything,” “anyone,” “anything,” “something,”
“somebody,” etc.
These include words such as “any,” “some,” “none,” "all," "most," and "many."
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“People” is certainly a countable noun, and we know–if only by memorization–that “infor- mation”
is uncountable. Thus, we can remember which number word applies to which.
✓ There are fewer people in the room than there were yesterday.
✓ There is little salt in the shaker; in fact, there is even less than there was this morning.
✓ The number of seats available meant she could choose one next to the window.
✓ Her trip through the airport was slow because of the amount of luggage she was carrying.
Yes, even “how” counts: it has a “W” and an “H,” after all...
A question containing the word “when” consists of a clause that is not a fixed part of speech and
that specifies a time.
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Notice that the “when” forces the first clause into the future, and the second clause requires “will,”
which also implies existence in the future.
x The proudest moment of his life was when he was made valedictorian.
The problem in this sentence is that “moment” requires a noun on the other side of “was.” “When
he was made valedictorian” is not a noun; rather it is an interrogative phrase with no real structural
meaning, although its content is perfectly clear.
Remember, however, that in GMAT world, structure is king. Content only serves as a guideline to
proper structure.
All that is necessary is to replace this interrogative phrase with an equivalent noun phrase.
✓ The proudest moment of his life was the day he was made valedictorian.
In this case, simply replacing “when” with a noun, “day,” fixes our problem.
✓ His favorite place is the swing where he and his wife first kissed.
Again, simply specifying the place gives us a noun to use for the comparison. Furthermore, it uses
the interrogative term appropriately as a descriptor.
At best, this is an awkward, backward phrase. At worst, it suffers from a problem similar to those
illustrated by the previous two examples. However, in this case, we can’t simply compare the first
noun to another noun. We have an effect, and we need to make the cause clear.
The simplest way to establish cause and effect, of course, is to use the term “because.”
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This is distinctly different from the hypothetical situation that would use “if” in the first clause and
“would” in the second clause.
If we know for certain that something will happen or that something will be possible, but only under
certain conditions, we can express this using this “if + will” or “if + can” construction.
x If an object is in motion, it will stay in motion unless acted upon by an outside force.
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Unlike in British English, in American English a hypothetical statement will always be “if. . . were”
even for the first-person and third-person singular.
Note that this works only in hypothetical situations: that is, situations that have a conditional
(“would,” “could,” etc.) in the second clause of the sentence.
The case where “if. . . were” does not hold true is not technically a hypothetical. In a situation where
an action has occurred in the past yet we do not know the outcome of the action, we still use “if. . .
was.”
✓ If the ticket stall was still open, she probably caught the train.
✓ If the boss went to the spa over the weekend, she will be calm this morning.
Note that the second clause of these sentences is likely to have a “probably” or a “will” in it, and
will never have a conditional.
Although it is clear from the structure of a hypothetical statement that it must be “if + conditional,”
the GMAT loves to give sentences with “would” in the first clause. These are obviously incorrect and
can be thrown out immediately.
The subjunctive is a very simple verb form: it is the infinitive of the verb with the “to” removed.
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The subjunctive form of the verb always follows a “that” in situations of certain social interactions:
request, resentment, requirement, recommendation, and suggestion.
The GMAT creates situations of redundancy by putting a modal operator, or a verb requiring a second
(auxiliary) verb after “that” in a subjunctive statement. The point of the subjunctive construction is
to eliminate need of the modal and its auxiliary.
To insert them is simply redundant. As we will see later, the GMAT absolutely despises redundancy.
The quick and dirty rule: as subjunctive is often used to describe recommendation or requirement,
it will replace “should” or “must.” If you see “should” or “must” after the “that“ in a subjunctive
construction, throw out the sentence.
However, it is very easy to mistake the referent of a pronoun for an unintended noun if the referent
is not made absolutely clear.
x If Jerry doesn’t get Mike to mow the lawn, he will have to mow it.
✓ If Jerry doesn’t get Mike to mow the lawn, he (or "Jerry") will have to mow the lawn himself.
In this case, the only thing necessary was to provide the “himself” to clarify the referent of the
pronoun. In other cases, it can be slightly more complex.
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Additionally, as is seen quite often informally, you could write: “Cowling and Wilcox fought over his
(Cowling’s) estate.” Clearly this lengthens the sentence, but it does make the referent clear. This
solution will not be seen on the GMAT.
Notice that because “everyone” is a singular, the pronoun used to refer to it, “his or her” must also
be singular.
The sentence could also be fixed by saying, “All of those in the boat must wear their life jackets.”
However, the GMAT will not force you to choose between a fully correct singular version of the
sentence and a fully correct plural version of the sentence. There will always be some sort of
secondary error in the less correct version of the sentence.
Some time ago, it would have been acceptable to use simply “he” or “his,” but this has been replaced
in modern English due to concerns over its sexist nature.
To avoid the difficulty of spitting out “he or she,” singular pronouns are often incorrectly replaced
by “they” and “their,” but this is never acceptable on the GMAT.
Some professors accept use of “they,” which avoids using either “he” exclusively or the awkward
“he or she.” Clearly “they” avoids specifying the sex of its referent, but it is still a plural pronoun.
To use the plural “they” in such a manner on the GMAT is totally unacceptable. Unfortunately, for
purposes of the exam, you will have to live with “he or she” and “his or her."
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The correct sentence reads, “She and I are going to the store.” The other person is always listed first,
and the personal pronouns are both part of the subject.
“I am going to the store;” therefore “she and I are going to the store.”
Because of this, many are apparently convinced that when referring to a compound object, as well
as a compound subject, one must always say, “I.”
This is patently false. If something happened to her and it also happened to me, then I say, “It
happened to her and me.” The form of the personal pronoun does not change because it has been
pluralized.
Thus, the correct sentence is, “It happened to her and me.”
Unfortunately, I have heard myriad newscasters, students and professors at some of the most
prestigious schools in the world using the incorrect form, saying, “It happened to her and I.”
To a grammarian, this sounds like fingernails on a chalkboard, but to most it doesn’t sound too bad.
And when something “doesn’t sound too bad,” you can bet it will be asked on the GMAT.
Notice that to test these sentences, you can always split them into singulars. When pluralized, the
pronouns take the same form of subject or object as they do when singular.
“The prize was awarded to me,” and “The prize was awarded to her;” therefore, “The prize was
awarded to her and me.”
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You might think the correct sentence would be, “Whom did it happen to?” But this leaves a dangling
preposition at the end of the sentence. To correct the sentence, you need to place the dangling “to”
before the “whom” to complete the prepositional phrase.
Unfortunately, in cases such as the above sentence, it is simpler for the tongue to say “who did. .
. ” rather than “whom did. . . ” because the mouth does not have to close to make the “m” sound.
It sounds like a silly explanation, but any linguist worth her salt will explain that trends appear and
disappear in language based on the ease of speaking them.
There is a reason English speakers always use the formal “you” rather than the informal “thou”
construction. “You,” “your,” and “yours” are a lot easier to pronounce than “thou,” “thy,” and “thine.”
If you disagree, try carrying on a conversation using the English informal (this does not count if you
were raised Amish). So we naturally gravitate toward easy ways to say things, which is why the
incorrect “Who did it happen to?” is basically fully accepted in spoken English.
However, for the purposes of the GMAT, it is not accepted. The distinction between subject and
object is actually very important structurally and although the content makes it clear to whom we
refer, remember that the structure of the sentence must always be flawless.
Luckily, there is an easy way around this problem. If you consider, “Who did the director suggest for
the role?” you can test the sentence by replacing the “who” with a “he” or “him.” That is, change
the order of the sentence to say, “The director suggested him for the role.” If the “he” vs. “him”
distinction comes out “he,” then you use “who,” while if the distinction comes out “him,” then you
use whom. Simple.
✓ For whom did you buy the bow tie? (I bought the bow tie for him).
NOTE: don’t leave a dangling preposition! “Whom did you buy the bow tie for?” is not correct for
Example 111.
✓ Whoever moved the whiteboard will be punished. (He moved the whiteboard).
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✓ The idea should be clear to whomever you suspect it would interest. (I suspect it would
interest him).
A good rule of thumb here is that there will never be a comma before “that.”
✓ “Titanic” was once a term that was used to refer to anything of incredible size.
However, if the information is inessential to the sentence, it is presented in a clause that is connected
by a comma and then “which.” The first clause of the sentence will be independent, and the second
clause adds information that is not required to comprehend the sentence.
✓ The story focuses on the Titanic, which was the pride of the White Star Line.
Two basic rules will help you choose between “that” and “which.” First, the word “which” must
refer to an object that comes immediately before a comma. Second, if a comma is necessary to the
sentence, use “which.” If a comma is not necessary, use “that.”
Notice that this sentence does not use “which” to refer to an object. Rather, it tries to make “which”
correspond to an entire idea–in this case, to link a cause (“the craftsmanship is shoddy”) with an
effect (“it sells for a low price”). This does not work.
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If you’re American, you can remember this because this is how Americans are taught to answer the
phone. “Is this John?” “Yes, this is he (who is called John and who is speaking).” For non-American
native speakers, you can remember it as the bizarre way that Americans answer phones. Luckily,
the GMAT will provide sentences that are somewhat more obviously incorrect.
Of course, in conversational English, we would simply say, “She made the decision” or “They are
likely to win.” The awkward construction of “It was she. . . ” or “It is they. . . ” is seldom or never used.
But It will show up on the GMAT.
“You” is arguably more informal than “one,” but both are acceptable on the GMAT. As long as you
consistently choose one or the other, your answer will be correct.
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The GMAT uses this to great effect when it presents adjectives modifying verbs. It’s very easy to read
this incorrectly if you’re not used to the vagaries of the GMAT.
x If motorcycles are not driven cautious, they can lead to many accidents.
Furthermore, certain adjectives have become almost acceptable as adverbs in American English.
In any case where the adverb can take an “-ly” ending, it must on the GMAT.
✓ If motorcycles are not driven cautiously, they can lead to many accidents.
This does not work for the irregulars. In the case of “fast,” there is no such word as “fastly.” In the
case of “hard,” the word “hard” is both adjective and adverb, while “hardly” is also an adverb, but
means “barely.”
The classic difference between adjective and adverb is the one taught in any beginning English
course, yet is often forgotten by native speakers.
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Now, if you change the sentence in Example 138 to make the act of playing tennis into a noun, you
can use “good.”
This changes the sentence structurally to allow use of “good.” In this case, “good” modifies a noun
(“tennis”), so it is an adjective, not an adverb.
The problem here is that the adverb “coldly” actually modifies “tasted,” which leads to the bizarre
assumption that the tea has the ability to taste and it does so coldly.
A good rule here is to replace the verb with a strong modifier, such as “nasty.”
According to this sentence, the sewage has the ability to taste, and it does so with extreme prejudice.
In this case, the sewage had a disgusting taste, which is clearly more in line with the content. When
in doubt, use an extreme word to test.
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Unfortunately, in writing, we don’t have the luxury of hearing how the speaker intones a sentence.
In this case does the “frequently” refer to the frequency of eating red meat, or to the frequency of
heart problems? It is totally unclear.
✓ People who frequently eat red meat tend to develop heart problems.
✓ People who eat red meat tend to develop heart problems more frequently.
Example 146 relates “frequently” to eating red meat, while Example 147 relates it to the development
of heart problems. Which you choose depends on which meaning you wish to convey.
Limiting words, such as “only,” “almost,” “hardly,” etc. must be placed immediately before the
words they modify.
Thus, we could correct the first example with a judicious use of “often” to produce either of the two
meanings.
x She hopes to appeal to a nice young man at the party, wearing a low-cut dress.
✓ She hopes to appeal to a nice young man who is wearing a low-cut dress.
Remember, structure is king. Abuse content all you want, but changing content will never make a
sentence correct. On the GMAT, both of the correct examples above would be considered superior
to the incorrect one.
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Clearly the seat did not speak, the groomsman did. However, because “the seat” comes immediately
after the comma, it reads as though the seat spoke.
Note that this example was corrected by making the sentence active instead of passive. However,
the distinction between active and passive is a stylistic choice dependent on how the author wishes
the rhythm of the sentence to run. Modifier errors are true logic errors and trump the active/passive
distinction.
If the sentence begins with a preposition, a similar problem occurs. The reference of the preposition
must be immediately after the comma.
x With such aplomb, guests found the host charming and witty.
✓ With such aplomb, the host was found charming and witty by his guests.
Likewise, make sure that it is the person who has the aplomb and not something belonging to him.
Possessive errors are an old standard on the GMAT.
x With such aplomb, the host’s parties are always major successes.
✓ With such aplomb, the host always throws parties that are major successes.
Note: that modifiers may occasionally be placed at the end of sentences, referring always to the
subject of the main clause. If the end modifier can be placed at the beginning, the sentence is valid.
The real question is what each of these words means in the context in which we need to use them.
Use a simple rule: if you can put something in a box, it is concrete. That is, it has a physical existence.
For example, a rock is obviously concrete, but something like a baseball game could also be
considered concrete. They’re put in boxes all the time: we call them stadiums.
If you can’t put it in a box, it is abstract. It is a concept, or something that undeniably exists, but does
not have a physical existence.Obviously there exist some gray areas here, and the more pedantic
among you will likely already have picked these up.
For instance, you could say that “mind” is an abstract concept, whereas “brain” is a concrete
concept. After all, you can put a brain in a box, but it seems difficult if not impossible to believe that
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Another classic example is the Ten Commandments: laws are considered abstract, but the tablet
Moses brought forth from Mount Sinai would be concrete.
However, I argue that I can recite the Ten Commandments from my head, without Moses’ tablet,
and therefore I would consider them separate from the physical entity of the tablet.
Enough philosophy!
For purposes of the GMAT, remember not to make things too complicated. There is a level at which
the cleverness of the test writers’ logic ends, and it is surely beneath the cleverness of a good
student's logic.
For purposes of the GMAT, the problem comes when we look at sentences with both abstract and
concrete terms.
Now Sian is definitely concrete. It might not be nice to do so, but we can put her in a box. Her problem,
however, is abstract, as we cannot put it in a box. The other young singers are also concrete as they
can be put in a box (or perhaps boxes).
So the question here is what is the problem? Well, structurally, we’re saying that the problem is like
the other singers themselves, not the other singers' problem.
✓ Sian’s problem was like the problem of many other young singers.
The content of the sentence, of course, wants us to say that the problem is like the problem of the
other singers.
The difficulty here is not that the sentence is grammatically incorrect: it isn’t. However because
“the problem” is said twice in such a short span of time, the sentence sounds quite bad to the ear.
For this reason, English uses the relative pronoun “that” or “those” to replace “the problem.”
x The Rolling Stones' songs rock harder than the songs of the Beatles.
✓ The Rolling Stones’ songs rock harder than those of the Beatles.
Thus, the word “that,” referring to the problem, eliminates our difficulty with an abstract noun
compared to a concrete noun.
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Note that this doesn’t really sound bad to a native speaker’s ear, so it is something that everyone
must pay attention to.
Technically, “he makes,” so “she makes,” as well. The comparison must keep the same form.
The “does” in this case is often implied rather than actually stated, but the rule is more that you
must be able to add the “does” at the end. If you can’t because you have used an object pronoun,
the sentence is technically incorrect.
The problem here is pretty clear: does Jim hate Dallas more than he hates Susie, or does Jim hate
Dallas more than Susie hates Dallas?
Which of the two is correct might be clear from content, but structurally, either way could be
interpreted from the sentence as it stands.
This can be easily remedied using the word “does” in strategic locations.
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Clearly in this case California is a U.S. state, but we need to make a clear distinction separating
California from all of the other states that are not California.
This is an error that you would be unlikely to make in speech, but it is easy to miss when reading if
you’re not looking out for it.
In terms of content, the mind makes the distinction clear, whereas the structure does not make it
clear.
For certain words, such as “beautiful,” you must say “more beautiful” as “beautifuler” doesn’t exist
and just sounds strange. Interestingly, this is also the best way to determine whether the “more big”
or “bigger” construction is correct: the force of the final syllable indicates whether it takes an “-er”
ending.
For words with a soft final sound, such as “beautiful,” “incognito,” “capable,” etc., the structure will
always be “more beautiful.” For words with a hard final sound, such as “big,” “hard,” “fast,” etc.,
you may use either depending on circumstance. In certain cases, the “more big” form might be
preferable due to the rhythm of the sentence.
Furthermore, for words with more than three syllables, the “more” form is generally preferable as
extending the word by adding an “-er” will often be too difficult to pronounce.
This situation is rare, however, and luckily you will not have to choose between “bigger” and “more
big” to determine which sentence is correct on the GMAT.
You will, however, need to make clear distinctions between the comparative and superlative forms.
The comparative form structurally requires two and only two objects of comparison. If there are
two objects of comparison, you must use the comparative form.
x The goat is the most independent and the sheep is the most docile.
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Clearly we are referring to all 49 other U.S. states in this sentence, but the construction “any other
state” makes this a comparison of two states. The word “any” indicates that if we pick any one of
the other states, California will have a larger GDP than that state. So we are comparing only two
states, even though the context refers to all 49 other states.
When you have three or more objects, you must use the superlative form, which is “the most big”
or “biggest.”
x The goat is more independent, the sheep is more docile, and the cow is more large.
✓ The goat is the most independent, the sheep is the most docile, and the cow is the most
large.
Again, the suitability of the “-est” suffix depends on the final sound as well as the length of the
word. In Example 162, we would typically say, “and the cow is the largest.”
It is debatable whether certain parallelism errors are in fact actual grammar errors; grammar books
differ on this. However, the GMAT considers bad parallelism an error, so you must, too.
The idea, as you might imagine, is that items in a list must be parallel to one another.
That is, if you have a list of three items and one is a noun, the other two must also be nouns.
x His long absence was due to an extended vacation, the Christmas holiday, and because he
broke his wrist.
Notice that “because he broke his wrist” is an explanation clause, which is not a noun. All you need
to do is add a noun to make the form work.
✓ His long absence was due to an extended vacation, the Christmas holiday, and the fact
that he broke his wrist.
Furthermore, all objects in a list must share the same verb form.
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As the first two are in the gerundive (-ing) form, keep the final one in the same form.
Often on the GMAT you will see places where a preposition is repeated twice, but not the third time.
In each of these cases, what you choose as your X and your Y must both be in the same form, whether
verb or preposition.
In this case, the sentence doesn’t sound particularly bad, but the “go” part of the verb is not parallel.
On the GMAT the “go” would either be placed before “either,” or stated before “hiking” and before
“skiing” in order that the sentence be parallel.
That is, the two-verb construction “go hiking” and “go skiing” allows us to split the verbs. Our
sentence would either read “...go either X or Y,” or “...either go X or go Y.”
Since the first verb is the same, which is the reason we are tempted not repeat it after “or,” we can
put it in front of the either.
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x The advantage of the new shop is not its prices but where it is located.
Notice that “prices” is clearly a noun, whereas “where it is located” is an interrogative phrase that
gives us a feeling of location, but it certainly isn’t a noun.
✓ The advantage of the new shop is not its prices but its location.
A more common error for the “not only. . . but also" construction is to repeat the subject and verb
(the subject often in pronoun form) in the “but also” clause.
Because the construction is idiomatic–we know that “not only” will always be followed by “but
also"–we don’t need to worry about restating things.
It doesn’t sound particularly bad to do so as people often make this error in speech. Simply consider
this part of the GMAT’s consistent campaign against redundancy.
x Nicola Tesla was not only a brilliant scientist, but he was also a polyglot.
✓ Nicola Tesla was not only a brilliant scientist, but also a polyglot.
✓ To have loved and lost is better than to have never loved at all.
Notice the “to have” and “to have” remains parallel in this situation. Situations that would be
incorrect in this circumstance might seem a bit odd or obvious, but it happens more than you might
think in speech.
If it happens in speech you are much less likely to appreciate it as an error upon seeing it written.
In this case, the verb form is different. We simply need to pick one of the two and be consistent.
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Again, we encounter the interrogative problem frequently. If the first part of the comparison is a
noun, it is a good tip-off that the second, interrogative part is incorrect.
x The best time he ever had was when he went to the waterpark.
Again, the “when he went to the waterpark” sounds like a distinct time, but structurally it isn’t. All
we have to do is to replace “when” with a noun, such as “time."
✓ The best time he ever had was the time he went to the waterpark.
This makes good sense. “Transitive” is a big word, but at its root is the Latin prefix “trans-,” meaning
“across.” Basically, in the Transitive Property, you have to cross B to associate A with C.
Transitive verbs work in this way. You have to have an A, a B, and a C in order for them to work. If you
don’t have all three parts, they are not used correctly.
If the verb is used correctly without all three parts, then, like most verbs, it is intransitive. The
transitive/intransitive distinction is one of the most frequent errors made by native English speakers.
The key transitive/intransitive distinctions on the GMAT are between “raise”/“rise” and “lay”/“lie.”
“Raise” is transitive; it must have a direct object. “Rise” is intransitive; it has no direct object.
In this case, although there is a chair, I am not performing any action on it. I am simply rising from
it, and it is left unaffected. “Chair” is not a direct object.
✓ I raise my hand.
Here, I am doing something to something else (“hand”). “Hand” is the direct object of the action
verb “raise.” Therefore, “raise” is transitive.
x I rise my hand.
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Here, we try to force an intransitive verb to be transitive and it sounds as incorrect, as it is.
Here, again, I do the rising. I act upon myself. The bed is incidental. I could easily say “I rise” and it
would be a complete phrase with subject and verb. “Rise” is intransitive; it does not require a direct
object. The other key transitive/intransitive pair on the GMAT is “lay”/“lie.” “Lay” is transitive (has a
direct object), and “lie” is intransitive (has no direct object).
X lay down.
This is a common phrase, but it is incorrect. I am not acting on anything but myself, and “lay” is
transitive so I (A) must act (B) upon something (C).
Here again, we are forcing the intransitive verb to be transitive, which both sounds bad and is
incorrect.
✓ I lie down.
Here I act only on myself and, as the verb is intransitive, everything works as it ought.
For example, prepositions and their association with certain verbs are always idiomatic.
Furthermore, these tend to change from language to language, so it is actually quite difficult for
non-native speakers to use prepositions correctly in any language even if their syntax is otherwise
flawless.
The nice thing about idioms, however, is that you hear them all the time. They are part of the
language and the more you immerse yourself in the language, the easier they will become. If you
spend time in a country where the first language is English, most of these idioms will be familiar
to you from day-to-day language. For native English speakers who are not American, please note
that these idioms are presented in American English and they can be distinctly different from other
forms of English.
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While I have chosen to present some common representations here, the work is really up to you, the
student: the only way to tell what the GMAT wants in terms of idioms is truly observation.
Some idioms seem "obvious and correct," such as "between/and," but others arbitrarily reflect
whatever trailer park the testwriter grew up in, e.g., the correctness of phrases such as "so long as."
In the case that an idiom changes the correctness/incorrectness of a practice question, I suggest
writing the combination down for future reference.
There is no exception to this: if you use “not either,” your complement is “or.”
“Between” is used only in relation to two things. The “be” root means “state of being,” and the
“tween” root means “flanked on two sides by. . . ” Thus, if you break the word apart, it only works
properly as a preposition if there are two things to consider and a third entity that is shared between
them.
That is, a person can be between two other people or an idea can be shared between two people.
“Between” is a relation of three and only three things. “Among” is used to describe something that
is in the middle of a group of three or greater.
Thus, “among” describes a relation of four or more things. This doesn’t sound particularly bad,
as it is an error that is very common, especially in American English. However, as a secret shared
by 20 people is clearly an object in relation to a group of three or greater, the correct word in this
circumstance is “among.”
✓ The secret was shared among all of the people in the room.
Remember that these two words describe specific circumstances, and “among” cannot be used as
a catchall.
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Note that “between” and “among” both take the object form of the pronoun. It is fairly common to
hear “between he and she” or “between she and him” and other strange jugglings of subject and
object pronouns.
This is most likely because “between you and me” is very common and correct, and there is no way
to distinguish between the subject and object form of “you.”
Following this rule, it is incorrect to say “between you and I.” Nevertheless, this is a commonly
heard error.
So, for the record, “between him and her” and “among them” are the only acceptable pronoun uses.
3) “From”/“to”
If you’re talking about time, distance, or anything measured by degree, something goes “from” one
point “to” another.
In recent years, especially in journalism, there has been an increase in “not only”/“but,” but this will
not be considered correct on the GMAT. Make sure that both “not only” and “but also” are there.
It is clear that the two clauses in this sentence do not carry enough opposition to make proper
sense. We have to use the word “but” in order to make the opposition sound correct.
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6) “Different from”
This one can be quite easy to remember, because “to” means “toward,” while “from” represents a
moving away.
Something being “different” is a move away rather than a move toward. What could be clearer?
Nevertheless, “different than” and “different to” are two variations on “different” that are acceptable
in many places. “Different than” tends to be a lazy Americanism.
"Different to” simply comes from another planet–moving toward the thing you distinguish as
different? Yet it seems to be quite widespread in the rest of the English-speaking world.
Even Americans will often say “different than,” so this may not sound terrible to the ear of an
American English speaker. However, on the GMAT, the only acceptable preposition to follow
“different” is “from.” Just note it.
x His pink shoes are different than those of the rest of the class.
x His pink shoes are different to those of the rest of the class.
✓ His pink shoes are different from those of the rest of the class.
7) “Like”/“as”
When comparing two similar things, use “like” if the two things are nouns and “as” if they are verb
clauses.
✓ The goat is like the sheep in that both animals have hooves.
Note that “ought to be” creates a verb clause, so we need to replace “like” with “as.”
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Depending on the comparison, it is possible to use almost exactly the same sentence. However,
if the clause of the sentence making the comparison uses a verb, make sure to use “as” for your
comparison.
8) “Because”/“because of”
Similarly to the “like”/“as” distinction, something happens “because of” a noun, whereas it happens
“because” a verb happens.
However, if we change the clause after because into a verb clause, we can use “because” rather
than “because of.”
9) “Estimate to be”
It is extremely common to hear “estimate at” on the news. However, for the purposes of the GMAT,
this is considered incorrect.
Thus, special attention is required to correctly answer questions using the word “estimate.”
Again working with the “to”/“from” distinction, if you prefer something, you wish to move toward
it. Thus, “prefer to” is the correct preposition association.
Because prevention and prohibition push something away–or perhaps if you wish to prevent
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something, you don’t move toward it–the appropriate combination is “prevent from” or “prohibit
from.”
x I want to prevent him swimming.
If the word “credit” is used as a verb, the preposition is “credit with,” whereas if it is a noun, it is
“credit to.”
If you disagree with someone, you “differ with” that person, but if you wish to highlight differences
between you and that person, you “differ from” that person.
If you want to highlight the similarities between two items, usually in a complimentary way, use
“compare to.” It is a favorite of poets since at least Shakespeare.
If you wish to highlight the differences between two things, use “compare with.”
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However, the difficulty in formal writing is that it can sound quite different from normal speech. We
need to be able to distinguish situations where the formal “written” English is correct and where it
is not.
Although you will never see the word “get” in a Sentence Correction section as it is possibly the
least formal word in the English language, the test writers have figured out clever ways to make you
think about it.
Basically, the word “get” is a lazy word. It means about 40 different things. Actually, I haven’t
counted, but you get the point. Sometimes “get” works alone, meaning things such as “fetch,”
“receive,” “understand,” and so forth.
In other cases, it is paired with a preposition to create completely new meanings, such as in the case
of “get up,” “get down,” “get by,” “get over,” etc.
The interesting thing in each of these cases is that there is always a more formal way to say any of
these words. That is, for every use of “get,” there is a “better” (more formal) way to state exactly the
same thing. Leave it to the test writers to find a semi-exception to this.
In further instances, “get” is part of common idioms, such as “get married.” This is a favorite on the
GMAT, as the way to say “get married” more formally is not immediately obvious.This will appear in
trick questions such as the following.
In this case, the error isn’t obvious and to many it might seem that “so as to get married to his
secretary” is the proper fix. However, the mistake is actually in the idiom “so as to marry,” as it does
not specify who is getting married.
“To marry” is a perfectly appropriate, and decidedly more formal, replacement for “to get married.”
✓ The general wishes to divorce his wife so that he can marry his secretary.
Just remember that you won’t see “get” in the Sentence Correction section and it is never an
appropriate fix in GMAT English.
It is perfectly acceptable to use “like” to introduce a list in speech. This is, however, very informal.
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Conclusion
I hope that this conversational introduction to the grammar topics on the GMAT has been useful to
you. It has been designed to read quickly and to make you aware of the nature of the topics at hand.
After more study of the Official Guide, I encourage you to revisit this guide and make further notes.
The Last Minute Guide to Sentence Correction is currently being written and will detail how to apply
these grammar concepts in detail.
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