Fragments: Example: Was Driving The Car Over The Speed Limit
Fragments: Example: Was Driving The Car Over The Speed Limit
Fragments: Example: Was Driving The Car Over The Speed Limit
Obviously, you don't write this type of sentence frequently, but it does happen. The
mistake can be corrected by simply adding a subject.
Correction: The police officer was driving the car over the speed limit.
EXERCISE: Follow the above example, and correct the following fragments.
1. Felt embarrassed.
Again, this type of fragment isn't usually mistaken for a sentence, but it can happen.
When it does, the simplest way to correct the error is to add a verb.
Correction: The woman with the flower tattoo attracted some attention.
EXERCISE: Follow the example above, and correct the following fragments.
1. The man in the blue velvet suit.
=The man in the blue velvet suit catcalled the girls walking by.
This can easily be corrected by adding an appropriate helping verb. Correction: The
patient was struggling bravely against a terrible disease.
EXERCISE: Follow the above example, and correct the following fragments.
1. The dancers circling the stage.
=The dancers were circling the stage.
A dependent clause (a group of words that contains a subject and a verb but does not
express a complete thought) that is punctuated as a sentence is a fragment. Example: That
the children were very curious.
When editing very quickly, you might see a subject and verb in this dependent clause and
incorrectly label it a sentence. But if you read the clause carefully, you can hear that it is not
a complete thought. The fragment leaves the reader hanging in mid-air, asking Who?
When? or Why?
1. Because it is the subordinate conjunction that transforms the independent clause (simple
sentence) into a dependent clause, removing the subordinate conjunction will leave you with a
simple sentence.
Fragment: That the children were very curious.
2. Connect the dependent clause to an independent clause, and create a complex sentence.
=Although the passersby stopped at the scene of the accident, none of them helped.
APPLICATION I
Decide whether each group of words below is a sentence or a fragment. Write C in the blank if
correct and write Frag if incorrect. Correct the fragments.
_____C_______ 1. Before heading for home, the tired student had another cup of
coffee.
4. The beautiful girl with the red hair and the bright eyes. _____C____
Read the following paragraph carefully. Write C if it is a complete sentence and Frag if it is a
fragment. Then correct all fragments.
Summer should be a time to enjoy, yet many people consider it a miserable season.
Infants and toddlers playing all the time in the summer. They are bothered by the heat. Since
their bodies haven't yet fully developed the ability to dissipate heat. Mothers find the situation
frustrating because they cannot explain the causes to their babies and they cannot force their
children to slow down. Apartment dwellers can't enjoy the summer either. Frequently,
apartments lack cross-ventilation, so the hot air stays in the small, boxy rooms. Also, apartment
dwellers don't own backyards, so they have no place to go on a fine summer day. Rather than
just stepping out on to the lawn. They must plan a major trip to a park or beach for
summertime fun. C