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Read the case notes below and complete the writing task which follows.

Notes:

Mr Brett Collister is a male patient in your general practice.

PATIENT DETAILS:

Name: Mr Brett Collister (DOB: 21 December 1973)

Height: 177cm

Occupation: Factory foreman

Social background: Married, 3 children (18, 16, 13 yrs)

Hobbies: Watching football, playing darts, fishing

Medical history: No known allergies

Infectious mononucleosis – February 2006

Treatment record

22/04/17 Productive cough & sore throat for 1 week, green phlegm.

Pt tired, temp (38°C).

Treatment: Rest, plenty of fluids, salt water gargles.

26/06/17 Sore throat – suddenly worse after 3 weeks of intermittent pain & fever; Pt feels ‘run-down’.

Tonsils inflamed; temp 38.5°C.

Treatment: Prescribed amoxicillin.

17/09/17 Sore L shoulder – triggered during game of darts 2 weeks previous − ?rotator cuff tear.

Busy at work – feels tired & stressed.

Treatment: Prescribed ibuprofen.

R.I.C.E. (rest, ice, compression, elevation).

Refer to physio for exercise program & treatment for shoulder.

26/11/17 Sore R knee – pain intermittent, worse going up stairs. No identified trigger.

?osteoarthritis.

Shoulder has improved.

BP 107/60, HR 78 (reg), Wt 94kg (BMI 30 – overweight).

Treatment: Prescribed ibuprofen.

Advised to weight, exercise (cycling, swimming).

Refer to physio (as previously) – review in 3 months.

04/02/18 Pt feels tired, ‘run-down’; sore eyes, dizzy sometimes (for last 3-4 weeks) – ?orthostatic hypotension.

Overweight, unfit – no adjustment to lifestyle, diet, exercise.

Reports busy at work.

BP 108/61, HR 80 (REG), lungs clear, Wt. 93 kg(BMI 29.7 -overweight)


Treatment: Order blood tests to review cholesterol, blood sugars, etc.

24/02/18 Still tired, sore eyes, vision .

BP 105/60, HR (reg), lungs clear, Wt 89kg ( BMI 28.4 – overweight).

Review of tests organised 04/02/18:

 random glucose 3.5mmol/L (high).


 fasting glucose 7.4mmol/L (high).
 Hba1c 8.5% (high).
 HDL/LDL (cholesterol 6.4mmol/L, LDL 4.2mmol/L, HDL 2.1mmol/L, Trig 3.3mmol/L).

Preliminary diagnosis: Results indicate DM (diabetes mellitus) Type 2.

Treatment: Refer to endocrinologist for assessment and management plan.

Writing Task:

Using the information in the case notes, write a letter of referral to Dr Grantley Cross, an endocrinologist, requesting

assessment and a management plan. Address your letter to Dr Grantley Cross, Consultant Endocrinologist, City
Hospital, Suite 32, 55 􀀴ain Road, Newtown.

In your answer:

􀀴 Expand the relevant notes into complete sentences

􀀴 Do not use note form

􀀴 Use letter format

The body of the letter should be approximately 180–200 words.

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