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Misplaced and Dangling

Modifiers
What Is A Misplaced Modifier?
A modifier is a word, phrase, or clause that
describes or changes the meaning of another
word, phrase or clause in some way.
A misplaced modifier means that there is a
separation of space between the word, phrase,
or clause and the modifier.
Creates confusion in meaning.
What Is The Real Meaning.
On her way to work, Elaine saw the silver
womans earring laying on the park bench.
This sentence implies that there is a silver woman
who left her earring on the park bench, not that
the earring itself is silver.
On her way to work, Elaine saw the womans
silver earring laying on the park bench.
Now the earring is silver instead of the woman.
What Was Stolen?
The stolen mans wallet was placed on the
police departments counter.
Was the man stolen, or was the wallet stolen?
The mans stolen wallet was placed on the
police departments counter.
More Misplaced Modifiers
Squinting modifiers
A modifier caught between two words, either of which might
be the modified word
Example: Little boats sailing quickly found
tar close to shore (Did the boats sail quickly
or quickly find tar?)

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Squinting Modifier

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Which one is correct?

1. A. Having enough money, the car was bought by the


man.
B. Having enough money, the man bought the car.
2. A. Jamie has placed the bracelet on her wrist which
Bob has given her.
B. Jaime placed the bracelet which Bob has given
her on her wrist.
Which one is correct?
3. A. We heard the news about the plane crash in
the auditorium.
B. In the auditorium, we heard the news about
the plane crash.
4. A. The beautiful lady was walking the dog in a
short skirt.
B. The beautiful lady in a short skirt was
walking the dog.
Dangling Modifiers
Live things and machines do actions if there
is an action verb in your sentence, there must
also be a living thing or a machine that does
the action.
Whenever you have dangling modifier, you
must add words to the sentence. Simply
rearranging the sentence will not fix the
problem.
Examples of Dangling Modifiers
Staring out over the ocean, the hurricane
force winds were daunting.
Staring out over the ocean, Matt saw the daunting
hurricane force winds.
When in third grade, my mother went
back to college.
When I was in third grade, my mother went back to
college.
Fixing Dangling Modifiers
Change the dangling modifier phrase to a
subordinate clause, creating a subject and verb.
Leave the rest of the sentence as it is.
When nine years old, my father enrolled in medical
school. (Incorrect)
When I was nine years old, my father enrolled in
medical school. (Correct)
Having been fixed the night before, Priscilla could
use it. (Incorrect)
Since the car had been fixed the night before,
Priscilla could use it. (Correct)
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Which one is correct?

1. A. Having finished the work, the office was closed.


B. Having finished the work, we closed the office.
2. A. To enter the contest, you must send your coupon with
slogan.
B. To enter the contest, a coupon with slogan must be
sent.
3. A. When one is hunting, extreme care.
B. When one is hunting, he needs extreme care.

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