Persuasive Speech
Persuasive Speech
Organizational Patterns
The following are some of the suggested patterns that you can use to organize
your persuasive speech. 1. A. F.O.R.E.S.T. (anecdotes, facts and figures, opinion,
rhetorical questions, emotive language, superlatives, tripling) Below are the rules
in applying this pattern. (1) Anecdotes. Begin your speech with a personal story,
observation, or experience. (2) Facts and figures. Provide striking statistics that
can support your ideas. (3) Opinion. Add in your opinion. You can begin your
statement with, “I believe that…”. (4) Rhetorical questions. Think of and add
engaging rhetorical questions (i.e., questions which do not intend to elicit
answers, but to make a point). (5) Emotive language. Appeal to your
audience’s emotion. (6) Superlatives. Use superlatives to exaggerate an idea.
(7) Tripling. The rule of three in the English writing principle simply entails using
three words together to reinforce your point. This may add to the effectiveness
of your persuasion. A classic example is Julius Caesar’s statement: “Veni, vidi,
vici” (I came, I saw, I conquered).
Below is an example.
Anecdote 1.0 Introduction
1.1 It is sad to share how my friend’s father died of lethal
injection years ago.
1.2 He suffered and was killed for a crime that he never did.
1.3 There is no reason for the state to revive the death penalty.
2.0 Body
Facts and Figures 2.1 When RA 7659 or the Death Penalty Law was still active, six
innocent people out of 10 convicts were executed.
Emotive language 2.1.3 We are a nation that values life and thinks that everyone
deserves chances to change and live for their families
Superlatives 2.1.4 Revive the law only when the lives of those wrongly
sentenced are revived.
1.0 Introduction
• For example:
A. Purpose: Persuade listeners why the state or government needs to converge with the
private sector in maintaining and protecting national heritage sites.
B. Main Point: Preserving our national heritage sites such as century-old churches,
theaters, and other artifacts is the least priority of the government, so they should tie-up
with private establishments to maintain these historical places.
Supporting Idea One can observe that these sites are losing their
historical and cultural value.
1.0 Introduction
Problem
1.1 List of historical sites in the Philippines
2.0 Body
Root cause 2.1 Budget allocation
Support 1 2.1.1 Percentage allocated to preservation of sites
Solution 2.2 Promote public-private partnership
Support 2.2.1 Reports showing successful partnerships
• 4. Comparative Advantages
Below are the rules in applying this pattern.
(1) Identify the problem.
(2) Present at least two solutions to the problem.
(3) Compare the two in terms of practicality and feasibility
For example:
A. Purpose: Persuade listeners on the need for political reform.
B. B. Main Point: Politics in the Philippines is very dirty.
C. C. Supporting Idea: There have been a lot of anomalies and
illegal transactions going on in the political system.
1.0 Introduction
2.3.2 Feasible
5. Monroe’s Motivated Sequence
Alan Monroe, a professor from Purdue University, created an outline for making speeches based
on the psychology of persuasion (Ehninger, Monroe, & Granbeck, 1978). This outline is known as
Monroe’s Motivated Sequence.
Here’s how to apply this technique.
1.Grab the attention of the audience by identifying the challenge you plan to confront, or the
problem you plan to address.
2. Establish the need or urgency to address the identified challenge or problem.
3. Present possible solutions to your audience to satisfy the need.
4. Help your audience visualize. Use vivid words to convince your audience about the benefits
they can gain from the solutions you presented.
5. Engage the audience to participate in promoting change through a call for action.
For example:
A. Purpose: Persuade the audience to abstain from consuming alcohol.
B. Main Point: Abstaining from alcohol will help students live a healthy and safe life for themselves
and those around them while avoiding any criminal actions.
Campaign Against Underage Drinking
Attention-grabber 1.Picture the following situation: It is Friday night; classes have just ended, and you and your
friends are looking for something fun to do. Everyone heads to your classmate’s house, and
soon bottles of alcohol are being passed around. As the night deepens, everyone falls under
the spell of alcohol, things get out of hand, and some commit mistakes they would not do
when sober.
a.This phenomenon of underage drinking is steadily affecting more young Filipinos, as a
study from the University of the Philippines found that 5.3 million youths drink alcoholic
beverages.
b. I have researched this topic heavily, and today I will present the startling facts about
underage drinking that many teenagers might not know.
c. This speech aims not only to inform you of the risks of underage drinking, but also to
convince you to take action and campaign against underage drinking to protect the youth.
Need 2. According to a study on the alcohol drinking patterns of high school students
in selected parts of the Philippines, a little more than one-third of the sample
population drink alcohol. These can have serious effects on underage drinkers, such as
the following:
a. Studies have shown that people who drink at a young age are more likely to
experiment with harder drugs.
b. People in an inebriated state have higher chances of being victims of sexual
assault.
c. Alcohol abuse among the young could lead to sexual behavior, which in turn leads
to teenage pregnancy or sexually-transmitted diseases.
Campaign Against Underage Drinking
Satisfaction 3. We have to educate the youth about the dangers of drinking alcohol.
a. Videos and posts on the risks of underage drinking can be shared on various social
platforms.
b. b. In school, events can be organized to promote knowledge of the disadvantages and
consequences of underage drinking.
Visualization 4. We have to take it upon ourselves to act now if we do not want the youth to be victims of
the following potential effects of underage drinking:
a. Accidents caused by underage drinking
b. b. Dropping out of school due to alcohol addiction
c. c. Sexual assault brought by drunken behavior
d. d. Teenage pregnancies
e. . Alcoholism
Call to 5. I earnestly challenge you to abstain from alcohol and to take action and campaign
action against underage drinking. Are you with me?
Methods of Persuasion Consider what Lucas (2011) writes about how the audience can be persuaded by a
speaker. The audience can be persuaded by the following reasons.
The above ideas highlight some of the methods you can use in your persuasive speech. These methods are
commonly used and proven to be effective by any prominent and excellent speaker across the globe. The
following are some tips on how to enhance your credibility, how to use evidence, how to use reasoning, and
how to observe ethics and emotional appeal in a persuasive speech.
You can do this by sharing how well you read, investigated, or researched the topic. For example: You
could share that in the beginning you did not know much about your topic until you researched about it. By
saying you researched on your topic, your audience will feel that you made an effort in building your
credibility by collecting information.
b. Connect your experiences, beliefs, values or attitudes with your audience’s.
You can do this by telling your audience that you have the same experiences, beliefs, values or attitudes.
For example: In the beginning of your speech, you can emphasize to your audience that regardless of
background, status, age, gender, beliefs, and values, among others, you all have one thing in common
and then add that which you have in common. By saying this, your audience will feel respected and
comfortable because you can identify with their experiences, beliefs, or values.
c. Practice more often so you can deliver your speech with conviction.
You can do this by exposing yourself more often to speaking situations such as reciting and reading
announcements in class, introducing people in a program, hosting events, participating in debates, or
acting as a spokesperson of a group. Also, simply practicing more often before your actual speech
performance will increase your confidence and help you deliver your speech with conviction.
a. Specify evidence.
You can do this by citing statistics, research studies, and other valid and credible information.
For example: When stating a fact, do not simply say a general detail. Instead of saying, “There is a law that
protects women and their children against violence,” state the exact details, as in, “RA 9262 is an act that
protects women and their children against violence.” By specifying your evidence, you give the impression
that you know what you are saying.
b. Avoid outdated evidence.
You can do this by reading and digging new evidence to keep yourself updated on the significant facts
and figures.
For example: If you are arguing about social networking site addiction and you are using data taken from
2000 or earlier, your speech might not hold enough credibility and it might not retain the interest of your
audience as well. Since we are now in the Information Age, data quickly get old and replaced by more
current ones, so they quickly become irrelevant. Therefore, always make sure to use current available data.
This way, your speech will be more accurate and your audiences will be more interested to listen.
c. Choose reputable or credible sources for your evidence. You can do this by carefully identifying and
evaluating your sources.
For example: You are persuading your audience that your solution in improving the interest of readers in
Philippine literature is the most efficient method, but you cite sources such as fan sites, Wiki answers, Yahoo
answers, or blogs. This creates a bad impression, as it might come off that your arguments and points are
based on unreliable facts. As a guide, Google, Yahoo, or any search engine can provide you a wealth of
reputable or credible sources for your evidence.
3. How to use reasoning Avoid logical fallacies or errors in reasoning. You can do this by studying the types
of logical fallacies. The following are some of the most common errors in reasoning.
Ad Hominem: This happens when you attack the character of a person instead of his argument.
Example: Professor X does not deserve to be the head of this organization because he is separated from his wife.
How to avoid: When you give your rebuttal, focus on the arguments of the person, not on his/her character or
values.
•Circular Argument: This happens when the idea of a stated argument is repeated.
Example: My mother is a good teacher because she teaches me well. How to avoid: Do not repeat the
argument; instead, prove it.
•False Analogy: This happens when two things, which might be alike in some respects, are compared and
assumed to be similar in other ways.
Example: President Aquino is the Socrates of the 21st century. How to avoid: Look at the characteristics, features,
or components of two people or objects closely to see whether they can really be compared or not.
•False Authority: This happens when a statement of someone who is not an expert in the field in question is being
used in an argument.
Example: I avoid drinking coffee at night because of the advice of my English teacher. How to avoid: Check
properly the qualifications of the person being cited.
•False Cause and Effect: This happens when the connection between two consecutive events are not clear.
Example: Because I attended a party, I got a high grade in my persuasive speech. How to avoid: Clarify the
connections between the events by explaining both backgrounds clearly.
•Hasty Generalization: This happens when a conclusion is drawn from insufficient evidence.
Example: The senator stuttered while giving his speech, therefore government officials are not good in
public speaking. How to avoid: Provide enough pieces of evidence before making any conclusions.
•Red Herring: This happens when the answer does not address the question.
Example: Question: Should the President sign Cyberbullying bill into law? Answer: The President has other
priorities. How to avoid: Do not avoid opposing arguments. Instead, address them properly.
the audience will be more convinced of your message if you also show conviction in what you are saying.
For example: If you use emotionally charged words, but you deliver it in a monotonous voice, the audience
will not see the sincerity of your message. Instead, make sure to observe your non-verbal cues and to
ensure that you believe in what you are saying.
Although a well-executed emotional appeal can be used as a strong weapon in persuasive speech, take
note to use it only when appropriate to the message. Use it as an accessory only; make sure not to replace
evidence and reasoning with pure emotion.
• For example: If you are making a speech on a question of fact,
there is little need to use emotional appeal to your audience
since you are dealing with facts and information. However, if you
are making a persuasive speech to change a certain policy, you
can add emotional appeal to your speech to capture not only
the minds but also the hearts of your audience.