Academic Writng
Academic Writng
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MS. FLORA MWANGI
COURSE OUTLINE
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DEFINITIONS
• Academic writing is, essentially, the writing you have to do for your
university courses.
1. Clear Purpose.
The goal of your paper is to answer the question you posed as your
topic. Your question gives you a purpose.
The most common purposes in academic writing are to:
• Persuade
• Analyze/synthesize
• Inform
2. Audience Engagement.
As with all writing, academic writing is directed to a specific audience
in mind. So you will have to engage them with your ideas and catch
their interest with your writing style, appropriate reasoning and
evidence to convince them of your ideas.
3. Clear Point of View.
Although you will present other people’s ideas and research, the goal of
your paper is to show what you think about these things. Your paper will
have and support your own original idea about the topic. This is called
the thesis statement, and it is your answer to the question.
4. Single Focus.
• Every paragraph (even every sentence) in your paper will support your
thesis statement. There will be no unnecessary, irrelevant, unimportant,
or contradictory information
5. Logical Organization.
• Because this is your work, you should use your own words whenever
possible.
• Use the natural conversational style that you would use on a daily
basis.
LESSON TWO
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ACADEMIC FORMAT, STRUCTURE AND STYLE
Subtopics include:
• Back Matter
• References
• Appendices
NB: Our Main Focus will be the Essay
FORMAT AND STYLE
• Sentence structure
It is a myth that academic writing has to consist of very long, complicated
sentences. If you write in this way, your reader will forget what you said
at the beginning of your sentence and will soon become lost.
Your job as a writer is to present your information and argument to your
reader clearly so they are not left wondering exactly what you mean.
Each of your sentences should be able to stand alone as a sub point to the
‘big idea’ of your paragraph.
A good strategy to check for clarity of phrasing, sentence length and
punctuation placement is to read your work aloud.
SENTENCE STRUCTURE
• Normally, a complete sentence contains a subject, a verb and an object.
• In Academic Writing, a typical topic sentence, should be concise with a
clear purpose. The purpose determines the kind of essay that you will
be writing. (opinion, cause and effect, argumentative,
information/descriptive essay etc.)
• The topic sentence contains, the topic and controlling idea.
• Correct the following sentences to make a logical topic sentence
• I have an older brother
• There is a beach near my house
• Cigarette smoking
PARAGRAPH STRUCTURE
• You may have heard that the most important feature of a paragraph is that it is one
'big idea'.
• That means that you should check each paragraph and make sure that all content
relates to one topic.
• Paragraphs are the building blocks of your essay. Although they might vary according
to your subject area and type of essay.
In academic writing, you should usually avoid using the first person;
• For example, never make statements such as: Based upon the literature
I have read, I think that… Instead, you need to make it clear in your
writing that you are being objective;
• Use statements such as: Based upon the literature, it could be argued
that…This shows your reader that you are not presenting your own
thoughts and views but providing them with an argument that is based
upon the research and evidence in the literature you have read.
Avoiding the use of the first person (I)
• How to avoid first language
1. Be Objective not Subjective
2. Use passive voice not active voice
• Correct the following sentences
a. I collected data from Berbera
b. I used questionnaire and interview as the method of collecting data.
c. We interviewed 150 respondents
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LESSON THREE
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TYPES OF ACADEMIC WRITING.
• For example, if you’re comparing two theories, you might break your
comparison into several parts, for example: how each theory deals
with social context, how each theory deals with language learning, and
how each theory can be used in practice.
• The kinds of instructions for an analytical assignment include:
analyse, compare, contrast, relate, examine.
ANALYTICAL
• Spend plenty of time planning. Brainstorm the facts and ideas, and
try different ways of grouping them, according to patterns, similarities
and differences.
• Create a name for the relationships and categories you find. For
example, advantages and disadvantages. Most important, least
important etc
PERSUASIVE
• In most academic writing, you are required to go at least one extra step
further than analytical writing, to persuasive writing.
• Persuasive writing has all the features of analytical writing (i.e
information plus re-organising the information), with the addition of
your own point of view.
• Most essays are persuasive, and there is a persuasive element in at
least the discussion and conclusion of a research article.
• The kinds of instructions for a persuasive assignment include: argue,
evaluate and discuss
PERSUASIVE
To help reach your own point of view on the facts or ideas:
• Read some other researchers' points of view on the topic. Who do you
feel is the most convincing?
• List several different interpretations.
• What are the real-life implications of each one?
• Which ones are likely to be most useful or beneficial?
• Which ones have some problems?
• Discuss the facts and ideas with someone else. Do you agree with their
point of view?
CRITICAL
• It has all the features of persuasive writing, with the added feature of
at least one other point of view.
• While persuasive writing requires you to have your own point of view
on an issue or topic, critical writing requires you to consider at least
two points of view, including your own.
CRITICAL
• For example, you may explain a researcher's interpretation or
argument and then:
• Evaluate the merits of the argument, or
• Give your own alternative interpretation.
• Examples of critical writing assignments include
• a critique of a journal article, or
• a literature review that identifies the strengths and weaknesses of
existing research.
• The kinds of instructions for critical writing include: critique, debate,
disagree, evaluate.
CRITICAL
You need to:
• Accurately summarise all or part of the work.
• Identifying the main interpretations, assumptions or methodology.
• Have an opinion about the work.
• Point out some problems and propose an alternative approach that
would be better, or
• Defend the work against the critiques of others
• Provide evidence for your point of view.
• Logical reasoning, reference to appropriate sources and research
data.
IN CONCLUSION:
• In many academic texts you will need to use more than one type.
• You will use critical writing in the literature review to show where there is a gap
or opportunity in the existing research
• The methods section will be mostly descriptive to summarise the methods used
to collect and analyse information
• The results section will be mostly descriptive and analytical as you report on the
data you collected
• The discussion section is more analytical, as you relate your findings back to
your research questions, and also persuasive, as you propose your interpretations
of the findings.
SAMPLE QUESTIONS
• In Task 1, candidates are presented with a graph, table, chart or
diagram and are asked to describe, summarise or explain the
information in their own words. They may be asked to describe and
explain data, describe the stages of a process, how something works or
describe an object or event. (Example)
• Introduction
• Body
• Conclusion
• Each body paragraph has one main point to support the thesis, which is named in
a topic sentence.
• Each point is then supported in the paragraph with logical reasoning and
evidence.
• The readers do not have to work to find the connection between ideas i.e Unity
and coherence must be upholded
THE CONCLUSION
• When you quote a source, you use an extract exactly as it was used
in/by the source.
• You indicate a quote by using quotation marks or indenting the text for
long quotes.
• For example
1.
2. References
In text citations
1. IN TEXT CITATIONS
It is important to refer correctly to the work of other writers that you have used.
The author is appreciated and also it avoids Plagiarism
• In text citations are quotations cited inside the main body of the Essay or report
• For every information borrowed from somewhere eg book, Thesis etc must be
cited
• Format
• Write only the first name and year. The two are then put into brackets
• Eg (Ahmed, 2019)
• If the authors are 3 or more, use the abbreviation et al
• Eg (Ahmed et.al, 2019)
2. REFERENCES
• References are written at the back of the thesis/Report/Dessertation
• It is a major part of the Back matter
• All sources that have been cited in the text MUST be referenced
• To reference, use the following APA format
• Author (year). Title of the book or journal or Title of the book or
journal. Edition. Area of publishing, the publisher.
Example:
• Ridener, B. & Fritzer, P. (2004). Mathematics content for elementary
and middle school teachers. Boston, MA: Pearson.
PRACTICE QUESTIONS
i. Citation ____________
• James Michener author of over 40 books said “I'm not a very good
writer, but I'm an excellent rewriter.”
• Don't submit your first draft, make sure you allow time to edit.
EDITING AND PROOF READING