Talk:Henry Higgins Boiled Bagels/GA1

GA Review

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Passed. Good work Another Believer Cos ^{(X + Z)} 17:57, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Nominator: Another Believer (talk · contribs) 14:38, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: CosXZ (talk · contribs) 01:25, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for reviewing! Happy to address any concerns you may have. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 16:30, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Stable?

Yes. Cos ^{(X + Z)} 01:25, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Like ---Another Believer _(Talk) 02:15, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Image check

Both images have good copyright and are appropriate in the article. Cos ^{(X + Z)} 01:25, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Like ---Another Believer _(Talk) 02:15, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvio?

Earwig shows a 42.2% due to the quote being exactly worded like in the source but I think it should be fine. Cos ^{(X + Z)} 01:25, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Like ---Another Believer _(Talk) 02:15, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

MoS

Lead

looks good. Cos ^{(X + Z)} 22:27, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 23:24, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Layout

move portal bar to in between the navboxes and the categories
- Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 23:24, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Words to watch

looks good Cos ^{(X + Z)} 18:32, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks ---Another Believer _(Talk) 19:36, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Source check

all citations are styled good
- Thanks ---Another Believer _(Talk) 19:37, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

All sources are reliable Cos ^{(X + Z)} 17:57, 17 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Grammar and OR

Description

Among boiled bagel varieties are "everything", onion, and pumpernickel. remove quotation marks
- Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 21:41, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

History

such as a Hanukkah food pop-up in 2002 ~~remove as not mentioned~~ change year to 2022
- I am not sure what you mean here. This says, "This Jewish community center will host a Hanukkah food pop-up from 11 a.m. to 2 p.m. on Sunday, December 18. Vendors will include kosher brewery Leikam Brewing, Henry Higgins Bagels, Washington marinara business ManJa Creations, and new Jewish deli Jacob & Sons, among others." ---Another Believer _(Talk) 21:42, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@CosXZ: Can you let me know if anything else is needed here? Thanks! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 12:19, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry if I haven’t responded Cos ^{(X + Z)} 14:08, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

*:@Another Believer [22] doesn’t mention Henry Higgins being a Hanukkah food pop-up in 2022; [23] mentions Henry Higgins being at the Hanukkah night market so, cut such as a Hanukkah food pop-up in 2002 and remove [22] Cos ^{(X + Z)} 14:30, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CosXZ This source (#22) was published in 2022. I don't see a discrepancy with the article's current text. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:37, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

*:::@Another Believer I don’t see Henry Higgins in the source Cos ^{(X + Z)} 14:41, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CosXZ Under, "The Eastside Jewish Commons": "This Jewish community center will host a Hanukkah food pop-up from 11 a.m. to 2 p.m. on Sunday, December 18. Vendors will include kosher brewery Leikam Brewing, Henry Higgins Bagels, Washington marinara business ManJa Creations, and new Jewish deli Jacob & Sons, among others." ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:42, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Now I see thanks for pointing that out Cos ^{(X + Z)} 14:48, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No problem! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:52, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Another Believer such as a Hanukkah food pop-up in 2002 change year to 2022 Cos ^{(X + Z)} 18:17, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ah! Good catch! Thanks Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 18:20, 15 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

looks good
- Thanks ---Another Believer _(Talk) 21:42, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CosXZ: Happy to address any remaining concerns you may have. Thanks! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 13:54, 16 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

NPOV

Y Cos ^{(X + Z)} 14:25, 16 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:32, 16 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Has major aspects and is focused?

Yes Cos ^{(X + Z)} 14:25, 16 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:32, 16 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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