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I noticed that this article is poorly sourced. For example, it relies heavily on the website headbangers.in, this seems to me, less likely a reliable source. There must be better sources available like notable music magazine review (given two useful ones above) or mention in any newspaper. The article on Avial can be a good example to refer to.

There are also instances of non-encyclopaedic wording: "noted for its unique blend of", "as a full-fledged band became a reality." etc. Take a look at Words to watch, Manner of style and Writing better articles. Sincerely, Ugog Nizdast (talk) 07:23, 29 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]