0 Star = Idiot Devon going off into the middle of the woods alone while he is in heat. Like seriously what happened to him since he is in Bro and Beas0 Star = Idiot Devon going off into the middle of the woods alone while he is in heat. Like seriously what happened to him since he is in Bro and Beast. How can a character become so dumb so quickly? 0 Star = Constantine just ignoring Devon because Constantine is a repressed idiot and only appearing when Devon goes into heat to quell it. 0 Star = Why the heck is Devon so mad that Constantine left him after 1 night? Like is he in such a great need for a man to give him value? 0 Star =Devon should be fighting the omega sexist society not being satisfied and happy that he is finally not a "damaged omega." His words not mine. 0 Star = I can't understand how the two make up at all. (-1 Star) = the only conflict to resolve is their low self-esteem and repressed personality. (+1 Star) = The book cover is nice.
The book could have been so much more if it had been held with care. Very disappointing. I was hoping for a self-assured omega and a horny alpha. I actually secretly ship Raul and Constantine. If I ever get the chance I'll probably write a fanfiction about them on my blog. LOL....more
0 Star = Devon just got dumber from the previous series. Now that its in his point of view I can see how pathetic he is. 0 Star = Before this book the 0 Star = Devon just got dumber from the previous series. Now that its in his point of view I can see how pathetic he is. 0 Star = Before this book the author made it seem like Constantine would be a horny man-slut. So it was disappointing to read him as a reserved and repressed character. 0 Star = It makes even less sense to read about Devon and Constantine's romance being a completely nonexistent. The author said that Devon and Constantine and Devon met in their dreams and communicated so some affection should have built up?????? So why is everyone ignoring that and just making them so unattached? 0 Star = The mob characters are a copy and paste of Raul's mob characters in the mansion. Just creepier like the twins. I honestly don't understand what the heck is so creepy about them but the author says they are creepy so I guess they are. 1 Star = I suppose Devon's more relatable than his friendly older brother who makes friends with anyone and everyone. (-1 Star) = Constantine ignores Devon. I have no idea why since he apparently promised him so many things in his dreams. (-1 Star) = Everyone treats Devon like he only has value if he goes into heat and gives birth. (+1 Star) = The book cover is nice.
The characters are doing nothing but sitting around and learning etiquette or just not being there at all....more
0 Star = The book just got worse. 0 Star = The pregnancy scene was way too darn long. It did not need to be that long. The whole book was just brad com0 Star = The book just got worse. 0 Star = The pregnancy scene was way too darn long. It did not need to be that long. The whole book was just brad complaining about his body being pregnant than talking about how the kids were cute. 0 Star = I don't even understand how Luna ends up with Reese of all people. She is just too good for that guy. A well established writer with an idiotic, rude, frat boy. Fundamentally they are intellectually incompatible. Their relationship is a trainwreck waiting to happen. Half a year later Luna will realize how much better she can do and dump Reese's immature bum butt. 0 Star = Tent's love story is so miniscule it practically doesn't even exist. If your going to establish other relationships beside the main relationship of Brad and Raul then have the decency to let the main characters interact with other characters instead of just letting us know that the main character knows that other relationships besides their own exist. 1 Star = The Hot scene in the woods was pretty good. I liked how eager Brad was for Raul's banana. (+1 Star) = The book cover is nice.
I am glad this series is finally over. Now I can look forward to Devon's storyline....more
1 Star = Hilarious Frat boys. (A little too stereotypical) 1 Star = Devon is a character worth rooting for. His witty personality and brains really com1 Star = Hilarious Frat boys. (A little too stereotypical) 1 Star = Devon is a character worth rooting for. His witty personality and brains really come through. 1 Star = meeting the author of the book is Awesome. Especially when the author turns out to be secretly a witch. (Luna needs her own book as the heroine.) 0 Star = Catalina is kind of a prick. Has she read her own story. If so why would she want to go back to being Raul's, excuse my language, bitch? She should just run away to Heartland and live her life as an independent feminist woman. 0 Star = Stop blaming Constantine when he barely appeared in the previous books. He he kidnaps the protagonist but the characters are just really biased. The author just positioned Constantine as the bad buy and Raul as the good guy but they were both at war and they both slaughtered each other's comrades. But Raul singlehandedly makes Constantine sound like a monster before the whole kidnapping Brad event in this book. He didn't even appear in the previous books. Technically it was Raul who was the big bad wolf ready to knock Constantine's door down in the end of the last book just because he "assumed" Brad had been kidnapped by Constantine when in actuality Brad just up and disappeared on his own. Stop hating on a character just because you don't like them. And Raul doesn't even repent for his actions because he is so obsessed with Brad and his happily ever after. (-1 Star) = Everyone Forgets about Catalina after this book ends. (Does she rot in their mansion's prison or something?) (+1 Star) = The book cover is nice.
This book was slightly better. At least the author knew what to do with the mob character's interesting personalities in this one. have never felt so good complaining about book's plot holes in a review as I have in this one because of the whole Constantine is the villain and that's just how it is....more
0 Star = What's the point of having mob characters when they don't really matter? They don't say anything significant. Just having interesting persona0 Star = What's the point of having mob characters when they don't really matter? They don't say anything significant. Just having interesting personalities doesn't mean anything. They don't contribute to literally anything. 1 Star = the protagonist's reactions are funny (somewhat) 0 Star = Every single character in the book makes the protagonist seem weak. (A new type of sexist society) 0 Star = In actuality the protagonist doesn't change anything really. He just sort of exists. He helps Trent but his help only goes so far. 0 Star = I don't understand how two characters can long for each other when they barely no one another. (-1 Star) = There is no conflict to resolve. (+1 Star) = Everyone gets along with the protagonist. (+1 Star) = The book cover is nice.
All in all a very boring book with no point. I finished for the sake of finishing it. I should have just dropped it. So far there is nothing interesting about Raul. His overbearingness is overbearingly unbearable. A person who truly likes you will let you fly on your own and let you see your friends and the outside world at the least. Raul protects the protagonist to an understandable point but its still annoying how is so over-guarded about the slightest of things over his mate....more
1 Star = idea of book 1 Star = the protagonist's character 0 Star = the protagonist's internalized homophobia 0 Star = for everyone thinking the protagon1 Star = idea of book 1 Star = the protagonist's character 0 Star = the protagonist's internalized homophobia 0 Star = for everyone thinking the protagonist was weak for being an omega 0 Star = For love at first sight with no romance plot buildup (-1 Star) = Making Raul really generic an uninteresting
The concept was exciting. The protagonist transmigrates to another world inside a book. The protagonist's personality was refreshingly new too. However, I did not like that Raul fell in love at first sight. There was absolutely no buildup of romance or nice gestures that led to both of them falling for each other. It was frankly a very frustrating book. The romance plot was dead as well as the action pot that happens besides the romance plot to keep the story interested. So obviously, the entire book was uninteresting. The love interest was too generic and I still couldn't get on board with their ship because it seemed like they were just in love for the sake of love. The protagonist also did not have any feelings for the love interest and just seemed to fall into bed with him. ...more
Honestly, this series feels like a copy paste of the the 2 other books before it. The author literally had the quotes "I'm going to kiss you now" and Honestly, this series feels like a copy paste of the the 2 other books before it. The author literally had the quotes "I'm going to kiss you now" and "I'd like that." The characters were kind of bland and just copy and pasted. They don't have any original personalities what-so-ever. The plot of the books is at least good. The author really thought about the plot progression and magical elements. But I still don't think this should be an omegaverse story since there is literally nothing connecting it to the emogaverse other than the fact that men who can get pregnant are called omegas and alphas are those who can turn into many different animals. The author really goes all out on making it clear that the characters consent but it just feels so icy and terribly orchestrated. The HOT scenes are more like bad erotic movie lines: "I want to share myself with you." Who even says that?...more
Ab bummer story. The omega is pitiful and the alpha is a tired prick. I am literally at the end but there are still no HOT scenes. For more than 30 chAb bummer story. The omega is pitiful and the alpha is a tired prick. I am literally at the end but there are still no HOT scenes. For more than 30 chapters the character only kissed once. It does have romance in a way.... But no one goes into heat or a rut....more
This book was really good. There is nothing like a book emphasizing falling in love with your husband after an arranged marriage. But the author reallThis book was really good. There is nothing like a book emphasizing falling in love with your husband after an arranged marriage. But the author really likes focus on oral sex too much instead of penetrative sex....more
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